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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAI92

will there any separation btw Maan and Geet??




Hehe lol why would you think that



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dont know why but my like is not working
nd its nice update
maan having accident
when gonna he at least realize his feelings
maan saying she is pretty
geet ignored geet when heard abt maan
waiting for more





Hehe hes the toughest nut to crack here so lets see


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Part 16








"Truth and roses have thorns about them



"Don't say such things ...It makes me want to steal you away. It would make me want you, He mumbled to himself before he was asleep due to tiredness. Geet on the other hand decided to give equal attention to Dev too. She reflected on her actions and found his complaining to be correct. "Why do I always hurt him, She slept with thinking these thoughts. Maan woke up early and left after preparing breakfast for her, he did not want to face her with her words still ringing in his head. Geet woke up to find his note to have her breakfast properly before leaving for school as they are going to have extra curricular activities soon.



Maan went to his site to look at the work. "It will make me want you ..., He thought.





His mind was still filled with her thoughts, "No, I should kill these thoughts, deaden these feelings, or we ...could never be together. He was thinking that and was going to step ahead when Adi pulled him back, "Sir, are you alright, you could have fallen, if you took a step ahead. He said making Maan to look below, making him realize he was standing on the third floor. "I'm fine Adi thank you. The progress is good, I'm happy with all of your hard work, He said. Adi knew something was troubling his boss, he was never so lost but decided not to ask further. "Sir we are taking care of everything properly, we will tell you if anything goes wrong, Adi said. Maan nodded and then got back to his car heading for office. "I should stop thinking about these things and concentrate on my work. I should not think of these things which I buried long back deep within, He thought.



Geet reached her school only to see Naina bullied by her so called friends. She went to them and pushed them away, "What are you guys doing."Well she wants to participate in the haunted house theme we have chosen this year, One of them said. "So...can she not, Geet asked. "Well why are you siding with her Geet, she was the one who bullied you, One of them said. "Oh, please don't give me that, you guys think I'm a fool, you too were the part of that so don't blame her at least she accepted her fault. You guys are hypocrites, just leave her alone, She said. Naina was ashamed of her deeds but she was grateful to Geet for saving her, now she understood how she must have felt when she was in her place. " Thank you for helping me,She said. "No problem we are friends now right, Geet smiled. "You have changed a lot Geet, you were never social, but it is good to see this change in you, Naina said.



"People change, and I'm happy since I got my family back , it made me trust people. I was scared at first but then, when I reached out I understood people did the same to me, She smiled. "Do you need help in anything, Geet asked. "Umm...we have a month for the preparations and I was making a ghost costume, but guess they did not liked it, She smiled sadly. "Forget about them, let's get started, She said. Geet helped her and both got along well. On the other hand, Dev helped Kia who was happy to be with him. She secretly liked him, but for him it was just a task to get over with so he can go to Geet. He was annoyed at the wrong answers she gave but poor Kia was trying her best just that she was a beauty without brains unlike Geet. "Kia, I can't believe you could be this stupid, Dev said annoyed. "I..I'm trying, She said. "Its a simple equation, if Geet were here she would have done that in minutes, He spoke irritated. "Well I'm sorry I'm not as smart as Geet, every person is not the same Dev, I think its high time you should stop comparing two people, She spoke annoyed. After the school, Geet waited for him, and they both went to her home together.What happened you look annoyed, She asked.



"Kia ...I can't believe shes that stupid, He said. Geet thought to divert his mind so she asked, "Dev why do you like me. "Ah I guess because you are pretty and..., before he could complete Geet spoke annoyed, "So you like me only for my looks huh , then you should have chosen Kia shes the prettiest in our class."I don't like empty heads her IQ level must be less than even Sameera, He said. "Then why ...leave it ..., She pouted. "Geet, you know something about roses. The wild bushes are needed to be trimmed to make the rose bloom . You are like that rose which even facing the trouble to go through the trimming blooms beautifully . You have faced mant troubles still you have faced them bravely and decided to bloom. So that is I want this Rose to always bloom with or without me, He finished looking at her.





Geet was shocked to see the love he harbored for her he was willing to do anything to keep her happy. "Could I love him like that. Am I even worthy for this affection ", She thought. She hugged him and tears escaped her eyes .They were happy not knowing this is just the calm before the storm. They reached her home. Upon entering Dev questioned, "Your house seem quieter than usual."Sameera Di went back to the States so ..., She said.



