Rikara ff: When she coloured my canvas!!! Pg 29 ( 21 Aug) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

I can understand omkara's feeling everyone will be offended but they forgot he was taking drugs and drug had started mixing it was halfway when gauri interrupted and in this he had only one emotion high anger for stopping him and drug was showing effect and he did the mistake... Glad Shivaay was there to hold him and the scene where omkara caring about gauri was awwh...

Rudy interrupted them usse yhi umeed Kar Skte Hai...


And breakfast scene was cute... With cherry and all that...


P.S. - don't say the gauri came in time he had already injected... And he snot a super woman with power



Yes he is already worried with all sort of problems and really wanted a relief and thus was interrupted by gouri, which was unbearable for him.
But he is amazed that in spite of hating her he is having a caring feeling for her.

Let's see what will happen
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Great update Shraddha!

A lot of drama happening... Drugs are back on the menu I see. And so is fake romance.

Fakemance turning real is one of my fav tropes... I'm glad Omki is at least confused atm. That means he's not outright just plain hating on her. But he is such a hard and complicated person to be around.

Eagerly waiting for more!


Yep, it's soon gonna be real ...
Just wait...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
So sad for Gauri. Omkie should have not slapped her. So Drug Drama is back. I am sure Gauri will help Om to overcome it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
wow that a full packet of emotions somthing we miss in the show
great job
cv should read it to have ideas 😆


cant wait for the next 😉 update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Hi all,
Up with next update 😊

Check the index in 1 st page 4 other chappies 😉

Dunno if it's boring, please do comment and support 😉

Colour 7

" No buama, uski koi zaroorat nahi hai." a shocked Om told.
He was staring gouri. He actually wanted a massage from her, but still his mind was not ready to give a chance to her.Nowadays his mind is always flipflopping with gouri.Sometimes he wanted her attention,but couldn't really accept her.

When lost in thoughts, he heard gouri's voice.
"woh, darsal buamaji, I have a severe headache now. I can't do this; I want to take some rest."
Om was surprised at this. Usually she doesn't ignore to do any of his work; but now she has. May be she might be really tired, he thought. Suddenly he remembered the previous night's incident. He was guilty.
Buama was sad, " fine puttar,abhi abhi you should just have a sleep. Omkie go with her. If u want take some medicine from Shivay,theeke?"
Gauri was smiling. She actually had headache. She was depressed with yesterday's incident which came in the form of headache.

She didn't wait for Om to go to their room.Whereas he was surprised with her ignoring behavior. The after effects of a slap, he thought. After all she is dabbang gouri, she wouldn't forgive easily; he knows.
"But...who wants her forgiveness, after all I hate her then what?" he thought. But still he was remorseful.
A debate was going on in his mind, when he saw that she had already gone to the room.

As he entered he saw that she was already laying on the bed. He took some balm and a pill from his wardrobe and sat near her.
O: have this gouri.
G: I don't want ( attitude)
O: don't be ziddy, just take this and rest.
G : y do u care? I'm a bad girl, then y should u worry?
O: I'm a human, so I do show humanity to everyone in the world.( not ready to give up)
Suddenly gouri thought something.
G: I don't have headache!!!
O: (shocked) what?? y did u lie to bua maa?
G: I didn't want to do a massage for u. I just wanted to escape...
Om was literally shocked. This really hurt him, he didn't know why. All these days she was caring him like hell, even he was fed up. But now when he knew that she simply ignored him made him sad. She have lied just to ignore this , am I that bad?? All their previous moments of friendship was flashing in his mind.

Gouri was Watching him. She understood that this had affected him. She wanted him to realise that she affects him, her ignorance affects him.She was deeply hurt by his slap the previous day, so she decided that she wouldn't be a crying doll anymore to all his encounters. She was also sad that she had to ignore him to make him realise his feelings. Actually, all this were some ideas of anika bhaujai.It was difficult, but still she would do this.

Om went out without speaking. Later, gouri had medicine and took a nap.

It was 3 pm.The servants were given a leave that day and only jhanvi and gouri were there in home. The rest were out of home.Om usually spends Sundays in gallery finishing all works.

Gouri was just waking up, she could hear footsteps. She preferred to rest some more time. As she was beginning to doze off, she heard a big thud; she was shocked.

She managed to get out of the bed and run. As she ran, she got a faint vision of jhanvi laying down on the floor with blood. As he approached her, she cried as many small glass pieces had pierced into Gouri's leg; she hadn't noticed it.Then she saw that a glass vase was broken and jhanvi's head had hit on the wall; she was unconscious too.

Gouri couldn't bear the pain in her leg ,it was bleeding. But she managed to take jhanvi to her room somehow. She had to control her shock and pain the same time...

Om had got a call from shivay that his mother had a fall. He couldn't even concentrate on driving as he was tensed. He didn't know what had happened to her. He was crying, his vision was blurred.

