Commitment~~SS{Part 8_Pg.35}05-08-17 NO PM - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ZehriliChidiya


Quadrangle😆😆Geometry bohot pakki hai meri😉😉
Strong someone..😃😃True..!!
🤗🤗Sorry for the short update...but when I was nt updating I was treating u guys with Oss na😕😕??

@bold Ye toh waqt he batayega meri jaan..!!
Thanks for commenting and glad u liked it..!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all parts in one go
Awesome update chotu 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes u r our Chottu 😳
Good name Tinna 😊

Originally posted by: Tinna28





Le tere liye ek
Chotu
From now i will call u chotu
Hope this is fine with u
Tu small hai na mujsee 😛

Luv tii se tinna

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update dear..
thnx for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey people..!!!How is everyone??Hope all are doing good...
So I an back with another part of COMMITMENT but ye bhi chintu sa hai...Mom is just back home and has ordered me to leave the laptop alone so this is a fragment of what I actually wanted to post😭😭
Nevertheless...This will let your heart shout for more for sure😉😉
So here you go...!!!!
And and and thanks a looottt for your response for commitment...Never ever had I thought that this would be such a hit..!!Thanks a ton to all those who commented..!!🤗
Now you goo..!!!


"Bhaiya ready huye kya aap??Aap toh ladkiyo se bhi zyada time le rahe ho..."Pushkar sulked as he was waiting for his outside his hotel room

"Ho gaya yaar...Shravan said coming out...

"Kya dikh rahe ho bhai...Ladkiyo ne toh uhi flat ho jaana hai...Pushkar winked...

"Hmm..Chale??Shravan said as he stared walking...

"Bhaiya Monica ka kya hua??

"Woh directly party mey aa rahi hai...

"Ohk...

They got into the car and drove off to the party destination...

"Shravan..!!!!A voice echoed the parking as Shravan got down from the car...He saw Monica coming to him...

"Please bacha lo bhagwan...He murrmered under his breath as she approached him...

"Wooo...Shravan you are looking so so hot...She said drolling over him...

"jaldi chalo..Late ho jaayenge...He walked to the lawn...

"Aare Monica dear...Welcome...The host welcomed them...

"Mr mehra...Ye hai Shravan Malhotra..She introduced Shravan with Mr. Mehra..

"Hello young man..Its nice meeting you...They shaked hands...

"My pleasure Mr Mehra...And congrats for your win...he congratulated Mr Mehra

"Thanks..Enjoy the party...He wished them and went away attending another guests...

*

She turned back with a surprise and found him standing ...

"Tum??Yaha??

"vahi toh mai kehne vala tha...Tum yaha kaise??Tum kaise jaanti ho Mr.Mehra ko??

"Woh Nanu ke dost hai...nanu toh anhi aa sake..issiliye mai aa gayi...She said...

"Ohh...Vaise tumne mujhe tab pehchana nahi tha kya??

"Aare sorry...woh chera jaana pehchana lag raha tha...Par baadmey yaad aaya,...|

"Aacha??tab toh kuch nahi bola??

"Tab professional kaam tha na...She winked..

"Ohh..Miss Professional...Pushkar teased har as they shared a side hug..

"Tiwariji kaise hai??Mamaji maamiji..Aur preeti??

"Everyone is well...And preeti bhi...Jaipur mey fasion designing ka course kar rahi hai...

"Ohh...WOW...Aare bhaiya...vaha kyu khade ho aao na yaha pe...Pushkar saw Shravan staring at them and waved him..

*

The party was going on a total bore...Monica's radio was on but my heart seemed no solace...My eyes wandered here and there and I saw her...sipping on the red wine ...She looked mesmerizing...She looked stunning in Black Lace Applique Cocktail Party Dress with that embriodery...I headed towards her only to see Pushkar approaching her...They giggled and smiled and shared a side hug...I was about to turn while Pushkar called me...

Aare bhaiya...vaha kyu khade ho aao na yaha pe... I went towards them...

"Bhai aap jaante ho ye kaun hai??Tiwari ji ke naatin...Priya aunty ke beti..Suman Tiwari..!!He told me and my brain struck...

"Oh yes...Hello...I smiled to which she just gave a small smile and turned away...

"Pushkar I will be back...I left from there..

*

"Sumo..??

"ha bolo Pushkar...I turned towards him trying not to show my lone tears...

"Tum ro rahi ho??!!

"Nahi...bilkul nahi...

"Kuch kehna tha...

"Ha bolo na...

"I know everything...

"What??I had a bad feeling that Shravan had told him everything...

"Vahi jo tumhare aur bhai ke beech hua tha...


So phirse sorry for this chintu update but I will try my best to write a bit more..Aab toh college bhi 5:30 tak shuru ho gaya hai...But I WILL TRY😃

Hope you all liked this...Like and share your views...

Meet you with a new update soon...

Till then...

Love,

ANU❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
Chotu sa tha koi nehin ok
Shravan didn't react much when he was introduced to Sumo by Pushkar & left from there. So they know each other's family other than childhood friendship.

Thanks for PM Anu

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chotu sa update hi only😭 but its ok I can understand but when ever you feel free than try to update. And this part is superb 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chottu one but cute one 😳
Update fast eagerly waiting to know more

Maria 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Anu
Chotti but lovely update
So their families know each other
Waiting for the next update

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