!'Koi Aahat Tu Sunai Da'! RIKARA OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Everyone, This OS is Set After Friday Epi TEJKARA Scene. Where Tej told Omkara that he signed his deal with Kali Thakur N now his deal with KT is cancelled.. N Gauri saw Janvi Crying n Omkara consoling her.

KOI AHAT TU SUNAI DA

Gauri was really worried and upset after seeing Janvi n Omkara crying like this. Where Janvi was worried that now Tej will divorce her n her family will be brake too. But Omkara was consoling his Mom that nothing will happen till then he is there.. he will do anything for his Mom's happiness n will never let this Divorce to happen.. Gauri was working in Kitchen in Chulbul Avatar but her mind was totally involved in that discussion where he saw his hubby worried but more than he was heart broken..

Gauri (thinking): hey bagwaan, Omkara ji tu pehla hi bhut pershan tha. Pehla kye musibaten kum thin kye unki zindagii mein jo yah Kali Thakur aur aye gaya un ki pershani ko barhana. Najana abi Omkara ji kye karna wala hain.. aik Terf wo Sultana madam ji. Roz aik naya sa naya plan bana kar aye jati hain una pershan karna.. abi un ka kuch nai kar paya omkara ji. tu yah kali thakur sa kasa nibten ga..??

At this moment she completely forgets what kind of danger is roaming around her own self in form of Kali Thakur.. she was just thinking abt Omkara.. she just want to see him happy. She don't want for his mom sake he went into one more trouble.. bcz she knew what KT is N how much he could be dangerous for Omkara and his family..

Gauri: Kuch kahen ga tu humari tu suna ga bhi nahin Omkara ji. Bhut pershan dhik raha tha.. Uss waqt ka bad abi tak dhika bhi nahin.. (she became more worried) lunch bhi nahin kiya aur na hi dinner.. room lock tha unka. Abi.. (she checks the time, n in was 12 O clock) bhut raat ho gayi hai.. khana laa kar jati hoon.. shaid ab humari baat sun laan.. haan.. (added in determined tone) nai suna ga tu zaberdasti suna danga una.. Asa khali pat thora hi naa una sona danga hum una.

She instantly settles food in food tray n headed towards Omkara room.. without knocking she presses the knob of door and luckily it was opened.. she pushes the door n went inside while taking baby steps bcz room was filled with darkness.. Complete darkness...

Gauri (As chulbul): Omkara ji.. ?? (looking around) kahan hain app ?? aur itna Andhera kyun kiya hai karma mein.. ??

She was not be able to switch on the room lights while holding food tray in her hands. But her feet were touching different things on floor and may be broken things.. and silence present inside the room was clearly alarming her that not only things r broken in this room... but someone else broken too.. now she was worried like hell..

Chulbul (screams): Omkara jii..???

Still she got no reply.. she was continually taking baby steps n moving forward.. when suddenly her feet touches with a figure.. she got that omkara sitting there..her feet touches with bed n she instantly put food tray there n moves to switch on the lights.. N what she saw was really heart broken for Gauri..

Room was filled with so many broken things present in omkara room.. his sculptures, Paintings n Paint. Everything.. N omkara...?? He was sitting on floor. Attaching his back with bed. While hiding his head in his both arms n legs..

Chulbul (crying tone): Omkara ji ??

Omkara (without moving a bit from his place): switch off the lights chulbul.

Chulbul (feels better after hearing om voice): laki..en

Omkara (looks at her, his face was red due to anger n pain): Plzz chulbul.. band kar do lights.

Chulbul: bhut.. bhut Andhera(Darkness) hai (And meanwhile she switched off lights n switch on the side lamp. Now very dim light was present inside the room)

Omkara (sad laugh escaped from his mouth): Andhera ?? Jab zindagii mein hi Andhera chaya ho tu.. Lakh Shama(candles) roshen kar lana sa bhi Roshni nahin hoti chulbul...

Chulbul was understanding omkara is very upset n heartbroken at this moment.. she silently came n sat beside omkara.. but then somehow she speak up again..

Chulbul: App asa.. asa kyun kah rahen hain Omkara ji..?? Ager insan koshish kara tu.. Andhera ko Roshni mein badal sakta hai.. bas koi Sath dana wala chiya hota hai..

Omkara (he was just looking into air): aur ager Sath dana wala hi Dagabaaz nikla tu ??

Chulbul became silent.. she doesn't know what omkara exactly trying to say..

Omkara (again asked): bolo na chulbul..?? chup kyun ho gaya?? Ager sath dana wala hi Dagabaaz nikla tu ?? tu kye hota hai ??

Chulbul (looking hesitant): Tu.. tu bagwaan ksi aur sath dana wala ko bej data hain..

Omkara just give her a glance.. Gauri became puzzled...

