JUNOON! Chapter 7 up! On Pg No. 22, On 9th Apr! - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Arnav missed Khushi twice and both the times he was in trance and she shouted at him and left.. Arnav Singh Raizada becomes Arnav whenever he sees his Khushi.. loved the way she shouted him.. even his di liked his Khushi.. well waiting for more encounters of Arnav and his Khushi.. loved the amazing update..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Both updayes r fantastic
Geet is elder sister of Arnav.. She has some connection with Maan in past. She wanted to destroy himbut he seems a decent guy...I think he loves Geet..need to know about them

Arnav - Khushi r best.. Loved when strict Arnav get totally change in front of Khushi... Grinning mode mein jaata hai

Loved this FF... Add me in your pm list
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow awesome updates loved them all can't wait for next part thank you for pm and sorry for late reply.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Khushi's rant with Arnav was just amazing the way she was going on and on
while it seems that Khushi and Geet started off on a good friendly note
Maan sensing Geet while she wants to hide from him as she first needs to destroy him before he sees her
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Posted: 8 years ago
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WOW!! fantastic update...

loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh no they were soo close. They could have met na😭 Loving the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3. LET THE SONG SEQUENCES COMMENCE!

I was so sure, Maan mused. I was so sure it was Geet! But it turned out to be a fluke! Maan sighed and placed his forehead on the window pane in front of him. He was in his room in Khurana Mansion. It was late in the evening and all Maan could think about was that one moment in the shopping mall, when he felt like Geet was around. For years I yearned for you, I have searched for you, but I never felt the way I felt today. Geet! Why do I still feel you were there? But if you had been there, why didn't I see you? Maybe I am wrong! Maybe you were not there and I am just imagining things. But the feeling is there! I still feel you were there! Was that you Geet?

"Maybe!", a voice whispered and Maan turned to see Geet standing by him. She was dressed the same way she was dressed the day they met for the first time; in salwar kameez with her hair in a plait, big earrings adorning her ears, wrists jingling with bangles. Her face held no trace of the years passed away and as she smiled at Maan, Maan couldn't resist from smiling back.

"And you are back!", Maan huffed but he continued to smile.

"Yes! You miss me so much that your mind can't help conjuring me every now and then!", Geet pouted. Maan looked towards the window and then back at her, "I miss you Geet! I miss you a lot!"

"I know!", the imaginary Geet whispered as tears welled in her eyes. For a second there was silence, but then Maan spoke up, "I saw you today! In the Mall!" Geet didn't look surprised. But then why would she be surprised? She was in Maan's mind so she knew everything that Maan knew.

"When will you come back into my life Geet?", Maan whispered.

"When are you going to let me go Maan?", Geet retorted. Maan looked at her in horror.

"You know very well how I feel! How can you tell me to let you go?", Maan asked in shock and then he frowned, "Wait! Why is my imagination telling me to do something that I don't want to do?"

Geet chuckled and then looked at him sadly, "Because even you know inside your heart that you are obsessed too much with Geet! It is getting detrimental to your life! You know its time to move on! That chapter of your life is over! Let her go before you destroy yourself totally!"

"No! I cannot do that!", Maan shouted as he looked at Geet. But she was nowhere. He sighed. His imagination was right. He was going mad! But how can I let you go Geet? How can I move on? Everyone in his life who knew his and Geet's story told him to move on. But no one taught him how to. All they said was he will fall in love again. Maan chuckled as he remembered a song from yesteryears'. He didn't even realise when he started to sing it.

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari Aur Tum...

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho...

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari

Aur Tum

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum

Dil Lagaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari Aur Tum

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho

He felt his imaginary Geet stand behind him. He turned and looked at her.

Mere Haalat Aise Hain Ke Main Kuch Kar Nahi Sakta

He closed his eyes and remembered how he sensed Geet in the mall.

Mere Haalaat Aise Hain Ke Main Kuch Kar Nahi Sakta

Dhadakta Hai Yeh Dil Lekin Yeh Aahein Bhar Nahi Sakta

He remembered the day she vanished and felt a tear trickle down his cheek.

Zakhm Hai Hara Hara Aur Tum

Chot Khaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum

Dil Lagaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari Aur Tum

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho

His eyes opened and he wiped the tears away. He walked to his bed and sat down with his head in his hands.

Zamaane Mein Bhala Kaise Mohabbat Log Karte Hain

He looked up at Geet's image with anguish in his eyes.

Zamaane Mein Bhala Kaise Mohabbar Log Karte Hain

Wafa Ke Naam Ki Ab Toh Shikaayat Log Karte Hain

Geet gave him a sad smile and he looked away.

