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Posted: 8 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: mamatha2310
Superb update
love it
jr Arjun is cute
party n song was nice
eger to know more
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Thanks dear..

Hope u enjoyed it..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#424

sorry for late n single comment

reading all in a go

like always you penned down it perfectly

feeling sad for ariya but they handle themselves n emotions very well

humesha pa lena hi pyar nahi hota

love bonding of ariya abhi n arj(jr)

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#425

Part 11:-

After one more week:-

Its evening:-

All are ready to leave for home..

Aayesha:-oh god..ghar jake ready hona he fir commissioner sir ke yaha party pe jana he..n more over muze sneha ko bhi apne sath lena he..

Riya:-huh..tumhari beti bahot hi calm nature ki he aayesha..woh tumhe party me bilcul tang nahi karegi..but I dont know what to do with my arjun(jr)

All look to her..

Riya:-he is just a impossible kid..he couldnt stand at one place for more than a minute..alwsya doing masti..

All smiles..

Riya:-I only know how I handle him in such situation..

Abhi:-ek kaam karte he ritz..ham log party se jaldi toh aane wale he..usse thodi der ke liye hamare neighbor ke pass chod sakhte he..waise bhi unke bte se arjun(jr) ki acchi dosti ho gayi he..

Riya:-nahi..our neighbours house is so untidy..full of dust..

Abhi rolled his eyes n just shook his head in disbelief..

Riya:-lagta he usse bhi party me le jana hoga..

Arjun:-if u dont mind riya n abhi..he can stay with me..

Riya n abhi look each other..

Riya:-u r not coming for the party..??

Arjun:-no..

Riya smiles..

Abhi:-then done..arjun(jr) will stay with u..we will drop him to ur house..

Arjun:-I still live at loudge..

Riya sadly sigh..

Arjun:-I will come to ur house..n will be there till u both back..

Abhi n riya agreed..

Later on all left for party..arjun(sr) come to abhis home..

Both arjun enjoyed pizza..

Arjun(sr):-arjun(jr)..muze lagta he abhi aur riya ko aane me abhi time he..so u sleep now..

Arjun(jr):-muze aise nind nahi aati..

Arjun(sr):-toh kaise aati he..?

Arjun(jr):-mamma muze story sunati he..tum bhi story sunao..

Arjun(sr):-but muze koi story nahi aati..

Arjun(jr) make face..

Arjun(sr):-accha baba..thik he..story..ha..there was one rabbit n another one tortoise..both..

Arjun(jr)(cutting him in mid):-no..no..muze ye kahani nahi sunani..its bore..i know..who win at last..

Arjun(sr) giggle..

Arjun(sr):-but I dont know other story..

Arjun (jr) :-aise kaise..

He make sad face..

Arjun(sr):-ok..mein tumhe ek story sonata hu..

Arjun(jr )smiles..n started hearing arjun(sr) very carefully n with patience..

there was a prince..he was brave,intelligent..he fall in love with a very beautiful princess..he get married to her..n both were living happily..suddenly one day a davil come..he snatch princes from the prince..n took her away from him for forever..prince couldnt do anything..

Arjun(jr):-usake baad kya hua..??

Arjun(sr):-prince bahot tut gaya..woh bahot dukhi tha..bas usaka ek hi mission tha bas kisi tarike se uss devil ko saza dena..woh prince bas issiliye ji raha tha ke uss devil ko saza de sakhe..aur..fir..fir ek din achanak usake zindagi me ek angel princeess aa gayi..

Arjun(jr):-angel princeess..??

Arjun(sr):-hmm..angel princess..woh bahot beautiful ..pyari aur bahot acchi thi..prince ko uss princess se pyar ho gaya..aur woh angel princess ko bhi uss prince se pyar ho gaya..par prince..woh bahot tensed ho gaya..dar gaya..ye sochke jaise devil ne usski pehali princess ko usse chin liya waise hi kahi woh iss angel princess ko bhi na chin le..usse dart ha ke kahi angel princess ko kuch ho na jaye..aur fir..ek aur prince aaya..

Arjun(jr):-second prince..??

Arjun(sr):-ha second prince..woh bhi bahot brave aur intelligent tha..woh uss angel princess ka dost tha..usse bahot pyar karta tha..fir..hamare first prince ne angel se kaha ke woh iss second prince se shadi karle..aur usse dur chali jaye..taki woh thik rahe ..safe rahe..angel ne prince ki baat manke usse second prince se shadi kar li..aur woh prince se dur chali gayi..

Arjun(jr):-fir..??

Arjun(sr):-fir kya..??angel princess aur second prince bahot hi happily reh rahe the..aur unki life me ek little prince bhi aaya..n they happily live ever after..

