First night attempt #1 ... 5.6 [CAPs]+ crazy discussion VB note :pg 9

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Annika stops his apology with a finger pressing his lips. She forgives him wholeheartedly and puts it behind them. She hates fighting and can't bear to fight with him.

She's too forgiving, lots of us are like this with out husbands. yours truly too *shamefaced*

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He takes her hand in his and kisses it. A surge of feeling courses through him, as he sees how generous she is about him. Perhaps he sees the depth with which she cares about him.

"I can fight the world, but I cannot bring myself to fight you, Shivaay.."

What did he do to deserve such a gift in his life? Unconditional affection, unwavering loyalty , steadfast trust. A rush of feelings takes his breath away.

"You told me once that I will say, 'You take my breath away'. I am breathless now because of you..."

The visuals, sparkling reflections , these two and their taut passion, the soft rustling sounds of water, was no less magical and beautiful.

He draws her close and pushes her hair to expose her neck, fingers running down the length of her neck and she closes her eyes to the sensation. He spies her response , before grazing his face against her jaw and kissing her neck.

This girl KNOWS what is happening here.

And she is totally in for it. It's scary, but it's Shivaay, what's to be afraid of?

He checks to see if she's ok with all this.. and this is what he sees.


"I don't care who's watching, Annika.. I don't care about anything right now"

Can we just appreciate how gorgeous is the scene captured?


What happened? Are you breathless too?


He finds her shyness adorable.. I have seen this smile few times now..


People who know, know how electrifying a wet kiss to the neck is. Mr Lalit Mohan is murdering me second hand. tauba!

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Annika tucks her head into his neck, giving more access. She is as ready as him , although very shy and unsure of what to do. She wants to be there in his arms. His little smile , watching her being there, not running away ,even looking back into his eyes.

He holds her face , so she can't avoid it anymore. He was going to kiss her and it was like the last threshold before a lot more happens.

"What are you doing?"
"We're married. It's okay..." an indulgent knowing smile from the experienced to the inexperienced.
"Shivaay, we're in the pool.. Someone will see us."
"I don't care..." rubbing noses, his intent clear.
She gasps and gushes his name making him miss aim. He smiles and and takes a shaky breath, "Okay.. Room mein chale?"

(OmG I died there. that was so ,"let's go continue this privately? " *damn this A/C must be broken-why is it so hot in here?*)


"You go first, I'll follow after. "
"Why? Do you need to catch a breath? " He smiles and let's her have a moment, turns back to see the expression on her face unawares. The fondness on his face , that cute smile when he finds her adorable, is a heady assault to the nerves already sensitive to the visuals.

"I will be waiting for you..."

*deadfaint*
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Annika smiles. She is ready to go. Nervous as heck, but not afraid. This is Shivaay, the man she loves, who has said 2 or the 3 /4 stipulated sentences she asked for before when he wanted to kiss her.

He's giving her his "out of character" wali baat. Of course she is in. She wants to go to him, be with him, he's like the Sun, scorching and hot, currently on warm setting ,patiently.

Unfortunately she turns to find Pinky. I cannot believe she was standing there while they were in the pool, just to renew her threat!!

Annika's mood is spoiled. She has to keep a distance now, with the awful secret hanging over his head. I wish she could just forget about all this and let Pinky do whatever he threatens. She should trust Shivaay more , and just stick by him. But it is understandable that she is scared.

When she goes to him, he has made up the room in anticipation. He has been planning this for a while, I see. Lingerie and champagne. *blush* He wants this to be their special night, their first night.

The fact that he's saying all these things without embarrassed says a lot. This man is determined and quite self assured, that his wife is on the same page as him. She is very shy so he takes the lead. Champagne to soothe nerves ,low lighting to set mood.

She turns on her signature light hearted leg pulling to send him off on a tangent. Pretending to be obtuse, she refuses to understand what first night is, as he tries again and again to make the point.

Fed up, he grabs her close and says "husband and wife relations" and she gets nervous. He broke the light hearted spell she was weaving and turned tables. He buries his nose in her hair and inhales deeply.

Sexy bedroom eyes be the death of me.

"I have something for you to make this night special"

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(uh, That will make it special for YOU Shivaay, hahahah )

The lingerie is a tad too bold a step for Annika. Some are complaining that she is a mood spoiler, but hey, you think it's easy? All your adult life dressed modestly in front of people, suddenly you are asked to wear a skimpy, almost nothing slip of cloth in front of the man whose gaze makes your heart jump like you're being chased by a dog? Mercy! it is scary !!

