Soothing the Fire-Shivika FF UPDATED(Chapter-20 on pg-144)06/09 - Page 37

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

391.3k

Users

114

Likes

3.6k

Frequent Posters

rainbowveins thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Ch-7

Okay so I love dedicating chapters to people, and this one's for Shikha (Nimik)- I hope this suppresses your update ki bhook for a while!

Shivaay was at his wit's end. In the past half an hour, he had done more research into the Kapoor family than he had ever done, and the results had been shocking, to say the least. Long story short, he had found out that save a few properties and assets in India, the Kapoors were badly bankrupt. All transactions they had showcased to the Oberois, and every other business partners, had been nothing but a very well-planned faade. Shivaay had to give it to them though- no one had gotten even an inkling of their disastrous financial position in the past 5 years. He blamed himself too, ofcourse, since the mere image of the Kapoors in the high society of the elite had been enough for him to agree to the marriage cum business proposal.

"Aaarghh, Shivaay groaned out in frustration, running a hand wildly through his hair. "I can't BELIEVE I've been so stupid! Imagine, if I'd gone through with this wedding, we'd be ruined; they would become an equal partner in many our business without even having to spend a single penny!

Sitting beside him, Mishra sighed too.

"You're right, sir. We have indeed been quite stupid. Business dealings aside, you would have married a person who has already been married for the past 4 years!

Well, then there was that. Looking through one of the properties owned by Tia, Mishra had come across her puzzling last name, researched into her life, and voila!they had been deceived on that front too.

Shivaay groaned again.

"Gosh, I'm so glad I decided not to go through with this marriage.

"But why did you take the sudden decision, sir? Mishra asked curiously.

The question brought a smile on Shivaay's face, confusing his PA even more.

"Well, Shivaay answered with a grin, "Let's just say I decided to listen to my heart for once, and that's the best decision I've ever taken! Saying that, he jumped off his chair, and left the office.

"I swear, everyone in the Oberoi family is a little cracked, Mishra mumbled after his boss had left.

~

In the Oberoi Mansion, everyone was obliviously sitting in the main hall, while all the ladies haughtily discussed the numerous upcoming functions. It was almost 7 pm, and time for Annika to leave. She sat sulkily amongst the others, listening to their conversation half-heartedly, and responding where appropriate. Shivaay had still not come back from the office, and neither had he replied to her text. After the stunt he had pulled in the morning, she had already been infuriated to no ends. Now, her mind was threatening to explode with the held up anger. Moreover, she kept getting weird glances from Rudra, who was observing her every move suspiciously, and it was getting on her nerves.

"Um, Dadi, I think I should leave now. It's getting quite late.

"NO! Rudra suddenly shouted out, startling everyone.

"O my Mata Rudra, where did the bomb explode? Why are you shouting? Pinky exclaimed dramatically.

"Areh, Chotima, I'm just telling Annika didi to not leave now. I mean, Shivaay bhaiya will come and drop you home himself,na?

Annika's temper increased at Shivaay's name, but she tried keep calm in front of the whole family. It seemed like Rudra was up to no good, for whatever reason, and she didn't want to give him any more reason to be doubtful.

"No need for that, Rudra. She said to him with a forced, sweet smile. "I can go by myself. And who knows when Shi- Billuji will return.

Saying that, she said goodbye to a pouting Rudra and the rest of the family, and advanced towards the front door. Just as she walked out of the hall, she bumped into none other than Shivaay.

"Hi, he said in a husky voice, his face breaking into a wide smile seeing her.

Annika's resolve weakened at his adorably dishevelled sight, but she tried to maintain her composure. Ignoring him, she was about to walk past, when he grabbed her wrist to stop her. Since they were still in plain sight of the family members, Annika struggled to free her hand.

"I'll drop you home, come on. Shivaay said while reluctantly letting go.

"No need for that, Annika whispered haughtily. "I can go by myself, thank you very much.

Shivaay grinned at that.

So my Tadibaaz girl is still angry, huh.

His grin enraged Annika even more, and she was about to leave again, when Shivaay came and stood in front of her, blocking her way.

"Let me go, Shivaay.

"Nope,I'm coming to drop you home. And if you don't let me then...

"Then what?What will you do, huh? Annika asked, raising her chin in defiance.

"Then, Shivaay whispered huskily, "I'll kiss you here and now, in front of the entire family.

Annika gasped.

"You wouldn't dare do that..

"Oh yeah? Shivaay inched closer to her, "Try me.

Annika discreetly looked back at the family, and found that thankfully, they were all busy in talking and hadn't noticed their exchange.

Sighing, she turned back to Shivaay, who was staring at her smugly.

"Fiiine!Let's go.

