Os Page from her Dairy (AvNeil)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey all this my first OS on AvNeil , writing after ages ignore mistakes



Avni look the towards bed as she walked out of washroom Neil was fast asleep a smile appear on her lips and her eyes too shinned ,she walk on tip of her toe to the guitar shaped book shelf " i forgot my diary at Neela maa home i need a paper and pen " she searched but could not find , she gaze at him and slowly opened the door and walked out to the next room which was Neil study , " sure here i will find a piece of paper " she picked up few files from his study table found a diary she bites her lower lips and look back without opening his diary she tore two pages ,
" you trust me Neil , i will not read your personal Dairy " she murmur and grab a pen sat on his chair ,she bites the pen back and narrowed her eyes ,she took a deep breath and started writing


Hi My dairy , i am missing you , for quite sometime i haven't written anything , today i want to introduce the men of my life

Like every girl i have few men in my life

Ashish Metha " kehan ko tou he is my dad my first hero but he was never there when i need him the most , he never trusted me " left few lines and the wrote


Aladdin/Kabir " my well wisher , who not only trusted me but always helped me , Dayawanti evil mind snatched him away from me

Ali my child hood friend , he has helped me protected me as if i was his real sister

Aman " my younger brother but he don't even know i exist "


She left few lines
Prakash Uncle He is sweetest men i ever met , he is always there for me , for me he scold his son at times :) i wish my dad was as cool as him

Neil: i lied to him but still he trust me , he was not my relative or my friend but he was always there for me to protect me ,today when you made me relax and hug me in your arms i feel so safe, when you wiped away my tears and asked me to trust in you, i saw pain for me in your eyes ,with my smile you smiled ,He is as cool as his dad ,Yes Neil i am your girl .. you made me feel luckiest girl today...Ali has being always there for me , but when you say i am with you i feel now no power on earth can stop us, i never felt like that, My Asha maa and Neela Maa both wanted husband like Neil , or if i say every girl want Husband like him " she paused as she heard foot steps
"Shit what i am doing here " she quickly folded the paper and put it in her pajama , which accidentally slipped and moved under Neil chair
"Kya kar rahi ho wifey tum yahan " Neil said huskily while rubbing his eyes
" i was searching for some book , i am not sleepy" she said while looking at the books , Neil noticed the ,He yawn and bend down without letting her noticed he picked it up
"yahan nahi hain uss side per dekho " he asked her to go other side as she walked away he unfold the paper and read ,
"Neil you read romantic novels " she taken out one and asked , when he didnot replied she turn around she quickly check her pajama
"ghalat time per entry mari Neil tum na" he murmur
"Neil " she drop the book and ran to him "Give me back , it is bad manner to read someone diary's" she tried to snatch from him , he turn around
" very good habit to tear out page from others diary " He said naughtily and folded the paper
"give me i will throw it " she said and tried to take it from his hand
"think you have thrown it " he put it in his pajama pocket
"Neil " she angrily look at him
"Mein sona ja raha hoon , yeh papers hai , you keep praising me " he whistle and walked out of room
" Neil tum ghalat samjhe ho " she tried to convince him while walking behind him , as she walked in he closed the door
"Kya ghalat samjhe hoon bolo " he pinned her to the wall and asked her , his gaze made her tense and his breath make her feel weak in her knees ," Mrs Avni Neil tum kahin yeh tou nahi kahan cha rahi ka tum ko muhje se pyar ho raha hain " he said and tuck back her hairs
"kuch bhi , zaara se taraf kya kardi tum tou hawaon mein udna laga " she pushed him and tried to walk ahead he grabbed her curl his right arm around her waist she bump back in him ,he look at her in the mirror
" Blush hona band karo " he whispered in her ears let his breath kissed her nape" aur yeh jo tumhara dil hai na " he placed his left hand finger on her bullet wound as it was visible from her neckline, he and gently caress it ,she closed her eyes, her breath became uneven he slowly moved towards her heart " your breath ,your heart is telling me different story wifey " he whispered and kissed her earlobe ,she opened her eyes
" do what ever you want to but stay in the room " he gave her back her page and walked to sofa , he knew he has giving her more thoughts and feeling to pen down
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Naddiya its good to see you back 🤗
Loved OS...plz write more om Avneil
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello nadiya Di..
We met in the kyy forum
I m so happy to see u here
It was beautiful
Just loved it
Amazingly penned
Plz do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good one Naadiya.
Pls write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Naddiya it's amazing dude!!
Please i want u to write more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posting this here because we do have category which is Best FF/OS maker. You can post your entry. It doesnt have to be very long. Just something written from heart and maybe you can be the lucky one to win and ask question or convey message to AdiZa or any other person from Naamkarann Team.

I know the deadline is 20th but you can send me a message on IF and we can sort it out.

Thank you so much.

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