RAMAN OS || GONE FOREVER || - Page 8

Originally posted by: Suma1012

Omg zoha its amazing, too emotional..
Heart wrenching os..
Beautifully written..

Originally posted by: Priiiyaa

Amazing and emotional update..
Raman is such a lifeless being after seeing ishita's body..
He feels so guilty..
Thanks for the pm dear..
U depicts the pain of Raman so well and it really makes me feel sad too

Originally posted by: ishra_JD_club

how could u zoha😒😡
u killled ishita in ur story😡😭
why not u killed raman too physically💔
shld i too killled u😕😆

Amazing OS

Brilliant os..

An absolutely amazing OS!!
You described Raman's emotions and thoughts brilliantly!!
Here you concentrated on Ishita's feeling through Raman's thoughts!!
And I thought that was fabulous and this is what should have happened on the show!!

On the show all they showed was Raman's thoughts on his own thoughts - a feeling of betrayal by Ishita is all he is thinking.
He does not even think of what she was feeling after the venomous words that he spewed on her!!!
He just looked at this incident like all the others he had with her in the past when he had insulted and thrown her out but expected her to come back without any apologies or remorse!!!
The enormity of the words he had spat have never been examined by anyone on the show even Ishita herself has not been given the opportunity to express her feelings on suitably!!!!

Anyway enough of my ranting.
Your OS was mind blowing and I would love to read more OSs from you please!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

Im gonna throw joota chappals at u! 😡🤬

Originally posted by: Jinan.

Im gonna throw joota chappals at u!😡🤬

How could you?😭

But this was so painfully beautiful!

Hawww u gonna throw joota chappal on me 😭
I already told u i m gonna kill biwi in this one 😆
Thanks u found it beautiful