Confused Karan and Worried Naina- FF

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Hey All, a little something I wrote on NaiRan. Not the best but please give me some feedback 😊

KARANNN!! Naina screamed
Kunal and Karan both froze
Naina ran towards Karan shaken and filled with fear

Yes Karan hadn't yet accepted Naina as his wife but for some reason she cared. She cared a lot. Maybe because she considered Karan as her husband? That was the only explanation she had at this moment. Every time Karan was in pain she'd be the one hurting, why? She didn't have answers.

Karan froze. He knew his reasons for staying away from Naina. He wanted to protect her, he wanted to tell her everything, he really did but what good would that do to her? He didn't hate Naina, in fact he found himself often lost in her simplicity

Naina stopped a millimetre away from Karan, her eyes filled with tears, she creased his wounds on his face. This was the first time Naina had touched Karan. Karan was shocked, no one had ever cared to be so gentle to him. He felt a sense of warmth but before he could get lost in her again he came back to his senses and pushed her away.

Lifting his hands Karan gave Naina a look of fear. What if her touching him meant that she too would get his allergy? Naina at this point didn't know about Karans allergy.

Naina wasn't giving up this time. She came closer to Karan grabbed his hand and took him to their room. Karan was shocked.

NAINA AND KARANS ROOM:

Karan pulled his hand away from Nainas grip.
N: Kyun! Mere touch sey tum mar nahi jao ge Karan!

K: Kis haq se tumne yeh sab kiya? Maina tumko kaha na, HUMARA KOI RISHTHA NAHI HAI

N: Chup chap yaha pe behtho Karan

K: Kyun?! Kis haq se NAINA

N: KARAN IM MAIN TUMHARI PATNI HOON. Ab I don't want to argue.

Naina pulled Karan who was in shock and sat him on the chair. She moved closer to Karan but he inches back, away from her.

At this moment all Naina could think of was applying the medicine she found in Karans home made chemist to his wounds, she grabed Karans collar and pulls him closer

N: Don't move Karan!

BG MUSIC PLAYS (tu pyaar hai tu hi...)

Naina applied the cotton bud with the antiseptic to Karans wounds on his forehead. She moved down to his nose and further down to the corner of his lips.

Karan was in awe. He gave up fighting her away and just stared into her eyes. Mesmerised. Karan was always so adamant on pushing her away but for the first time he just admired his wife.

N: Karan!! Naina snapednher fingers! Karan!

Karan came out of his dream zone.

K: Ho...ho..hogaya ab

N: Karan tumhe shoulder mey bhi lagi hai

Karan looked down at his shoulder, he grabed the cotton from Naina and applied the antiseptic to his wounds, Squinting and Screaming in pain everytime he would touch the cotton to the wound. Naina took the cotton bud from Karans hand and moved closer to him. She lifted his shirt and started applying the antiseptic and blowing on Karans wounds.

Karan got lost in Naina again and was about to crease her hair from her face when he stopped. No Karan he thought to himself. You promised yourself you'd never get close to Naina!

Karan pushed Naina away leaving her shocked

TO BE CONTINUTED

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome yukti ⭐️ Loved it ❤️ continue soon 😳
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It was beautiful yukti
Loved it ❤️
Update soon 😛

Love
Pari 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@Yukti, that was awesome. We would have loved something like in the show.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -adorabubbles-

Hey All, a little something I wrote on NaiRan. Not the best but please give me some feedback 😊

KARANNN!! Naina screamed
Kunal and Karan both froze
Naina ran towards Karan shaken and filled with fear

Yes Karan hadn't yet accepted Naina as his wife but for some reason she cared. She cared a lot. Maybe because she considered Karan as her husband? That was the only explanation she had at this moment. Every time Karan was in pain she'd be the one hurting, why? She didn't have answers.

Karan froze. He knew his reasons for staying away from Naina. He wanted to protect her, he wanted to tell her everything, he really did but what good would that do to her? He didn't hate Naina, in fact he found himself often lost in her simplicity

Naina stopped a millimetre away from Karan, her eyes filled with tears, she creased his wounds on his face. This was the first time Naina had touched Karan. Karan was shocked, no one had ever cared to be so gentle to him. He felt a sense of warmth but before he could get lost in her again he came back to his senses and pushed her away.

Lifting his hands Karan gave Naina a look of fear. What if her touching him meant that she too would get his allergy? Naina at this point didn't know about Karans allergy.

Naina wasn't giving up this time. She came closer to Karan grabbed his hand and took him to their room. Karan was shocked.

NAINA AND KARANS ROOM:

Karan pulled his hand away from Nainas grip.
N: Kyun! Mere touch sey tum mar nahi jao ge Karan!

K: Kis haq se tumne yeh sab kiya? Maina tumko kaha na, HUMARA KOI RISHTHA NAHI HAI

N: Chup chap yaha pe behtho Karan

K: Kyun?! Kis haq se NAINA

N: KARAN IM MAIN TUMHARI PATNI HOON. Ab I don't want to argue.

Naina pulled Karan who was in shock and sat him on the chair. She moved closer to Karan but he inches back, away from her.

At this moment all Naina could think of was applying the medicine she found in Karans home made chemist to his wounds, she grabed Karans collar and pulls him closer

N: Don't move Karan!

BG MUSIC PLAYS (tu pyaar hai tu hi...)

Naina applied the cotton bud with the antiseptic to Karans wounds on his forehead. She moved down to his nose and further down to the corner of his lips.

Karan was in awe. He gave up fighting her away and just stared into her eyes. Mesmerised. Karan was always so adamant on pushing her away but for the first time he just admired his wife.

N: Karan!! Naina snapednher fingers! Karan!

Karan came out of his dream zone.

K: Ho...ho..hogaya ab

N: Karan tumhe shoulder mey bhi lagi hai

Karan looked down at his shoulder, he grabed the cotton from Naina and applied the antiseptic to his wounds, Squinting and Screaming in pain everytime he would touch the cotton to the wound. Naina took the cotton bud from Karans hand and moved closer to him. She lifted his shirt and started applying the antiseptic and blowing on Karans wounds.

Karan got lost in Naina again and was about to crease her hair from her face when he stopped. No Karan he thought to himself. You promised yourself you'd never get close to Naina!

Karan pushed Naina away leaving her shocked

TO BE CONTINUTED


WOW!
Loved it. Do update soon. Hope to see a scene like this soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it👍🏼update the next chapter soon😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written Yukti. I guess we saw a similar scene in the show too, did they stalk your FF? 😆 Do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for an update Yukti!! Of course after your exams are done!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DUH UH ☺️
Waooo! Karan, you outta be confused when you've got a fluff bunch as your wifeyy. I'm sure this scene would be very cute and awwdorable to see! The last time it happened, she hadn't touched him. But I'd love to see this re-created version in the future!

Keep going BROO!🤗

Muah. <33

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