The Feeling called Love (AR fanfic)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ppl....this is kiran....welll i am a newbie in the section of dmg cuz i recently started wtaching this draama and totally fell for it...and now i got this incredibly weird idea out of nowhere to write a fanfic abt this hospital finky...lo0lz....anyways...here goes the intro...hope u like it

first of all the main characters

Dr.Aman Mehta: Rajeev Khandelwal
Dr. Dua Khan: Aamna Shareef
Dr. Armaan Mallik: Karan
DR. Riddhima Singh: Shilpa (both as in DMG)

otehr characters
for now....dr. anjali...others will bbe introduced later!!!

so do tell me whether i shud continue or not..plzplzpzlzplz...lawlz....tcz...luv kiran

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Posted: 18 years ago
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The Feeling called 'Love"


Life had perhaps come to a standstill for her. She had been left alone in the middle of the road, not knwing where to go, whom to turn to. She had to go ahead but the darkness that lay ahead frightened her, the emptiness inside her cut her deep at heart. She culd do nothing. She was the most capable intern of the year, working at the best hospital in one of the biggest cities in the world, she had ppl who called them her frends, yet she was alone, miserable. The cold, thrashing winds slapped her face as she walked on into the emptiness, but she felt nothing, for the pain inside her was above all. She had been stranded by the one person whom she had truely given out her heart and soul to, and now there was nowhere to go.
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The face that loomed in front of his face whenever he closed his eyes could not let him sleep. Those haunting eyes, the look of disbelief in them. He had truely betrayed her, lost her for good. She would never come back to him, he had seen it in his eyes, the look of loneliness and pain, and the hurt he had caused her. The face that came in front of his eyes whenever he opened his eyes couldnt let him concentrate, or block away the thoughts that came into his mind. Amazing wasnt it, that the beautiful face in front of him had caused tears to come into the eyes of the most beautiful woman he had ever met, at heart and soul. He looked around the room and stood by the window, as tears ran down his cheeks.
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Life had undoubtedly played a dirty joke on her. The reality of the betrayal just culd not get out of her, even the next morning when she woke up. Her red, swollen eyes were the indication that she had cried herself to sleep, for sleep wouldnt cum to her wenever she closed her eyes. The face wouldnt o away, the memories wont stop haunting her. Ironic how she had thought to be the most miserable woman in the world last nite, when she did not know that her own best friend was suffering the same feeling, stranded on a deserted road.
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The rushy airport and the blockade of ppl couldnt even keep the sounds out of his mind. He could hear those words, over and over again. He put his hands oer his ears many times to block that voice out, but it seemed to cum back the moment he removed his hands from his ears. That voice, those words, the pain just wudnt go. He had learnt his lesson, but yet was trying to flee from it. His life had taken such a shap turn he himself cudnt figure out what had happened. He thought running away would help ease the pain.Alas, he did not know.
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Four broken hearts, Four broken souls....One Night!!!! What fate beholds them together???? Read it out to find out more.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice FF Kiran..
it was jus superbb.. i realli like it..
do cont it hun..lookin forward to read moe😛
N congrtazz on startin ur new FF😳

Lotsa luv:Hira😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!! You deserve a standing ovation for such a wonderful explantion of the characters, portraying their feelings and thoughts so well!! 👏

Continue soon...wow I cant say much but I think Aman is the one that betrayed Dua but Ridhima and Armaan were the duo's best friend! hehe...or the other way around...do continue and unravel this mystery soon!! I can;t wait for more...you are too good!!

Kajal 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hira_786

nice FF Kiran..
it was jus superbb.. i realli like it..
do cont it hun..lookin forward to read moe😛
N congrtazz on startin ur new FF😳

Lotsa luv:Hira😛



heyyy!!! thanks a lot yaaar....i am working om the first part...will be posted soon....!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Armaan*

Wow!! You deserve a standing ovation for such a wonderful explantion of the characters, portraying their feelings and thoughts so well!! 👏

Continue soon...wow I cant say much but I think Aman is the one that betrayed Dua but Ridhima and Armaan were the duo's best friend! hehe...or the other way around...do continue and unravel this mystery soon!! I can;t wait for more...you are too good!!

Kajal 😊



lawlz...thanks a lot kajal...actually i thought that using the flashback technique wud be a pretyy gud idea....and btw how cum u r so quick to guess wats gonna happen ahahhaha...lawlz...well wat u thought was not exactly wat i had in mind but sumthing near it hahahahaha.....thanks a lot!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow yaaar tht was really gud plz continu sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

He had always been an insomniac. One of the several reasons he had chosen to become a doctor. He never could figure out why he could not sleep. Perhaps he was psychotic. Perhaps it was the study pressure. But he had always been an achiever: good looks, high-achieving grades, degrees from world-known universities. Not to count the reputation he had gained in the region to be the best cardiothoracic surgeon. What else could you ask for????

This was Dr. Aman Mehta, the best cardiothoracic surgeon at the biggest hospital, Sanjeevani, in Mumbai. He had achieved everything in life, the success and fame he had wanted. He had proved to the world that he wasn't alone. While girls swooned after his handsome looks, patients undoubtedly fell in love with him. He was the perfect guy, the friend, the helper, the advisor, the son every mother wants. Ironic why his own mother had left him alone to suffer the pangs of loneliness.

