Peace - A Short Writeup - Naam, Khoon and Khandan

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Posted: 8 years ago
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You know how this piece of writing made me remember some really old scenes. When he had humiliated her, for not having a surname, not knowing whose blood she had in her veins, and had boasted around about there being a huge different between "Khandani people" and "Yateem Sarak-chhap log"

Naam, Khoon, Khandaan- Something which was a lottery for him, Anika had once said. He did not achieve it, he just had it. "Main sirf Anika hoon, Mera naam, Meri pehchaan, Mera wajood, Meri Mehnat ki kamaayi hai." And she was proud of being 'Sirf Anika'

That infamous dialogue from episode 6, "Uss din duniya ki koi bhi taakat, koi bhi paisa, koi bhi naam, tere kaam nahi aayega." And this is the day, I suppose. His need for the Peace is making him question his beliefs.


Ahhh! Ive been waiting for that na jaane kabse.. 😆


I wrote so much!😆 Oh God! But this one was hard hitting, just beautiful! And I couldnt stop. 😳
I dont mind you writing, to be honest, coz they always are a treat to read. Keep em coming! 🤗
Edited by Jinan. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic...you described his thoughts beautifully :)
Edited by pri12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it's too emotional harshu...
his beliefs in Nkk had taken his peace from him for ever...now his belief which he held above all this had taken away the most precious thing away from him
now he understands it but it's too late now...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So you were writing this??????/

Awesome writeup di. Shivaay has lost himself due to his stern belief on Naam, Khoon and Khandan. He has lost Anika and she is not going to return back to him never ever. Sad 😭😭
With Loads of Love
-Chhaya
Edited by water9786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully expressed... His peace might have gone but his beliefs stand strong.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jinan.

You know how this piece of writing made me remember some really old scenes. When he had humiliated her, for not having a surname, not knowing whose blood she had in her veins, and had boasted around about there being a huge different between "Khandani people" and "Yateem Sarak-chhap log"



Jinu🤗
Its always a pleasure to see you.
You liked this? This was just a random writeup when I wasn't able to think anything.



Naam, Khoon, Khandaan- Something which was a lottery for him, Anika had once said. He did not achieve it, he just had it. "Main sirf Anika hoon, Mera naam, Meri pehchaan, Mera wajood, Meri Mehnat ki kamaayi hai." And she was proud of being 'Sirf Anika'



Exactly. I agree on that. He did not really achieve NKK, he just had it, you can say fortune.



That infamous dialogue from episode 6, "Uss din duniya ki koi bhi taakat, koi bhi paisa, koi bhi naam, tere kaam nahi aayega." And this is the day, I suppose. His need for the Peace is making him question his beliefs.


Ahhh! Ive been waiting for that na jaane kabse.. 😆


I wrote so much!😆 Oh God! But this one was hard hitting, just beautiful! And I couldnt stop. 😳
I dont mind you writing, to be honest, coz they always are a treat to read. Keep em coming!
🤗


Ah, that dialogue is beautiful, no? I really, really like it.
Indeed, but here also, he still hadn't fully realize that what exactly matters him more, she or the so called NKK.

And I love you for that. Thank you. I don't even know if this is nice.
But if you like it, I think this was worth posting.

You are a sweetheart.

Loads of love
-Harshada





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Posted: 8 years ago
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superb,i just want to see a devastated shivaay after annika leave him.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey there! 😛

BEAUTIFUL... actually... PAINFULLY BEATUFUL 😭 👏 😭 👏

There's just nothing more to say than that. Just nothing. 😳
I swear your work always leaves me speechless.

No matter how much this moved me, and I enjoyed reading it, I just hope this never ever occurs onscreen. But by the looks of it, doesn't seem like that will ever be a problem because Shivaay can't stand a day without her. 😆

WAITING FOR MORE OF YOUR CREATIONS!!!!!! 😃 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗
Edited by moon99 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This one is amazing...This NKK!!!because of this she left him...
Love it a lot... Keep writing

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