"Oh so you must be living with Yash bhai an..., Before he could complete she interrupted, "Nah, Yash bhai moved back to his place yesterday after she left and me and Maan are living here. Somehow, the idea of them living alone made Dev insecure, but he tried not to make it obvious. "Hey Dev, help me with this question, She said opening her textbook. "Okay, let me see it, He said taking his seat next to her. They completed their homework and Dev was leaving when he saw the photo frame which was broken by Sameera. "You fixed it, He asked. "Yes, actually I could not find a replacement for it so I used tapes to fix it. It is the only thing we have left as our family picture, She said. "That is really good, He smiled. "Okay, I should get going now, will meet you at school tomorrow, Dev said. "Geet...do you...ah forget it, bye, He said taking his leave. "I'm having weird thoughts, I should not ask her if she still ...thinks of him as family, Dev thought. On his way back he found Maan returning from his work, "Hi Dev, you are leaving. "Uhh...yes, He spoke. "Thank you for taking care of Geet, I could only rely on you, Maan said. "I..Its nothing...I will be leaving then, Dev said leaving as he noticed something different in both of them. Geet oblivious to it, while Maan hiding something. He smiled sadly knowing that he would be hurt eventually but if needed he will do anything for her. "A Rose has thorns Geet, though beautiful it does hurt , but even it is painful ...I will do anything, He smiled sadly looking at Maan's retreating figure.



"You early today, Geet asked as Maan entered . "Umm...no ..I..I just came for a change of clothes I will be leaving tonight, He said still avoiding to look at her but not making it obvious as he knew she would be hurt. "Oh okay, you are not around that much...I kind of miss our happy times, She said. "I'm just a call away Geet, remember if you need anything I will return to you, He said still facing his back to her . His messed up feelings not letting him face her. They had their diner, Maan asking Geet about school and then him leaving instructing her to lock the house safely.



Days passed with Dev helping Kia improving her grades and Geet busy with Naina to help out in the fiesta coming up. Other students who were mean to Naina apologized too after realizing their folly and now everyone was helping each other to make everything perfect. Naina now had a boyfriend, who liked her for herself and she was happy. Geet was happy seeing her friend happy. Dev on the other hand was thinking deeply when Kia interrupted, "Hey Dev why are you so gloomy, something wrong between you and Geet, Kia said. "It is nothing like that, He smiled faintly. "Why don't you just break up with her, if you are always hurt, She said bluntly. "This is nothing of your concern and don't go judging Geet,He spoke angered, he hated if anyone said anything for Geet.



"Well, I just said what I think, if you have any doubt why don't you just go and ask her directly, if she loves you or not if she doesn't answer right away that means she is doubtful about her future with you, it works just try that, She said. "Just get your textbook we will finish the important topic for the next test, He said. She did not say anything further but his gloomy face did not go down well with her. Dev went back to their classroom to find Geet missing. "Hey Dev, Geet is in the changing room, we are trying the ghost costume for tomorrow, Naina said. "Alright, I will just wait outside, He said. Kia's words echoed in his head and he thought to give it a try, "Hey Geet do you love me...Ah forget what I asked. Sor..., Before he could complete the door was opened and Geet came out in a funny ghost costume saying, "I do, I really do love you. "Hahaha, what is with that costume, He laughed looking at her looking funny. "This is the best we could come up with, forget it I won't talk to you, She pouted. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry but you are looking so funny in that, He said trying to control his laughter. "I want to go home now if you are done with your laughing session, She pouted. "Let's get you home, He smiled.



The next day, was the awaited day for the children, everyone was busy with their stalls and other preparations. Unfortunately for them it started raining due to which many guardians could not attend the fiesta but still the children celebrated amongst themselves. "We are here, Yash spoke stopping his car. "Here where, Maan spoke looking ahead to find themselves outside Geet's school. "You moron I have an important meeting today, why did you drive us here. I'm at fault to trust you for driving me to the office when my car was gone for servicing, Maan said annoyed.










Here he was trying to avoid Geet and this idiotic friend of his just drove him where he did not want to go. "Oh come on Maan, don't you want to see Geet. You are coming early to office and going late to home, you are hardly spending any time with her, Yash said nonchalantly. "I will spend all the time with her once this project which your dad loaded on me is done, so just stop fooling around and let's go back, Maan spoke gritting his teeth. "Oh Maan, you are all work and no play, and since we are here, I'm going in to enjoy, Yash spoke grinning and deliberately took his important folder making Maan to run behind him. "Get that thing back here, Yash, I'm getting late, Maan yelled. He lost him in the crowd. Dev was passing by the corridors when he noticed Maan. "Maan bhai..., He mumbled. "Dev, I'm free for now let's go and visit different stalls, Geet said. "What's wrong is something the matter, She asked looking at his gloomy look.



