Rikara ff : Twist of life Prt2 Pg6 04/3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys I m bringing a different type if story.I request you to plz read it thn make any view about it .
(*I m not exploiting any character)

Prolouge
At an old & dark godown.
Place all the girls on the stage" ordered Kali thakur to his men.All the girls were tide in metal chains.Their clothes were untidy and torn from a few places.Their condition was terrible & why it won't be terrible when they were here. At the place where their life was going to change forever .All of them had fear in their eyes .The fear of what would happen next .The fear of being sold .




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So guys it a bit different story .
Chapter 1
The auction was about to begin.All the girls were scared. By now all 9 girls were sold.Here was the 10 on the display. And the bid begin.
Man1:5 lakh...
Man2: 8 lakh..
Man1: 12 lakh...
The girl was crying .Tears continously running down her cheeks .
Man3: 20 lakh ...
Man 2 : 1 crore...

Her ears heard ... 1 crore 1...1 crore 2...
1 Crore 3 and SOLD
The word echohed her ear SOLD SOLD SOLD ...
SHE WAS BROKEN .SHE CRIED .AND CRIED.
SHE WAS LED TO A HUGE EXPENSIVE CAR .HER HANDS TIED,SHE WAS BLIND FOLDED .



Man2 : open her hand & blind fold
Kali: Mr.Oberoi don't do so ...
Mr.Oberoi : I own her
Kali: as u wish

She was shocked hearing her owner asking to open her.
And she was opened . She could she tall handsome man with long hairs sitting at the drivers seat she was seated near him at the passenger seat .She didn't utter a word they had been driving since 2 hour but she was looking at him . Finally he spoke up .

Omkara:Hi I m omkara singh oberoi .
She noded her head.
Om: Your name ...
Girl: hhu ...u asked my ... .my name
Om: yes . Y any issues?
Girl: G...Gau...Gauri
Om: are u scared of me
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Forgive me for my mistake..
sorry for errors.
Hope u guys like it plz do comment.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
How did Gauri get in this mess with Kali
How did Omkara land in such a place
I think he bought her to save her
Cuz he couldn't bear to see her like that
3 crore is just a small amount to Oberoi's
For omakra life matters

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

How did Gauri get in this mess with Kali
How did Omkara land in such a place
I think he bought her to save her
Cuz he couldn't bear to see her like that
3 crore is just a small amount to Oberoi's
For omakra life matters

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

thnx
u will get the answers as the story proceeds

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thnx for all the likes n comment
hope u guys liked it
Any type of suggestions r welcome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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expected but update is very short please make long updates😃

i loved ur concept 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pt311288

expected but update is very short please make long updates😃

i loved ur concept 👏

😆short I know
I will keep updating & try to give long updates
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow... something interesting... plz continue..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting chapter but very small. Please update a bit longer

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