Omkara (sad smile present in his lips): Acha ..?? aur kye guaranty hai ka wo Sathi saath nibhaya ga..?? sath chor ka nahin jaya ga ?? (now gauri feels like she don't have any answer. She herself is lying to omkara) jab mera kud ka baap... wo Saath nahin nibha saka Mera.. tu ksi aur sa kye umeed rakhon ga main ??

Now Gauri understands what omkara was trying to say..she really want to console omkara that she always will stay by his side but how..?? how could she say this to him ??

Omkara (looking unknowingly): janta hai chulbul (Gauri looks at him) Meri Mom mujsa bolti hai.. jab main pada hua tha Koi aik shaks tha jo iss duniya mein sab sa zyada kush tha.. (Sad but very meaningful smile was present in omkara lips which was lighten up his whole face) Suna hai Aik Maa sa zyada Becha ka pada hona ki kushi ka Ehsas ksi aur ko nahin hota.. Par Meri Mom.. wo humesha sa bolti hain. ka un sa zyada uss din koi aur bhut kush tha (he looks at chulbul) I was born in London.. Sara parivaar yahen tha. Uss time Mom and Mr.Oberoi England mein settle tha business ka liya.. koi nai tha un ka pas siwaya bua Maa ka.. jab main pada hua..

And he became silent.. slowly smile starts disappearing from his face n lips too. and again he starts looking into space unknowingly..

Chulbul (asked slowly. She was scared): Ko..n..kon tha woh Shaks ??

Omkara (Painful but strong tone): Mera Baap

Chulbul looks at him in shock.. from the day one she came in Oberoi Mansion . she never saw any happy moments between Tej n omkara. but still she was shocked on this..

Omkara (looks at her n smiles): Shock laga na ?? (CB was really confused what to say n what not) muja bhi laga tha.. (he laughs) Mr Oberoi ?? wo.. wo kush honga mera pada hona pa ..?? can u believe it ?? no.. no one can believe it.. (CB was just looking at him with teary eyes... where omkara tone was painful now) Aik insan.. jo Apna app ko mera Baap kahta hai.. jo mujsa sab kuch cheena chahta hai.. mera sab kuch.. wo kasa kush ho sakta hai.. ? (again looks at CB in questioning look) haan bol na chulbul..?? kasa kush ho sakta hai woh ?? jo kushi daa nahin sakta.. wo kush kasa hua hoga ??

Chulbul (tries to console omkara): Omkara ji..

Omkara (cuts her n continues in his flow): u know what chulbul.. bechpan sa.. bechpan sa Mr Oberoi na sab kuch cheena hi hai mujsa.. (now his eyes got teary) Pehla mujsa mera bechpan cheena.. meri bechpan ki choti choti kushiyan cheeni.. pher mera Sapna cheena.. una chakna choor kiya.. meri har wish par apni wish.. apni marzi ko thopa. Humesha wo karwana chaha jo woh chahta hain.. meri har chahat ko peron tala ronda aur palat ka Dhaka tak nahin.. mera her Ansoo ko an Dhaka kiya uno na.. (tears rolls down from his cheeks while saying this) wo shaks kasa kush hua hoga ?? koi.. (now his tone became teary too) koi kush hota hai.. tu usay gala lagata hai.. Pyaar karta hai.. usski zindagii banata hai.. zindagii bigarta nahin.. uss ka ansoo ponchta hai. Ansoo data nahin.. (tears were continually rolling down from Omkara cheeks) Dil sa dua data hai.. uss dua ka Pori hona ka manukamina karta hai. Data hai.. cheenta nahin.. aur Mr.Oberoi.. uno na sirf cheena hai.. una sirf cheenana ata hai chulbul.. dana nahin... Meri Mom jhoot bolti hain mujsa.. (now he feels lump in his throat.. was not be able to speak properly) una.. una malom hai muja jhoot sa nafrat hai.. pher bhi.. (now Gauri can't see him like this anymore.. she moves forward and just hugs him.. she was crying too.. where omkara continues as) kyun... kyun jhoot bolti hain wo mujsa..?? jhoot... jhoot hai yah sab.. asa kabi nai ho sakta... (and he starts sobbing.. where Gauri was just patting on his back.. n omkara was feeling great sooth in that soft but very meaningful hug)...