Arjun(jr):-bas..??

Arjun(sr):-hmm..story khatam..

Arjun(jr):-aise kaise..??uss devil ka kya hua..??aur prince ko toh koi princeess mili hi nahi..??

Arjun(sr)(sadly):-ye story aise hi he..bas..

Arjun(jr) looks fall in thinking..

Arjun(sr):-kya hua..??

Arjun(jr):-u know arjun..aise hi story mamma ne bhi muze kayi baar sunayi..usame bhi prince ko princess nahi milati..aur pata he..ek baar mamma office me late ho gayi..toh papa ne bhi muze aise hi kuch story sunayi..kya tumhe bhi iss story ka end nahi pata..??

Arjun(sr):-yahi iss story ka end he arjun..aur yahi sahi end he..

Arjun (jr):-par..

Same time abhi riya enter in home with samsha (n sneha)..

Riya:-arjun..

Arjun(jr):-mamma..

He run to his mamma..n hug her..

Arjun(sr) get up n turn to leave..

Abhi:-arjun..ruko na..ham sab coffee lete he..

Arjun(sr):-u guys continue..bye..

Arjun(jr):-bye arjun..next time u will tell me end of the story..

Arjun(sr) just smile..n left..

Riya:-kyon si story arjun..??

Arjun(jr):-arjun (sr) ne muze wahi kahani sunayi..jo aapne sunayi thi..wahi devil wali..aur usame prince ko koi princess nahi milati..woh..

Riya n abhi look each other..

Abhi:-accha..??

Arjun(jr):-hmm..aur usane kaha ke ye story aise hi he..yahi isaki end he..but mamma..papa..

Abhi:-hmm..??

Arjun(jr):-har story ke end me prince ko princess milti he..aur fir story end hoti he..yaha toh aisa nahi hua..

Abhi ko kya kahe samaz nahi aa raha..idhar sam ko bhi pata chal gaya he ke ye story matlab ariya aur abhi ki lifestory he..aayesha ko ariya ki love ke bare me kuch pata nahi..so usse kuch samaz nahi aa raha..

Riya come to arjun(jr)..hold his hand..

Riya:-kuch stories aise hi hoti he arjun..(sadly):-woh aise adhuri hi hoti he..

Arjun(jr) about to ask her more..when abhi speak up..

Abhi:-look arjun kyon he..sneha aayi he..u play with her..or try to sleep..

Arjun(jr) get busy playing with sneha..

Abhi give side hug to riya..riya smiles lightly..n give him assuring nod that she is ok..

Riya:-mein sabke liye coffee lati hu..

They took coffee n little chit chat..n then samsha with their daughter to their home..

(chotu sapna,shree liza had left to their home directly from party..)

After 2-3 days..

Abhi get call from his informer that sikandar is in india..actually in mumbai.,.

All are sitting in conference room..abhi explain all of them the case again as choree n aayesha had not know it till..

Choree n aayesha too get serious as they know what this case meant for arjun..

Sam:-now guys..commissioner aur DIG sir se meri baat ho chuki he..now its time for real action..

Abhi:-hmm..so hamare plan ke accoding,hamare pass already sikandar ke business ki sari details he..shree..sort all this details according to citywise..ritz u help him..n citywise ye details waha ke crime branches ko di jayegi..

Arjun:-mumbai ke hideouts aur aadmiyo ko ham yani etf deal karegi..

Sam:-aur iss hisab se hame sikandar ka business khatam karne ko 2 din lagege..

Abhi:-right..aur teesare din sikandar ki bahot badi deal he..jaha par ham usse range hath pakdege..

Aayesha:-agar woh alert ho gaya toh..??usane bhagne ki koshish ki toh..??

Abhi:-alert toh woh hoga hi aayesha..kyo ki usaka itna business ham kahatm kar rahe honge aur usse pata bhi nahi chale aisa nahi ho sakhta..

Riya:-par..ham usse Mumbai ke bahar nikalne nahi denge..aur airport,buses,aur sare transports pe hamari nazar hogi..woh Mumbai ke bahar ja hi nahi payega..

Sam:-aur I guess itna nuksan hone ke baad he will try to get this deal he has come india for..kam se kam woh ye deal hone tak Mumbai ke bahar nahi jayega..

Abhi:-aur agar fir bhi usane koshish ki..toh hamare informer se hame pata chal hi jayega..

All nodded n started doing the work..

Next 2 days goes very crucial for them..with the help of respective crime branches sikandars business has destroyed by all means..during all this either arjun or abhi was all the time along with riya..they dont left her alone..

