AVNEIL FF: LOVE CHAP 40+ 41 PG 74(30/04/18)

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so right now it feels like im talking and all u r watching me and im actually feeling nervous😆

Hey guys
my name is sonali I'm

actually new on this forum.

I use to watch naamkaran before but it was on and off... however when the leap
happened and avneil came into the scene i never skipped an episode. I actually
started to fall in love with Avneil. Also the ff/ss/os/rs/ts r amazing I
actually loved reading each one of them u writers r fab and I'm waiting for all
of u to continue the next updates. I'm currently writing ff on other couples
and I couldn't stop myself from writing one for avniel.



My ff is a bit different. As in the show it's shown Dayawanti hates Avni but in this it will show how well avni gets on with the Mehta
family. I won't say more as below u will find out how each character r and how
the story is going and what happened in their life before.. so here is a cs



Avni Ayesha Mehta: a beautiful soul inside out best friend of Ali and
sister of Riya. She is everyone fav in the Mehta house. Doesn't believe
in love as she fears if she will love someone then that person will go away.
Owner of chamko cafe which she and Ali started together. She was her dads
princess but after her mum passed away her dad blames her for Ayesha death.
Loves her brother aman. Neela created a place in her heart and became her mama
and she cant afford to lose her mother again



Neela: avni and aman second mother. She was ashish Mehta second wife but they
got divorced however she still visits the metha mansion due to the lovely
relationship she made with the family.

Has become a daughter to nanno and lovingly calls her maa



Nanno: name is Fatima like everyone says... She loves her family a lot. She and Dayawanti argue on small things but just
for fun. She misses Ayesha a lot but found a daughter in Neela. . Wishes that
her grandchild avni finds someone in life.



Ayesha: Ayesha was is And will always be avni mother. She was 7month pregnant
when a small accident happened. She gave birth to a small boy and asked her
mother-in-law to name him aman. And few hours after she gave birth she passed
away. She loved ashish but slowly he started to get busy in work that he didn't
get time for any of them.



Ahsish Mehta: he is away from his family handling a business in abroad. Misses
his first wife Ayesha a lot but blames his daughter avni for her death.



Ali: avni best friend and boyfriend of Riya. Second owner of chamko cafe. He
always wishes the best for his loved one especially for his friend childhood
friend avni.. best friend of neil too



Riya: a complete selfie girl no matter what the occasion is or where u r a
selfie is A must for her. Ali girlfriend. She is close to avni and would share
any problem with her. She has never got jealous when her family gives more
attention to avni than her.



Aman: avni younger brother. He never got to be in his mother arm never heard
her speak to him..sing lullaby to him. He missed her and would always go with
avni to visit the grave with her... he knew his sister and dad don't talk to
each other. Although he does speak to his dad sometime. Neela is his life saver
she gave him alll the motherly love the he always wanted. He knows nobody can
takes Ayesha place but he know neela made a diff place in his heart. Lovingly
calls her nellu ma



Dayawanti metha: a very strong person. She is very kind hearted and would go
out to help anyone. Loves all her grandchildren a lot. she regrets that she couldnt stop her son from hating his own daughter and because of that avni changed... she loves her family members a lot and is happy she got neela married to ashish as avni and aman found a mother in her



Ketan& hetal: both r happily married though sometimes hetal moans that
ketan never has time for her as he always busy in business... both love all
the kids. Avni is ketan fav... whenever avni missed her dad ketan would always
be there for her.



Neil khanna: Neil hates it when people lie to him. He is one of the best
officer always there for his duty. He was in a serious relationship few years
ago but his gf Juji died in an accident right in front of his eyes. He loves
his family a lot. Girls drool over him but he doesn't pay attention to them.



Shweta khanna: shweta is neela friend both meet often sometimes... shweta knows
all about what neela went through and also likes avni and aman. She is very
funny at times but if someone gets on her nerves then that's it that person is
gone .



Prakash: a well known business man. I would describe him just the way he is
shown in the show.


</p>

Dd: works
with neil but also gives Shweta information when she cant get through her son.
A very funny and sweet guy



Diksha:
she can be mean at sometimes but everyone knows she would say the truth even if
it hurts someone... She doesn't call herself old even though her nieces and
nephew have grown up she gets along with them and also helps them out from
getting told off.



