ISHRA SS : ~BLESSING IN DISGUISE ~ TEASER PAGE 33|| MARCH 13th

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PART 1 PAGE 1

PART 2 PAGE 2 ~LINK~
PART 3 PAGE 5 ~LINK~
TEASER PAGE 8
PART 4 PAGE 12~LINK~
PART 5 PAGE 17~LINK~
PART 6 PAGE 26 142725797
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Posted: 8 years ago
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~BLESSING IN DISGUISE ~

PART 1


Ishita , you have to agree to marry him, we don't have any other option , at least for me please do it. You wanted me to accept you , I will do it , tum Jo kahogi I will do it but just agree to marry him beta. Ishita I am your father I admit you are my daughter. Shagun nahi hai yahan , she has left wo chali gayi hai bahut door I want you to take her place marry Raman beta , hamari izzat ke liye , is time its necessary to proceed with the rituals ishita.

No words came out of the mouth of the ishita iyer. She didn't said anything just her silence was accepted as her acceptance. They were in a multi storied hotel especially booked by the malhotra's for the wedding of their only daughter shagun , they had two children a son and a daughter. Shagun was the most pampered child and totally spoilt and ambitious. She didn't liked anyone saying anything to her. Malhotra's were in the textile business and had arranged the wedding of their daughter shagun with the elder son of bhalla's. Bhalla's were the most influential families in India. Having their business flourished in advertising , hotel chains and construction. Their elder son , Raman was an architect and an MBA from the London. Having established his business along with studies there he was the most eligible bachelor. Handsome was the word that couldn't even describe him. Having only Arjun singhnia as his friend he didn't needed anything.

Malhotra's were impressed with Raman's nature and his success , and had suggested the alliance of their daughter shagun with him. Raman and shagun had met and Raman found her suitable for him. Stylish, educated and somewhere her sweet talks had made him agree to this alliance.

Ishita was in her bridal wear. A deep dark red lehenga and bridal accessories were making her look desirable. Innocence was there on her face , she knocked and faced the man with whom she had to face her whole life. Raman looked at the girl clad in the bridal wear looking absolutely stunning. The thing that was teasing him was her big nose ring. Her eyes were down casted and he asked her.
Yes, ? Raman asked the girl and she looked above only to face the man in front of her , he was having an aura that soothed her senses while Raman saw an incredible beautiful girl in front of him. Her eyes were filled with pain he could see but still tears were yet to fell from her eyes.

Mr bhalla , I am ishita .. Ishita iyer , I want to talk to you , can I ? She asked very softly. If there wouldn't be the perfect silence in the room he would have missed that soft whisper that came out from her mouth.

Please come in , he invited her in , nervously she entered and Raman gestured her to sit on the bed but she remained still and started what she had to say.

Mr. Bhalla , shagun had left the marriage , she is not here , Mr. Malhotra has asked me to take her place I...

She couldn't complete , Raman was shocked , angry and he was afraid , afraid that what will happen if this marriage will happen. The girl in front of him was so innocent that she came to inform him instead of cheating him. He looked at her from top to bottom , her hands were clutching her bridal dupatta so hard that her fingers were red. She was looking nervous like she would cry.

Why did you wanted to inform me that ishita.? Raman asked , this time he just wanted to know her answer , his anger and reaction for shagun and malhotra's can be taken out some other time.

I didn't want to cheat you Mr.bhalla. me is shadi she mana nai kar sakti meri majboori hai par aap ka kya kasoor hai is me ki aap apne saath compromise Karen. Her words were so clear this time , he looked at her , tears fell from her beautiful eyes and he just said the words that she never thought would come.

Ishita please be ready to get married , we can solve this later. Mere liye meri family ki reputation bahut zaroori hai ishita. Thank you for clearing the air.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved it... Yes please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting story
mr.malhotra requested ishita to marry raman as his daughter shagun have runaway from marriage he was pleading ishita she went into ramans room after getting ready raman was admiring her beauty she told him everything he notices she is so innocent he asked what she wants from him she said is helpless but he don't have any reason to accept her raman was angry on shagun but seeing ishitas honesty he liked her he asked her get ready to marry him as for him his families reputation matters most let see how they will fall for eachother
pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very interesting concept.you are a very good story writer.please continue and give a early update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a very interesting and nice concept
amazing start
do continue soon
please pm me the next update if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting start..
pls continue..
pls pm once u update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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~BLESSING IN DISGUISE~

Part 2

Ishita was about to leave when she found her bridal dupatta was struck somewhere she turned and saw that Raman's ring had caught the string of her dupatta and it was struck. Raman looked at her , whose gaze was fixed on the dupatta and his ring. He very delicately separated the two and gave her the dupatta and when she was about to leave his words stopped her.

