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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb concept
O'bros following O'bahus
But it was a sight to watch
Anika gauri n Saumya
They are so unique n beautiful in their own ways

O'bros were in for surprise
Wonder what more awaits them


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys..
After a rikaralicious epi today.. here you go for Chapter 2:

<Chapter2>

The women were settled comfortably locked themselves up in Shivaay's room after meeting the pandit ji. The brothers saw them sneaking into Shivaay's room and locking themselves up. They wanted to know what are their wives upto,afterall??

R: "Bhaiyya, bahut secretive baatein chal rahi hain. Wo bhi humaare bina" Rudra was going bonkers about the secret mission and he badly wanted to know what is sumo upto.

S: "Haan rudra, yeh log itna bhi kya ghus phus kar rahe hai.. zaroor kuch baat hai.. aur wo log orphanage pe kya kar rahe the.. humse bol dete to humbhi kuch madat karthe naa.. itna bhi kya secret hai?" Shivaay was wondering why is Anika keeping this as a secret. May be she fears his interference too much?

O: "May be they decided to do it by themselves. Humhaari madat nahi chahiye.. shayad" Omkaara tried to make sense even then he felt why is Gauri hiding a good thing from him. Doesn't she feel comfortable telling anything to him, at all? He was confused.

R: Bhaiyya mere pass ek idea hain.. main apni phone se call karta hoon aur wahan rak deta hoon.. humhe pata chal jayega wo log kya batein kar rahe hain..

Omkara opposed to it immediately. "BAchon jaise behave mat kar, Rudra. Aise cheap kaam hum nahi karenge. Unko bhi privacy chahiye. Hum kya spy kar rahe hain?"

Shivaay still thought Rudra's idea was good. He doesn't like his biwi keeping secrets anymore. He wanted to find out.

"Om, hum spy todi na kar rahe hai. We are their husbands. Hum haq hai sach jaane ka. Hum bas curiosity ki wajah se jaana chahthe hain.. Rudra sahi keh raha hai.. Baad mein main anika ko batata hoon, aur tum log bhi Gauri aur saumya ko batadena.. ki humne aise kiye hai"

Omkara wasn't convinced but decided on it somehow. Rudra entered shivaay's room in pretext of taking some file and placed his phone on bed without anyone noticing it. He joined ShivOm in Omkaara's room. All three brothers were sitting around in bed with phone placed in the center in speaker mode. They were listening to giggling voices of their ladies.

A: "Saumya batao to humhe kitna paisa kharcha karni hai?"

Saumya calculated something on the basis of data collected from the orphanage and "10 lakhs didi"

A: "10 lakhs.. teek hai. Humhaari shares waali account tu sambhalti hain naa.. wahan se Gauri ki account pe transfer karo. Humhe tax walon ko bhi answer deni hai.."

S: "Teek hai didi.."

G: "Anika Di, wahan ladkiyon ki jo incharge rehthi hain naa. Use badalna chahiye.. doosri insaan ko kaam pe rakhna chahiye.. Wo teek nahi hai.. mujhe lagtha hai."

A: "Acha.. hum Khanna ji se baat karenge. Wo humhe iss mamle mein madat kar sakthe hain"

The three ladies were planning about the upliftment measures and related exprenses for the "Savithri devi home". It was almost 2 months since they started this work. They would do ground work on a particular home or an orphanage needing upliftment and serious funding. They checked everything about it and helped them financially & on administrative side. They also maintained a contract of 1 year for the stability until they got more funds for it. They decided to do it secretively since they didn't wanted to be identified as Oberoi Bahu's. They might get more attention and funds required, had they identified themselves as OBahus but they wanted to do something out of their own worth and not take their husband's identity. No one from these centers knew that they are from rich family and they identified themselves as social workers from NGO. Daadi had assigned certain shares to them from family account, which rendered them dividend. They wanted to use that money for some good cause. Saumya managed the shares and account whereas Gauri concentrated on facilities required. Anika co-ordinated with people to get all these done and contract signed.

The brothers were looking at each other in big surprise.

"Shares??" exclaimed Shivaay

"Dividend money handle karti hai Sumo?" Rudra was making sense of what was going on.

"Gauri ki active financial account hai? A demat one?" Omkaara opened his eyes wide.

They didn't expect their wives to go into such a route to raise funds for their good cause. They were so impressed by the secret work they were into and they exchanged proud glances to each other.

S: "Waise. These girls are impressive.. isn't it. They are using the dividend money for a good cause without even taking our help. They are very brilliant"

O: "More important, they don't want to use our identity. Am sure they have not identified themselves as Oberoi's"

R: "Bhaiyaa mujhe bahut proud feel ho rahi hai.. aise sochne waale bhi humhaari ghar mein hai"

"True Brothers nodded in chorus

The voices continued..

A: "Arrey Saumya, jab Rudra tumhe call kar raha tha.. cut kyun kar rahi thi?"