Just a
small intro (not really small) of what happened in the family before



<p>Years ago
ashish and Ayesha fell in love and both got married with dayawanti and Fatima
approval. Dayawanti always treated Ayesha like her daughter... she got on well
with her family soon she gave everyone a good news that she is expecting and
gave birth to a beautiful daughter and named her avni. When avni was around 6
years old Ayesha was 2 month pregnant
and everyone was happy. As time was going by ashish was slowly getting busy
with his work that he didn't have time to spend with his family.. this was
bothering avni a lot as ashish always promised her that he would come be it her
sports day at school... parents meeting at school, dance completion...he would
promise but never turn up... it was avni exam day and she really didn't want
to go as ashish didn't wish her good luck but ketan and Ayesha took her. During
that day avni was telling Ayesha how she is not happy that ashish doesn't spend
time and he gives fake promise... this was also botherisng Ayesha but she didn't tell
anyone thinking ashish may be buys now but he will come back soon to them...
seen avni getting angry Ayesha tried to calm her down. Ayesha was seven month
pregnant and avni was sitting in her room playing with Riya... Riya who was 5
years old asked avni y ashish doesn't spend time her and this got to avni she
went to her mum who was sitting in the garden. And questioned her y
ashish doesn't spend time like other father do he doesn't have time for any of
them . Ayesha got up and was trying to calm avni but avnimoved away...
Ayesha again tried to turn avni... but avni moved her hand away forcefully and
was going back in... Ayesha who was walking behind avni slipped as she missed a
step and shouted out avni name loudly... avni stopped in her track and turned
around to see her mother about to fall before she could reach to her Ayesha
fell flat on her stomach crying out in pain. Avni stood there shocked... ashish
saw this and ran to Ayesha when avni was about to get there ashish told avni to
stay away as he had seen what happened... avni couldn't utter a world ashish
took Ayesha to the hospital followed by the others... avni tried to talk to
ashish at the hospital but he moved away from her angrily... ketan held her...
soon the doctor came out and informed they saved the child but Ayesha doesn't
have much time... everyone went in ashish was sitting holding Ayesha hand while
Ayesha smiled to him slowly she looked at dayawanti and said she wants to name
her son aman dayawanti nodded... Fatima looked at her daughter and started
crying. Avni asked Ayesha not to leave her and Ayesha told her that she will
always be in her heart... ashish didn't look at avni at all... soon ayesha
breathed her last... ashish took his son while avni held Fatima and dayawanti
hand...They buried Ayesha body. Soon reaching to the metha house avni tried
talking to ashish but he ignored her... one day dayawanti was talking to Fatima
and hetal and both agreed that ashish needs to get married for the sake of aman
and avni... due to a lot of forcing ashish agreed for aman sake... few days
later avni went to see aman who was sleeping... she was staring at him when
ashish finally spoke to her and told her to stay away from aman as because of
her ayesha is not with them... avni pleaded but no use... soon neela came into
the family as she and ashish got married in court... avni didn't like neela
thinking she will take her mother place and would always tell neela to stay
away from her. Avni had stopped speaking to ashish she didn't plead him to talk
to her.. but soon she started developing a bond with neela.. when aman was 7
month old avni was talking to neela and addressed her as maa.. neela was
shocked and said avni to say it again and when avni called her maaa again she
was happy... she didn't get the love from ashish which She wanted but she was
happy that avni and aman were a part of her life... soon ashish left and went
abroad for his work. He stayed in contact with everyone in the family even
neela as theybecame friends but ashish never spoke to avni however neela
would always update ashish about avni... be he would ignore it. Neela had moved
away from the metha family after her and ashish divorce and avni and aman
stayed with her but they would always visit the metha house Soon time
flied and all the kids were all grown up


so that was the cs and what happened in the past in avni family... i hope u all like it as i have seen amazing writers on the forum... although i have written many ff it still feels like im writing my first one... i will post chap 1 soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay! So this is kinda different!
Looking forward to read it more.
Welcome to the forum btw.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear
Prologue or intro is very interesting
Looking forward for upcoming updates
It's different but a good idea
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to forum :)
your FF is different and interesting... plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lol_rofl

Okay! So this is kinda different!
Looking forward to read it more.
Welcome to the forum btw.



yep i always had this type of idea in mind
fingers crossed hope u will like it
thank u so much means a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Welcome to the forum dear
Prologue or intro is very interesting
Looking forward for upcoming updates
It's different but a good idea



thank u
thanks glad u liked it
hope u will like the upcoming chap
thank u so much means a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri12

Welcome to forum :)

your FF is different and interesting... plz continue soon



thank u
thanks i hope u continue to like it,,, means a lot
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Neela was getting the table ready for breakfast when she called avni

Neela: avni breakfast is ready

Avni: coming mama she said shouting from her bedroom once ready she went to the breakfast table and hugged naano from the back and kissed neela on the cheeks before sitting down.