As he reached home , he first saw gouri. She was taking him to jhanvi when she saw Tej.She left Om and went to Tej; even he was shocked. His eyes were red and teary. Gouri took Tej to jhanvi which was watched by an angry Om.
Then she came back.Om lashed at her
O: who asked u to take Mr.oberoi to my mom?
G: calm down, let sasurji see her first.
O: come on gouri, u r a stupid. My mom is suffering because of him.
G: this is ur problem. U make ur own decisions about others , u r not trying to see this feelings. Dint u see how much sasurji was crying. After all she is his wife. After sultanaji had gone it is true that he was angry on maaji. But now we should create situations for them to come closer, to feel each other's hidden love.We should give him a chance. Only when given a chance true love can be realised.

Her eyes were teary when she told this. Om understood this, he knew what she was saying. As he looked into the room, he saw that Papa and mom were crying. Mr.oberoi was holding mom's hand and caressing her forehead; he had never seen this in his life. He smiled seeing this.

Later when he went to see mom with gouri,he nearly broke down seeing his mom.
O: what happened mom.
J : ( angry)nothing , my BP increased and I collapsed.
O : I know Mr.oberoi must have told u about divorce.
J : u r the reason for this!!!
O: ( shocked) but mom!!
J: u have started to take drugs isn't it?
And u slapped my gouri too when she tried to stop you.
His eyes were filled. He just wanted to disappear at that moment.
J : I don't have to say anything. I don't know for whom u r doing all this. U r destroying gouri's life too.Did u see her feet was hurt while saving me due to glass pieces; yet she took care of me when doctor came without even applying medicine.
He noticed her bandaged feet. He was sad...
O : mom, I'm sorry... please
J: ( crying) it's ok beta, I now u love me and would never do anything to make me cry. U shouldn't destroy yourself Om. U have a good life ahead. U need to care gouri also.U have responsibility of gouri too.Everything will be fine. Don't be desp.
Saying this, she kissed rikara.
A remorseful Om came out of the room. He was seeing gouri. They were having an eyelock.

An ocean was waving in his mind. He couldn't understand.He thought gouri as characterless but each and every action of her was glorifying her character everyday. He thought everything to be a drama but the care she gave to him and his mom was...
He was in a dilemma; he couldn't even face gouri.He didn't know whether to care and console her or not.

He saw that gouri was trying hard to climb the steps. Without thinking he went and took her in his arms and started to climb up. Gouri was wondering, y is he helping her; maybe as a favour for caring his mom.She didn't expect anything more.

He kept her in bed, took the medicine and sat on his knee. As he took the bandage out, he could see a pathetically bleeding feet of gouri, he wondered how she could bear the pain.
G: I don't need any help.
O : just keep quiet, don't be a rebel.
G: I know u r returning the favor for caring ur mom. I don't need sympathy.
Om was shocked, she is giving different meaning to his actions. He was doing this as he really cared for her; not as a favour. But he dint want to open it up.His eyes were teary, so now she was seeing him as an evil.
"I don't have any problem if she think anything about me" he thought.

But his heart ... his heart was saying him that, it do affect him; but he ignored it.

As he did all medications and bandage it, without even thinking he kissed her foot.Gouri was shocked by this.Even Om.
G: y r u caring this characterless girl??
O: I would have did this for anyone!!

G: would u have kissed anyone's foot also??


Precap : - can some revelations unite rikara???

Not done proof reading,please ignore mistakes 😆


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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
awesome Loved it...
jhanvi is right...why he is destroying his life
He is surely affected by her
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
I totally loved this. It was amazing. Gauri showing him a little attitude is something I've been waiting for so long, glad to read it here. Love the way he cares for her. The end dialogues were the best. Can't wait to read what he would say next and obviously the precap is making me even more anxious for the next part so post soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Hey rikarians & Shrenalians,I'm back with back 2 back double chappies
Sorry for late update.
Do scroll down for next chap
Try to guess the colour of this chappy.
Dunno if it is boring.
Please do tell if u do not like this plot.

Check the 1st page for index

Recap:- Jhanvi learnt that om is using drugs and he slapped gouri who stopped him. Her body raised and she collapsed.Gouri cares her and is hurt in the process.Om tends to gouri.

G: y r u caring this characterless girl??
O: I would have did this for anyone!!

G: would u have kissed anyone's foot also??

Om was flabbergasted. He was embarrassed. He didn't think that she would question him like this. He was so hurt in seeing her bleeding feet; he did it to reduce her pain. He didn't know y he cared for her like this. He stood up and moved back silently.

