SS- ||Despite The Flaws|| Shot 2 up(28th May)

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SS- ||Despite The Flaws||
Hello all,
Always wanted to try something like this, don't know how it turned out..!






Background Story:
After Anika meets Shivaay at Good Luck Stall and They realise Mahi is faking up. They decide to expose his truth in front of family and give him over to police

Here Mahi is just a person who got Shivaay's face by plastic surgery and got voice modulation done, on orders of Kamini, who wanted to take revenge on Shakti.

Shot 1-"Flawed...!"
"Main hoon Shivaay, ye Nakli Shivaay hai!"
He said entering from the rare end of the Mansion. With police behind him.
Anika found me.
After exchange of curses the fakester was dragged away by the police.
Pinky was glad and hugged him. "Tu thiik toh hai...!"
He nodded, his face still showed distress and a pinch of anger.
The family questioned him about the entire fiasco and he told them how he was kidnapped and held hostage and also how Khanna had traced him down because of Anika's request.
Everyone looked at Anika with gratitude. When suddenly what Shivaay spoke had them dropping their jaws in shock.
"Pehle Mujhe lagaa ki ye sab Anika ne kiya hai!" He said keeping a stone on his heart, while Anika looked up at him with wide eyes.
Rudra-"Bhaiya ye aap kya bol rahe hai..!"
Shivaay- "Anika ka sach..!"
Anika stood their fear drowning her down. She gulped hard. What was he talking?

Shivaay-" Kyun Anika.." He said his eyes squeezing in anger and pain.

Daadi-"Billu ye tu kya bol raha hai...
Shivaay-"Sach...bol raha hoon Daadi...Kyun Anika batao sab ko...!" He managed to speak with his jaw clenched and eyes accusing.
Anika- "Shivaay..aap ye..!"
Shivaay-"Oh don't you dare Lie, Anika.!"
He screamed, shocking everyone.

Omkara-"Shivaay..! What's happening...?"
Shivaay- " Anika...baatao sab jaana chaathe hain...kya hua?? Nahi...main bataata hoon...You remember, during this entire Gaytri fiasco, I doubted her...I thought ye Uss Aurat ke saath milli hui hai..guess what I was Right! All of this was her plan..! After that incident in the temple...she met Gayatri and cooked up this plan with her...and then she entered our lives...my life...our house...!

Anika-"Shivaay... Aap galat samaj rahe hain...main maanti hoon ki haan main iss garh mein aap sab ke against proof lens aayi thii...main ek social volunteer reh chuki hoon...Uss din Mandir ke bahar main Gayatri se milli...and I couldn't see her breaking, she asked me for help, she seemed genuine...phir main yahan aayi...aur jab yahan aayi ab Maine jaana kia aap log waise nahi hai jaise Maine socha thaa...aap logon ke upar toh khud hi mushkilo ka pahad thaa..attacks hote thee . tab Maine Gayatri ko seedha seedha keh diya thaa...lekin wo nahi maani..

Shivaay had had enough-"Just Shut Up Anika!Aur kitna Dhoka dogii him sab ko..." He said clearly hurt.

Anika sobbing-"Shivaay meri baat toh suniye...main nahi jaanti thii kii wo aurat intni paagal hai...lekin jab mujhe pata chalta toh maine bahut samjaane ki koshish ki usse... Magar wo aapki family pe attacks karti gayi...aur phir USS kaa murder...aur itna raita phel gaya...ki mujhe kabhi sach bataane ka mauka hi nahi mila...!"

All looked at her disgusted.
OmRu looked sad.
Shivaay was hurt and his anger only increased.

Daadi walked away, while Anika tried to stop her. "Putar tune Billu ka nahi hum sab ka dil dukhaaya hai...!"

All left, only Shivaay, Anika and His brothers remained.
Shivaay walked up to her. "Sab jhoot thaa naa..sab...!??" He said his eyes were wet.
Anika nodded in a No, tears flowing down her cheeks.
Shivaay-"Uss subha mujhe pata chalta iske baare mein...kidnapping se pehle...! Aur kya hai plan Tumhara.?"

Anika held his hand, -"Shivaay I m sorry, mujhe se galti hui...lekin sab sach thaa...wo ehsaas bhi wo dard bhi wo farq bhi sab s..
Shivaay raised his finger pointing at her and screamed-"Anika...don't you dare...!" His brothers were now by his side, holding him.
Omkara looked at Anika as she cried.
"Chal Shivaay!" He said turning him.

Shivaay got free of his hold and looked at her-"Get out of my life forever...! I don't want to see your face.! Never Anika... Never!" He spat in anger and hurt.

He was escorted by his brothers up the stairs.
She looked at him leaving and fell to the floor crying. She din't know this small mistake of her past could blow up the trust they shared. She deserved it. She should have told him. But how..things had been out of control...and then Daksh , ACP, Tia, she had joined him at battle and forgotten to settle the past and it had come knocking.