Neela: bacha on your way will u be going to the metha house

Avni: yes mama I will go and see dadi and then meet Ali at the cafe.

Neela: ok then... I have made halwa for everyone do take it.. I would have gone but I have to meet my friend shweta

Avni: ok

Nanno: when is aman coming back from his trip

Neela: he will be coming back in few days maa. nanno nodded and all continued to have their breakfast.

Avni: ok mama I will leave now... bye nanno

Neela: avni don't forget dinner is on u today

Avni: mama it was meant to be your turn.

Nanno mumbled: here they start again

Neela: don't forget it was your turn yesterday but since u was late I made dinner and also breakfast

Avni: ok fine now I'm going bye

Avni sat in her car and went to the metha house first

When she entered she saw dayawanti sitting on the couch talking to someone on the phone. She went to the kitchen and gave the maid the halwa when she was coming out she bumped into diksha

Avni: hey diksha bua she said hugging her.

Diksha: hey baby. U ready for the party tomorrow

Avni: what party?

Diksha: avniii . She said giving a *stop pretending* look... avni laughed

Avni: come on bua can it be that u throw a party and avni Ayesha metha doesn't attend.

Diksha: that's like my girl. Ok baby I have to go need to make last minute arrangements for the party so see u later she said kissing avni cheeks and left.

Avni went back to where dayawanti was and sat down next to her waiting for her to finish speaking on the phone once done dayawanti looked at avni

Dayawanti so finally my granddaughter got time to meet me

Avni: sorry dadi was really busy at the cafe that I hardly got time.

Dayawanti: fine I forgive this time but a phone call is a must.

Avni: done

Dayawanti: by the way where is neela she didn't come

Avni: nope mama had to go and meet Shweta aunty so she couldn't come and told me to giv u the halwa that she sent.

Dayawanti: at least I will get to meet her and Fatima ji at the party.

Avni: ok dadi I have to leave to go to the cafe bye. She said quickly running off before dayawanti could stop her

Dayawanti: this girl never takes a min break she said to herself and went to her room

Avni was on her way to chamko cafe. she reached there in 20 mins and when she reached there she bumped into a guy who was leaving. She was about to lose her balance but the guy pulled her up.

Avni: can't u see where u r going she said looking at the guy angrily

Guy: I can see where I'm going but maybe u can't. On top of that I helped u so that u dont fall and instead of saying thank you to me u r shouting at me

Avni: thank u my foot she said glaring at the guy and went inside the cafe while the guy turned around and looked at avni going with a small smile on his face

Avni walked in to see her friend Ali but also saw Riya sitting with him...she went up to them

Avni: aww love birds together she said teasingly

Ali: oye as soon as u come u start your usual teasing.

Avni: so it's my right to tease u...anyway madam what r u doing here she said looking at Riya

Riya: y can't I come here?

Avni: u can but don't u need to go work today

Riya: well I did but I took a day off and its good I did as I got to meet Ali's friend

Avni: Ali's friend?... Ali excused himself and went to a customer

Riya: yeah he came 30 mins ago and just left few mins ago. His name is Neil in fact even U should have come a bit earlier.

Avni: and y do u think that

Riya: so that u could of met him... be friends with him. God Avni Im telling you he was handsome.

Avni: aww poor Ali I think he needs to know that his girlfriend finds another guy handsome

Riya: shut up she said smacking Avni playfully.

So chapter 1 done... thank u for the lovely comments for the intro/concept it really means a lot and I hope u guys do like this different type of story

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At the khanna mansion

Neela entered the mansion and one of the servants called shweta while he told neela to sit.

After few mins shweta came down

Shweta: hello my lovely sweet hearts. She said walking to neela... neela looked up and smiled at her friend both hugged each other .

Neela: wow some is looking pretty in this saree she said and both sat down while the servant bought tea for them.

Shweta: thanks neela.

Neela: but is there any occasion in wearing a saree today?

Shweta: yes Bebe is coming today. Though she doesn't mind me wearing my normal clothes but since she is coming after a long time I thought y not wear a saree. U see I don't want to give her a chance to say something to me which I know will happen as she can't digest her food without saying something.

Neela: shwetaaa.. Anyways u know there is a party at the metha house so do bring Bebe along. Daya ma and maaa will be happy to meet her.

Shweta: is that a thing to say of course I will bring her. But tell me where your kuddi avni has disappeared I haven't seen her for a long time

Neela: she is busy with her cafe. But u will probably see her tomorrow... by the way did u speak to Neil about marriage.

