ISHRA OS || Sun Mere Humsafar || HBD Drishti || updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello drishti may be i am late that i didnt opened this thread yesterday on your birthday but hopefully you will forgive me and will accept this little gift from my side...


happy birthday to you dear may your all dreams come true and you get all happiness and success in your life...

again happy birthday



love you dear... you are one of the best reader i have because you always keep me motivated and continue to read my not so good writeups... a true friend ... love you always

enjoy your gift below.. the one shot




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Posted: 8 years ago
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hello friends..

enjoy reading

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ISHRA ONE SHOT: Sun Mere Humsafar

Raman sitting in a lavish room while ishita enters the room holding her tummy and sits beside him.. raman ignores and continues to work... ishita clears her throat to gain his attention but he was not at all interested in her talk... unable to bear his indifference ishita closes the laptop raman glares at ishita and says: whats your problem???

Ishita: you... you are my problem...

Raman: if I am your problem then why cant you just leave me...

Ishita: raman you are arguing without any reason...

Raman: then just stop talking to me...

Ishita: atleast listen to me raman...

Raman: I cant bear your voice... I cant bear your presence... just leave me...

Ishita: raman I know you don't care about me but you even don't care about your baby??? Tomorrow is doctor appointment and doctor wants to me you... you never visited once...

Raman: excuse me... its not my baby... its only yours... and yes... I don't care for you and your this baby got it.. spare me... ask your mummy jee to go along with you...

Saying this raman leaves the room... ishita couldn't control her emotions and start crying...she remembers how her life changed when raman enters her life...

Flashback

Ishita was a bubbly full of life and mischievous girl happy and contended with her life... her life revolve around her amma and appa... her elder sister vandita loves her to death and had spoiled her a lot... she has also dream about a prince charming entering in her life and they lives happily after...

Pandit makes bhalla and iyers meet to get their son and daughter married... in the first meeting bhallas and iyers likes each other instantly and they decide to get their kids married... iyers shows ishita raman picture and in the first sight ishita gets lost in his sharp feature, his twinkling eyes, his dimple adoring cheeks and his million dollar smile...

Other side mrs bhalla tries hard to make raman agree or atleast see the picture of the girl once but he doesn't listen and straightly rejects... mr bhalla asks toshi jee to have patience raman will agree to them... they gives green signal to iyers and both start preparing for the marriage as date of marriage was after two months...

But life has something else for them... ishita and raman both mets in a coffee shop where ishita scooty was not starting raman comes to her rescue and helps her... making ishita more fall for him unknown to raman this is the same girl his parents has chosen... both gets friendly ishita was extremely nervous and couldn't introduce herself as the girl his marriage is fixed because she has misunderstood raman knowing the fact...

Under the shade of misunderstanding, they often met and helps each other or had a formal talk... it was one unfortunate night when again ishita and raman meet with each other coincidently in a pub where raman has came at his wish while ishita was forcedly came due to her friends who wanted to have some fun...

ishita mistakenly took drink and start losing her sense... seeing her state her friends gets scared and thought to take a room there itself and will drop ishita at morning... otherside raman was continuously taking drink as he was angry on his parents that now only two weeks are remaining in his marriage and he didn't even seen the girl he is getting married...

as bhallas are very strict and doesn't like if raman comes fully drunk they also book room but destiny has some other plans... after dropping ishita in room her friends leave while raman friends misunderstand the room number and drops raman in the same room where ishita was resting...

raman looks at ishita who was looking like an angel, weather start getting bad and its start raining with thunders... ishita gets scared and hugs raman.. raman cups her face and moves closer to her... both were loosing their senses and couldn't think rationally and lost themselves in each other ...

next morning

raman opens his eyes and gets shocked seeing the naked figure he removes the hairs from her face and sees ishita... he remember the last night and curses himself... he takes his belonging and turns to leave but felt bad because he has spoiled ishita life... he took out a paper and writes an apologizing note and leaves...

after some time ishita wakes up and remembers the last night... she start crying and thinks how can she do this even if the man is her fianc... she looks at the note and his respect more grew in her heart that he didn't intentionally done this.. but it was a mistake on both sides.. she also collects her cloth and leaves...

as raman returns home toshi jee start scolding him for staying outside whole night and asked him to get ready as they are going to iyers... he was totally lost so he didn't argue more and leave for iyer house with his parents... and it was totally shocker for him to see ishita there dressed in yellow anarkali suit... he was shocked to know that ishita is the same girl to whom he is getting married and the same girl he has spend night yesterday...

he felt an extreme hate for her misunderstanding that it was all her plan to get him... but he cant oppose the marriage now... time passess and both gets married with all the rituals... ishita was happy but her all happiness vanishes when raman pours all his hate on their first night.. how he rejects her ...

flashback ends..

ishita wipes the tears and caresses her tummy and says: you know na baby it was not my fault... I thought that raman will change when I got to know about your arrival but nothing change... raman still hate me.. he doesn't care about me... but ap bura mat manna dekha jab papa apko apni ghod mein laingay na sab bhool jaingay.. aur apse bohat pyaar karain gay I believe...

time start flying as their baby was growing, raman ignorance and hate was making ishita more weak. Raman was juggling in between his feeling about ishita and his baby.. he felt bad whenever he pushes them away from himself but his anger was stopping him to get close to ishita or try to understand her point of view...

now ishita was heavily pregnant and her due date was after two weeks... she gets to know that today is raman birthday she thought to give some gift to raman... she order cakes and when raman return fromm office she gives surprise to raman... raman was silent ...

ishita: sorry raman I couldn't go out therefore didn't buy any gift.. ap batao apko kiya chahiye...