Gouri was also confused with this behavior. She couldn't read his mind. At times he scolvmded her like hell but when hurt he was always by her side. She wanted to speak to him about maaji, but worried if he would shout at her.
G: omkaraji, I know u will never be ready to hear whatever I say.Now, all ur problems r solved. Sultanaji is jailed, ur mom doesn't have to suffer again. As for sasurji, I think he has now understood his mistake; he is repenting.V need to give him a chance for a new life.V need to bring maaji and him closer.

Om was just looking at her surprisingly. As usual, he didn't feel that this was a new drama; he could feel that she is saying from heart. But still in some corner of mind, he doubted her.
But he was happy that she had cared for his mom. His hands were slowly raising to catch her by her shoulders while she was looking down.
G: now, I'm the only problem remaining in ur life.Don't worry after maaji is fine I will go back from here.

Om was shocked, his hands moved back.Oh, so she is going. Y should I feel sad.

G: I have only one request,please don't make maaji cry.It is so sad to see the destruction of lived ones. Maaji loves u a lot, she have many dreams about you.So live for maaji.

Om's heart was being pierced. He couldn't bear his mom's pain. He resolved in his mind not to make mom cry again.
He heard gouri's phone ringing.S he attended it, but with a shocked reaction. " Ka?? MERI maa??..."

1 week had passed...
A car is seen moving on the Mumbai road, whose destination is oberoi Mansion.The 2 ladies in side r anika & gouri. Both were very happy and lost in their thoughts. Gouri's pov

How my life had changed in 1 week.This is all play of fate. My aayi was brought here for better treatment as her illness was high. She met anika baujai. She was having a faint memory of meeting my aayi b4. This was cleared when my aayi showed her album to baujai from which she found out that baujai is my aayi's friend's daughter,i.e. my didi.
The rest all was like a fairly tale. V came to know that v r the part of royal family of Jodhpur.Due to some enemies planning to snatch away property from our Papa and maa, our family of 4 were destroyed. Our parents died but we were separated. Me with aayi and didi in orphanage. Hey Sankarji, this is all ur decision. U have given me my family back. Our palace in Jodhpur is ver big, we got to see every relatives, dadi, dadu and all.I feel very lucky not to b a royal family member but to get such a huge family.

As she was lost in her thoughts, the car reached mansion. All the family members were waiting for them to celebrate this happiness.

As the sisters came out from the car, dadi,pinky, jhanvi were ready to welcome their bahus.
P: aayiye bahuranis. Ye tho such much Ranis hain na..
All laughed. They were welcomed by Arathi.

Gouri's eyes were searching for Om and she saw an irritated Om. She wondered what happened to him to be restless.

The sisters entered the mansion & had a good time with the family. Specially aniri. They were ,of course emotional but the mood was made lighter by Rudy.

Gouri entered their room She was so happy and excited that day. She saw that Om was working on an idol. An excited gouri ran and came near Om.
G: Omkaraji, tumhe pata, how big our palace is?
O: u haven't changed gouri, u r still seeing everything thru greedy eyes!!!!
She didn't expect such an answer
Her eyes were filled immediately.
G: what r u saying?
O: tumhe kya lagtha hai? that I will accept u since ur bhabhis sister. Don't even dare to think like that.
G: Maine aise kab kaha?
O: kuch galat mat fehmiye please
Gouri was Freezed.
O: anyway u have got a very rich family now. U don't need to stay with me to get all the money and property, isn't it?
Gouri couldn't bear this insult any more. She was doing this for almost few time and now this has become unbearable.
G: what do u think? U r never ready to hear my side. U r making decisions on ur own. Don't think u r perfect. Of course I know all ur old stories. U were a drug addict and even now u r doing the same thing. U doesn't know how to behave properly. U think u r Always right. But in fact u don't know anything , u don't know to judge people or hear them.i.e.y u r suffering in ur life.
O : mind ur words gouri. I know u will say and act anything to win,anything to get money. U only know to break families not to join them. Otherwise u wouldn't have agreed to marry kali. Besharam ladki hai ti. Cheap and bad charactered. suddenly they heard a roar.

" ENOUGH OM!!!!!JUST STOP THIS!!!!!"

Whose voice is that??

Precap:- what?? is gouri an unmarried girl??

Scroll down for next😉


Edited by Shraddhadikshit - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys, here is the next one😉

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Recap:- Anika and gouri r part of royal family of Jodhpur. But Om is not ready to accept gouri due to her past. Both confronts each other.


" ENOUGH OM, JUST STOP THIS!!"
Rikara trembled hearing that voice.
"Just stop saying all these about my chutki" said anika. She came to the room with gouri's aayi.
O : woh...bhabhi... she might be ur sister. But I can't believe how u have such a cheap girl as ur sis...

He couldn't complete the sentence as anika had slapped him. All were shocked.
A: not a word against MERI chutki. Om,u don't deserve her. I have been fed up seeing all this for months. U r not trying to understand her U have been messing up with her life too
Aao na chutki mere Saath, abhi

Anika took away a crying gouri to her room.She didn't even look back at gouri.