(I couldn't wear lingerie on my wedding night , MIL kept knocking and talking outside our door. I was like NO WAY. This moron will open the door and I'll be the fool in my undies and he is in a Kurta pajama)

He didn't even close the door, this Shivaay!!

actually how can he ask her to wear that and he's fully dressed and buttoned up like that?! Hmph.

So she keeps her end of the deal and puts it on. He is stumped again as she flees. is he mad? No. He plans the next one better.

be prepared guys, tonight we will die.


This is the Mind at work.😆

Next morning she comes with calculator , in some strange inane scene.

"Counting your level of embarrassment last night?"

His teasing hit the mark and his stifled laughter was the cutest. Something about saving water in showers. Here I was waiting for him to say, "We should save water by showering together!" But something got snipped off there and the scene just ended with Annika blushing and shy in Shivaay's teasing embrace.

The man is on a mission.

This is the only reaction expression I've seen from Shivaay so far. I may have missed , do enlighten me. Annika has reacted a lot already. Billu makes cute stammery faces but passion? this here is one.

The heady floating sensation came to a crash landing when she gets an earful from Ponky. The conflict became too obvious to the man who is watching her very closely since last night. The loss of her smile makes him ask.

(not exact translation, but what I understood from it)
"Marriage is a vow, if you believe in your vows , one will honour it. You can do all the rituals , but if you didn't keep your vows, one isn't honouring the marriage. Sometimes Fate sends mishaps that rock a marriage to the point of breaking"

The seriousness of the topic worries Shivaay. All the playfulness he had been working up on her is gone. She is tense and sullen. She goes to Prinku, and he watches her worriedly.

precap: Annika goes missing , everyone is searching for her ,even crocodile Ponky. They are shocked with an arrival.


p/s: spoilers say it's Tia.

Why should it be bad? I totally see Tia being Mallika types, helping Shivaay realize he's in love. What say?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Anisa, beautiful post...you said it all...the words are just perfect.
I wrote something... too about the whole Shivika moment... nail biting and yes..feeling the heat... though it late..very late for me... I am wide awake and catching up on the forum. 😆😆

The pool was the first encounter and what better place to begin their life anew...the sensation of the water sliding on the skin...cooling the heated skin...only to get heated... with a touch...on the neck or the sliding back of the hair from her ears, the damp skin drying rapidly amid the raising temperatures of kisses and touches.

Shivaay was extremely indulgent of his wife and gave her the leeway while Anika who wanted to surrender herself to the experience found her nemesis who gave her a rude reminder of the time left to her. Anika valiantly played Shivaay until she slipped up.. mentioning his naughty thought since the morning. 😆 Shivaay sucking his thumb and the heart stopping beautiful smile says he is not going to give up so easily, he will get her.

The last scene was very poignant where she says despite all the rituals and the fact that a marriage is for 7 life times, even 1, the present may not be happy or enough and they get broken. Shivaay was stumped to hear this from her, he will not divorce her. He cannot bear the thought of their marriage going kaput, he said no negative thoughts...so i am going to feel positive, ignore the spoilers that are saying otherwise.

Wish he had said we could save water by showering together...😆😆 instead he did not shower that morning. 😲 Loved the cute hug at the end before Pinky came to taunt.. getting rather tired of her line 'besharmom ki tarah...' or 'tu kitni besharam hai Anika ' wish she gets it... back in spades.

Edited by nim_var - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was waiting for your post only.
It's always a pleasure to read your reviews on the episode.
loved it so much.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yaay!!! I'm on first page!! I have a suggestion because obviously none of us can compete with Annisa's insanely accurate and gorgeously expressed take on this...my suggestion is this--- first night stories!! For the younger behens on this forum, from some of us old marrieds who actually went through that first wedding night... I'm not talking tips and techniques besharam !! Ramadan ka month hai, jee!! Kindly adjust and PM me later 😆

I'm talking what ACTUALLY happens once the door closes and you are in someone else's house and in someone else's bedroom. What it's like and what you did when suddenly he's looking really strange and not like the comfortablely normallike guy he looked like, yesterday. And really bigger than you realized.

Let's remember your real concerns--- is any particularly insane cousin hiding in here? Is that glass of milk for me even though im lactose intolerant? How will I go through the night without going to the bathroom because..umm.. will I pee with a GUY potentially hearing me???