raman: if I will ask you will give me

ishita nods..

raman: just leave with your baby and never show me your face again

ishita felt so much shallow listening to his words... she says: raman... believe me it was not my fault... i..

raman shouts at her listening to his loud shout toshi jee comes and gets angry on raman but raman shows his palm... toshi jee was shocked when she knows the difference between the couple and raman behavior towards ishita...

toshi jee: bakwas band karo raman... atleast think about ishita state... baby kay bare mein to socho...

raman: you don't know anything maa you don't know how clever she is...

toshi jee: raman mein keh rahi hoon chup hoja...

raman was no mood to stop... he narrates all in front of toshi jee.. she has no words.. unable to bear the insult ishita slaps raman hard... raman was shocked..

ishita shout: bus raman... aaj bohat hogaya... ab ap suno gay meri... theek kaha meri galati hai... meir galti hai kay mein ne ap jaise insaan say pyaar kiya... meri galti hai mein ne ap jaise insaan ko khud ko choone ka adhiqaar diye... meir galti hai kay mein ne ap jaise insaan ko apna humsafar chuna ... koi rishta nahe hai mera aur apka... aur theek kaha apne ye bacha bhi sirf mera hai... apka nahe... raman har cheez ki had hoti hai aur wo had aj apne paar Karli... I will never forgive you raman... kabhi nahe...

saying this she was about to walk out of raman while raman was still rooted to his place his rational mind start understanding all this... his mind start working thinking that he will be left alone his wife and baby is going away.. his anger has burned his house... it was all his fault ishita was never at fault... he thinks to correct his mistake to console ishita to sooth her pain to love her... to bear any punishment but not this separation...

but it was too late.. his thought break listening to the loud scream and thud... he turns and sees ishita on floor clutching her tummy cries in pain... he rushes to her and gather her in his arms and was continuously asking her to open her eyes and telling sorry about his behavior he was begging and talking about their future how he will keep her and baby happy how he will compensate his mistake... he was asking one chance.

Ishita taken into icu while raman was just praying for the wellbeing of ishita and baby.. toshi jee was glaring at raman ... after three hours, nurse come outside holding a cute little bundle of joy.. baby girl.. raman was just looking at the baby without blinking eyes... he took her in his arms and couldn't stop himself from planting kiss on her forehead the little bundle of joy smiile he was just amazed to feel this new feeling of being father... he looks at nurse and asks about ishita .. nurse tells that she is fine and soon they will shift her in room then he can meet her...

After sometime,

Ishita gains her conscious and looks out for her baby... nurse come and checks her pulse... ishita asks about baby nurse tells that its baby girl and his father is not leaving baby for even a single minute... he really loves you and baby... ishita fakes smile as his harsh words rings in her mind she closes her eyes and remembers his pleading face his begging his apology... her chain of thoughts break as the door opens and raman enters holding their baby... raman forward baby who ishita takes and turns her face away and says: you may leave raman... I and my baby doesn't need you

Raman: I know ishita but I need you and our baby... I am bad ... but don't do this..

Ishita: leave us raman... I cant stand your presence...

Raman: please...

Ishita: leave..

Raman leaves ... ishita hugs her daughter close and cries...

After six months

Bhalla house was filled with loud cries... shh ruhi... baby.. aise roty nahe hain... shushhh... bacha bus... listening to this ruhi stops crying and open her little arms... ishita enter the room and sees the scene of raman taking ruhi in his arms and showering kisses on her little face... while littlee ruhi was laughing getting the love... raman sees ishita standing.. he walks towards her and kisses her forehead...

Ishita: to nautanki madam ko chup karwa liya apne...

Raman: don't call my daughter nautanki...

Ishita smiles ... raman pulls her closer and says:; thank you so much ishita... thanks for giving me chance... warna mein kabhi itni khobsurat zindagi nahe pa sakta jisme tum aur humare ruhi hai..

Ishita: apky liye nahe mein ne apne liye apko moka diya tha.. meine hamesha apki nafrat dekhi mein bhi wo mohabbat wo care mehsoos karna chahti thi... mien apni beti say uska baap nahe cheen payi... chahiye kitni pathar ban jati...

Raman: kiya maaf kar diya tumne muje...

Ishita: kabka... and hugs him tightly... raman pulls his little family more closer and smiles feeing satisfied...

Raman: I love you ishita

Ishita: love you too...

Sun mere humsafar

Sun mere humsafar

Kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

Ki teri saansein chalti jidhar

Rahunga bas wahin umrr bhar

Rahunga bas wahin umrr bhar, haaye


and they live happily after...


thats it my dear friends... i hope you will like it wwaiting for your lovely comments and response dont forget to hit like also


love you

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy birthday to drishti. Lovely os. Awesome. Mind blowing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love all your stories Rida, this one is no different. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update...
Raman hate ishita bzcos he misunderstood her. Ishita try to let him know the real reason but raman not deny to accept it. Finally raman reliase his mistake after knowing ishita & baby going to left him. Raman ask for forgives from ishita. Ishita give raman second changes where raman reliase how beautiful they life r with arrival of little ruhi...thank u for pm & update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u all for ur lovely wishes n i really love the os this would be very special for me as u wrote for n also raksha di n love ur story n pls keep writing like this
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Happy bday drishti
Beautiful OS
Raman mu ishita ..thought she trapped him
Finally ishita had enough n decided to leave she fall down Raman realized his mistake n pleaded for one chance
Ishita gave him the chance ..ishraru trio r happy now
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful os...
Loved the emotional Start
And happy ending...
Thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful story dear
i loved it
happy birthday dhristi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice os
Thanx 4 d pm too😊

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