RiKara OS - Hasi Ban Gaye.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is something quite different then i usually write.It's short.Do give a try.😊





That sudden rain in that deep dusk shattered her . As the rain drops rushed down and plopping the earth, her thoughts too travelled down to the earth from heaven and her beautiful world was scattered...



She was walking alone at night in a narrow lane of some unknown place.



She continued to walk as every drops of the rain was reminding her of him. She was drenched completely,but that wasn't something which bothered her.


The hardest thing in life is watch the person you love,not love you back.In this case hate you.

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon



And then it's just tears and rain.Indeed,tears are the words that heart can't say.


How she wished few things lasted forever.The rain falling reminds her of him.Reminded her of Om.The moments thry had spent together.Happy and Sad.

But if she sat in the rain maybe she could drown in something other than her own thoughts which remind her of him.


Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye.



He had left her.Left her forever.He said she was her biggest mistake.


"Get Out" were his words which echoed in her mind.



Not that she didn't know this was comming.But surely not this soon.She tried explaining herself.Alas ,all in vain.



It's true she never expected anything in return.And her never means never.But no matter what, he held a very strong position in her heart.She not only loved him but worshiped him.


In true sense it's wrong.But has love ever seen what's right or wrong.

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye


A car honked and she was made to come out of her sea of thoughts.Her sea of emotions.

She turned and saw him standing.She ran towards him.But as soon as she did ,all of it just vanished.


At last the sinus had started doing it's job. But did she care ?No.

She kept on walking.
Unaware of her surroundings.Caring about none, when a stone struck her leg and she fell.


Even her Sivji were playing games with her she thought.

"Gauri"she heard.It was his voice.She knew it wasn't him.
But her hallucination.

She didn't knew how to react.Smile or cry.Everything seemed meaningless to her.She stood motionless.


"Gauri ghar chalo"she heard it again.This time she knew it was him.A smile automatically conquered her face.She looked beautiful,whenever she smiled.

Kya khoob Rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko Khuda

He forwarded his hand towards her.She tried getting up but miserablely failed.


He bent down to pick her up.He picked her the exact way he picked her during their marriage.All those thoughts came flooding down her mind.

This proved ,that even she could loose her hope over her Sivji.But her Sivji would never leave her.She closed her eyes and thanked him for everything and being with her even in the hardest times when she had lost all her hopes.


She opened her eyes to only find om smilling at her.

Hasratein ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye



This was just the beggining to a beautiful story which had started.There were more to come and all of it would just stronger their bond.Their unique bond of love and companionship.Forever.


Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye





Hope you liked it.Sorry for typos.

Do give your lovely feedback.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the mild ending you have given...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

Loved the mild ending you have given...

thank you 😊
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glad that you loved it 😊
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Thank you so much 😊

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