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Anya

@elysianights

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Muku007
Anni anyu u both are too cute .
And the story is also very. Cute .
I really love the concept of rasleela maidan I just wish ki es rasleela me kuch aur b Jo jata l🤣
But it's truly amazing .
Love
Muku

Thank you Muku...!! ❤️
Rasleela maidan mein bahut kuch ho sakta hai... 😉
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Khidki

@Khidki

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
It was adorKable 😆
I mean plain fun to read ❤️
And I snorted veey badly when Rudra entered in ghagra.. Received quite a few stares...
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But seriously I enjoyed readint it so much ❤️
Thank you for this fun-filled TS...
Hope you guys collaborate again someday *giving a direct hint* -.- 🤣

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Heheee..! Sure..!

Thank you...!

From the collaborate-Duo-Team..!

😊 😊

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

The 2nd shot was Bang on...Fabulous...😃😃

Anika thought that she saw Ajay going inside a huge tent...but Shivaay said that it must be her hallucination...but Anika doesn't agree & drags Shivaay along with her into a new mess...😆😆

("Anika wait ...we cant go in...dehko idhar likha hai entry only for artists.! He said pointing to the poster put up at the entrance.

Anika-"I think hum mein check karna cahiya..warna machli haat mein aate aate reh jaayegi.!

Shivaay after showing some resistance at last agrees. They go in. As they walk through the crowd they bang into a busy man.

"O jii dehke chalo Sardaarji...ek min aap log...acha aap wo hain..!

Anika quicky-"Ji haan hum wo hi hain...! A Shocked Shivaay glares at her nodding his head impling don't do this.

Man-"Ae lo tho idhar kya kar rahe ho...udhar jao...O Raju ...whispers something into other man's ear.Shivaay tried hard to hear what the man said but fails. The other man takes Shivaay and Anika along with him."ye tumne kya kardiya annik!"Shivaay wispered and glared at Anika for putting them into this mess."kuch nhi aap chaliye toh"she said.

The man takes them to the other end of the tent.

"Aap log ready hai naa..

Shivaay baffled-"Kis ke liye?

Man-"Bade mazaaki hoo!

Shivaay-"Huh.? tumhe kya mein Joker dikhta hoon ki mein joke maarta phirunga?"he said irritately.

He indicates Anika to ask. She nods indicating him that she is there.Bhaiya aap kitne time se yahan kaam kar rahe hain..??

Man-"oh madamji...baatein baad mein...aap log abhi jaldi baahar jaaiye..!

Shivaay smirks at her failure.Hum bahar kyun jaayein? he asks commandingly.

Man laughs-"Yaan to aap bade mazaaki hain yaan pagal..!

Shivaay-"What the...

Man-"Arey aap bahar jaaiye..warna jutte padna shuru ho jaayenge...theek se naachiyega..! he pushes Shivaay out.Phat the wuck!

Anika looks wide eyed...O bete ki..! Yeh toh Rangarang program hai!

Man-"O madam ...apni entry pe chale jaana...! Mujhe aur bhi kaam hai..main chalta hoon...agle performance waalon ko ready karna hai..!

Anika-"Arey bhaiya..meri baat toh suniye hum wo nahi hai...! He without hearing leaves.)------- ShivIka lands in trouble...those tent people thought that ShivIka are going to perform so they pushed them out...that bade mazaaki ho was hilarious...😉🤣

Shivaay is mad at Anika for putting them into this mess...he is killing her by giving death glares...😆😆

People are confused that y the two were not dancing...& to add with that was Anika's self talk...😆😆

Anika's funny statements to Shivaay...aur Shivaay yahan v tadi maarne mein busy...bichara apna ninja flick v nhi kar paa raha pagdi k chalte...😆😆

Wah!!! ShivIka dance on Ainwayi-Ainwayi was outstanding...👏👍🏼

Saumya wanted to watch the dance & Rudra taunted that she was saying that they were on a mission...RuMya bickering...😉😆

Saumya was shocked to see ShivIka dancing...😲

I can clearly imagine ShivIka dancing on this song very well...😆😛

Saumya joined them in the dance...motivate ho gayi wo v...😆😆

Rudra...he changed from Rudiana to Mohini...LOL...🤣

And whistles for Rudra...& Shivaay AniRu ki wajah se sahi mein pagal ho jaayega...😆😆

(Saumya-"Haan bade bhaiya you are right...thodi si ladki kya ban gaya...har jagah tadi maarta phir raha hai!