Now they are just waiting for the deal moment to catch sikandar ..

All are waiting for the time..

Arjun is standing little away from them..

Riya:-arjun sir..

Arjun turn to look her..

Riya:-dont worry sir..jaldi hi woh ghadi aayegi jisaka aapko intzaar he..iss baar jeet aapki hogi sir..

Arjun:-thank u riya..

Riya smiles..

After 3-4 hours..

Somewhere in Mumbai..

Sikandar is angrily yelling on his men..

Sikanadr:-ye sab kya he..?mera sara dhanda chaupat kar diya inn logo ne..sab khatam kar diya..choduga nahi mein kisiko..

One man:-siknadar bhai..bas aaj ki hamari deal ho gayi na fir sab thik hoga..

Sikandar(muttering to himself):-ha..aaj ki deal bahot zaruri he..aur deal ki baad mein yaha se chala jauga..fir kisi safe jagah se firse apne dhande ki suruwat karni hogi..

He lost in his thoughts..

Sikandar:-lekin isaka matlab ye nahi..ke mein kisiko chod dunga..jinhone mera itna loss kiya he unhe nahi choduga..tumhe pata karne ko bola tha na..??kuch pata chala ya nahi..??

Another man:-ha bhai..sab pata kar liya he..acp abhijeet banerji naam he usaka ..pehale kolkatta crime branch me tha..ab etf me he..usaki biwi bhi senior inspector he..usaki biwi ko hi pehale link mili..aur dono ne milke ye sara kiya he..dono ka hi kiya dhara he..aur muze lagta he koi hamare me hi gaddar he jisane sari information unn logo ko di..

Sikandar:-gaddar jo bhi he..usse toh mein iss deal ke baad dekh lunga..lekin iss deal ke waqt muze kuch gadbad nahi chahiye..aur usake liye iss acp ka kuch karna hoga..

Man:-usaki biwi aur usake 5 sal ke bte se bahot pyar karta he woh..

Sikandar smile evily..

Sikandar:-toh fir muze lagta he tumhe pata he tumhe kya karna he..

Both men smile evily..n left..

Here some other man hearing all this conversation hiding himself..

This man is none other than abhis informer n undercover officer of this case..

Officer(in mind):-abhi sir ko inform karna hoga..

After a while when he come to safe place..he call abhi..

Here all are in conference room..

Abhi receive phone..

Officer:-sir..mein bol raha hu..

Abhi(excitedly):-ha bolo..

Officer:-sir deal toh aaj hi hone wali he 3 ghante baad jaise ke meine pehale aapko inform kiya tha..

Abhi:-yes..dont worry we will be there on right time..we r ready..

Officer:-sir but there is a problem..sir they had come to know that u have got the link..they knows about u n riya mam..n ur son too..they are making some plan so that this deal will get successful without any interfarance..i guess they are upto something dangerous..u n ur family are in danger sir..

Abhi:-u have heared them..??

Officer:-yes sir..they have also doubt that someone between them helping police..but dont worry sir I will take care of myself..u just be alert about ur family sir..i have to leave now..bye..

Officer cut the phone..

Seeing abhis tensed expression all look to him worrily..

Arjun:-kya hua abhi..??

Abhi:-sikandar ko pata chal gaya he ke ye case ke liye kaise meine aur riya ne link dundi thi..mere informer ne kaha he ke they are upto something..they are behind me n my family so that they can complete deal without any problem..

Sam:-relax..abhi nothing will happened..

Arjun(suddenly):-riya kaha he..??

All look each other panicked..

Abhi:-ritz..??

Shree:-sir woh aur chotu back up force ke liye gaye he na..??

Arjun:-call him now..

Shree call chotu n talk to him..

After cutting call..

Shree:-sir chotu ne kaha ke woh aur riya backup force ke sath etf me aa rahe he..

Abhi:-oh..thats means they r safe..

All just taking sigh of relief..

Shree(suddenly):-arjun..??

Arjun look to him..

Shree:- I mean chota arjun..??

All gaze turn to abhi now..

Abhi:-arjun..day care me he..

He started calling his day care centers number..but no response..

He frustratedly move his hand thorugh his hairs..n next second his phone buzz..

He recive it..

tumhara beta hamare pass he..tumhare pass bas ek kaam he..ab se thik 4 ghante baad muze iss desh se bahar nikalne ka intzaam karna..agar aisa nahi kiya toh jante ho na arjun ki biwi ki jo halat hui thi wahi tumhare bte ki hogi..

Phone get cut..all had heared the it on loudspeaker..

All jjust shocked n worried from core..

Chotu n riya enter in conference room..