Dr. Aman parked his car in the parking lot at the special place given to him. It was freezing cold outside and the first rays of sunlight had started to appear. As he entered the building, the receptionist turns to him.

Rosy: arey Dr. Aman…ap itni jaldi agaye??? Ap ki shift to subah 9 bajjay se pehle shuru nahi hoti….(curious)
Aman folds his arms and leans on the counter, with a naughty smile on his face
Aman: kia karun Rosy…tumhain apne samne dkehne ki itni aadat ho gai hai ke ghar pe dil hi nahi lagta…(winks)
Rosy laughs
Aman: hey Rosy…do me a favour yaar….get me one of those distasteful coffees while I m in ma office….(smiles at her while walking away)
Rosy: abhi layi sir….

Aman goes and sits in his office, opens the file of a patient and starts reading it.
He gets so involved in writing up case studies and going thru patient results that he duznt realize when the day starts and he gets his first beeper on his pager.
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Dr.Aman rushes down the corridor only to find a resident doctor, Dr. Anjali standing there….
Anjali: hey Doc…(smiling at him)
Aman: hey Anjali…tum aj kuch ziada jaldi nahi agai???
Anjali: yeah….had to run sum labs for the patients….
Aman: haven't u got interns to do that…
Anjali: interns to aj se shuru karna hai…thank God thora sa work load kamm ho ga…
Aman: Anjali…I am sure tumhari baatain bhut interesting hoti hungi par mujhe kaam hai….to is there anything specific why u paged me???
Anjali: yes…
Aman: and that is?????
AnjalI: I saw on the board that u hav no surgery scheduled till noon…and I have one now…to mere behalf pe mere interns ko ap handle kero ge…
Aman: WAT??? No anjaliii…
Anjali: come on Aman…itna to kar skate ho…I am ur frend yaar…
Aman: who to ho par….
Anjalo: par war kuch nahi..i gotta go…take care…..
Aman: Anjaliiiii….(shouts after her as she rushes off)

Aman: (to himself) yeh Anjali bhi na…harr saal yehi kerti hai…(smiles)

He is walking down the corridor,thinking to himself, when someone catches hold of his arm and swirls him around, shouting out loudly……
Girl: Cant u seeeeeeeeeee………………??? ( as she twirls and falls down) AAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!
Aman: wat the helll…..ap ko nazar nahi ata kia…(looks down at the girl who is now pushing her hair away from her face)
Who apni nazrain uss ke chehre se hatta nahi pata…those eyes….that frown…the way of putting the hair behind her ears…just attracted him to her…..he was constantly smiling as he looked at her….the girl gets up without luking at him, rubbing her arm….she gets up…
Aman: hi Dua….(smiling)
Dua looked up and a look of surprise comes on her face
Dua: AMANNN!!!! TUM???? Oh my God…tum yahan kaam kerte ho????
Aman nods and smiles
Dua: oh GOooddd….its been such a lonng time….(all smiles)
Aman: yes…its been a long time…
Dua: tum America se wapas kab aye??? Aur idiot aye bhi to mujhe bataya kyun nahi….milne bhi nahi aye….atleast banda contact hi ekr leta hai yaaar…I mean…mujhe to laga tha ke tum kahiin marr war gaye ho…had dhoti hao/….(bolti jati hai)
Aman just keeps looking at her and smiles
Dua: ab hans kyun rahe ho???
Aman: tumharo baq baq kerne ki aadat abhi takk nahi gai na???
Dua: shut up!!!
Aman: hey bhagwaaan!!! Iss mulk ka kia hoga??? Yahan to chote barron ki tameez kerna bhi bhul gaye…(hoding his hands up in the air and being melodramatic)
Dua: dun act smart with me…(hits him on his arm) tum mujhse sirf 4 saal baray ho…koi ziada difference nahi hai…haan haan janti hun bhut barray doctor bann gaye ho par yeh matt bhulo ke bachpan se hi tumhari pehli patient main hi thi….(putting her hands on her waist)
Aman: kia matlab???
Dua: arey tumhain yaad nahi…bachpan main hum doctor doctor khelte thay….aur tum hamesha doc bante thay aur main tumhari patient…..
Aman laughs…
Aman: oh yeah…ofcourse I remember…..gawd I miss those days yaar…..
Dua: haan haan who to hai….issi liye to tum rozana America se mujhe call ekrte tay…haina???
Aman: Duaaa…..sorry yaar…
Dua: sorry worry kuch nahi….ab to aisse dost ho gaye hain ap ke itne saalo baad mil ke gallay bhi nahi lagatay…
Aman: (ballon main haath pherta hai) kia matlab….???
Dua: gallay millo yaar…..(laughs and puts her arms around it)

Aman is shocked out of his wits…..he had not cum to such close proximity with a gurl since ages….and specially not in the hospital…as Dua hugs him, everyone around looks on and smiles….trying to control their smile…..Aman smiles at how innocent she is, and slwly puts his arms around her…when a voice comes…

Girl: Ahem ahemmm…….(coughing a bit while they both turn to see)

Now who is this girl…to find out…read on more…and plz do comment…love kiran!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey kiran,
gr8 start.....
will luk forward for more....

shivani 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool yaar really gud
i think rids is the girl who got betrayd by armi
continu sooon yaar i cant wait 👏 👏 👏

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