After few moments..when she feel Omkara is feeling better now..she speaks as

Chulbul : hum.. hum janta hain Omkara jii.. yah zindagii asan nahin hai.. aur naa iss zindagii mein mila rishta sambalna asan hai.. app ko malom hai.. humesha insan bura nahin hota.. waqt aur halat usay bura bana data hain shaid.. App ka Pita jee.. wo dil sa nafrat nahin karta hain app sa.. koi Pita.. Koi Pita apna bechon sa balan nafrat kasa kar sakta hai.. kasa

Omkara (freeing himself from that hug n looks at CB): kar sakta hai.. (angry tone) Tej sing oberoi ki taran.. he is a selfish man..who can do anything to get best for his own self.. to fulfill his own wish.. he can ruins anything.. like he ruined his family.. me.. my mom.. my siblings.. (he again looks at CB) tuja malom hai.. (added in soft tone) I can tell u.. how I feel when u hug me.. (gauri became puzzled) but I don't now.. how I will feel when I will touch my father.. muja.. muja malom hi nahin ka Pita kye cheez hoti hai..usay milna ka.. gala lagana ka ehsas kasa hota hai.. u know what chulbul. Muja malom hi nahin ka Mr. oberoi ka aik Pita ka jasa touch karna kasa hai.. kabhi kiya hi nahin.. uno na kabi Pyaar sa gala lagya hi nahin.. ehsas bhara hath mera sar pa rakha hi nahin.. Muja malom hi nahin ka aik Pita kasa hota hai...

Chulbul : Hai...

Omkara looks at CB with shock.. whose eyes were totally fixed on Omkara n now he was talking with determined tone..

Chulbul (nodded in yes n added): haan Omkara ji.. app ko ehsas hai.. isi liya asa bol raha hain.. bas uss ehsas ki peehchan nahin hui kabhi app ko... aur iss mein app ki galti bhi nahin.. app ka Pita ji ki mistake hai.. Pita ka naa hona ka ehsas usay hota hai jis ka sar pa Pita ka saya nahin hota.. (gauri eyes turn teary) jisa Pada hota hi kadam kadam pa najana kye kuch sunana aur sahna hota hai.. kyun ka.. kyun ka duniya janti hoti hai.. ka kuch bhi.. chaya kuch bhi kar lo.. iss ka koi nai ana wala.. Maa.. Maa duniya ki sab sa pyaari aur keemti cheez hoti hai shaid.. Par duniya.. duniya usay Salam karti hai.. jis ka sar pa Baap ka saya ho.. (she looks at omkara with wistfully eyes) malom hai app ko.. Pita Ameer ho yah gareeb... duniya ka liya bhut bari cheez hota hai.. Pita kud nuqsaan tu poncha sakta hai par uss ka hona sa ksi ki himmat nahin hoti app ko nuqsaan ponchana ki.. Aik Pita ka hona.. sirf hona ki kafi hota hai kabhi kabhi... (she clears her eyes..n looks at omkara..who was looking totally stunned) malom hai app ko.. jab app chota hon ga.. school gaya honga.. tu sab naa app sa app ka Pita kaa naam nai pocha hoga.. jab ksi cheez ko lana ka dil chaha hoga tu bhala hi apna sath Pita ko paya ho yah na ho.. par wo cheez kasa longa.. yah ehsas. yah khyal app ka maan mein nahin aya hoga.. wo Ehsas hi Pita ka hona ka Ehsas hai.. jo chaha pehna.. jo chaha kah lana.. jis school mein chaha wahen parha.. Pasand ka kapra pehna.. gooma phira.. bahr jaa kar parha.. itna bara Artist bana.. yah sab kis ki waja sa ?? Pita ka hona ki waja sa... yah sab Ehsas hi Pita ka hona ka Ehsas hai.. aur yah sab uno na kis liya kiya ?? App ka liya.. kyun ka wo app ko kuch bara.. aur kuch acha banta dhakna chahta tha.. nakaam yah neecha gira hua nahin.. tu app ki Maa app sa jhoot nahin bolten hain omkara ji...

She take a pause and then further added after clearing her eyes..

Chulbul: hum yah nahin kah raha ka wo galat nahin hain.. Par wo bura bhi nahin shaid utna jitna una Ap smaj raha hain shaid.. Waqt aur halat ka chungal mein pansa hain wo shaid.. aur jis din wo un sab sa nikal jayen ga una apni galtiyon ka ehsas bhi hoga aur pashtawa bhi.. aur us din sab teak ho jaya ga.. insan ko sab kuch Acha hona ki umeed nai chorni chiya hai..

Omkara (Sadly smiles): tum nai smjho ga chulbul.. tum nahin janta kuch bhi... bechpan sa ajj tak main aur meri Mom dono hi sab kuch teak hona ki umeed liya betha hain.. par kuch teak nahin hua..aur naa hi kabhi hoga.

Chulbul: lakien omkara ji.

Omkara: nahin chulbul. Tum nahin smajh sakta mera dukh..nai smaj sakta isi liya asa bol raha ho.

