Why is the storyline rushed?

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Affinity

@Affinity

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Naamkarann is different from the other shows on StarPlus in which it tries to not drag out the tracks. We have a long-term track, the return of Aman and the revenge against Dayawanti (and maybe also her naamkarann where the Mehta family will be recognized by Avni's success in life, if they are still going to follow through this storyline). We have the short-term obstacles and we have four young hot leads who's love stories are interwoven. This show has a solid foundation.

What I don't understand is why they are trying to rush the storyline? Atleast yesterday's episode seemed way too rushed. They bounced from one plot to other plot and it the flow of the story just seemed too jumpy and out of flow. This was a huge contrast from last week.

From what I believe, Naamkarann is not limited in its time. I understand that Naamkarann has a lot of tracks to cover, but with the sound fanbase it has already garnered, which will only continue to grow if CVs keeps up with banger episodes like last week, I don't understand its need to rush storylines. This can be a successful show that can last for a long time, without overstretching the tracks with the foundation it has built.

I understand that there are much more logistics and I'm no writer or editor so I can't tell the CVs what's best for them. But I think they are editing things out that would have been legitimised the awkward tension/attraction from Avneil. They are cropping scenes and rushing into Avni wanting to run away. And this wasn't the first time either that an Avneil scene has been cropped. They are also cutting into very short scenes of Dayawanti in Ayesha's house. Which do not do the scenes any justice.

Since the scenes are already filmed, I believe CVs should release outtakes and deleted scenes, if they are still relevant to the progress of the storyline. Or they can just extend scenes so what normally takes 1 episode for them, should delve into 1.5 episodes.

I'm sorry if I seem entitled, I just really want this show to prosper. It has really good potential to stay successful for a long time.

Edited by Affinity - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

i agree...yesterday's epi was a bit rushed...😔

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Tejaswini Wenham

@tejaswiniwenham

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

no i completely agree. the choppy editing will hopefully seize today. for masses of audience who are used to watching one day last a month in serials, namkaran will already take a little more brains to keep up with given how well they'd paced all the other storylines since the leap. but the light speed choppy episode will be impossible to keep up with. it was a struggle to keep track or make sense of what was happening. the dayawanti and fam scenes were very unsatisfying, there is no reflection of the ongoings by anyone there- not even rhea whom all this happened with. or even plotting by ketan and diksha...are they just gonna tc of dayawanti? they also keep on cutting all reaction shots of ali which leaves me frankly very confused about whats going on through his head. even a bff will have a reaction to neil's sudden desires for ananya- ali toh is in love with her, why is he so stoic? i think last week's episode was so damned good- they gave every dimension of the story ample time and reaction despite such a central plot as avneil marriage happening. hope they go back to that kind of finesse with story telling.

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