Om was totally disturbed. He was sad that bhabhi also misunderstood that girl. Suddenly he felt a touch in his shoulder.
" Beta!!!" he turned back and saw gouri's aayi.
"I need to talk to you..."

It was night.Gouri was gloomy the whole day.Only anika,aayi and shivay knew what had happened b/w rikara.
As usual , she took ice water for Om. But she wasn't ready to go to him now. She was sad that she made him hurt by her words; she didn't want to but his insulting was crossing the limit.

She asked servant to give water to om and went to sleep with aayi in another room.

Whereas , om was totally broken that day. Aayi had told him all the truth; about kali's torture and gouri's sacrifice to save her mom. He had cried a lot. ; he didn't know how to face her. She had ignored him today. He was confused on how to approach her.He was also sad that bhabhi too hated him now. He thought to see gouri but then he thought not to.

All their memories from 3 months back were coming to his mind.
When gouri was his student, his chulbul and then his wife.He was having feelings for her but then wasn't ready to accept it, because now he thought that he is not the right match for her as he had deeply hurt her.Somehow he killed that night time.

Gouri was totally blank. She loved him and has also felt that he is also affected by her. But she was very much broken by their last encounter such that she decided to ignore him now. She couldn't trust him anymore, her feelings were made a mockery. Her love and sincerity was questioned many times. She couldn't bear anyone pointing a finger in her character; Om was doing the same thing for all these months. She couldn't forgive him; this fact made her even more desp. She wanted Sankarji to help her.

2 days had passed, rikara were avoiding each other as they had created a shell of ego by themselves. They even avoided each other's glances; but both of them really yearned for each other's presence.

3rd day, was a special day for oberois.The Jodhpur family had come there to invite all of them to the palace for 1 week stay. They wanted to welcome their betis sasural.

And all of them were off to Jodhpur. They had a pleasurable trip. Anika noticed rikara's ignorance; she knew what was cooking up. She felt bad for her behavior towards om all these days. She had made up her mind to solve all problems.

They reached the palace and had a grand and royal welcome by from the family.

Aniri were asked to introduce their sasural.When om's turn came anika said,
" dadaji, this is gouri's..."
" my jiju's cousin brother!!!"

Oberois were shocked, aniri's choti ma and chachu knew the truth ; they were also shocked.

Om was literally stunned, his eyes were teary; he never expected this.

There was total silence, but later they continued to chat. Finally all dispersed into their allotted rooms.

Rikara were in separate rooms.
Anika had first gone to meet om.She could see a totally broken om.
A: Om!!!!
O: ( hiding tears) bhabhi!!!
A: I'm sorry om, I had...
O: no bhabhi, I have to say sorry. I had hurt ur chutki.
A: y do u say ur chutki. She is ur patni!!
O: no bhabhi, I'm no more her pati. I have not done any duties of a pati. More than that I was always accusing that poor girl. I don't deserve to be her pati.She is such a good girl. She beared a lot for me, even I hurt her she cared and helped me.Im such a bad person.

Anika consoled him.
" u had an mu about her, it is cleared now. u should patch up now om she will definitely forgive u. I know both of u love each other a lot.But situations separated u. U should be desp.U r a very nice pati. U have to prove that now.
O: I don't know bhabhi. I feel even my sight would hurt her. So I'm not going to her from now on. I won't destroy her life. She would b happy if I'm not there with her. Bhabhi just leave me alone now...

A heavy hearted anika decided to call a meeting of oberois in palace garden.

All were worried with rikara problem.
D: I don't know y god is testing my children.
J: don't worry mummyji, they cannot sit for long time without each other.
By: yep u r right jhanvi. They will surely open up.
Ru: par bua maa,for that we should create some situations which will clear the problems.
Pi: lekin Rudy, they r not even willing to see each other's. An hum kya karthe?
Sh: I can make gouri understand. She will not ignore her bade bhaiyya.
A: lekin shivay, baat to sahi hain. But if we simply ask them to talk, they will only obey our orders, they wouldn't open up. It should come from their heart. They should feel the pain of losing each other.( logic sign)
R: got a khidkitod idea bhabhi.
He discussed the plan with others and they all liked his idea.
A: arrey wah rudra... change hai... u r an expert yaar.
Ru: bhabhi, any doubt regarded with love just come to Rudy.

A: so all of u get ready, mission om-gouri is going to start from tomorrow. Just wait & watch!!!!!

Precap : - Will oberoi familie's plan to unite rikara be successful??



I'm updating this in tellyupdates too😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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just loved the ff...i have a reqst...pls u update daily 1 chappy...

i would looovvveee to see gauri ignore omkara...as show me aisa kch honewala to h nahi...
Edited by Senapatichandri - 8 years ago

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