Shivika OS : It gets better. - Page 2

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 8 years ago

Well written. Loved how you depicted his despair.

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thranduil

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ithihaas
Beautifully heart wrenching 😭
The way you have portrayed Shivaay's state of mind is subtle yet I could feel the tugging of my heart.

All I can say is Thank you for the OS and keep writing :-)

Aww that's so sweet! Thanks!!! I'll be sure to keep it up.

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

It was heart wrenching... Fulll of pain nd grief

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ChaiPiyoge

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Posted: 8 years ago

Very emotional😭 Love the way you penned down his pain 👏
Beautiful work ❤️ love the title of the OS also 😳

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panjami

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Posted: 8 years ago

u just broke my heart😭😭😭

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thranduil

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArhiIPKKND
Oh my...so sad...poor shivaay...

I know :( i wanted to give you guys some happy ending type thing-y, but angst is my favorite genre so it ended up being sad.

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thranduil

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it
you well portrayed Shivaay's feelings
i am feeling bad for him

Me too buddy me too.

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

This was weirdly beautiful

Shivaays pain shown well

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Poor shivay...this is such a heart wrenching OS 😭...it'll surely get better Shivay.

~Maha~

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