On the other side of the hall, Dadi and Rudra suddenly exchanged a high-five, earning weird glances from the rest.

~

The car ride was silent, and full of sexual tension. Annika did not wish to speak to him, and Shivaay was too busy smiling to say anything. After a while, Annika couldn't take it anymore.

"What is wrong with you? She suddenly yelled.

"Wrong with me?Why, nothing at all!

"Then why the hell are you smiling like crazy? She asked, irritated.

Shivaay suddenly stopped the car in a secluded spot like that of last night, and got down from the car. Moving towards Annika's side, he opened the door and helped her out too.

"What is UP with you, Shivaay? Annika asked, flailing around her hands. She was exasperated beyond measure now. "You've been acting so-"

She couldn't finish, as Shivaay had smoothly grabbed her waist and pressed his lips firmly against hers. Annika was dying to reciprocate, but then she remembered the numerous reasons on why she shouldn't. Half-heartedly, she pushed him away.

"Oh no, Mr. You don't get to act so damn annoying, and then think you can persuade me with a kiss!

"Really? Shivaay asked while sliding his hands around her waist, his eyebrow quirking up sexily, "Well then, how DO I persuade my girl?

Annika tried hard to think straight, but it was becoming more and more difficult with his close proximity.

"I don't know. She muttered. "But don't think I'll let you off so easily for kissing that Tia! Why did you do that, huh? And on top of that, you didn't even reply to my text! Have you lost interest in me that easily?
Shivaay was taken aback.

"Lost interest in you? Jaan, I've been DYING to get my hands on you and you think I've lost interest? Annika blushed at that. "I only kissed Tia in the morning to make you jealous, and I see that I've succeeded. He winked at her.

Annika's face heated up even more.

"Okay well, She tried to remain angry at him, "Why didn't you answer to my text?

Shivaay's expression changed at that. He got a far-away, blazing look in his eyes, remembering the disclosures of the day.

"Someone tried to mess with my family, and trust me, I won't spare them.

Annika got worried at that. Rubbing her hands over his shoulders in smooth movements, she tried calming him down from whatever was enraging him.

"What do you mean, Shivaay? She asked him softly.

Seeing her worried expression, Shivaay quickly composed himself. Pulling her closer, he touched their foreheads together.

"You don't need to worry about it, okay? Just know that soon, everything will absolutely fine, and we won't have to hide anymore.

And they stood like that for a long time, earlier annoyances forgotten, just relishing in the warmth and comfort they brought to each other. After a while, Annika mumbled with a grin,

"Don't think I've forgiven you for kissing Tia, though.

Let me know what you think about this chapter, guys! And so sorry I couldn't reply to everyone for the last chapter, I've been a bit busy today. But but your comments mean the world to me :* Hope you all like this. Next update on Saturday, hopefully.


Chapter-8

Edited by rainbowveins - 8 years ago
Endless-LOvE thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
omggg i can't wait to read the next part. i guess shivaay will run a background check on tia now. please update soon
babydevil thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rainbowveins



Divs!Just came back after giving a khidkitod exam!Almost done with exams yayay😃

Coming to the post. Daamn girl, you've written an entire thesis on my chapter! And I absoltuely LOVE it. Honestly, your comment is one of the reasons I update as much as possible. I love love love you for that :*

You know what, I just realized that you notice things in my story that even I sometimes fail to. Like, I hadn't realized that Shivaay hadn't replied to Annika's message, and that that would be a further reason for her to get angry! You rock, girl.

I absolutely adore Rudra, as I've already told you, and writing his dialogues are so much fun, because I can literally make him say anything stupid and people will still love him😆

Hayee Shivaay. Even I'm falling in love with the Shivaay of this story haha. The actual SSO is getting on my nerves. He should take advice from this one, don't you think?

Nok-jhok and passion wala romance will be plenty in the upcoming chapters. And lol I know I know, I'm stupid, but I really was skeptical about how people will take this chapter, since we're already so deprived of Shivika romance in the show rn. But as usual, you make me see reality. :*

Now go on and finish your story asap so that I can write a huge-ass essay on it and bring a khidkitod, full-on smile on your face as you have brought on mine.

