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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins


Oh, how I love jealousy stories.Especially when the jeaous people in question are as possessive as our Shivaay and Annika.Separation is okay with me ONLY if its for a really short period of time,and they ultimately get back together.I can't handle depressing stories at all since I get so attached to fictional people,more so than real people , and it hurts to see them hurt😭



Same pinch 😲
Even I get attach to characters, Arnav Singh Raizada-Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada and Shivaay Singh Oberoi- Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi, these 4 characters they cry, I cry and when they have fun I laugh and enjoy along.
For example the episode of last Friday; I kept crying for Annika, Literally Weeping for her.
I had swollen eyes the next day.

True the separation period should be short and filled with sweet gestures to woo the woman back and have some teenager wala love time together.

Jealousy toh! Haye but I would love to see the woman get jealous more than the guy because you know it leads to more of nok-jhok and then to romance whereas when the guy gets jealous it directly lends into romance (mostly)
But other than that I love the villains to get jealous too because that means their plan flopping and more romance between the couples.
And I also love moments where they are each others escape from the hectic life, and a way to bring the child within back to life.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



Same pinch 😲
Even I get attach to characters, Arnav Singh Raizada-Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada and Shivaay Singh Oberoi- Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi, these 4 characters they cry, I cry and when they have fun I laugh and enjoy along.
For example the episode of last Friday; I kept crying for Annika, Literally Weeping for her.
I had swollen eyes the next day.

True the separation period should be short and filled with sweet gestures to woo the woman back and have some teenager wala love time together.

Jealousy toh! Haye but I would love to see the woman get jealous more than the guy because you know it leads to more of nok-jhok and then to romance whereas when the guy gets jealous it directly lends into romance (mostly)
But other than that I love the villains to get jealous too because that means their plan flopping and more romance between the couples.
And I also love moments where they are each others escape from the hectic life, and a way to bring the child within back to life.

Diva_Vineet


I was reading a really sad fanfic a while back that had me bawling my eyes out. WHY DO I DO THIS TO MYSELF😭😭😭 So now I'm depressed and on top of that I'm SO worried about tomorrow's exam and I should be studying really hard right now but I'm only barely skimming through the topics.
You know what I'll probably start writing the next update today to make myself feel better.And put in jealousy and possessiveness and romance in there to make up for the lack of it all in the show these days. I'm REALLY hoping today's episode shows even just a LITTLE BIT if Shivika pleaseee😭 I really need them right now sighh.
Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins


I was reading a really sad fanfic a while back that had me bawling my eyes out. WHY DO I DO THIS TO MYSELF😭😭😭So now I'm depressed and on top of that I'm SO worried about tomorrow's exam and I should be studying really hard right now but I'm only barely skimming through the topics.
You know what I'll probably start writing the next update today to make myself feel better.And put in jealousy and possessiveness and romance in there to make up for the lack of it all in the show these days. I'm REALLY hoping today's episode shows even just a LITTLE BIT if Shivika pleaseee😭I really need them right now sighh.



Waise toh you should be studying right now, you have your exam tomorrow only, but since You are feeling low why don't you watch some khidkitod episode of Ishqbaaz on hotstar!
That would help :)

Warm Love
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



Waise toh you should be studying right now, you have your exam tomorrow only, but since You are feeling low why don't you watch some khidkitod episode of Ishqbaaz on hotstar!
That would help :)

Warm Love
Diva_Vineet


I'd do that,but I'm PRETENDING to study ;) can't risk getting caught haha.

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Posted: 8 years ago
If you want to watch, watch just starting ka, because uske baad toh bakwas hi aya, Annika ki halat dekh I am into really pathetic mood. I am going to watch Sarabhai right now.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ch-6

Updating a day early, because sandy11WARIS so sweetly requested. Hope you all like this. :)

Shivaay was having the time of his life. Teasing and flirting with Annika was beyond anything he had envisioned-with her blushing cheeks, quivering lips, and widened eyes, she was a vision to behold. When he had placed his hand on her thigh and that delicious gasp had escaped her lips, Shivaay couldn't help but be proud of himself. Proud of the fact it was him, and only him, who could do this to Annika.

He was still gloating in victory when suddenly, he felt Annika's hand on his thigh too. The sudden touch caught him off-guard, and he started coughing, spitting out the food from his mouth.

"What happened to YOU now, Billu? Dadi called out.

"Yes, what happened, Billuji? Annika asked with a look so innocent, anyone would be deceived.

"Nothing Dadi! Shivaay called out while glaring at Annika. Her hands where lightly, but surely, grazing over his leg. Shivaay's face turned red when he realized that her hand was inching closer and closer to...

"Oh God, Annika!, He groaned out. "Don't start something you won't be able to finish.

Annika only smiled victoriously. Who knew giving him a taste of his own medicine would be so much fun!

"Wait till I get you alone, my love. You have no idea what I'll do to you then...

It was again Annika's turn to blush, and she instantly removed her hand from his upper thigh.