Aag Hai Bujhi Bujhi Aur Tum

Lau Jalaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum

Dil Lagaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari Aur Tum

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho

He remembered how Geet and he talked about their future once upon a time. How they had assumed they would be together even after 15 years.

Kabhi Jo Khwaab Dekha Toh Mili Parchhaaiyaan Mujhko

All those dreams; broken. Maan felt tears once again cloud his eyes.

Kabhi Jo Khwaab Dekha Toh Mili Parchhaaiyaan Mujhko

Mujhe Mehfil Ki Khwaahish Thi Mili Tanhaayiyaan Mujhko

Har Taraf Dhuaan Dhuaan Aur Tum

Aashiyaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

He wiped his eyes and gave a worried looking Geet a soft smile.

Zindagi Khafa Khafa Aur Tum

Dil Lagaane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari Aur Tum

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Aankh Hai Bhari Bhari Aur Tum

Muskuraane Ki Baat Karte Ho

Just then one of the servants knocked on the door and his Geet vanished. Maan took a breath in and composed himself. And then he went to open the door.

"Geet!", Maan looked at her in shock.

"Maan!", Geet gasped.

"I have found you!", Maan spoke up and raised a knife to stab her.

Geet woke up with a jerk. Sweat beaded her forehead as she realised that she was seeing a dream. Today's events had shaken me up totally! He didn't even meet me and yet he managed to turn my life upside down. Why Maan why? Why did you ruin my life then? Why? Tears streamed down her cheeks but she didn't make the effort to wipe them. She sobbed for her ruined life.

Few days passed and Arnav won't deny, he was desperate to see his Khushi. After the mall he didn't get a single chance to see her again and now he badly wanted, no he badly needed a glimpse of her. It seemed Gods were in the favour of Arnav, or maybe it's the writer, but he got a glimpse of his lady love once again and this time, he got to dance with her. How did that happen? It happened the day Arnav attended a party thrown by some client of his.

The Dilli franchise of his company was doing well but he needed to do more networking to overtake KC. So here he was at some random party hoping to do some networking. It was his client's daughter birthday party and as far as Arnav was concerned total bore. Many couples danced on the dance floor while most of the crowd had commandeered the bar but Arnav found that once he was done with speaking to new people there was nothing left to do here. What a total waste of time! I could have done so many things at this time than be here! Arnav mused as he looked around in hopes of getting some relief. Suddenly his eyes reached the girl standing beside the birthday girl and his eyes widened. Khushi! As if she had heard him, she looked up and her eyes widened too. He grinned widely and she narrowed her eyes in response.

Arnav sauntered towards Khushi and was amused to see her silently fume in anger. He chuckled, she looked so cute! "Hi!", he smiled at her. She looked away ignoring him. Arnav simply smirked, does she even know her cute antics are making me fall for her more?

"What? You won't even talk to me today? That day in the mall, you seem to be shouting and screaming at me?", Arnav commented. Khushi huffed and finally spoke up, "Oh shut up!"

"Nope!", Arnav spoke and grinned at her when she glared at him. "You know", Arnav frowned, "Today I didn't follow you, by the way! The birthday girl's dad is my client!"

"Did I even ask you?', Khushi spat as she folded her arms against her chest and looked straight.

"Nope! But I am going to keep chattering with you till you talk to me properly!", Arnav grinned. Khushi looked at him with jaw dropped open and Arnav simply chuckled.

Suddenly, she grabbed his arm and dragged him off to one of the sides of the room. Once there, she quickly dropped his arm and glared at him, "What do you want? I will give it to you and you can leave me alone!"

"Oh! There are so many things I want! A date, a kiss and so much more!", he sighed dreamily. When Khushi continued to glare at him, Arnav straightened up and gave her charming smile, "But right now I would just want a dance with you!" He placed a hand in front of her. She looked at his hand as if it was some disgusted thing and Arnav pouted, "Don't worry! I won't bite you!" Khushi growled at his comment and snarled, "Fine!" She placed her hand on his hand and he led her to the dance floor. The music began as they got into the dancing position. They slowly started to sway.

Dil Kahe Kahaaniyaan Pehli Dafa

Arnav could feel the sparks between them.

Armaano Mein Rawaniyaan Pehli Dafa

He felt as if he was lost in some other world.

Hogaya Begaana Main Hosh Se Pehli Dafa

Pyaar Ko Pehchaana Ehsaas Hai Yeh Naya

Suna Hai Suna Hai

He spun her out.

Yeh Rasm-e-Wafa Hai

He spun her in.

Jo Dil Pe Nasha Hai

They stared into each other's eyes.

Woh Pehli Dafa Hai

Suna Hai Suna Hai

Yeh Rasm-e-Wafa Hai

Jo Dil Pe Nasha Hai

Woh Pehli Dafa Hai

She broke the eye contact and looked away. But he continued to stare at her. After few seconds her eyes came back onto him and widened a little when she saw the myriad of emotions reflecting in his eyes.

