RishBala SS : Crazy About You (Completed - 12/07 - P:41)

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Maithili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: dharsii
Nice update..
Feel bad for madhu,she has no way to avoid him..
Honeymoon trip!!.
Is he planning for something?
Waiting...
Thanks for pm..

Thanks dear!
Haha! That might be the surprise or shock!
Going to update in few minutes!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: harini_
Awesome update,
loved it,
loved Madhu's inner voices one is saying she is not doing anything wrong,another one is saying she is doing wrong poor Madhu she is getting confused and she has no other choice other than to agree whatever he says,
he loves her so much then why he is behaving like this with her and making her hate him,
they went to Paris is it really a business trip or he planned sth there,
thanks for the update

Thanks buddy!
I'm glad you loved this part and hope it continues!
Answer for your question in the next part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Superb update
What truth rk is talking about? are dipali n rk not husband n wife n acting for some reason?
Madhu is fighting with her emotions one side she is feeling guilty n other side she is feeling bliss to b loved by love of her life

Thanks a lot yaar!
It will take few more parts before you get the answers for your questions dear!
See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
great update..
Rk is giving her sweet tortures & madhu's body is accepting it..
though her mind is not..
lolz.. honeymoon trip..

great.. go on rk..
tnx fr pm !!

Thank you buddy!
Hope you will like the trip!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: aishu007
Superb update maithu...
What.. OK is taking her for honeymoon trip..??
That too Paris..
Really confused by his behavior & he said she will come to know about the truth soon.. What's it..??
Waiting..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm..

Thank you!
Sorry for clearing all doubts!
It will take time!
See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan
Nice update dear.Rk wants to make madhu as his own.Poor madhu,she should obey his orders and i guess,he planned something in paris and waiting for their honeymoon trip...

Thank you!😊
The wait is over!
Hope you like that part too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Awesome update.
Madhu is trapped and she can't find a way to come out of RK's trap.
He is with her 24 x 7.
Business trip or honeymoon trip to Paris.
What is he planning? He loves her but his ways of expressing it is weird.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you dear!
A mix of business with personal things for trip!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Hey!

How are you all?
Hope you are liking how the story is moving.
I have an interesting info for you all. May be for few of you all.
We are going to visit Paris with our favourite Pair.
There are links of pictures of those few places from my Instagram in this part.
Click if you want to get a view.
Back to the story!
Link to previous part: Part 8
Happy reading.

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Part 9

*** He brought me to Paris.
Should I say thank you or yell at him?
Arghh! ***

"Let's move Baby Doll! We have to go to a place after."
"Where?" with attitude while climbing down the stairs.
"Surprise!" he whispered near her ear making her shiver. "The climate is just perfect a little sunny with breeze. Just a jacket will be enough. What say?" he asked her when they neared a car parked just next to the plane.

*** Is this real? Am I in Paris?
And that too with the person I dream of to be with.
But. Why Paris?
Why? ***

- Finally landed in the land of Love as it's called. -

When he turned to her side, he found her walk like a statue with an expression that he can't describe.
"Baby Doll! What happened?" shaking her a little by her shoulder.
"You happened!" still in daze.
He smirked and laughed which brought her out of her land.
"Why... why Paris? Is... it because I asked?" praying to god it shouldn't be.
"Hmmm Yes & No!" opening the car door for her.
Seeing her questioning look, he continued:
"No as we have to attend a fashion show here tomorrow. Yes, as you are here with me." taking his seat and the car started to move.

*** How am I supposed to react now?
Enjoy? Or Hide my likings? ***

- Even if there wasn't any client, I would have brought you here. -

He took her left hand in his and played with her fingers while she was looking out through window discovering the place from the airport Charles de Gaulle to Paris.
It took approximately 40 minutes to reach the most prestigious hotel near Le Palais de l'Elysee.
The door of the car was opened when it stopped in front of the entrance and both got down saying 'Hello' to the workers. Rishab went to Madhu's side and asked her to make the first step after holding her hand.

They made their way to the reception and checked-in to the room which was reserved for them.
Their bags were sent to their room few seconds after.

The room was huge with a kind of hall and a room with attached bathroom.
Madhu felt like being in a dreamland as whenever they go somewhere, they would be staying at their relatives' house or she will get a simple hotel room for her.