"IF you get me alone, you mean. She said while getting up, and before Shivaay could comprehend what was happening, she had already run away to the kitchen. He was about to get up and chase her too, when the shrill noise of "Shivaay Babyyy reached his ears, making him cringe.

Tia had just walked in through the front gate, her voice drawling out for unnecessarily long, as usual. Wearing a long, bottle green gown, she looked every inch the high-society princess she had been brought up to be, but now, looking at her gave Shivaay nothing but michmichis, with a twinge of guilt. It didn't sit well with him that he was cheating on her after being together for almost 3 years, but this faade would have to continue for a while till he made sure that the breakup wouldn't affect his business whatsoever.

"Hi tia, he managed to give her a fake smile, and was about to leave the hall, when she walked right up to him and gave him a peck on his cheek. This wasn't unlikely of her, and Shivaay usually ignored these small gestures of affection, but as he saw Annika emerging from the kitchen from the corner of his eyes, his evil mind riled up. Lightly keeping a hand on Tia's waist, he places two soft pecks on Tia's cheeks. The wide smile that appeared on Tia's face was ignored by Shivaay; his eyes were only on Annika, who stood frozen in her spot. Her eyes looked ready to spit fire, and her mouth was twisted in such an adorable frown that Shivaay had an incredible urge to just go and kiss her senseless. But that wouldn't do, since the reason he had kissed Tia in the first place had been to see the jealous, possessive side of his girl, which he thought made her look damn hot.

On the other side, Annika was absolutely fuming.

How dare that Baggad Billa! He gets all furious when I even mention other guys, and now he's kissing Ms. Reiki?AAARGHH!

She was brought out of her thoughts as Tia addressed her directly.

"Annika, sweetheart, would you mind coming up with me and looking through the dress designs? Pinky aunty wants me to finalize EVERYTHING by today, and I just don't know what to do!

Annika walked past Shivaay without a second glance.

"Don't worry, Tia. I'll help you. Come on, let's go.

With that, both the ladies went upstairs, leaving a rejoicing Shivaay.

Oh, how fun is it going to be when I finally get Annika alone...

"Bhaiya!

Rudra had just walked into the hall, and advanced towards his brother in his usual, cheerful manner. However, as he got close, he let out a dramatic gasp.

"What happened to you? Shivaay turned towards him with an annoyed look.

"What happened to ME?What happened to YOU, bhaiya?Why are you smiling to yourself? This is the kind of smile I have when I see a hot girl in college! Don't hide from me now, bhaiya, who were you thinking of?

"What do you mean, Rudra, ofcourse he's thinking about Tia! Pinky said playfully from where she had sat down beside Dadi.

While Rudra frowned at hearing LadyBaba's name, Shivaay cleared his throat.

"It's nothing like that, okay?I wasn't smiling. I don't smile. I mean, I don't smile because of stupid things. Now if you all will excuse me, I need to leave for office.

Then doing his trademark hairflick, he left the Mansion.

Hmm, something really seems to be up with bhaiya. I should talk to O about it. Rudra too was about to leave the hall, when Dadi called him to her.

"Yes, Dadi? He said while going to sit beside her.

"Wait, um, Pinky, Tia and Annika have gone upstairs to finalize the dresses. You should go and help them too.

"Oh my mata, mummyji, I'd completely forgotten! I'll go there right away.

It was only when Pinky was completely out of earshot that Dadi turned to Rudra.

"I think I have some good news for you. She told him with a playful glint in her eyes.

"What is it, Dadi? Is another of your friend's granddaughter coming to stay here with us? He asked her eagerly.

"Areh khoteya, it's not about you. It's about Billu. I have a feeling, that soon, you will get the bhabi of your choice!
Rudra's face fell.

"Come on, dadi. Even I know that bhaiya is getting married in a while, and even you know that that Lady Baba is definitely NOT the bhabi of my choice!

"But Annika is, right? She asked with a warm, mischievous smile.

"Yeah but what does that-"

Suddenly, Rudra's face lit up.

"Waaait. Are you trying to tell me that Bhaiya and Annika didi.. He then winked twice and nudged her shoulder to imply what he meant.

Dadi laughed heartily, and nodded her head.

"If my intuition is correct, then yes, your bhaiya and Annika didi..
Rudra jumped up from the sofa in excitement and started dancing around.

"Yaaayyy Dadi I'm so so happy at this news! Wait till I go and tell O!

With that he ran towards Om's room, getting weird glances from his dad and chotepapa who had just walked in.

Dadi only smiled after him, and sent a small prayer to the Gods. If her intuition was indeed right, then Billu and Annika had taken the first step in their relationship. But they still had a long way to go, and she could only hope that everything went smoothly for the two lovebirds.

~

Shivaay was busy in his office, surrounded by all the paperworks and files of their business with the Kapoors. He was looking through each and every detail with utmost concentration, to figure exactly how much loss their firm would incur due to the breaking of the deal, and trying to minimize it. He was being helped by his PA Mishra, who he trusted enough to inform of the situation.

