Am I worthy of Love?? RagSan SS PROLOGUE

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Am I worthy Of LoVe-RaGSan

I love swara n sanskar but wanted to write something different so took RagSan for the first time.
This story will be a good read.
So dont make any opinions before reading
And don't forget to comment n give me your feedbacks.
Thanks

Happy Reading!


PROLOGUE:

She had been walking slowly lost in her own world,tears running down her eyes smudging the kohl in her eyes.

She had never thought it would happen like this but life takes such turns.

She was torn between grief and guilt.
Her feet seemed to freeze and she sat down crying her eyes out.

She had done a mistake but had realised it.

It was only that the truth came out early.

Or else she wud have made up for it.

The truth of her being a selfish sister.
The truth of her trying to snatch away her sister's wud be husband.
The truth of trying to kill her own sister.
Yes she was guilty of all of it.

The only difference was that she had remorse for it.
That guilt was eating her from inside.
But the most painful thing was losing the faith of her family.
They had ditched her after knowing the truth.

Luckily Sanskar had helped swara to return to the mandap and Ragini's plan had failed miserably.

Swara got married to Laksh as planned.




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Then who wud listen to her?
Who wud listen to what she had to say?

Who wud care for her?
Who??

A silence enveloped her soul.
There was no one.

"Ragini" Someone called breaking the silence.

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P.S Do comment if u want me to continue.
INDEX
CHAPTER 1 PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2 PAGE 2
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting Story...
As i am not fan of Ragsan but By looking at your Prologue I am Hooked to it . Continue Soon and if possible Pm me

by adding me to your Buddy list

if possible

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Are you in watt pad. If yes please put this story there. You will get splendid response. The story is awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue😳
Continue soon😃
Are u on Telly Updates or Wattpad?😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue 😊
Eagerly waiting for next part
Please update soon
Pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love swara n sanskar but wanted to write something different so took RagSan for the first time.
This story will be a good read.
So dont make any opinions before reading
And don't forget to comment n give me your feedbacks.
Thanks

Happy Reading!


PART 1

How much comforted I felt on hearing that voice in the dark night.
How I wished someone cud just come and tell me that "you're not alone" and there he was standing like a strong pillar infront of me.

I had never expected someone to come to my help after all that happened at swara's wedding.

But Sanskar was there.

I tried to walk away but he followed my steps.
I turned back and asked him to leave.

"sanskar plz I don't need anyone.
Just go from here."

"Ragini Dekho... And before he cud complete his sentence... Ragini had fainted.

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I opened my eyes and found myself in a big room on a comfortable bed.
I woke up surprised... Where am I...

Just then a woman entered the room n told me that she was the housekeeper of this place and that its the mansion of Mr.Sanskar Maheshwari.

He brought me to his own house.

Just then sanskar entered n understood the questions in my eyes.

"Ragini dis is my new house n here nobody will trouble u...N U can stay here as long as u wish...

Nobody lives here n I come here sometimes to find peace.

"But sanskar how can I stay here? asked Ragini.

She started to walk but stumbled n wz abt to fall when sanskar catches her n asked her to rest.

"U r not well so just hv a sleep n worry ant nothing"

"Sanskar apka ye ehsan him kbhi nhi bhulenge"
She spoke with tears in eyes.

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P.S I know dis is short but will try to update longer part next
Edited by Ashi345678 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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really nice update
pleaseee update next par sooon
with longer update
nd try to pm me
pleaseee... will be waiting to read
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
AM I WORTHY OF LOVE
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Ragini slept peacefully.
The nxt day sanskar askd her to get ready as he wanted to take her out.

She needed a break from all the miseries n he understood it n wat better can be than a day out.

She got ready hesitantly n they drove to the mall.

Ragini was feelih relaxed n happy to be out of all d mess.

Sanskar askd her to choose few dresses as she had left everything at gadodia house.

Ragini picked up few dresses n then they went to d restaurant.

While sipping the hot coffee they heard the sound of thunder outside.

It has started to rain.
In the pleasant weather that hot coffee was feeling really comfortable.

"Thanks sanskar..."she uttered.

"Kisliye??" he askd

"For everything"
She smiled.

"Doston mein thanks nhi bolte"
He assured her.

"friends??" he askd.

She nodded in a yes.

They spent there half n hour having a light conversation.

Their laughs filled the scene.

It was only for the first time he realised that ragini too was innocent like other normal girls n not the complicated person who others believe her to be.

It was the betrayal by laksh that had made her so much cold hearted but he wz glad that she seemed to be her real self with him.

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They left the cafe n went out.
It was still pouring outside.
Sanskar brought the car n they drove .

"sanskar aap jante hain Barish hamein boht pasand h "

She smiled looking out of the car.

"Mujhe bhi" he said.
"We r so similar isnt it?

she was busy looking out of the window that she failed to hear what he said.
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Guys keep giving ur reviews...it will encourage me to continue the story.As there r already vry few Ragsan fans but I am writing for them bcz ppl pmed me to continue.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great start...continue it but plz make it long and regular updates otherwise may reduce its interest.one more think don't relay on quantity of comments as if that happens u may loss ur abilities to write from heart and connects towards instant popularity only.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey please write in english.

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