And was your damn parcel of crazy inlaws still out there dancing to Desi Girl while you, the actual desi girl sat freaking out inside? Was your bedroom turned into a sleazy 80s suhaag raat scene while you sat there, sweating heavily through your 14 kg banarasi sari? Did he help you unwind the 2000 safety pins? How many times did he jab you before you got them all unpinned? And WHAT did you do with your hair that night?? Was it shellaced to your skull ? Did you wonder if the bun/pouf/ nest of curls will ever unstick itself?

So ladies, shall we reminisce in honour of Shivika's first rehearsal for their first night??

Honestly batao-- who fought in a low hissing whisper with their man half the night because he's being fresh and frisky and handsy all over when all you want is to sleep the sleep of the dead after those 7 hour parlour visits?

Edited by napstermonster - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely post Anisa
Enjoyed the shivika scenes today.
Anika truly trolled shivay on the first night. ..awesome expressions from both NM-SC.
Enjoyed the morning hug too...was cute...still wonderin what happened at night to make billu so smug.
Let's wait and see where they take us


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nim_var

Anisa, beautiful post...you said it all...the words are just perfect.

I wrote something... too about the whole Shivika moment... nail biting and yes..feeling the heat... though it late..very late for me... I am wide awake and catching up on the forum. 😆😆

Will unres on your post too.😉

The pool was the first encounter and what better place to begin their life anew...the sensation of the water sliding on the skin...cooling the heated skin...only to get heated... with a touch...on the neck or the sliding back of the hair from her ears, the damp skin drying rapidly amid the raising temperatures of kisses and touches.

Shivaay was extremely indulgent of his wife and gave her the leeway while Anika who wanted to surrender herself to the experience found her nemesis who gave her a rude reminder of the time left to her. Anika valiantly played Shivaay until she slipped up.. mentioning his naughty thought since the morning. 😆 Shivaay sucking his thumb and the heart stopping beautiful smile says he is not going to give up so easily, he will get her.

Yes! he will plan the next one better. See, he had her in the pool, she was willing and responsive. Suddenly she was being silly and needling him. Today, he won't let her out of his sight from start to end. It will start in bedroom only 😆

I found his shy explanations of what he wanted them to do adorable. When talking didn't work he just grabbed her and demonstrated..😆

The last scene was very poignant where she says despite all the rituals and the fact that a marriage is for 7 life times, even 1, the present may not be happy or enough and they get broken. Shivaay was stumped to hear this from her, he will not divorce her. He cannot bear the thought of their marriage going kaput, he said no negative thoughts...so i am going to feel positive, ignore the spoilers that are saying otherwise.

Wish he had said we could save water by showering together...😆😆 instead he did not shower that morning. 😲 Loved the cute hug at the end before Pinky came to taunt.. getting rather tired of her line 'besharmom ki tarah...' or 'tu kitni besharam hai Anika ' wish she gets it... back in spades.

Pinky is a face i really dont' like to see these days, however amazing the actor is doing. Too negative, too much hate. Just no. I bet when the spoiler scene comes, I won't even pity her. Hate begets hate.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

I was waiting for your post only.

It's always a pleasure to read your reviews on the episode.
loved it so much.


Thanks dearie !! Sorry its so late.. So much to see and experience...☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was stalking forum to read your take...
Lovely post ... And it explains a lot of things...

I was really annoyed they made anika the jism watcher dumb for comedy... But how u put it sounds better.. She wanted to delay things...

No idea how ranveer landed up in precap... Maybe this scene will play out in last part of epi...

Tia is fine... Iam OK with anything since aditi spoilers came in...

Can't wait for tonite... Hotstar spoilers indicate it is going to get hotter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Annika stops his apology with a finger pressing his lips. She forgives him wholeheartedly and puts it behind them. She hates fighting and can't bear to fight with him.

She's too forgiving, lots of us are like this with out husbands. yours truly too *shamefaced*
lol add me to the club Anisa ... just cannot resist the face he makes .. i am a sucker I know

Image result for sheepish gif

He takes her hand in his and kisses it. A surge of feeling courses through him, as he sees how generous she is about him. Perhaps he sees the depth with which she cares about him.

"I can fight the world, but I cannot bring myself to fight you, Shivaay.."

What did he do to deserve such a gift in his life? Unconditional affection, unwavering loyalty , steadfast trust. A rush of feelings takes his breath away.

"You told me once that I will say, 'You take my breath away'. I am breathless now because of you..."

The visuals, sparkling reflections , these two and their taut passion, the soft rustling sounds of water, was no less magical and beautiful.