*** I feel like it's a palace with all the paintings and decors.
Is he planning something?
I should be aware! I should. ***

- The expression in her face says that she like the room.
Hope she feels comfortable too. -

"Doll! Go and freshen up! We have to go out." getting her back from her dreamland.
"Ahaan?"
"Freshen up Baby Doll!" settling on the couch in the hall.

She went inside the room with her luggage and took the necessary items before entering the bathroom.
She took almost 30 minutes to shower and change into a simple dress which reached ankle.
Once she was out, Rishab got in saying: "Looking sexy as ever!"
She muttered "Pervert!"

He came in a simple jeans and shirt and grabbed his jacket from the bed before getting out of the room to find Madhu examining the paintings present in the room.
He took his phone out and clicked few pics of her without her knowledge and went near her.
Putting his hands around her waist, he back hugged her, kissing her neck, sending shiver down her spine.

"You said we have to go out!" with closed eyes.
"If you look like this tempting. How can I resist?"
"Beast!"
"Yes Beauty!"
"I hate you!"
"I Lust You Baby Doll!"
"Agrrhhh"
"Come let's go!" he freed her and entwined their hands as he passed her jacket which was on the couch before exiting their room.

*** Always saying something and spoiling my already spoilt mood.
Is he doing it wantedly?
Agrrr! ***

- If I didn't plan this evening I would have loved to just cuddle with you.
No problem! The surprise I have for you is better than everything. -

Rishab already informed the driver about their schedule.
So once in the car, she started to examine the view of Paris being aware of his piercing eyes and him nearing her with his hand around her waist.

They were in their own world with Madhu enjoying the view and having a fight between her heart and mind while Rishab enjoying each second of his life for being with her.
They both came out to the real world as the car came to a halt near Seine.
Madhu lifted her head a little to find the Lady in the beautiful glory and she squealed in excitement which brought a smile in Rishab's face.
She got down without waiting and Rishab followed her action after telling the driver to be in the corner and he will call him.

*** Seeing it for the first time in real and I feel like I have the Eiffel Tower at night all to myself. ***

- Seeing her this excited tells me that my decision to bring her here was not a bad idea. -

Rishab took hold of her hand and went a little away from the place where they were dropped to have the full view.
Madhu took her phone out and started to snap photos of herself with different faces. He smiled for her childish behaviour and pulled away the phone from her hand and took his phone to take pic of both of them as by now he was holding her by her shoulder.

*** Should I say thank you? No! He is for sure up to something.
I can feel that from his smiles and smirks.
Have to wait! ***

- I'm so happy today. My Doll is with me in the city of Love and the best part is she is happy and not complaining. -

Once the photo session finished, they made their way to the lift.
Riding in the elevator to the top while Madhu is experiencing as flying through the Tower's metallic skeleton.
As the elevator moves, they start to see flashes of the city shrinking below them. When it comes to a stop, the view is maddeningly beautiful.

It was time for sunset. As the sky darkens, the city of Paris begins to grow brighter. It didn't take long for the buildings below to light up in wonderful, intricate patterns.

*** Never imagined this would arrive.
I'm standing on ET with the Man I wanted to be with?
But not fully happy.
Yeah! I'm happy that I here but not like this under blackmailing and him being Mr. Lust. ***

- It's not the first time I'm here but it's the first for us to be here.
It's just perfect. -

There they took few picks before admiring the magnificent view in front of them.
Rishab had his left hand around her, making her lean on him.
After few minutes of contemplation, he turned her to his side and locked his eyes with his Lady who is standing on the Lady everyone admires.

"Do you like it?"
"Hmmm"
"We will come tomorrow to see the morning view before going for the meeting."
She smiled with butterflies ruling her tummy.
"I thought it was an imaginary client."
He smiled and said "I would have loved if that was the case. We could have spent all our time together."
Her smile disappeared and something new replaced it.
"Can we?" he asked.

She brought her right hand around his neck, leaning over him and being aware that what she is doing is not right. The hesitation was visible as she stopped in mid-way, so Rishab taking charge of the situation, got to the target, her lips. They kissed and kissed bringing life to the scene.

Rishab took her left hand in his and they continued their action until Madhu pulled away as she felt something sliding in her ring finger.