"Ah nothing, lets go, He said. They went to different stalls to enjoy but Dev's mind was filled with something which he was dreading to ask her knowing what she would say, but then he wanted the best for her, though knowing what he was going to ask is going to hurt her as well as him. "Geet, is Sameera back, He said gaining her attention. "Nope, strangely she isn't though Yash bhai doubts her intentions, Geet said. "Geet, do you still think Maan bhai as your brother, He said after a pause. Geet looked up shocked at his question, "We are family that is why we live together right. That is how we can be happy, She said not getting his question. "You are not related in any way, so why do you want to live with this lie, He prodded. "I'm not getting you, She said looking at him. He averted his gaze trying not to falter but then took a deep breath and asked, "Geet, didn't for once it crossed you mind that you might be in love with Maan bhai.










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Part 17




"If you could read my mind, you'd be in tears



"Did it never crossed your mind that you might be in love with him, that is why you even after knowing the truth, you want to stay with him living in the same lie, He asked. "What are you saying Dev. Why are you saying such things. You are not making any sense, She said. "Geet, you are not his sister. Isn't that makes him just another guy to you, He said. He know hes hurting her but he wanted her to see what others and now even him can see. He did not know how deeply his words affected her. "Geet, I love you but what do you think about Maan bhai is important for me to know.Think about it, Saying this he left. "Why is he saying all this, Geet thought looking at the time making a dash for her classroom to the opposite side through a shortcut. She banged the door but it was locked.



"Why is he saying all this, if that was the case I should have been scared of him, wasn't I scared of men from what I have gone through, She thought. "He is ...important ...but.., She was still in her thoughts when someone came from behind and banged on the door causing it to open. "Maan, what are you doing hereShe said startled. "I came here thanks to Yash, I lost him in the crowd when I saw you here banging the door. Geet you are soaked, He said looking at her. "Well if you hadn't noticed you are soaked as well, She replied. "Here wear this, He said handing her his coat. "But I'm not feeling cold, She said. "Just wear it, He said covering her up. She looked at her dress and due to the rain it looked a little indecent, she looked down embarrassed. They entered the school and Maan found Yash. "You idiot, where were you, He said annoyed. "Oh Maan you found Geet, He said.



"I'm late for my shift, She said making a dash to her classroom. "School is fun, Yash asked Maan who nodded. "I think I can lay back and let others protect her here, Maan said making Yash stunned. "Maan stop all this you need to always be by her side that is what you have been working for all your life.You have been her personal robot for fourteen years, how can you just let go.Though I think you should stop being a robot for once and enjoy life, Yash said. "I know but..., Before he could complete, she came back after minutes with Maan's jacket in her hand in her ghost costume. "Maan, here I forgot your jacket, She said. "Ooh Geet what is this, Yash asked looking at her costume. "Its my costume for the role, She said.








Maan stifled his laughter but could not and burst out laughing, "Hahaha you look so funny Geet. Yash looked at his friend happy to see him laughing and then looked back at Geet. Geet for a moment was lost seeing him laughing but then she realized he was laughing at her, "Stop laughing."Alright, but you look funny, He said. "Hey Geet give your costume to me, and you two can go enjoy, Yash said. "No Yash bhai, you won't fit into that it is small for you, Geet said. "Oh come on now give that to me and you two go and spend some time together too, Yash said. Yash somehow got into the costume. "Now go you two lemme live my schooldays again, He said.



On the other hand, Kia went to Dev finding him sitting on the staircase and showed him the stuff toy she won as a prize, "Hey Dev look what I won at the game. "Its nice, He smiled faintly. "Are you sad, you know I just saw Geet with her older handsome brother walking all happy and cozy, may be you are jealous of him, She laughed. "Hmm...now that I think about it, may be I'm jealous of him, He said looking ahead. "Isn't it a little gross for her not to be with you but with her sibling...They don't look like siblings though and ..., She blabbered. "Don't badmouth her, Dev said seriously standing up to go when he felt something soft hit his head and then followed by Kia voice. "You are such an idiot Dev, why are you hurting yourself being with her. I was just trying to cheer you up. I really love you Dev, why don't you just leave her and be with me instead, She cried and hugged him.



Yash went leaving them alone. "Whatever he says, I still have work, Maan spoke. Geet looked at him a little disappointed, he looked at her and asked, "Do you want me to stay Geet. She was caught a little off guard by that and turned towards the window putting her hand out letting the raindrops fall on her hand, "No, you should just leave, its raining anyway and very few parents came, so you just stand out. "Hey you are getting wet, Maan said pulling her hand inside. She was a little startled by that and Maan just left her hand looking at her weird reaction. "I want to be with him...I want to be apart from him...Whenever I'm with him ..I'm so happy that I feel like crying...does that mean ...I..all this time really loved him..., She thought and tears fell from her eyes as a realization dawned upon her.








"Hey Geet, why are you crying, Maan said worried looking at her cry. "Maan, I don't understand why Dev said that, why does he has to compare himself with you..I don't understand, She spoke bawling her eyes out making Maan worried.



