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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashi345678

Awesome work Ila.
Felt so good while reading ur story.
Do write more soon. 😊



Thanks for liking as far as i have updated 2 shots well try to write more... as time permits...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Please Do Not Copy the theme and style of my writing I had very Peculiar way of writing things. I am not against similar theme or plot I m can't bear if someone has copied my style of writing... Sorry IF someone feels bad seeing this comment but I will see what i feel as I feel hurt if I see. I like writing These type of One Shot and I can't stop myself from Writing it's my way to relief myself after heavy schedule...



With Regards
Ila
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome os..

love it..

thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for pm, it was just beautiful...
No more words...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ila, while reading I only can imagine Omkara & Gauri as Princess & the guy 😉 ...nice
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Posted: 8 years ago
Strange how the songs stay the same 😆

I used it for Maaneet in my FF The Locket about 3 years ago 😃


Ye Nayan Darre Darre

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haiye..

res for story.. will ge back to the story over the weekend
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Strange how the songs stay the same 😆

I used it for Maaneet in my FF The Locket about 3 years ago 😃


Ye Nayan Darre Darre

female version

haiye..

res for story.. will ge back to the story over the weekend



waiting for unres for your comment..

Thnaks you like it...

I read the lyrics in kawai ff and i liked the song i thought this one shot can be synchronised...


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Posted: 8 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent os! well written
Edited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi
This one is very, very, very random.
it was an overflow of words and i got confused.
i hope you understand what i wanted to say.

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BREEZE, LOVE, RECKLESS



Breeze, Love, Reckless

Sometimes it feels like you are so alone even when surrounded with people. You smile at them when they talk to you but they don't know the truth. They don't know that one can be isolated even in a crowd. Is it weird that I loved to be alone with myself. I used to think I would never need a person to make me feel complete. But it all changed when I met him. He was like a cool breeze which, when touched me, I felt alive.

As I saw him from a distance, I realised that we were worlds apart, so different. Coincidence is a funny thing, I met him again and we talked. Small things that he did for me, I felt loved. They say Opposites Attract. Maybe that was the case with us because being with him, having his friendship made me feel free. I was always the conservative one, never doing anything out of line but it didn't mean I didn't want to. I wanted to go bungee jumping, to go hiking or camping in a jungle. I have always wanted to explore these adventures.

Something always stopped me from taking that step, held me back but I wanted to let go and be reckless for once in my life. Some people you meet in life are not meant to stay but they teach you great lessons. He taught me how to live, how to love myself and I am proud to say I did all of those things and realised nothing is indefinite, its ephemeral and that's life it. It changes and you change with it.



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Thats it.
tell me if you like it

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Posted: 8 years ago
Really lovely os
The emotions you have portrayed are beautiful
The man who loves d girl who is helpless in front of him and she knows her father is wrong ...I loved how he was true to his words
The girl who is thinking he might hurt her but he didn't ...really wonderful piece piece of work
thnx fr d pm

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