Chotu:-rathod sir..back up force etf primises me pahoch chuki he..

Riya:-muze lagta he sir hame abhi niklana chahiye..kyo ki uss deal ke time tak hame waha pahcohna hoga..

Chotu n riya look each other when they dont get any response from them..

Riya:-kya hua..??

Abhi:-ritz..arjun unke pass he..

It take few second to her realize the meaning..

Riya:-hey bhagwan..mera baccha..mera arjun..

Abhi:-ritz..ritz..relax..

Arjun:-riya..nothing will happenend to him..

Riya wipe her tears..n make her mind strong..

Riya:-nothing will happened to him..i wont let it be..

Sam:-come on guys..ab ek hi rasta he..hame uss deal ko rokna he..sikandar ko khatam karna he..aur hamare arjun ko wapas lana he..

All nodded wioth determination..

All turn to leave..

Arjun:-riya..u r not coming..u r staying in etf only..

Abhi:-yes..arjun is right..

Riya:-I will come..n u both cant stop me..

Both are about to say something..but riya dont let them..

Riya:-tum apne ritz ko rok sakhte ho jeet..arjun sir aap riya ko rok sakhte he..par mere andar ke ma ko koi nahi rok sakhta..muze mere bte tak jane se koi nahi rok sakhta..

Abhi n arjun look each other defeatedly..riya too come along with them..

They cover the whole area..firing started from both ends..

Most of the sikandar men are now dead or caught..

Only he n 2-3 men left..

One man altaf who is right hand of sikandar got hold of arjun(jr) who is crying..n he yell to stop firing..

Altaf:-bas..bahot ho gaya..etf team samne aao..warna ye ladka jayega..

Team come infront..poining their gun to all of them..

Altaf:-apni gun niche rakho..warna..

All put their gun down..

Sam:-dekho..bacche ko chod do..mein wada karta hu tum logo pe koi attack nahi karega..

Sikandar:-hame yaha se safely jane do..

Sam:-ham tumhe jane denge..tum bacche ko chod do..

Sikandar:-hame iss desh ke bahar jana he..

Abhi :-ham sare arrangements karege..tum usse chodo pehale..

Altaf n sikandar look each other..

sikandar:-ham iss bache ko tab tak nahi chodege jab tak tum hame safely bahar nahi nikal jane dete..

abhi:-bilcul..tum logo ko koi kuch nahi karega..

here etf is engaging altaf sikandar n his men in conversation riya has hide herself..

she had reached to such place from where altaf could be on her gun point..

she fire towards altaf..it hits to his leg..he fall down..n the officer (undercover agent)quickly took arjun(jr)in his arms n hide themselves..

but due to this firing again starts..

now sikandar n altaf himself pointing angrily to riya more..

riyas bullets has finished..sikandar realized this..even abhi too..

sikandar fire to riya..but abhi come in between to save riya..n bullet hit to him..

riya(yell):-jeet..

arjun(sr):-abhi..??

here taking advantage of this situation sikandar run away with his 2 men..but chotu caught hold of wounded altaf..

all rest of them(including the undercover officer with little arjun) rush to abhi..

riya(while crying):-jeet..??

(so here is the last part of the ff..rest of will be in epilogue so stay tune)

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balan04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Last part???
What happened to jeet??
I hope he's fine
Nice update
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Last part?

itna jaldi Kuyn

Abhi thik to hogi na?

Anyways beautiful update

Very emotional

Eagerly waiting for next part

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Sana Tabassum

@sana1819786

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#428

last part????😭?

aise kaise ...?

jeet ko kya hua ... is he safe..?

sik uska kya wo pakda hi nahi gaya

aur mujhe tho aisa lag raha hi ki ye story kal hi start hui aur aaj khatam

i am sooo saddd😭

any ways loved the update aur iske end ka mujhe kuch kuch doubt hi I have thought of abhi being shot aur lagta hi jr arjun ke qstn ka answr sr arjun jaldi dega

epi jaldi dena

thanks for pm

bye take care

Edited by sana1819786 - 8 years ago

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rvss

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Posted: 8 years ago

#429

Finally sik ka sara business chopat kar diya..

J Arjun ko kidnepe kar liya .use to bacha liya pat riya ko bachane me jeet ko goli lag gai..

J Arjun ne story Ka end pucha tha.. Muje kuch kuch doute Ho raha he end kesa hoga.

I think..

Jab epilogue dogi tab read karke batavugi ki me sahi thi ya Nahi.

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Angelsonali1

@Angelsonali1

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#430

Abhi is injured 😭 hope he will be alright.if abhi dies arjun(junior) will lost his father.riya may get her love bt arjun(junior) will lost his father.