Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: aamias
i havent read it fully u ended it 😲 i will try my level best to write an comment

Don't worry Asmita dear . Take your time..

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey Nita..my doll...
Fantabulous update...well I'm pretty late...sorry about that...but trust me from chapter 10 ..11 and finally 12 and sadly last too..it was a rollercoaster ride...which I cherished truly...at the start of this tale I was not sure about Povs style of writing but after few updates..I seriously enjoyed it...it's amazing to read people Povs...so different from each other...two person in similar situation but observing completely different things...thinking even grasping entirely different thing..which I loved most about this story..

your lifestyle ...upbringing ..your friends etc all contribute to your way of thinking...and behaving...both swaragini and sanlak..brought up together...but were poles apart...well twist were indeed terrific...few made me all panicky...but it was worth it...
made story spicy and captivating. ..

baby thank u for this brilliant swasan journey...again we all witness swasan emerging stronger after all hardships..their love withstand all storms...I loved Sanky's maturity which I'm in love with all over again...sometime I wonder if actually such person exist which is so perfect. ...how I wish I get someone like him...pray that I get someone like him...plzzz
Swara was adorable too here...I liked how she handled every hardship...n was upfront in terms of sharing thing with Sanky...she hide some things from him..but majorly she revealed about laksh..which was important...ram..annu dp..we're great..laksh..shekhar and ragini were important for story..but as usual were disappointing. .u seriously crafted them such..I hated them till the end...hehe

So here I'm ending my blabbering. ..thank u again for this beautiful journey..kissy for this...muahhh
love
Talia

Hi Talia dearest,

You liked it then I am happy Talia dear.. That the only thing that matters to me.. Honestly I wasn't confident about pic style too.. But I write four to five chapters because it was fun to write and I was only going to post it in IF when I complete it but as always rushed it up.. And I am glad you liked it..

Yeah raglak never played negative roles in my FF.. So this one was tough to write indeed.. I kind of missed writing about the goofy Laksh and his brother.. And it has very less ragini and she was never an prominent character.. Only Laksh was a the main villian

You will get your sanskar don't worry.. I am really happy you liked swasan in this journey dear.. It was not blabbering it was such an lovely feedback I already read it more than few times.. Thanks dear once again for the lovely feddback

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nyna dear .. You know I love you right.. Will reply back to your lovely comments soon.. Let me update the Epilogue first okay..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Res for the epilogue

Unres

A real cute one, a recounting of all the special moments of everyone's lives, what gives them happiness. If I starting writing, it would be like Swara's special day listing, she has a thousand of them so every day would have at least one and some would have more than three😊

Regarding that bit about Sanskaar not sharing, you feel that way with babies, right, they are so cute and adorable, that you simply do not want to share them. But kids also have their own minds, and slowly they decide whom they want to cling to, often to their advantage. But even then, kids are adorable.❤️

The ending picture, of Sanskaar reading to his little princess, was beautiful, indeed a fairy tale ending.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Dear Nita, (I'm in love with your full name)
The epilogue was lovely. Swara got a lovely family with her dad and mother-in -law as mom. Sanskar and Swaran both filled their life with love, excitement of finding each other every day and a bundle of joy. I have a question. I noticed in your all stories Swasan's baby girl' s name is Asha. Is there any special reason for it?

Perfect happily ever after for this modern day's not so perfect Cinderella and her Prince Charming.

Love,
Dyuti

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hey nita...

Stupendous epilogue...I had a huge smile pasted on my face while reading it...at few places I blushed and chuckled.to...it was a complete package...Loved it...relished it...

Well I missed raglak in epilogue.I don't know.. why I guess I desire for proper closures..wants to know want exactly they are doing in future...last they were with shekhar.I remember...just wondering..

One more thing..what is this asha mystery???all your ff have asha as swasan kid..I'm curious to know the reason...do reveal...

On the whole .Love u for yet another marvellous journey..now excited for next...muahhh

Love n kissy

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Dear nita...

Thanks for all the pms and finally caught up with the ending...must say loved it all...

The concept of families and love has been beautifully molded together cannot say how much I love the simplicity of the tale...

Loved the way the family bonded...like you so beautifully put it..." not all stories start like a fairy tale but with time one can hope to get theres"

"Have faith to seek and one shall find...and most importantly don't judge or let other judge you see past it and you will soon learn that you can have a happily everafter after all"

Love the bonding of the trio and I will miss this tale a lot. ...

Nita love all your writings...but have to say this one has to be my favourite...

Take care

Razia

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

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unres chapter 7
wow Nita it's so amazing & beautiful.
secret twist well done that's means they knew each other from childhood.
is swara remember like sanskar their childhood.
superv update dear
so swasan meet is not coincident it actually sanskar looking for her to meet let meet her father. another secret ram is her father & she living now his house without knowing that.
but his impression on her was bad after met that he wanted to examine her first.
so swara actually married laksh oh sanskar mother want she hide it from sanskar & give them a chance & she have fear but want to see their future together.
once their no one for her to care & now she overwhelmed seeing concerned for her from three people look like she get family again.
let see what next.

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#210

unres 8
beautiful update Nita dear
sanskar fearing that if he tell truth of her father he will lost her.
so here sujata is a match maker I liked her & swara bond.
such a low person laksh is he & ragini always my hate list for life time he played with heart just for bet hope sanskar give that hippo a good lesson.

atlast swara open up to sanskar but I don't think she disclose about her marriage with laksh to sanskar.

let's see what store next to me I know everybody knew what happened.
Take care buddy
Bye

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