It was while he was engrossed with a certain file regarding one of their business ventures, that his phone pinged, notifying him of a new message. He absentmindedly opened it, but his attention was grabbed as soon as he saw Annika's name. He had sent her a message a while back, simply asking what she was doing. It had been too long since he had talked to her, so he hadn't been able to resist texting her.

A- What do you think I'm doing? Helping your FIANCE with her dresses, ofcourse. :)

Shivaay smiled.

So she's still angry over the stunt I pulled in the morning, huh. Well, I'm sure I'll be able to persuade her in no time.

He was about to reply, when something in the file he was holding caught his eye. It was about a small project in Singapore they had undertaken with the Kapoor family a few months back, something he hadn't been able to look into extensively because of its insignificance. However, now that he turned towards it and read the whole contract, his face left all its colour.

Whereas the Kapoor's were supposed to have many assets in Singapore, the contract clearly indicated that their bank balance there was zero.

What Mishra said next disconcerted him even more.

"Sir, I didn't know Tia Ma'am's full name was 'Tia Dushyant Raj'?



This chapter was low on romance, sorry guys, but it was necessary to set the plot for the rest of the story. But don't worry, loads of romance and nok-jhok coming up in the next chapters!


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Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil

If you want to watch, watch just starting ka, because uske baad toh bakwas hi aya, Annika ki halat dekh I am into really pathetic mood. I am going to watch Sarabhai right now.

Diva_Vineet

Yeah I'll watch the premarriage episodes only.
Oooh I'm planning to watch Sarabhai season 2 after exams.Do tell me how the episodes are!
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update, loving this nok-jok, now romantic teasing between them
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins


Yeah I'll watch the premarriage episodes only.
Oooh I'm planning to watch Sarabhai season 2 after exams.Do tell me how the episodes are!



Oh The Sarabhai's are just as awesome as they were!

I found all the three episodes damn funny and amazing, I laughed like crazy while watching it 😆
But since there are people who didn't like it that much so, I can't say it for you but if you are as crazy as me you'll love it. 😃

PS:I was talking about watching today's episode that if you watch starting ka part only.


Warm Love
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Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


Since you resed I'll also


RES

😆 😆 😆

Diva_Vineet

Since You Unresed,
I'll also Unres 😆

You know what Anklet, I was thinking of the same revenge 😆
Kaafi khayalat milte hue humare,
Anyway, coming to the story!

You said it won't be that good because you were planning the story ahead into this one update, I would like to call you stupid then 😕

This was superb 👏

Though yeah The passion wala romance was missing but haye kya takkar wali Ishqbaazi was happening [:D/]

The way Shivaay made Annika baby green eye monster

Oh and I loved it
😈
Oh totally enjoyed Annika being jealous.
Jaali ree jaali ree Annika jaali ree 😆

See I was so right after the heroine being jealous there is alway this cute se masti nokh-jhok wali Ishqbaazi happens 😎

Tia baby don't smile so much after being replied with a kiss from your Shivaay baby, because Annika baby will soon be breaking all your extra shiny teeth 😆

Haye Rudy hotty, you're such an intelligent man, you solely can catch The SSO in his moments of being Shivaay 😃
And the happiness that filled his soul after knowing that Shivaay bhaiya was playing saiyaan saiyaan with his pyaari pyaari Annika Didi (soon-to-be-bhabhi) was so heartfelt, it had to happen woh kya hai naLady baba se shaadi hone ke baad Bhaiya badal jaate par yahan toh Universe ne bhabhi hi badal di 🤣

And Yeah Rudy boy can never change,
Your smile is one of that when I smile after seeing a hot girl
Is another friend of your's, granddaughter is coming to stay here?

Soumya Darling please tight the reins of your cry baby and Cry baby don't dream of any other woman then your sumo, because the chemistry that sparks between you two, can only be between you two

And Inky Pinky Ponky, get back to the earth and start understanding your son and his like, dislike and love, because Tia was the last person in your son's thoughts. 🤓

Poor Shivaay is neck down in work to make Annika his in front of the world, Good boy, Shabas mere sher 👏

Oh So Annika darling is still pissed off, well she has the right too but koi nhi I know you'll woo her in matter of minutes 😉 ( and keep your doors open while you manofy her, because we peeking from the key hole obstructs the view 😆 )

Oh No Shivaay baby did you just forgot to reply Your Jhassi ki Rani's texts in all the work?
Bhagwaan bache ab aapko uss chameli se (hehehehe) because your Jhassi ki Rani is in form today 😆 and after morning's act of jealousy, She is all sherni 😈

Kya baat mere cheetah, badi tej nazaren hai aapki, finally Tia and Mrs. kapoor's truth is to be dug out,
Aur Tia jaygyi boundry se bahar no ball par, aur Annika pavilion me aate hue 🥳 [:D/]

And Anklet Listen to me damn careful,
UPDATE SOON because your story is my oasis in the desert!
So take my dhamki or else my Chamki will come flying to you 😈

Love you Anklet
Divs
Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago

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