Milein ge tumse to bataein ge ke kitna pyaar hai humeinPrologue(pg#1)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys...
I am here with a new story...Please read the prologue...


Prologue:

Ruhi and Sharavan were sleeping.Ishita come to their room.She sit beside ruhi and place her hand on ruhi's head.Tear fell on ruhi.She wake up...

Ruhi:Ishimaa kiya hua?

Ishita(trying to hide her tears):Kuch nhi beta I just came to check whether you both are sleeping or yet studying.

Ruhi:Ishimaa bhaiya to kab ke so gaye hn.Mn koshish kr rhi thi sone ki.

Ishita:So jao na ap bhi beta subha school bhi jana hai...

Ruhi:OK ishimaa.

Ishita(kissing her forehead):Good night my princess sweet dreams.

Ruhi:Good night mama.

Ishita gets up and put blankets on ruhi and sharavan.And leaves.She went to her room.She moves towards cubboard and get out the picture of Raman.

Ishita to pic(crying):Raman hr din is umeed se shuru krti hun ke shahid aj apki koi call aa jae.Hr raat is umeed se soti hun ke shahid subha uthun to apka good morning ka msg mille.Raman 4 saal,,,4 saal ho gae.Ruhi bari ho gai,Apko uski yad nhi ati.Kash phir wo guzre hue pal wapis aa jaein.Kash hum phir ek ho jaein.

She hug the pic and went to bed.


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That's all.Hope you will like it.Please tell me whether
I should continue it or not????????
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey dear
congratulations for d new story
it sounds interesting
will love to read it
waiting for the first part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ayyo emotional sequence 😭 . Why raman is not with her, Hope he is alive. Don't kill him please. Yeah do continue , my support always there
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Posted: 8 years ago
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dear post it on YHM forum
more yhmians will get to know about this story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Interesting prologue

Update soon


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy..
First of all Congratulations for a new story...
Nice prologue...
Hmm Ishra are separated...
Will definitely Love to read a new story...
Its looking interesting...
Do continue soon...
Will wait for the first part...
Thanks for a new story plus Thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congo for ur new story
Nice prologue
Ishra r separated four years ago
Ruhi is with ishita. Where is raman
Updt soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats fr ur new story

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