Promises - Short Shots Series [ Based on tracks] Shot 2 on pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _ishqbaaaz_

As always Harshada, no one can write emotions better than you. So glad that you are still here.

Such short but sweet enlightenment on something we want to see in the future between Shivika.

Amazing stuff!!


-LOVE



Dear Jasleen,
Thank you so much. 😳 You are always so appreciative with your comments. You just make me feel as if I am a top writer when I know I am not even close to it. But nonetheless, you are just very sweet😳 Whenever I see you, its always a pleasure. I am glad you liked this one.



Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

This was so touching. Such display of their broken states and turmoil. Brilliant ❤️

I just want them to develop into something so strong that would never break... Wishful thinking :/

Oh, and I caught the HP reference ;)



Dear Krishi,
Thank you so much. I am glad you liked this piece. Despite of not wanting, I don't know why, but I always ended up writing on the tracks [ I don't even like]
I hope... I hope they develop something that strong, someday.
Thank you.



Originally posted by: itsgops3010

This was a beautiful emotional one... I want this on show... U r always great in churning out these beautiful shots... Love.



Dear Gopika,
Thank you so much. Emotional has always been a favorite genre but I usually avoid writing knowing it leaves me with a heavy heart, often. I am glad you liked this one. Oh and even I like my one shots. You know, short stuff has quality, mostly. When you write short stories, words, scenes get repeated and the effect loses somewhere.




Thank you so much.



Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome Loved it harshu ❤️❤️❤️

No one can write emotional moments better than you
it was too heartwarming yar...
I am so glad that you came back and writing...
you portrayed the emotions very well...



Dear Aparna,
Thank you so much. It means a lot Aparna but there are brilliant writers on IF, reading from whom leaves me with a feeling that should I even write? Because the standard of amazing stuffs we come across here is sometimes terrifying but then, lovely words from people like you assure me that I don't write that bad.
Pleasure to know you liked this one. I am always glad being here, because people here are just lovely😳



Originally posted by: Nohsin10

It was emotional

But beautifully written
Awesome os



Dear Nohsin,
Thank you so much😳😳



Originally posted by: annikaa

"This Is Lovely..!"

the perfect shot read for a break from the maddening assignments.!

Thank you so much Rasna..!🤗

How I loved it...!❤️
So heart Touching..!

*runs back offline..!
I am not coming back until I finish my assignment..!😆
(I want to read ur other story the 2 shots...but...Only after I do mys assignment..! Your stories are my rewards..!)😃




Dearest Lassi🤗 I was about to shout yesterday 'Go and finish work first'😆 You know, pending works are a stress. Try completing before time, always.
Again, I love you🤗❤️Thank you so much. You liking a ontrack work of mine satisfies me as I know how much you are into serial and like everything. So a feedback from you is always cherished😳
Don't come back until you are done, okay?😉 That is a pure fun shot . Read whenever you want.
Uh oh Rewards???❤️







Thank you so much😊





Thank you so much😊



Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Oh Harshada, this is short but so beautiful. You've expressed the emotions so beautifully. Loved it.
Really well written. :)



Dear Rhea,
Thanks a lot😳 I am glad to know you think that it was nicely written😊



Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Beautiful and amazing short scene.
Loved it.



Thank you so much😊 Glad you liked it.




Thank you so much😊



Originally posted by: KashiTessa

Their emotions were beautifully presented.
Loved it




Dear Kashi,
Thank you so much😊
Edited by LoveToWrite - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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[MEMBERSONLY]



I have decided to make this as a series. Basically this would contains, short shots based on tracks. I wanted to write drabbles but since I cannot do within a hundred words so yeah, short OS's.


This one is set in the 'Attacks on Anika' time.



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|- Promise #2 - I Won't Let Anyone Harm You -|




"Shh Anika. Relax. I am here. Slightly rubbing his palm against her skin, he whispered, comforting her. She clung more onto him, holding him as if he was any elixir to her ill life. Sweat bids had covered her forehead, which he quickly realized as she rested it on his Shirt. Her petite figure was shaking and shivering in his firm embrace. He was left wondering what exactly had scared her to that extent where she failed to bring herself to say a word to him, leave alone explaining.

Confused, he tried pulling away to get some information but she didn't let him move. Her fear alerted him about the seriousness of the situation. Something terrible has happened, for sure. He thanked his stars and patted his back mentally for going against his mind and with his heart and intuition that forced him to land at her place, just on her one phone call... that phone call, on which, she hadn't said anything.

Damn! He would be considered stupid if he ever tells anyone the same. How could he just feel that something was wrong with her? That did not make any sense. Insane, he concluded warning some stupid things from his inside that were screaming, asking him the same question.

Anika. She was important, for now. Rest could wait. He needed to calm her down first. She always had been a strong girl and he, for the one, never expected in his wildest dreams that one day; he would get to see her in that state. Fear just did not suit her, he thought.

"Trust me Anika. I won't let anyone harm you. Once he gets out of her line of sight, he would surely sit and discuss with himself why did he even say that. He promised or say vowed to protect her... but why? Keeping everything aside, he felt that was the best thing he had ever said.

"I... do... trust you, Shi..vaay. Even if her words broke with her tearing voice but she did admit it and why wouldn't she? She was Anika and not Shivaay Singh Oberoi who constantly battled with what he felt and what he did.

"Tell me, what happened here? He had understood by then, that she was extremely scared and she would not shift away from him and more, he wasn't willing to let her out of his shield... not especially when she looked like doubting for her safety. This way or that way, he wanted to make her feel guarded and free from danger. If he couldn't verbalize it then he would make it visible through his actions.

"Attack... some...one here... do..or door locked... ph.. phone dead... someone here.

He hardly had grasped what she was trying to tell but one thing was inferred without a doubt she was being attacked and to the bound, she was terrified was horrifying... even for him. It must have been so severe if it had frightened her this way, he was sure. Gritting teeth, he clenched his fist that rested on her back but soon freed it, wrapping around her.

Who could target her? And why? Be that person in heaven or hell, in home or jail, he would do anything and everything to hunt him and once he finds him, he would pay... he would have to pay for doing what he did with Anika. How dare he come near her? How dare he try to harm her? Her tears had pricked his heart and cold body had put an uneasiness in him, making him panic.

Nobody, nobody can ruin her beautiful smile.

Nobody can hurt her.

Neither he would tolerate nor would he let anybody do that.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Read both the promisr together
Beautiful nd awesome as always
Both were so heart youching...nd magical
I'm hsppy that u hsvye started writing again
Continue soonish
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
woow...it's awesome...amazing...
So heart touching...
both parts are so beautifully written...
waiting for next update...continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harshada ,
You have magic with words. The way you put them is simply amazing. The shot was superb. Though Shivaay was heartbroken, he couldn't stay away especially after knowing that Annika is in danger.
There is a beauty in that relationship which you have given words.

Thank you

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