Ishita can you make sure that no one can see your face. There is media all over the place, my family relatives all are here and my cousins and ma will want to see how shagun is looking , i can't tell them the truth now, it will create chaos , everything will be messed up please can you make sure that nothing like that happens. Can you do that favour ishita ? Raman's voice was so calm that gave ishita the much needed strength to even nod. Raman came in front of her and he took the dupatta covering her face , hiding her beautiful face only she can see the needed things. He wanted to make sure that she was fine and asked her

Can you see ishita ? Asked Raman while he was still standing in her close proximity. Ishita was very nervous looking down at her toes and she nodded giving him relaxation and very meekly she asked.

Mein jaun ? He left the dupatta that till now he was holding and she left slowly gathering her lehenga clutching in her hands while her face was still covered just like he did.

Raman saw her retreating figure to the room which was supposed to be shagun's and she was walking slowly due to the fear that she could trip and when she reached , she looked in his direction and found him standing staring at her looking at her direction. He gestured her to enter and like she should hear she entered the room giving her racing heartbeats some relief and a wave of composure to Raman.

Raman sighed in relief seeing her not noticed by anyone. He looked at the things given to him by shagun's parents. Raman looked at the ring that was struck with ishita's dupatta , he pulled it out of his finger and threw it on the floor.

Shayad yahi aukat thi tumhari shagun , he said looking at the engagement ring given by shagun to him and today it had lost its meaning. He still couldn't digest the fact that shagun had left their wedding in the middle and seeing the innocent ishita trapped by malhotra's to marry him. He didn't knew who she was but he knew that she must be paying for someone's fault.

Raman broke and remove each and every thing given by malhotra's and he called his brother romi to meet him asap.

Romi come in my room , bring Arjun too he called his younger brother , romi was Raman's beloved brother he was six years younger to him and most pampered. Romi had been spoiled by Raman but in a limit. He knew that his mom will not like a spoilt child so romi had his time to time sessions from his Raman bhai.

Romi came along with Raman's friend Arjun , who looked at the condition of the room , it was messed and Arjun saw the engagement ring in a corner and looked at Raman , he could read Raman's anger hiding behind his calm face and looked at romi who was trying to analyize which tsunami had hit Raman's room and opened his mouth to hear.

Bhai kon sa toofan aaya tha and what happened to your clothes. Apki sherwani par ye kya gir gya. Ye toh shagun bhabhi ne kitne pyar se liya tha aapke liye. Ye kya kardiya aapne. He said making faces

Romi , go and arrange a new sherwani for me , jaldi ja before everyone calls me down and dare you anything to mom and dad warna tu janta hai main tera kya haal karunga. Raman's words scared poor romi and he ran making faces like he was having fire on his tail.

Gussa kyun hote ho , ja raha hun...

Raman threw the showpiece that was kept on the table on the dressing mirror that was hanging on the wall breaking it into pieces and Arjun tried to calm Raman before he does anything.

What's wrong kya ho gya hai , ye kya karraha hai Raman ? Aur Teri engagement ring wo wahan kaise aayi , he said picking up the ring.

Raman took the ring from his hands and threw it away this time it was not even seen.

Sahi kar raha hun Arjun , you don't know what is wrong. Shagun has left me at the alter , chali gai wo hamari shadi chodke .. That B**CH she left me and my family here to humiliate Arjun. He said with utmost disgust and Arjun was not surprised but he just tried to calm the storm called Raman bhalla that will blow over malhotra's now.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

interesting story

mr.malhotra requested ishita to marry raman as his daughter shagun have runaway from marriage he was pleading ishita she went into ramans room after getting ready raman was admiring her beauty she told him everything he notices she is so innocent he asked what she wants from him she said is helpless but he don't have any reason to accept her raman was angry on shagun but seeing ishitas honesty he liked her he asked her get ready to marry him as for him his families reputation matters most let see how they will fall for eachother
pls continue soon




thank you dear
yup I can assure you they will fall for each other
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: samisuki

A very interesting concept.you are a very good story writer.please continue and give a early update.



thanks for the compliment dear
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