Realization of love- IB/DBO ff part 1 on page 2 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aparajita2210

Hi Sanjana, I loved the concept of college romance, It is so relatable. For now, I am happy that the story begins from the begining , they are just friends 😳.

All six of them on a beach like wow, I really wanted you to explain the scene. It can include sand castles, sunbathing, beach ball and coconuts 😉

Hmmm... About the girls not being so enthusiastic about the idea of love. The boys have to work harder 😲

And now comes my favorite part, The chichore boys... I was shouting in my mind... OMKARAAA, RUUUDRA jaldi aao, heroine KO bachaao 😎

I am eagerly waiting with anticipation about how those guys will have to bear the brunt of their action 😆... NIRMA, RIN,SURF,TIDE se dhulaai 🤣

I suggest that please make the story a bit more expressive and this story even has scope for a lot of comedy 😉

All & All a fantastic update ... Just imagining their college life

Continue the good work, eager to know what's next

Love

Pari🤗