Revelations: A Short Shot On Advay

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Posted: 8 years ago
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His lungs screamed for air along with his deoxygenated heart. Everyday he puts on a mask of nonchalance to show he wasn't broken. His facade hid the crushed soul within him. Not one single being knew what was running through his mind, sometimes not even himself.
He'd grown up learning that love enables you to forget everything and anything. Bullshit. Everytime he catches a glimpse of the moon, he remembers her name. He walks into their - his - house, and remembers her presence. Any little action triggers his remembrance of her - all because of love.
He wants to hate her, destroy her, break her into pieces like she did to his heart. But those pieces still beat for her. Every shortened breath he takes, exhales with his longing for her.
Sanity tells him to move on. She isn't worth the tears. But his drive to forgetting her, keeps bringing him one step closer to insanity.
He grasps for strands of reality but finds himself falling deeper in the past.
He needs some closure but he can't let her go - not now. He'd have to pretend to love her until he is actually pretending. He'd crush her from the inside and out till she's begging for mercy. He'd recreate history with a different name and another heartbreaker.
He'd finally answer the question that's on everyone's minds:
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Buddy this account for PMs on works regarding this show. Please leave feedback and if possible, one shot ideas (: Constructive criticism is always welcome, crush my writing like Chandani supposedly did to Advay.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ohh who do i see here?!
Loved the OS. One of my fav ones on Advay.

Keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oooh. This is so good. Beautifully written. :)
Really loved reading it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So beautiful! This Is my wishlist scene. I am expecting such scene in the show. Advay's realisation. Advay realising that he's indeed in love with Chandni.
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Beautifully written! Loved it ❤️
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awesome shot dear
loved itt soo much
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Wow! Beautifully written. Would love to read more.
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So awesome. 😃
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Ashuu this is so amazingly written! You've nailed it..I feel like this is exactly what's going on in Advay's mind right now. Can't wait to read more!

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