He draws her close and pushes her hair to expose her neck, fingers running down the length of her neck and she closes her eyes to the sensation. He spies her response , before grazing his face against her jaw and kissing her neck.

People who know, know how electrifying a wet kiss to the neck is. Mr Lalit Mohan is murdering me second hand. tauba!
Yes I agree ..lol😳

Image result for blushing hard gif

Annika tucks her head into his neck, giving more access. She is as ready as him , although very shy and unsure of what to do. She wants to be there in his arms. His little smile , watching her being there, not running away ,even looking back into his eyes.
Yep .. like I said one of the reasons why i feel it may have gone all the way. 😉

He holds her face , so she can't avoid it anymore. He was going to kiss her and it was like the last threshold before a lot more happens.

"What are you doing?"
"We're married. It's okay..." an indulgent knowing smile from the experienced to the inexperienced.
"Shivaay, we're in the pool.. Someone will see us."
"I don't care..." rubbing noses, his intent clear.
She gasps and gushes his name making him miss aim. He smiles and and takes a shaky breath, "Okay.. Room mein chale?"

(OmG I died there. that was so ,"let's go continue this privately? " *damn this A/C must be broken-why is it so hot in here?*)


"You go first, I'll follow after. "
"Why? Do you need to catch a breath? " He smiles and let's her have a moment, turns back to see the expression on her face unawares. The fondness on his face , that cute smile when he finds her adorable, is a heady assault to the nerves already sensitive to the visuals.

"I will be waiting for you..."

*deadfaint*
Related image

Annika smiles. She is ready to go. Nervous as heck, but not afraid. This is Shivaay, the man she loves, who has said 2 or the 3 /4 stipulated sentences she asked for before when he wanted to kiss her.

He's giving her his "out of character" wali baat. Of course she is in. She wants to go to him, be with him, he's like the Sun, scorching and hot, currently on warm setting ,patiently.

Unfortunately she turns to find Pinky. I cannot believe she was standing there while they were in the pool, just to renew her threat!!

Annika's mood is spoiled. She has to keep a distance now, with the awful secret hanging over his head. I wish she could just forget about all this and let Pinky do whatever he threatens. She should trust Shivaay more , and just stick by him. But it is understandable that she is scared.

When she goes to him, he has made up the room in anticipation. He has been planning this for a while, I see. Lingerie and champagne. *blush* He wants this to be their special night, their first night.

The fact that he's saying all these things without embarrassed says a lot. This man is determined and quite self assured, that his wife is on the same page as him. She is very shy so he takes the lead. Champagne to soothe nerves ,low lighting to set mood.

She turns on her signature light hearted leg pulling to send him off on a tangent. Pretending to be obtuse, she refuses to understand what first night is, as he tries again and again to make the point.
Glad you saw it that way too ... for me the whole innocent thing was OTT and looked like a deliberate attempt to clear the sexual tension in the air😆

Fed up, he grabs her close and says "husband and wife relations" and she gets nervous. He broke the light hearted spell she was weaving and turned tables. He buries his nose in her hair and inhales deeply.

Sexy bedroom eyes be the death of me.

"I have something for you to make this night special"

Image result for emma stone gif

(uh, That will make it special for YOU Shivaay, hahahah )
lol .. it was more a gift for him that for her!!! got HER a gift my foot 🤣

The lingerie is a tad too bold a step for Annika. Some are complaining that she is a mood spoiler, but hey, you think it's easy? All your adult life dressed modestly in front of people, suddenly you are asked to wear a skimpy, almost nothing slip of cloth in front of the man whose gaze makes your heart jump like you're being chased by a dog? Mercy! it is scary !!
i agree .. it is.

(I couldn't wear lingerie on my wedding night , MIL kept knocking and talking outside our door. I was like NO WAY. This moron will open the door and I'll be the fool in my undies and he is in a Kurta pajama)


So she keeps her end of the deal and puts it on. He is stumped again as she flees. is he mad? No. He plans the next one better.

be prepared guys, tonight we will die.

precap:
Annika goes missing , everyone is searching for her ,even crocodile Ponky. 🤣🤣

They are shocked with an arrival.


p/s: spoilers say it's Tia. I thought it would be Rudy and new entry

Why should it be bad? I totally see Tia being Mallika types, helping Shivaay realize he's in love. What say? Me too. When she left she did feel she owed Annika for giving Robin back to her. Also, she mentioned to Shivvay that the Universe wanted them together.
She got off very easy and without working for the redemption she was handed. This is her chance to earn it

Khidki tod post Anisa 😃


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