"Hey Geet calm down, lets talk about it to..., before he could complete his eyes fell on the staircase where he saw the sight making his blood boil and even Geet noticed that ...Kia hugging Dev.







"What the hell is that, what does he think hes doing cheating with another girl, let me beat the living hell out of that punk who dared to cheat you, Maan said dashing to give Dev a piece of his mind but he was held back by Geet, "Maan, please stop it. "What do you mean stop it...did you not see..., Before he could say anything he was interrupted by Geet, "He is not like that, I know and it is between me and him let us sort it out. Maan was stunned and hurt by her reply but he still calmed down, "It is alright, I'm getting late for the work so we will meet at our home if I get time to be back. He smiled and patted her head lovingly before leaving. She looked at his retreating figure and started walking back to her classroom.



Maan saw Dev coming from the other side who greeted him, "Hello Maan bhai, leaving already. Maan was still angered at that sight and pushed Dev to the wall, "What the hell was that. Are you cheating on Geet.







"What if I was..., Dev tried to provoke him. "Don't...you dare, He spoke coldly. Maan inhaled sharply trying to calm himself, "You are the only person whom I can trust with her. "I'm not your replacement Maan bhai, I am my own person, He said. This rubbed Maan on the wrong side and he held him by his collar and spoke in a low tone, "Well then why don't you just grow up and take my place already. Maan left him and walked away. "I wish it was easy Maan bhai, I tried but..., He smiled sadly.



Geet entered the classroom to find Naina yelling on other girls. "How dare you confess to Dev, don't you know he is Geet's boyfriend, Naina yelled at Kia. "Oh come on Naina, Kia is prettier than Geet, and I'm sure he must have accepted her, One of the girls said. Geet heard all this, "He is not that type of a person. "How can you be so sure Geet, Naina said. "Geet is right, he rejected me on the spot saying he will love Geet always even if it hurts him hes more happy with her around, Kia revealed making everyone including Geet stunned. "Why are you hurting him Geet, I just don't get it. Please don't do it anymore, Kia cried. She really loved Dev from their middle school but she knew Dev always liked Geet, she liked Geet as well as she was not a hypocrite. Seeing the person you love get hurt just bought out these emotions out of her, though she regretted immediately apologizing to Geet.



"Hey Geet, Dev just fell down, A classmate told her. She rushed to him. "Dev, are you alright, She asked. "I'm fine, ah I just slipped its nothing, He said.








"I'm sorry, She spoke after a while. Dev smiled sadly, "So you finally realize it right. I did try to compete with him but I guess, this feeling can not be changed right. "I'm so sorry, I..I'm not worthy of your love. Why did you say all that, if you would have not then may be we could have been like always, She said guiltily tears flowing down her eyes. "Geet...I just want you to know that you deserve all the happiness in the world, even if its not me, I want you to be happy. Never think you are not worthy, you are more deserving for a happy future than anyone, so I will let you free, go and find your happiness, Dev smiled.







She gave one final look at him before turning to go, "Goodbye Dev, I wish you could forgive me and be a great lawyer like you always wanted to be.











She left leaving Dev to shed the tears he had been holding back for her sake, "I forgive you Geet. Our time together will always be one of the happiest in my life . I still love you . Geet went with the newfound feelings not knowing what a shock is waiting for her.











So here are the next updates, please do give your honest reviews regarding them ...next update will be on Tuesday 😃







So how many of you think that Dev was wrong hehe, I changed the actor just because he was a positive role here..😆😆






Precap - Twist 😈





A Short Teaser - "I don't know what do you mean by giving my heart to you ..."


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Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
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Fabulous update. It seems Yash is an honest friend who wants to help Maan from his Dad and Sameera. But one thing not clear is why they insists Maan to go back to them. Yash asks Geet never to leave Maan. She tells Sameera to let Maan stay wherever he wants. Maan's accident brought her more closer to him. It's natural for Dev to get suspicious on Maaneet's relationship as he feels neglected most of the time. Superb.
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Originally posted by: payal.gupta177

Fabulous update. It seems Yash is an honest friend who wants to help Maan from his Dad and Sameera. But one thing not clear is why they insists Maan to go back to them. Yash asks Geet never to leave Maan. She tells Sameera to let Maan stay wherever he wants. Maan's accident brought her more closer to him. It's natural for Dev to get suspicious on Maaneet's relationship as he feels neglected most of the time. Superb.



Hmm why will be revealed later hehe ...it is a very complicated and tangled story ...I'm trying to simplify it


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great updates👍🏼
Waiting for next
Update soon
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superb updates
maan is fighting with himself and controlling his his feeling for geetand finally her feeling for maan .iam very sad for dev he very nice but for our geet we want only maan no offence

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