~The Unfathomable Love. ~ part12 updated !(07/01/2018) pg 58 - Page 12

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part:- 6
Person:- jalal, Abdul,Abrar tumlog Yaha?
Jalal:- Assalamu alaikum. Chacha.
Ahmed(jalal's chacha ):- Walaikumasalam.. Kaise ho?
Jalal:- Alhamdulillah.. Sab Allah Ka karam h.
Abdul:- aap Yaha?
Ahmed:- Haan .main Yaha Kuch kaam se aya hun.par tumlog Yaha?
Abdul explains :- WO chachaji humlog Patna Aare the Kuch kaam se ,phir Bangladesh mein Jo 15th yuva mela ho raha tha use dekhne agye the Aur phir rasta bhatak Gaye Aur Yaha pahuch gye.
Abrar:- agar Koi soya Nhi Hota toh Yeh sab Nhi hota.
While jalal gave angry glare to both Abrar and Abdul to not start their fight again..
Jalal:- Yaha kahin agar Ek raat guzarne Ki jagah miljati toh Acha Hota.
Ahmed:- bas Itni si Baat .ismein Koi fikar Ki Baat Nhi ,mera Ek dost Hai RAJ MALHOTRA. Woh tumlog ko apne ghar mein rehne dega.Woh dill Ka Bohat Acha h.Aur uske bache bhi thode shararti Hai par ache h.
Abrar:- Yeh theek h.hmlog Aaj raat ruk Kar phir Kal Subha chale jainge.
Ahmed:- arey,Itni jaldi Kyu? Malaysia aae ho toh thoda Ghum lo Ek do din ruk Jao phir wapas chale jana
Jalal:- arey Nhi chacha.maine apni zimedari maan Aur Surya par chod di Hai.Mujhe Agra Jana chahiye
Abdul:- kya Agra Agra kar rahe ho? Surya Aur Maan waha hai Na.(with excitment)hum Malaysia ghume ge.maza ayega!!
And both Abrar and Abdul make innocent faces to convince jalal..
Jalal:-Acha theek Hai..par mujhe Akbar hi pukarna.Aur isse Pehle Ki tumlog pucho mein batadeta hun Ki mein Ek aam insaan Ki tarha Jana chahta hun.
Abdul:- Waise Bhi tumhe waha Koi Nhi jaanta(and both Abdul and Abrar laugh,Ahmed interrupt to avoid their quarrel)
Ahmed:- par tumlog Yeh kapde yaha Nhi pehan sakte,har desh Ki apni wesh bhusha(dressing styles) hoti Hai.Meri car Mujhe lene do ghante baad ayegi tab tak tumlog shopping karlo.
And with this they all proceed towards shopping mall.
~~~~~~~MALL~~~~~~~~~
Jalal:- Yeh kaunsi jagah h?
Ahmed:- Jaise Hindustan Meri. Kharedari k Liye humlog Baar jate h,Waise hi Yeh Ek tarha Ka bazar hi h.jaha hume Sab Kuch milega.kapde,jute,khelne Ka ,manoranjan Ka Bhi
Abdul:- arey waah! Khane Ka Bhi?(then he notice jalal and Abdul's KILL U look) and said mera matlab kapde Bhi?
Ahmed while laughing:- Haan Sab Kuch.Ab Chalo.
In Mall trio notice girls wearing shots and keep their hands on their eyes.
Abrar:- Hawww..kya inlogo ko pata Nhi Ki inhone galat kapde pehne h.
Abdul:- Haan Abrar ,Dekho Kaise Ghum rahe h,Jaise ghar par ho
Ahmed:- Yaha Aise Bhi kapde pehante h .while trying to remove their hands from their eyes.
Jalal:- KYA??? (So loudly that his voice echoed in mall and everyone looks at them)
Ahmed:- jalal beta kapde kapde hote h.Aur Yaha Yahi chalta h ..WO Sab chodo humlog shopping karne aaye h us par dhyaan do.
And they went to men's section but jalal, Abdul,Abrar didn't understand anything..
Jalal to counter boy:-suniye Yaha jama,kurta Kaha milega?
Counter boy;- No Indian clothes sir.
Ahmed:- jalal tum Yaha rehoge toh yaha Ke kapde hi pehnoge.Chalo main Kuch Pasand karta hu tumhare liye.
And Ahmed selects few jeans and shirts for them and sends them to trail room ,till that time he purchase few more for them and also calls raj his friend to inform about their stay ..while Abrar was feeling difficult to wear jeans,Abdul was not able to understand which is correct way to wear shirt and jalal was still gazing it ,when they heard Ahmed's voice and immediately wore and came..All three of were looking cute,innocent and handsome..even complimented each other n were liking it ..
Ahmed:- toh chale??
Trio together:- Haan..

Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 8 years ago
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part 7:-
~Malhotra mansion ~
The house was a little busy as few guest were going to arrive.Sanjay(elder son of raj Malhotra) is seen moving towards hall where Nilam is waiting for guest.
Nilam (wife of raj Malhotra):- sanjay tumne Unlog Ke kamre theek se check Kar Liye Na? Kahin Kuch kam toh Nhi reh gaya?
Sanjay:- chill mom.Sab Kuch perfect h.
And Nilam moves towards kitchen where Raj Malhotra(head of family) is decorating dishes..