"Main Tumhara sooraj hoon! Bharosa hain naa Anika mujh pe...! Tumhe poori Zindagi iss Tadibaaz ke saath guzaarni hai..aadat daalo!"


She cried bitterly sitting on the floor of the now dark living hall, as she remembered those words, was it so easy for him to leave her like that, why din't he understand like he always did. She cried. She was in darkness, she needed him.


"Anika main tumhe chod ke kabhi nahi jaane doknga naa main tumhe kabhi jaane doonga! I promise"


She cried, but her tears were dry, he had left her, swearing to never see her face again. She loved him, dint he know that? He can't break promises like that!! He can't leave her.
He did leave her.He hated her now. Why? Why ?

After what seemed like forever, she picked herself up and walked to the exit, she din't glance back.

Was it so easy for him to forget all she did for him? He saw her one tiny mistake and was blinded to his biggest mistake? She din't go around begging him to marry her, he had forced the marriage on her. "Mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai!" She said to herself and she knew she lied.

She loved him with his flaws, she knew he was wrong but she had forgiven him, accepted him with his faults, cause she had fallen for the flawed man.!!

Maybe they weren't meant to be,a voice in her head spoke.
I hope its a lie, said another feeble voice.

That's why she never wanted to fall in love, it was very difficult to rise after that.

She had feared the pain of love and that was what exactly was happening. Her heart pained. Was their bond so weak.? Her one flaw and he would just let her go.?

Why did she have to love him so much? Tears reappeared as she stepped out.
She dint want to look back but she did,with an undying hope that he would come and tell her "Main sab theek kar doonga Anika!"
Alas she just stared into darkness that now engulfed the Mansion.

P.S
Hope it was worth the read.
Waiting for feedbacks.!



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Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Can I 'res'?:-)


I do not know if I will be able to unres or not!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so interesting!Please update soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Can I 'res'?:-)


I do not know if I will be able to unres or not!


Nooo...

Dont read this...read Love By Chance first😆

Nautanki...!!😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rainbowveins

This is so interesting!Please update soon :)


Really?!?!
Thanks was a lil apprehensive about it...!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res
__________
Unres
That is totally new.
It was awesome...
Story line is indeed very interesting..
Anika met Gayatri...
Shivaay came to know about this...
Misunderstanding...
Cannot wait to read more...
Please Update soon
Waiting😳
P.S. Ending will be positive or negative??😳
Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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An annika that made a mistake👏👏👏
finally ... i like annika but being mahan in every FF,Os,SS & in the show gets on my nerve😈

and i don't really blame shivaay for feeling hurt...the revelation just happened and he along with everyone else are in shock

but shouldn't she be like re kindling his trust in her???
u know fighting for her love and everything ???

the q she asked works both ways ... how can he leave her so easily then how did she just agree when he said leave????

i don't know how this is going to unfold but i hope it won't be shivaay apologizing and running from one place to another to be forgiven

i know i am evil😈...

thanx for the amazing new concept (which by the way have been playing in mind for a while when it comes to the show,u know kind of a grey annika)

great update👏👏 ... continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: EnasZ

An annika that made a mistake👏👏👏

finally ... i like annika but being mahan in every FF,Os,SS & in the show gets on my nerve😈

and i don't really blame shivaay for feeling hurt...the revelation just happened and he along with everyone else are in shock

but shouldn't she be like re kindling his trust in her???
u know fighting for her love and everything ???

the q she asked works both ways ... how can he leave her so easily then how did she just agree when he said leave????

i don't know how this is going to unfold but i hope it won't be shivaay apologizing and running from one place to another to be forgiven

i know i am evil😈...

thanx for the amazing new concept (which by the way have been playing in mind for a while when it comes to the show,u know kind of a grey annika)

great update👏👏 ... continue soon


O shoot...
This was going to be calmer...I guess...

I tried Grey Anika... Its hard..!

Ahh...will keep ur comment in mind and give a little bit of Anika running for him...as u expect..

Honestly I don't know how it will turn out...I will write as it goes...hope I don't disappoint..!

Thanks

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: water9786

Res

__________
Unres
That is totally new.
It was awesome...
Story line is indeed very interesting..
Anika met Gayatri...
Shivaay came to know about this...
Misunderstanding...
Cannot wait to read more...
Please Update soon
Waiting😳
P.S. Ending will be positive or negative??😳


My endings are always positive⭐️
So glad people are actually liking this.!
Thank You Chhaya..!😊
Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa


O shoot...
This was going to be calmer...I guess...

I tried Grey Anika... Its hard..!

Ahh...will keep ur comment in mind and give a little bit of Anika running for him...as u expect..

Honestly I don't know how it will turn out...I will write as it goes...hope I don't disappoint..!

Thanks


@bold : i noticed all writers in general (in IF) can't seem to imagine annika as some 1 who makes a mistake which is as i said annoying😡😡

however, u deserve a big round of applause for having the courage to do it & thinking out of the box 👏

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