*** What is he doing? ***

- Finally the time arrived. -

Seeing a beautiful simple ring with MRK marked behind when she turned her hand.
"What is this ring for? And this inscription on the ring?"
"It's to symbolize you are mine Mrs. Madhubala Rishab Kundra." with a satisfied smirking smile.
She didn't understand a word.
"We are married!" he added.
Her jaw dropped down, so he has to close it with his index finger, lifting her cheek.
"We are legally married since Monday."
"It's illegal to have 2 wives!"
He smirked.
"How?" she asked still in shock.
"The document you signed."
"You criminal."

"Excuse-me" a man around 40 came to them.
"Yes" Rishab.
"I took a picture of you both. You are looking adorable in it; Would you like to want it?"
"How can you take our photo without our" Rishab stopped in his track as he saw the beautiful picture of both of them kissing with a breath taking view in background "How much is this?" he asked.
"10 please!" the man.
"Yeah sure!" he gave the money to the man and he moved away from there.

*** How can he do this to me? And Sistah?
She will be heartbroken when she will come to know. ***

Madhu was having a disgusted look on her face.
"What is your problem Baby Doll?"
"You! Why did you do this to me and"
He put his index finger over her lips, cutting her words.
"We have to go now." saying this he took hold of her hand and brought her to the same place where they were dropped few hours ago.

Madhu wasn't giving a damn to him as she was extremely angry.
Understanding the situation, he let her be in her space for the rest of the night.
She wasn't hungry so she just got a sandwich and orange juice to their room while he ordered a full menu to celebrate the day.

She slept in the corner of bed, being shocked that he hadn't compiled her to do anything today. But he knows that in her sleep she will move to the middle of the bed where he is purposely sleeping now.

Morning they woke up in their normal position and Rishab just peeked her lips before entering the bathroom.

*** Was it different from what he does every morning?
Is it because
Wake up Girl!
He is using you and nothing else.
No love and No Trust!
He is cheating your sister and you are his partner in crime in it. ***

They both got ready and had breakfast before exiting the hotel room.
She is still annoyed over the fact that he is taking her for granted and playing with her sister.
He on the other side was more than calm and composed.

They directly went to see the The elegant beauty - Sacre Couer from where a different view of Paris can be seen. There they got to know that the view of this Basilique in night is extraordinary.

Then they got back to see the Lady with pride in the morning light to remember the moment they spent there the day before.
For Her it's was to remember the information she got yesterday about her being not single anymore.
And for Him, beautiful memories for their sweet time.

From there, they made their way to see the Largest intersection in the world where 12 streets running down their way. He made her walk up to the top the monument (i.e. +250 steps to climb) to see the model of Arc de Triompe which represented what they saw when they were out.
From the top floor of the monument, they could see all the important places all around the monument.

Once they finished dealing with this, they went to one last monument to see the Masterpiece of Gothic architecture which is situated near the Seine with splendid look, Notre Dame de Paris. When they got out of it, the climate was cloudy but it wasn't a big deal as they are going for the client meeting along with a fashion show after freshening up..

All this time, Madhu was in her own closed world as she was hurt, hurt by the man she loved. Whenever he held her hand, she snatched it away from him.

Madhu went first to get ride of the tiredness. She was inside when she got a call on Whatsapp. Seeing it was Deepali, she picked it.
"Hey Honey! How are you?"
"Fine Sistah and you?"
"Why are you dull Honey?"
"Nothing" making herself believe she is happy.
"Ok! So tell me! How is the trip going on?"

*** It's one hell of a trip when I'm in a place I love with the only man in my life but he is yours.
How is it now, you say? ***

"Nice!" opening the door cleaning her face with towel, using one hand and other one for phone "We are in Paris!" she collides with a hard rock, leaving the towel fall down from her hand to hold on something, better someone and as she was about to fall when the person took hold of her by her waist and took hold of her phone, she was holding in her left hand which made her press the speaker button unintentionally.
"What! Paris! OMG! You must be kidding Honey! You said you will go there only for your honeymoon?"

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Thanks buddies!
How was the visit, dears?
Hope you enjoyed the ride.
Did you find the surprise in this part?
Was it a shock or surprise?
Do you think they are really going to have a real honeymoon?
Do you think our Lady will give in to him?

Waiting for the next part? Me too!
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Next part: Part 10

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- Maithili

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