Chulbul: App sahi kah raha hain omkara ji.. shaid hum nahin smajh sakta hain.. Ajj tak naa hi apna Pita ko kabhi Dhaka hai. Aur na hi kabhi jana hai ka wo kasa dhikta tha.. tu huma kasa malom hoga Pita kye hota hai aur kasa hota hai.. shaid app sahi kah raha hain hum nahin smaj sakta app ka dukh.. I m.. sorry.. (and CB was abt to leave when omkara instantly holds her hand n stops him)

Omkara: I m sorry Chulbul.. I really don't meant that.. muja nai malom tha ka tumara Pita ji (and he stops n then added in apologizing tone) I m really very sorry. Plz... mahf kar da yaar.. (chulbul looks at him n then made a sad face) chulbul plz.. tun janta hai main ksi ko jaan boj kar hurt nahin kar sakta.. plz mahf kar da yaar..

Chulbul: aik sharat par.. ager app yah humara laya hua khana (showing him food tray) kahyen ga tu..? (and he smiles with that)

Omkara: nahin chulbul.. mera maan nahin..

Chulbul (again sat down n make a bite with): maan hota nahin.. banana parta hai.. moun kholiya.. chaliya shabash.. warna hum mahfi nahin danga.. (omkara smiles on this cute face of CB and opens his mouth.. n CB make him feed) janta hain omkara ji.. yah zindagii ksi ka liya bhi asan nahin hai.. aur inn muskilon sa laar kar jeet tak ponchna hi zindagii kahlata hai.. mana ka sab kuch na hona aur sab kuch pasa ho ka bawajood naa hona mein bhut fark hai.. yah bhut zyada takleef daa shaid.. par zarori nahin ager ajj bura hai tu Anat bhi bura hi ho... wo kahta haina "Ass hai tu jahan hai".. ager Umeed hi chor di tu jeena hi chor diya matlab...

Omkara (smiles): tun itni bari bari baten kasa kar lata hai chulbul...

Chulbul (looks at him and make him eat one more bite): bolo tu baten.. aur Mano tu yah zindagii hai meri..

Omkara became silent.. where Gauri was still feeding him his food..

Omkara (just looking at CB n thinking): Sach kahta hai shaid chulbul.. Ass hai tu jahan hai.. Mera pas tu bhut kuch hai.. aur pher sab kuch teak hona ki umeed bhi.. Par chulbul.. shaid uss ka pas us ski Maa hi hai.. aur kuch nahin.. lakien pher bhi usski soch.. aur shardha bhut strong hai.. ager wo zindagii ko itni positively laa sakta hai.. tu shaid main bhi...thanks Chulbul for coming in my life..

Gauri (thinking): Omkara ji hum janta hain ka app bhut dukhi hain..par hum yah bhi janta hain ka iss Andhera ka bad aik subha zaror hai.. aur aik din wo subha app ki zindagi ka sara Adhera dor kar. app ki zindagii mein ujala zaror kara gi.. zaror.. (looking at omkara) app bhut acha hain.. bhut acha omkara ji.. aur Achon ka sath acha hota hai.. humesha bura nahin..

After finishing food.. Gauri forced omkara to sleep.. who silently lies down on his bed n Gauri covers him with sheet properly.. Omkara looks at him n smiles..

Omkara (holds his hand): Thank you chulbul.. u r so sweet.. tumara sath sa sach mein bhut hosla mila muja.. aur aik baat yaad rakhna.. koi ho na ho.. Mera tumara sath hona ka Ehsas humesha tumara sath raha ga.. n I promise that... (Gauri felt sad) u remember what I said to u.. u r my best buddy.. yaad rakhna yah baat humesha..

chulbul (nodded with): janta hain.. ab app soa jaiya.. (omkara smiles n closes his eye while leaving chulbul hand.. who make her own bed and lies down while her eyes were fixed on omkara face). Janta hain hum ka app humara best buddy hain. Aur shaid yah sab bhi thora hi waqt ka liya hai.. (and tear falls down from her eyes.. but then she cheers up herself instantly with) lakien Gauri abi kye boli tun omkara jee sa.. ?? Ass hai tu Jahaan hai.. aur aik din teri zindagi ki subha bhi zaror hogi.. zaror..bas itni dua hai.. ka wo subha omkara ji ka sang ho.. (and she closes her eyes to sleep)...

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update..
loved it
feeling bad for om...
but rikara conversation was really cute
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Emotional story.. really liked it.. a shattered Omkara n a supportive Chulbul make amazing friends..

Thanks for this take
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was amazingly explained tezs behavior omkara's view gauris views were amazing... She was right... Naa hone we kuch hona better Hai...

Hope for best I can explain I was emotional...
And this OS really touched the heart...

Issi BAAT PE arz kiya...


Kbhi kbhi kuch cheez Bayaan nhi ho paati...
Chand lafzon mein Hai uski geharaayian chup jaati...
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This is very meaningful OS.

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