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Its the first time I am making a post.This post is my take on what ishqbaaz lacks! Ishqbaaz lacks story,a central,sensible plot revolving around shivika. People have crazy discussions on consummation,romance,random lollipops which doesn't make sense at all. A strong plot is needed to take the story forward. The makers are running out of story,probably don't know what to do and its evident with the random things they come up with every week. The makers need to learn to give proper closure to all the tracks they begin. Name one track with has ended properly with all the lose ends tied up?
Now that they have started illegitimacy track,they should reveal the truth behind shivaay's birth otherwise both the trp audience and the online audience will lose interest. Negativity doesn't improve the show in any way. The story should make sense otherwise this random romance isn't going to appeal the audience.
We ask for anika's past and all we get is the nayantara non sense. They need to end mahi's character logically by revealing the illegitimacy truth.There is still a lot to explore with the focus on the leads(shivika) but the makers are too lazy to write a proper track! Instead we are being served with priyanka,acp,kamini,pinky non sense. Do you think audience really care if priyanka is forced into a marriage or not?
Even the trp audience expect some sensible story revolving around the leads with continuation and proper closure.
Sorry for bothering you all with my rant but had to share it with my fellow ibians! Hope I made sense!
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