Shivaay and Anika look at each other and then at Saumya. Shivaay-"Tum bhi tadi..!

Looking at Anika-"Iss liye main kehta hoon...Watch your language...tumne sabki language kharab kardi..!

Anika-"Haaaw...iss mein kharabi kya hai..!

Saumya-"Bade bhaiya...baad mein aap log continue karna...abhi iss Dumbell ko dehk le..please..!

Anika-"Mujhe bhi dance karna hai...ghagra pe..main bhi chaloon?)------- I laughed loudly reading this portion...ek toh kya karne aaye the aur kya kar rehe hain...upar se Anika ko aur dance karna tha...ghagra pe naachungi bolti hai...🤣🤣

ShivMya joined Rudra & kept glaring while Rudra was nervous that what will happen to him when the performance will be over...😆😆

ShivIka nok-jhok cracked me up...😆😆

("arre wah mere sher..tere andar ek chupi hui lajwanti thi mujhe nhi pata tha...ekdum kidkitod dance kiya tumne...mujhe bhi tumhare saath ghagra mein dance karna tha par in dono ne mujhe nhi aane diya"Annika started being Excited but ended it with a puppy face.

"Arre koi nhi bhabhi..mein na all rounder hoon aapko kabhi bhi mere saath ye gaane par dance karna hoga toh mujhe bata dena mein phir se aise getup me aakar aapke saath dance karoonga"rudra exclaimed while annika's face lit up with happiness.

"sacchi?"she asked

"mucchi"rudy answered.

"arre rudra tu toh bahut accha hai"she said and side hugged him while he too hugged her.

"Tum log ka Bhabhi Devar ka drama ho gaya ho toh abh hum aage ka soche?" Shivaay said while rubing his forehead with his finger.He was just cursing his fate to have such wierd people in his life.)-------- AniRu are always funny crackers...& Shivaay was stuck between the two...🤣😆

Rudra apna get up aur kitni baar badlega...bichara kapde badalte badlate hi puri TS nikal diya...😆😉😛

RuMya ko toh bas bahana chahiye argue karne ka...😆😆

OmRu scene was superb...👍🏼😆😎

ShivIka & RuMya explaining everything to Om...& RuMya banter with that eye-lock...& ShivIka noticed them...😃😊

Everyone left to ignore Anika's stupidest plans...😆😆

The whole closing ShivIka scene was awesome...first they were arguing & fighting...& then they turned romantic...😉😛😳

Anya & Anni, you guys have written such an entertaining TS...keep writing more...👏😃

Team A&A...3 cheers...👍🏼😎

Edited by Roselind - 9 years ago

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Khidki

@Khidki

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

@Roselind..!

Thanks haven't read a better review than that..!

Shivaay ki pagdi..causing hindrance to Tadi..!😆

OmRu scene was well...what I believe happens with most siblings..!🤣

Thank you for that amazing comment!

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Roselind

@Roselind

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: annikaa
@Roselind..!
Thanks haven't read a better review than that..!

Shivaay ki pagdi..causing hindrance to Tadi..!😆

OmRu scene was well...what I believe happens with most siblings..!🤣

Thank you for that amazing comment!

😊

Mention not Anni...😃😃

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

My God

This was such an adventureous twoshot collaboration...

Plz make more collavs of this type...

Loved & enjoyed reading this

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Loved it..amazing...awesome... Chummeswari...hilarious...out of this world
Two of i r my fav writers on this forum...anni nd anu...nd something collaborative frm u bth ...its jzt lovely.
Hats off o u bth gal
Loads of love ...kisses nd hugs fr u bth.muaaah
Eagerly waiting what's nxt in ur bags to serve.
Continue asap
Don't forget to pm me

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MafiaQueen17

@MafiaQueen17

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Really very funny totally hilarious
dead by laughing 🤣
good job

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Annii n Anya! 🤗
It was brilliant! Full of comedy, nok-jhok, romance!! 😆 😉 😳 And all those hilarious things like Rudy flirting with Nattu by being Rudina, The Shivay Singh Oberoi dancing in a mela n Om getting scared of Rudy's getup! 🤣 Shivika n Rumya's nok-jhok, tashan n eyelock. 😉 Awesome! 👏 Loved it. ❤️
With love,
Aheli.