my first fanfic, plz see

C.B.I Branch office in Kolkata

Officer- May i come in sir?
D.C.P - yes come in officer, i am waiting for u.
Officer- Sir itni subah subah apne mujhe bulaya?koi important case hai?
D.C.P- yes officer,tumne famous archaeologist Mr.Joshi ke death ke bare main newspaper main padha hai na?
Officer- yes sir, bohut hi interesting case hai
D.C.P- & Government ne yeh case C.B.I ko diya, & tumse best officer mujhe nahin mil sakta is case ko handel karne ke liye,main chata hoon tum one week andar "Malda"ke liye nikal jao, & woha ki local police station se tumhe help milega
Officer- ok sir
D.C.P- tumhe case ki detail Dutta se mil jayega, so best of luck Rajveer
raj- yes sir.


Rajveer Chaterjee, 27 years old, born & raised in kolkata, 2 years hua hai usne C.B.I join kiya hai,kabil officer hai, kolkata
main hi posted hai, ghar main uske mummy papa hai, uske papa bhi C.B.I main the, filhaal retire kiya hai,ghar main wife bhi hai,
7 months hua hai shaadi hua hai uski,ek bengali girl se, naam hai Naina,arranged marriage hai.

Naina chaterjee, 24 years old, she also born & raised in Kolkata, bohut zyada bolti hai, & bohut charming hai, shaadi karne ka
irada nahin tha, but gharwalo ki kehne se karna para, History main Naina M.A kar chuki hai.


Rajveer shaadi ke baad Delhi main ek case ke silsile main chala gaya tha,Naina ghar main thi, coz shaadi ke baad bohut rasham hoti hai,
so isliye ek durse ko samajne ka chance nahin mila, Raj jab ghar aake bola usse "Malda"jana hai, to uske parents ne kaha Naina ko bhi
sath le jao, bohut sari argument ke baad Raj maan gaya.




Malda, situated in North Bengal, Malda main ek chota sa village hai,"Gaur", this place is very important in Bengal history,
yeh jagah King Shasanka ka waqt Bengal ka Capital tha, jab India main Mughal empire tha, tab bhi yeh jagah Bengal ki
history main bohut important thi, filhhal yeh jagah totally isolated hai, zyada log bhi nahin rehte,sirf winter ke waqt local log
yaha picnic manane aate hai, filhaal West Bengal Government ne yeh jagah ke taraf dyan diya hai, maintainance ki ja rahi hai,
Archaeological Department se bhi log aakar research kar rahe hai, bohut sari objects, structures & materials dug up from this old
site, lekin kuch din pehle famous archaeologist Mr.Joshi ke murder ke baad sare kam main foolstop lag chuka hai, local logo ka kehna
hai yeh jagah par sharp(curse) hai.government ne yeh case C.B.I ko diya hai.


First time main fiction likh rahi hu, life main first time, plz batana kaisa laga

Nice start. Wow so no love marriage between the 2. oh well, hope 2 see some love scenes as they go through the journey of Marriage