And yes yes will be updating soon. Tonight, hopefully. Rest your Chamki my dear, your dhamki is more than enough😛😛

Love you lots❤️❤️



Tonight's the night of our lives [:D/]

And before the go into party mode, See I told you, you'll rock the exams and finally your exams are over ( let's face it MCQ's doesn't even count as a test and here we are talking about an exam)

I can't help but write a thesis because your story lights up my mood like a rain drop does to peacock!!!
So yeah every word of this story is a chant to me. 😆

So if I give long long comments will you post the updates regularly? 😆

See I am such an angel, I have given Annika of your story another reason to show tadi to Shivaay, I mean no one is allowed to ignore their girl's message, specially when she is pissed off! Nah nah you shouldn't but SSO has done it and Annika is waiting *evil*

Sure a girl, make this Shivaay talk to the TV SSO, I know what Shivaay is going through isn't easy, his sister betrayed him for a jerk, her mother crying on a mole and then his wife being blamed in everything and then his wife blams his mother. The poor guy has no idea of what to do, but I guess a conversation between your Shivaay and Harneet's SSO would do the magic.

True Rudy says anything, lame, stupid or illogical, all of it is just adorable. Pure plain adorable
😳
So now I am your reality checker, I am sexy and I know it!

About my story *sigh* therw are lot of loopholes, I need to fix them because imagination me toh sab accha hi lagta hai but when you pen it down on a paper you see the loopholes, So I am still stuck on chapter 1 which is an introduction. So let's see and again don't keep hopes from the story because I am sure that the imagination was better
Update SOON by tonight also, asap Do you Get it 😡

Love
Divs
babydevil thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago


You Res-ed
So I have a right to RES

~~~~~~~~

You unres-ed quite early ( and I am glad for it)
since you unres-ed early Even I'll unres early.😃

so coming to the update.
It was great girl👏
I like how the story is progressing and not being dragged (unlike the Tv 🤢)
I loved how Shivaay has used his all power and dug out everything about the Kapoor's and their frauds.

best part in the whole update was, how Shivaay had so easily accepted that it was his fault and foolishness to just blindly trust them upon their elite status and get down to have a deal sealed with marriage.

For Shivaay to accept that he and his nam khoon khanadn, principles were truly unreasonable, this is a huge thing and I should thank Annika for the same.
because by doing so, he sets aside a part of himself aside too.
and that happening with a ease was a superb thing, no self restriction, no blame game and no emotional conflict.
well done Shivaay 👏

so will Tia play a victim card here also?
or you plan to make her evil?

because a woman who can be around any man, even after finding true love, for money cannot simply be a Victim, even though she was tortured or blackmailed, she could've alway asked for help. but since she didn't and she also accepted to be a part of destroying someone's life, She is a culprit.

I am glad that Shivaay is so openly talking about hearts,smiles and stupidity.
that too in front of his staff, because the emotionally - challenged SSO could never accept his feelings, talking about it to his mirror image was a far away thought and now he is talking, this Shivaay is totally smitten by Annika.

So, as soon as Annika was thought of, The Great Shivaay Singh Oberoi smiles and forgets his work and world. rushes off to his lady love, unfortunately sweetheart you are in a mess.

Annika, on the other hand, is pissed off, frustrated, irritated and little sad without Shivaay (but excluding that for now😆)
it is 7 pm now, she has been patiently waiting for her Billu ji, lost amidst the crowd of people, annoyed in the environment of happiness and joy.
and a little curious of that spying gaze.
all because of a certain human with bluish green eyes, who has kissed another woman ( for now let's deduct the fact of the other woman being his fiancee)
who had the audacity to walk out of the house without manofying her and then the last nail to the coffin was him ignoring her text, He Ignored.
and now he was L.A.T.E.
that's it! that was enough for the day, and she decides to call it a day, she get's up to go.

And he couldn't let that happen, his superman bhaiya and soon-to-be- superwoman bhabhi's love ride was at stake.
so he did what his's instinct at that could do the best, He screams, making everyone's ear cringe at that pitch and then Poor Rudy boy had straight out said what he wanted, he wanted Annika didi( for now) to be dropped by her Shri Shri 108 ankho kanji ankho wale bhagad billa. yet no body could catch on the clue. but Annika is smart enough so she very politely denies the idea of it.
Rudy boy dejectedly sits down and questions where his bhaiya is, and god heard him.

Annika walked out only to be bumped into her man😉
delighted at seeing him after long wait but frustrated with all of today.
karma baby karma.
you made Shivaay baby jealous yesterday - You were burning in the rage itself today.
you ignored Shivaay baby's messages and slept- You were kept at bay for a while too.

Kara baby Karma 😆

So Annika turns into a tadibaaz and straight denies Shivaay and his services but Shivaay baby is happy and excited to tame this tadibaaz billi. Perfect Cats.😆

So Shivaay threatens to Kiss her then and there if she doesn't come along with him, poor Annika tried challenging him too but backed out on the instant because she knew he could probably pull this stunt off. and other than this if he did what he has been daring to, then that would create a mess for him only, and can she see him in mess? NO ( Also whatever was between them, was just between them.). So she agrees and Shivaay takes her along with him leaving behind two happy souls who weren't able to contain their happiness. ( Haye sabko aisi Daadi mile😆😛)

So the tension in the car was exhausting and above all that billu was smiling, wrong move baby wrong move. So frustrated Annika screams.

Shivaay Kisses her and she half heartedly pulls back and questions him like a wife,
How dare you😡 and how could you.
and Shivaay again admits his true feelings and let's her know what he wanted and he is successful too.
and when he mentioned why, she noticed him properly, he looked tired, exhausted actually. and angry. So she calms him by taking him in her embrace.

perfect love, there were they, tired and worn out, now relaxing into each other's warmth. sharing through feelings and thoughts.

'I am still angry with you kissing Tia, though'

and Annika nails it😆 perfect timing to let him know that she wanted to be kissed by him and she could possibly pull off some witch's hair if she tries to even enter her (annika) premisses and Shivaay will definitely encounter her worst side.
and more than that she wanted to lighten up the environment and bring back Shivaay from all the dark deep valley.