Shweta : I did but he said he doesn't want to get married as he will always loves Juhi... but tell me Neela he can't spend all his life in Juhi memories. I'm sure there is someone out there for my Tillu and since bebe is coming I will ask her help to convince tillu for marriage. She said seriously.

Neela; it's really hard to convince our kids na.

Shweta: very hards... anyways let's forget about kids for now and enjoy our day with each other... Neela smiled and nodded

At the cafe.

Avni, Ali and Riya where sitting on a table sipping their coffee

Riya: by the way baby please do be on time at the party tomorrow she said pointing her finger at Ali

Ali : is that an order or a request he said raising his eyebrows?

Riya: think whatever u want.

Ali: sure ? He said leaving towards Riya with a smirk... avni saw this

Avni: *ahem ahem* guys even I'm here and if u don't want to be disturbed y don't u go inside the cabin

Riya: babz it's nothing like that. Anyway avni come with me she said trying to avoid Ali gaze

Ali: oh hello where r u taking avni

Riya: shopping?

Avni: shopping. For what? I don't need to get anything

Riya: babz u need to look the best for tomorrow party

Avni: I already have an outfit

Riya: oh please we all know what u will wear just a simple lengha or gown... but I won't let that happen

Ali: I agree with Riya so avni U go with Riya

Avni: but I don't want to go she said protesting

Riya: sorry darling u have no choice. now come she said dragging avni out of the cafe while Ali laughed and shouted

Ali: good luck Avni and bye Riya baby.
Riya blew a kiss at Ali while avni glared at ali.

Meanwhile at the police station a guy was sitting in his cabin going through some case papers when someone called out to him

Did: Neil sir we have got an evidence... Neil looked at dd and put the file down that he was reading

Neil: what's the evidence

Dd:one of our informer told me that the person who is in charge of the drugs racket will be trying to sell drugs at a jewellery store but he didn't say which jewellery store... also our target would be reaching there in 2 hours

Neil: we should make a move then... everyone should be in civilian clothes understood

Dd: yes sir... with that Neil and dd got ready to go to the mall

Meanwhile Riya and avni were in a clothes shop and finally Riya found something for avni... she went to try on the outfit and when she came out Riya winked at her

Riya: avni u look damn amazing in this/

Avni: thanks and for once this does seem comfortable

Riya: I told u ! Come let's get matching jewellery for this... avni rolled her eyes she quickly got changed and made the payment and both headed to the jewellery store.

Neil and dd had reached outside the mall with other officers all dressed in normal clothes. Neil took of his shades and all went inside as Neil ordered them to separate and go to different jewellery stores in the mall

Neil went to the jewellery store that was on the first floor.. he was looking around when he bumped into some one and held the person from falling .

Neil: I'm so sor... he stopped seen the same person that had bumped into him at the cafe.

Neil: hi again he said smirking. The girl Neil had bumped into was none other than avni. She opened her eyes and was shocked to see him but soon her face showed anger

Avni: you!

Neil: haan me he said smirking

Avni: don't u feel ashamed of bumping into me and instead of saying sorry to me u r smirking

Neil: y shall I say sorry to u and it was your fault that u bumped into me.

Avni: excuse me if your memory is weak then let me remind you that it was U that bumped into me at the cafe and now over here.

Neil: not excused... I didn't bump into u in fact u were not paying attention at the cafe that's y u bumped into me and the same thing happened over here

Avni: it's useless to say anything to guys like you as it will hurt u to say sorry she said glaring at him

Neil: then y don't u say sorry he said moving a step closer... Avni looked at him she could see some kind of twinkle in his eyes. She moved a step back. Both were looking at each other when the store manager came to avni and Neil went into his police mode and started to concentrate on his work.

Manager: avni ji your jewellery will be ready by tomorrow if you want then we can come deliver it to your house.

Avni: no it's ok I will actually come and collect it tomorrow and make the purchase then.

The manager left and avni started to look at the entrance to wait for Riya who went to make a call to Ali and was not back yet... she waited for 5 mins and when Riya didn't come she decided to see if her sister is outside... she was walking out of the store and for a reason she felt like turning around after few sec she did

Avni: big mistake avni she thought in her head... as Neil also turned around that time and with a naughty smile he waved her a bye but in return avni glared at him and turned around continuing to walk out.

Riya: babes sorry the network was low so had to go down. Did u purchase your jewellery

Avni: no I will come and collect it tomorrow as I can also get diksha bua her gift then.

Riya: cool let's go.

Precrap: avniel meeting again

Ok guys so chapter 2 is up too I hope u like both chap 1 and 2 will be waiting for your lovely comments

Ps: sorry for any spelling or grammar mistake.

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