Soumya: "Uski bare mein na baat mat karo didi.. pata nahi kya sochtha hai khud ko"

Rudra gave a terrified glance at his brothers whereas they exchanged a mischievous smile.

Soumya continued "Aaj kal kya hua tha patha hai.. My friend Rick was calling me in the morning. Australia mein we were very good friends. Video call kar raha tha. Main usse 20-25 mins baat kar rahi thi. Yeh rudra ko kya hogaya patha nahi.. chilla raha tha mujpe.. Soumya pe chillane ki himmat kaisi hui uski" Soumya was fuming.

Anika and Gauri looked at one another and exchanged a smile.

Anika: Soumya Kahin Rudra ko jalan to nahi hua?

Soumya's eyes widened. She didn't think about it at all. While the ladies were busy analyzing Rudra's jalan, here Rudra was giving a sheepish glance and his brothers patted on his shoulder.

O: Beta dumbbell oberoi, kya chal raha hai?

Rudra tried to brush aside the talk, defensively. O, aap chup raho.. aage suno..

Gauri: Di, kamse kam rudy bhaiyya jalan to dikha rahe hai.. Uski bhaiyya jaise to nahi hai..

Gauri sulked. Omkaara's face changed listening to this while his brothers were laughing at him.

Anika: Kyun Om ko kya hua.. tumse bahut achi tharah baat kar raha tha naa..? Aur om ne hi aap dono ki marriage legalize kiya aur accept bhi kiya.. ab kaounsi problem hai aap log ke beech? abhi bhi aap log jhagadrahe ho?

Gauri: Meri Jatadhaari pati naa.. mujhe paagal karke hi chodenge. Pata nahi kab kya mod pe rehthe. Jab se sab sach pata chala, jhagad nahi rahe humse, par uski dil mein kya chaltha hai, mujhe abhi bhi pata nahi. bas itni si door hoon main paagal ho jaane mein. Main naa soch rahi hoon 10 15 din ghayab hojaoongi, tab pata chalega meri hone ya naa hone se usko kuch lagtha hai ki nahi.. Gauri was in clear dilemma as Omkaara was not talking about his heart-felt feelings to her.

Omkaara was watching the phone in sheer confused look. He thought they were developing the relationship slowly. She thinks he is not giving enough attention to her? Anika's voice interrupted.

Anika: Chup kar Om ki deewani.. Sab pata hai mujhe.. tum usse ek din bin bhi nahi chodke jaa sakthi.. aise faltu baatein mat kiya kar. Uss din jab om 2 din ke liye bahar gaya tha.. pata hai mujhe tum kya kar rahi thi.. Soumya tumhe pata hai gauri kya kar rahi thi?

Gauri screamed in shock and tried to shut anika's mouth to save her from embarrassment.

All of them were looking at Omkaara in anticipation while he was looking so keenly on the phone waiting for his Bhabhi to reveal the secret. He so wanted to hear what she did, when she missed him.

Gauri: Di.. nahi.. mat boliye.. please di.. Gauri turned pink in embarassement.

Anika didn't stop and pulled soumya and whispered in her ears so that Gauri couldn't hear it and get embarrassed one more time.

Soumya: haan.. sach.. Gauri di.. aapne sach mein aise kiya kya? O bhaiyya ko itna miss kiya aapne? Phir jaake usse bol dijiye naa.? Soumya was laughing in excitement

Omkaara's face fell in disappointment being not able to hear what he was so curious to know, he didn't even realize his brothers laughing at him for bending his head down and attaching his ears to the phone.

Rudra: O, careful, phone ki andar gus na jao.. itni curiosity hai, to bhabhi se seedha baat kyun nahi karte apne feelings ki bare mein.. usse itna kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho.. bechari ko pagal kar diya aapne.. Rudra was having a blast.

It was omkaara's turn to put up a defensive face.

Gauri continued "Soumya tum naa. Anika di ki baat pe has rahe ho.. uss din jab hum aa rahe the, anika di ne kya kiya pata hai.."

Shivaay now stuck his ears to the phone.

Anika: Gauri chup ho jao warna main uss I love you ki secret khol doongi..

Gauri: Aap jo bhi kholna khol lijiye.. soumya pata hai.. anika di ne kya kiya?

Anika was too embarrassed now.. She tried to forcefully shut her mouth.. Gauri was struggling to tell it out. Finally managed to pull soumya close and told something in her ears..

Soumya: Oh my god.. Anika di.. aap.. aap itne bold hogaye ho kya? Ek zamana tha.. jab aapki blush ki bare mein nahi pata tha.. ab to sab ulta hogaye.. lagta hain

Gauri was laughing heavily after having opened secret of Anika.. "Soumya.. yeh pooch uski gale mein jo zakkam hai.. wo kaise hua.. Three ladies were having a laughter riot so were the men.

Here Shivaay was laughing sheepishly while Om and Rudra were laughing heavily..

Om: Shivaay, nice.. Baat bahut fast pace mein chal rahi hai..looks like..

Rudra: Bhaiyya, aap vampire movie se inspiration le rahe ho?

