a new fresh story ff : restarted

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi DMGians😛

oh gosh i've got so much to write today. because i'll have to change the way of posting again. some of you were getting confused so i'll write the parts 1-3........

first of all the characters

Armaan : he's a very good sanskari boy. very obidient and kind😆 and he is very handsome that lots of girls run after him but he thinks they are a waste of time😆 he says that his studies are more important😕.😆 he finally does get gradutated and becomes an intern at the Sanjeevni hospital.

Riddhimaa : she was once a very kind and sweet girl but has changed. since she found out she was not a Gupta ( in dmg now she knows she's adopted but in the ff she just found out now ) she thought she had no identitiy😭😭 she now has become like anjali a stubborn kind of rude girl trying to find out by who she really is. will she able to remain like this.....................

Anjali : she is riddhimaa's sister. now when she found out that ridz wasn't her sister she changed herself too😕 she always wondered why her dad liked her more than her so she decided she should be like ridz. a simple sweet girl................. will she remain the same?

Sapna : a clever girl but she doesn't want to work😆 she wants to get married but her parents want her to be a doctor. reluctantly she becomes an intern too. she begins to cope with the work but then.............. she falls for armaan😆

Atul : a boy who thinks girls are everything😆. well but he is clever too. before he always used to woo all the girls. but girls just ignore him. he gave up and thought why don't i go to the hospital as they are lots of nurses😆 but then the most biggest thing happens in his life.......... he falls for lovley😆

Shubankar : am man who has nearly spent his whole life working. a very boring life he has. but when he meets sapna his life begins to get more happier. more different. he falls in love with her😆

kirti : a very strict doctor. she is good with patients but is scared of dr. shashank. she's gets annoyed quickly too. and she also finds the interns very irrating. one of the intern's ( i won't say who 😉) plays a prank on her. she decides to get revenge and get then back. see what she does to them...........

hoped you liked the characters. i'll start with part 1 and i'll be writing the speeches in hindi. if you want them to be in english to become more easier then do tell before i start😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry guys no-one replied and i'm in a hurry because dmg is starting in 50 mins 😛
i'll write in hindi

Part 1

Armaan reaches the hospital but before he enters he touches the ground with his hand and kisses it. ( very sanskari 😆 )he chants ' ragupati raghav raja ram, pati thapavan sita ram' hey bhagwan mujhe ek acha doctor banana' 😳
as he enters atul has already entered in the hospital holding a rose and he's already in love with lovely 😆
atul : jadoo teri nazar, kusboo teri badan, tu haan kar ya naa kar tu hain meri lovely 😆
armaan is 😕
riddhimaa comes to wearing her plain top and jeans 😆 as she enters she bumps into armaan and they both fall down 😆
armaan : maaf karna maine aapko.........
he looks at ridzy thinking what has she done to herself? her hair quite messy and she looks weird ( i think ridzy is not coping well in being angie 😆 )
armaan according to her appereance askes
' aap yaha ek nayi patient hain kya?'
rizy shocked : kya! tumne mujhe patient kaha ! mein yaha ki nayi intern hon'
armaan is so suprised by what he heard. she a doctor? 😆 i wonder what will happen to this poor girl 😆
sapna comes in too but hasn't seen armaan yet.
sapna with a phone : ha mama ha. tike han. mein phone raku. she swithes her phone obviously very annoyed by her parents.
everyone in time reach the locker room exept for sapna yet.
atul : hi mein atul hon
ridzy : mujko use kya ? ( she's quite rude
armaan : ase nahi bolthe ,hi mein armaan
they both shake hands.
atul : aur tumhara naam? to rizy
ridzy is just about to say something rude agian when anjali comes. she comes in a pink churidar.
anjali : namaste ( a bit too over eactive of ridzy 😆 )waise iska naam ridhimaa hain
she looks at ridzy and ignores her
ridzy : well mera naam toh hain ridhimaa magar mein chati hoon ke mein tum sab mujhe ridzy kaho
armaan : ridzy? yeh kaisa naam hain?
ridzy : mera naam jaisa bhi hain, tumse koyi matlab nahin hain. samje?
armaan reamins silent
anjali gives everyone flowers from the mandir.
meanwhile armaan is just putting his things in the locker and takes out a big huge pile of letters ( love letters from girls but he's got more at his house 😆 )
atul sees the letters and gets shocked
atul : arre yaar itne sare letters tumhe toh award milna chahiye 😆
armaan ignores and puts them in the bin 😆
atul : tum yeh sab kaise karlete hon, mujhe toh bhi sikao 😆
armaan : kya?
atul : mein tumse lessons lete jaunga na. phir toh meri ladkiyo ki line lagjygi 😆
armaan : tum asa kase soch sakte hon. ladkiyon ki respecet karni chayiye.
he sees all the matas like laskshmi, durga , kali maa 😕 😆
everyone goes to their locker and they find their pager is already there. in 20 mins they had to go to dr. kirti's office.
everyone exept for armaan decide that we should go and see the hospital for a while.
sapna comes in and sighs. her parents nearly phone her every 10 mins. it was getting on her nerves.
armaan : ji aap mujhe batayige ke time kya huya hai?
saona : time toh aath.......
she looks at armaan and gazes at him. lagtah hain armaan ka jaddo phir se chalgaya sapna phir 😆
armaan is 😕
he sees the time on the wall and realises he's late and he leaves
sapna is still standing
sapna : lagtah mujhe aapna sapno ka rajkumar milgaya
hain 😆
she dreams about her and armaan playing dandiya at the end....... 😆

so i hope you like the 1st part 😊



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Posted: 18 years ago
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i will write the second one tommorow only 20 mins left for dmg 😛 in my house it comes at 9:00 p.m a bit too late
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey. when are u going to continue. i really liked ur ff.plezzzzzzzzzz update na 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey tht was gud plz continue soon.
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey, it ws very gud!!
plz cont asap...😉
Mia.

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