Kabhi Dard Si Kabhi Zard Si

Zindagi Benaam Thi

Kahin Chaahatein Hui Meherbaan

Haath Badh Ke Thaamthi

"Why do you follow me around?", Khushi asked. Arnav frowned, "I don't follow..." "Ok!", Khushi cut him off, "Why do you always annoy me so much?"

Ik Woh Nazar, Ik Woh Nigaah

Rooh Mein Shaamil Iss Tarah

Ban Gaya Afsaana Ik Baat Se Pehli Dafa

Paa Liya Hai Thikaana

Baahon Ki Hai Panaah

"When did I annoy you?", Arnav frowned. "Asking for date, talking about kiss? Aren't you doing this to annoy me?", Khushi questioned. "You are so nave!", Arnav chuckled as he spun her out.

Suna Hai Suna Hai

Yeh Rasm-e-Wafa Hai

Jo Dil Pe Nasha Hai

Woh Pehli Dafa Hai

He spun her in and she slammed into him. He softly mumbled, "Don't you understand? I am falling for you!" Her eyes widened and she stopped speaking.

Suna Hai Suna Hai

Yeh Rasm-e-Wafa Hai

Jo Dil Pe Nasha Hai

Woh Pehli Dafa Hai

"You don't know anything about me and you are falling for me?", Khushi squeaked out looking alarmed. Arnav smiled softly, "Why do you think I am asking you for a date? I want to get to know you!" Khushi bit her lip.

Lage Bewajah Alfaaz Jo

Woh Zaroorat Ho Gaye

Taqdeer Ke Kuch Faisley

Jo Ganimat Ho Gaye

"Do you seriously like me? You are not playing jokes with me?", Khushi's soft voice broke through Arnav's thoughts.

Badla Hua Har Pal Hai

Rehti Khumaari Har Jagah

Pyaar Tha Anjaana

Hua Saath Mein Pehli Dafa

Yeh Asar Ab Jaana

Kya Rang Hai Yeh Chadha

Arnav ducked his head down and Khushi was shocked to see that Arnav was behaving shyly. She looked at him with wide eyes as Arnav sheepishly mumbled, "Haven't I made enough fool of myself in front of you? How can you still be unsure about my intentions?" Khushi chuckled as she remembered the first time they met each other. Arnav chuckled too.

Suna Hai Suna Hai

Yeh Rasm-e-Wafa Hai

Jo Dil Pe Nasha Hai

Woh Pehli Dafa Hai

Suna Hai Suna Hai

Yeh Rasm-e-Wafa Hai

Jo Dil Pe Nasha Hai

Woh Pehli Dafa Hai

The song ended and Khushi pulled away from Arnav and walked off. Arnav sighed. And she is gone. Yet again! When will I get to meet you again Khushi? And when will I win your trust enough that you will allow me to get to know you? Just then he heard her voice, "Oye hello!" He turned around in surprise and she was standing in front of him, "What is your name?" "Arnav", he replied with bated breath. She huffed, "Pick me up tomorrow right here at 7, ok?" She turned around and walked away. Arnav frowned in confusion, "For what?" he called out. She turned around and smiled mischievously, "For our date! What else!" Then she winked at him and walked away leaving behind a flabbergasted Arnav. Few seconds passed and the crowd was shocked to see the normally serious faced ASR let out a loud whoop. He grinned like an idiot till he realised that all the guests were looking at him like he was lunatic. He straightened up right away and strode out of the room.

And one love story has begun!

The first song is from the movie Tumse Achcha Kaun Hai (2002). It's a really great song sung by Kumar Sanu. Do check it out.

And the second is 2017 Atif Aslam song. It's the one which has him wooing Ileana D'Cruz.

Next up, MG take a backseat as Arnav romances Khushi. But don't worry, you will see Maan and Geet in between Arshi scenes because the story will keep progressing.

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely update maan was so sure he saw geet but then thinking to be his imagination he misses her like hell it's been so many years but still maans yearning for geet is the same maan imagine geet who looks just the same way as she used to when he first met her his imagination wants him to move on but he refused to he can't imagine his life without her here geet dream that maan wanted to kill her seems there is some misunderstanding between them something happened that made geet disappear and makes her think maan is a threat to her here arnav again met Khushi in a party where he told her how he is falling for her and want to k ow her Khushi agreed to go out with him making him happy
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved part 3 👏
Looks like there's an mu between Maan and Geet. Arnav getting headway with his love story. Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
i think u like arshi more dan maaneet...coz everywhere maaneet is in backseat...arshi first den maaneet...i feel bad...😭

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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