Shivaay: Chup ho jao, tum dono.. As if tum dono, kuch nahi karte ho.

Om and Rudra looked at each other. Shivaay looked at them thoughtfully.

After laughter, the voices continued. Anika tried to desperately change the topic.

Anika: Soumya tumhaari baat hui rudra se?

Soumya: Nahi di.. bahut batein karni hai.. Par nahi kar paa rahi hoon

Gauri: Soumya kitne din tak aise hi chup rahogi tum. Jo bhi dil mein hain keh de.

Anika: Gauri, shayad tumhe bhi wahi karna chahiye.

Gauri was looking thoughtful. Nahi di, aap ko pata hai meri situation alag hai. Chahkar bhi nahi keh sakthi, sab galat dikhega. Anika looked thoughtful too, and turned towards Saumya

Saumya, tu bahut samajdhaar hai. Rudra abhi bhi bachon jaisa harkat karta hai. Tum usse samjha sakthe ho. Tum usse handle kar sakthe ho. Try to karke dekh lo. Mujhe pata hai baat bahut complicated hai, par tum kar sakthe ho.

All three women were discussing about each other's state in their lives, which their husband's had no clue about till now. They were thinking all was well in each other's lands. It seemed like but not actually.

<to be cont>

Edited by yayini - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Awesome update 👏
Loved it
Wow they working for the NGO without revealing their real identity👏
And obros listen their wives conversation on phone very bad for obros😆
I loved gauri's dialogue:-hum bas itni si dur hain pagal hone mein hahah😆😆
Poor om ,very curious to know gauri kya kar rhi thi😛
Then rudy's dialogue O, careful, phone ki andar gus na jao.. itni curiosity hai, to bhabhi se seedha baat kyun nahi karte apne feelings ki bare mein.. usse itna kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho.. bechari ko pagal kar diya aapne.. hahah love this dialogue👍🏼
Update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Karthi
One request...convert this into a SS or FF...pleajjj
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_86

Awesome Karthi

One request...convert this into a SS or FF...pleajjj


Thank you priya..!! I would love to.. I am little busy these days.. Hence I would continue one or 2 parts more..!! Only Fun,romance and love..

I have updated the conclusion of lost and found..!! kept my promise!! Jaldi jaldi pado.. aur feedback deo do mujhe..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
O'bros couldn't stop themselves
Rudra's plan.worked

So this is what they are doing
Running an NGO together
Without taking the benifit of Oberoi name
O'bros are so proud of them

Loved how all 3 sisters were discussing eachothers life
Poor o bros
O'sis ke baatein sunke bhi nahi sun paye
O toh phone mei hi ghusa jayenge
Baat bahut fast pace pe hai

Omkara n shivaay so much wanted to know the secret
But couldn't hear
It was fun really

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Awesome update 👏

Loved it
Wow they working for the NGO without revealing their real identity👏
And obros listen their wives conversation on phone very bad for obros😆
I loved gauri's dialogue:-hum bas itni si dur hain pagal hone mein hahah😆😆
Poor om ,very curious to know gauri kya kar rhi thi😛
Then rudy's dialogue O, careful, phone ki andar gus na jao.. itni curiosity hai, to bhabhi se seedha baat kyun nahi karte apne feelings ki bare mein.. usse itna kyun pareshaan kar rahe ho.. bechari ko pagal kar diya aapne.. hahah love this dialogue👍🏼
Update soon dear


Hi Dear..

Thank you..for you feedback..!!

Yes obros keeping nazar on wifey's tabhi to secret pata chaltha hain.

Omie driving Ri crazy.. He is actually. He never expresses his mind very openly and he was giving space and all thinking that he is keeping her comfortable.. Tada.. Our gauri doesn't want space.. she is not interested in NASA 😆 O wants to know wifey's secret desperately.. Will she tell or omie has to make her tell that? 😉 Let's see..😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome update

O'bros couldn't stop themselves
Rudra's plan.worked

So this is what they are doing
Running an NGO together
Without taking the benifit of Oberoi name
O'bros are so proud of them

Loved how all 3 sisters were discussing eachothers life
Poor o bros
O'sis ke baatein sunke bhi nahi sun paye
O toh phone mei hi ghusa jayenge
Baat bahut fast pace pe hai

Omkara n shivaay so much wanted to know the secret
But couldn't hear
It was fun really

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


Hi Vrinda,

Oberoi ladies waste their time in useless things.. so i wanted to change the gen next obahus to be socially responsible. I know its not in oberoi parampara.. but high time these people change their mindsets. Omie want's to know wifey's secret whereas Shivaay is in much higher level. He is interested in twilight saga 😆 He has to.. high time.. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
awesome update yar...
its was so cute...
I really wanted to see these types of moments in the show also...
awww so the obahu's are so smart...even their husbands are proud to of them...
The obros hearing the conversation was the most hilarious part...it was so cute as well as fun...
plz continue this Yar...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
LOVED THE UPDATE PLEASE TURN IT INTO A FF 👏

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