~~~~~
Anklet that was an amazing update baby. nailing it in golden romance,
and thank you for updating this early.
I am eager for Saturday now,
excited to know how exactly Shivaay will woo his lady😳

and the way you wrote the story was fantastic, they way you unfolded everything to us was just so pleasing and so awesome, the dialogues and their feelings all on the spot.

NOW UPDATE SOON 😡

Verna aap humari Chamki ko toh jaanti hi hai😆

Love
Divs


Edited by babydevil - 8 years ago
rainbowveins thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil



Tonight's the night of our lives [:D/]

And before the go into party mode, See I told you, you'll rock the exams and finally your exams are over ( let's face it MCQ's doesn't even count as a test and here we are talking about an exam)

I can't help but write a thesis because your story lights up my mood like a rain drop does to peacock!!!
So yeah every word of this story is a chant to me. 😆

So if I give long long comments will you post the updates regularly? 😆

See I am such an angel, I have given Annika of your story another reason to show tadi to Shivaay, I mean no one is allowed to ignore their girl's message, specially when she is pissed off! Nah nah you shouldn't but SSO has done it and Annika is waiting *evil*

Sure a girl, make this Shivaay talk to the TV SSO, I know what Shivaay is going through isn't easy, his sister betrayed him for a jerk, her mother crying on a mole and then his wife being blamed in everything and then his wife blams his mother. The poor guy has no idea of what to do, but I guess a conversation between your Shivaay and Harneet's SSO would do the magic.

True Rudy says anything, lame, stupid or illogical, all of it is just adorable. Pure plain adorable
😳
So now I am your reality checker, I am sexy and I know it!

About my story *sigh* therw are lot of loopholes, I need to fix them because imagination me toh sab accha hi lagta hai but when you pen it down on a paper you see the loopholes, So I am still stuck on chapter 1 which is an introduction. So let's see and again don't keep hopes from the story because I am sure that the imagination was better
Update SOON by tonight also, asap Do you Get it 😡

Love
Divs

Yes yes I know, you have full faith in me :*
And I have full faith in YOU to know that your story will be nothing short of amazing.So just write your heart out and let me enjoy Shivika from your imagination too!

I'm already giving almost regular updates, what more do you want, hourly ones?! :P

And yeah okay you are an angel, how don't gloat too much :) Btw you seem to know a lot about these boyfriend-girlfriend issues, huh? ;) Should I talk to uncle-aunty? ;)

Along with giving me reality-checks, you also have to give me reviews about the episodes so watch today's one and tell me if I should watch it!

I get it, I get it, updating ASAP. Ek toh I'm writing while watching a super important cricket match, and upar se you're giving me dhamkis
Hehe but yep will update tonight for sure.





babydevil thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
Watch only Pinky and Annika's confrontation!
We were waiting for Kaminee to do OMM of Pinky. But seems like things are going to drag.
rainbowveins thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babydevil

Watch only Pinky and Annika's confrontation!
We were waiting for Kaminee to do OMM of Pinky. But seems like things are going to drag.


No Shivika scenes?:(
rainbowveins thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Endless-LOvE

omggg i can't wait to read the next part. i guess shivaay will run a background check on tia now. please update soon

Updated! Hope you like it :)
Nimik thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
What a tasty dish!!😆
Mit gayi bhook!!
Kissing in front of the whole fam!!
I really hope Shivaay does it in your upcoming chappies!!
Waiting till Saturday
Very impatiently!!!!
And THANK UUU!!!!!
Mystery1234 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing Update
Shivay now knows the complete truth
Curious to know what will he do to expose her
Rudy is such a darling😆
Shivika in a naughty mood
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".