Shivika OS - Rescue (Completed: Apr 5th 2017) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7

WOW ! I love how you made Annika into Warrior Princess here !! This was a very exciting dishum-dishum action packed story .. very different and exciting to read. I can see it took a lot of effort looking at the details you have put in. Hats off to you!! ❤️


Thanks!! Also, don't you mean Warrior Queen? If Shivaay's the King, Annika is obviously the Queen. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Amazing job with the story here!

You just made Shivaay Singh Oberoi's rescue so much better...
The anger that surrounded Anika like and aura was beautiful. I loved how she took the men down, those very men who had been a part of separating her and her husband.
The part where she says that her Devars down was so cute ;)
I loved how you wrote it, it was easy imagining them fighting 😆


Thank you so much! I feel like the problem was it lacked drama, which I don't usually mind, but I felt avoiding drama here was a mistake. You shouldn't drag drama, but you also shouldn't ignore it either. I'm actually a sucker for the AnniOmRu bond.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant. I loved this version of the rescue and the teamwork by OmAniru to rescue Shivaay:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LordLuminous


Thank you! You can check out a previous Shivika oneshot I had written if you'd like.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4800666



For Sure. I will definitely check it out. Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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For anyone interested in my other works, I let the links on the first post. Hope you all enjoy them too! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG! Yes! This is what I wanted!! I wanted to see like this in the serial too! A full fledged action packed rescue of our SSO by team AniOmRu!! 😃 U fulfilled my dream with this wonderful OS. 😳 Loved reading it. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

OMG! Yes! This is what I wanted!! I wanted to see like this in the serial too! A full fledged action packed rescue of our SSO by team AniOmRu!! 😃 U fulfilled my dream with this wonderful OS. 😳 Loved reading it. 😃


Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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YAS!!! Looove badasss, taking things in their own hands female leads. You bought out the feminist in me.

Another good one! More of an intense theme this time! But seriously why are your FF's better than the scenes in the show? Harneet - I hope you are looking to hire soon. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: missreddy7

YAS!!! Looove badasss, taking things in their own hands female leads. You bought out the feminist in me.

Another good one! More of an intense theme this time! But seriously why are your FF's better than the scenes in the show? Harneet - I hope you are looking to hire soon. 😉


😳 Aw, thats so sweet of you to say. Glad you loved it so much! Thanks so much for the support!

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