Nilam:- billo(maid) sabzi wagairah Sab theek h Na.?
Raj:- tum billo se kya puch rahi ho,Main hun Na ,sabzi Maine pakai Hai(with proud)
Nilam:- Isiliye puch rahi ho.!(teasingly)
sunny (younger son of raj Malhotra) who was just entered kitchen:- pata Nhi Aaj mehmano Ka kya haal hone wala h.
Raj:- shut up! Tujhe badi fikr ho rahi h.,tujhe toh main baad mein dekhlunga.
Nilam:- tum Dono mehmano k saamne shuru mat hojana.
While Sanjay came running to kitchen to inform about arrival of guest.
Sanjay:- Mom,Dad,sunny wo log aagye h.
They heard Main gate opening ans ran towards entrance of house.

It was a huge beautiful mansion with garden surrounded at three sides and a fountain in centre ,a dinning table , kids playing area at a side
Jalal, Abdul and Abrar were mesmerized seeing the mansion and its surrounding. And Ahmed proceeds towards entrance where raj,nilam,sanjay and sunny were waiting for their welcom followed by trio .
Ahmed hugged raj :- Kaise ho tumlog?
Raj:- jiski Itni achi biwi ho Woh Aur Kaisa hosakta h(winks to Nilam who blushes seeing her husband's open flirt) ..
Sunny:- Ahemm..dad
Sanjay:- hum Sab theek h.aap Kaise ho uncle?!
Ahmed:- bas Aapki dua h.
Nilam:- sari baatein kya darwaze par hi karoge ya andar Bhi chaloge?
And everyone enters in hall ,it was a huge,stylish, well furnished one.and gets settled on sofa
Ahmed:- inse Milo Yeh h Akbar Aur Yeh Abdul Aur Yeh Abrar(pointing towards trio)
and to jalal :- Yeh Hain Raj,Yeh unki wife Nilam Yeh unka bada beta Sanjay Aur Yeh chota beta Sunny..
And all of them exchange greetings.
Ahmed:- Yeh Priya Aur Ahan kahin dikhae Nhi de rahe h.Kaha h humare chote ustaad?
Nilam(with sad face):- Woh Dono Singapore gaye hue h.Priya Ki meeting thi waha..
Ahmed:- akele??
Nilam:- Maine Kaha Bhi Ki main chalti hun par usne mana kardiya.
Raj:- ohh come on Nilam.. Usse independent banne do.!Aur Waise Bhi Woh Kal Subha aanw wali hi h.! (To jalal) to Akbar beta batao kya karte ho tum?
Jalal/Akbar:- Ji Woh humlog umm..Woh hum Haan .humlog Ki kapdo Ki dukaan h.
Sanjay:- Kaha se ho tum aaplog?
Abrar:- Hindustan
Sunny:- Hindustan mein Kaha?
Abdul:- Agra
again both Sanjay and sunny were ready to shot questions when nilam interrupts
Nilam:- tum Dono mehmano ko pareshan karna band karoge?Akbar beta inki Baat Ka bura mat maana Yeh Dono Aise hi h.mauka milte hi Police Ki tarha puchtac karte h.
Jalal:- Koi Baat Nhi ..
Raj:- tumlog fresh hojae ..main khana lagata hun.
And signals to Sanjay and sunny to show them their rooms.and Ahmed also takes leave.

Sanjay and sunny show them their rooms which are on first floor.
Abrar:- alag alag Kyu?
Abdul:- Haan.humlog toh Ek hi kamre mein reh lenge.
Sanjay:- jab kamre zyada ho toh Ek mein Kyu rahoge.
Sunny: - hum Aapka dinning table par wait karenge..
And both leaves
Jalal:- in Dono se ghul Milne mein thoda waqt lagega..
And they all gets fresh up.and move down stairs where everyone is waiting for them.After trio joined them ,they start having dinner when jalal praises foods.
Raj:- seekho inse Kuch Mr.Sunny Malhotra.(sunny made a what ever look)
Abdul:- Yeh khana aapne banaya h?
Nilam:- Haan.Raj ko cooking karna Acha lagta h.
Abrar:- Acha..! Aur Abdul Ku khana.!
And their chatter goes on with their introductions,hobbies, routine and teasing sessions ..everyone moves towards their rooms after wishing each other good night.!!
~~~~~****************~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Recap:- Ahan Ahan...
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Jalal:- kya Hua aunty Ji aap kise dhund rahi h?
Nilam:- Ahan ko..dekho Na usne khana Nhi khaya Aur kahin chup gaya h.
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Jalal hears sound of something and move behind sofa where he finds a cute,little kid sitting on his knees whose mouth is covered chocolate and wraper in his hand..
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Ahan felt someone beside him and looks up to find a person.
Ahan with excitement:- Angel.!!
DONE!!!
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NOTE..
sorry guys for late update as m busy wid my internals.and yeah as i promised it was a long update..read it slowly and then comment..and now i'll be busy wid my finals so vl not be available here..hope u ppl enjoy d update ..vl see u guys after my examz..sry for spelling mistakes and other errors..
Edited by zynahsiddiqi956 - 8 years ago
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4 parts..so happy... 😃
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Awesome update..each and every part is Awesome..Thanks for updating and pm me
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kya mast chapter tha 4 appy...like both the flashbacks of jo n ja...also like how 3 frnd go to rome in thr Mela... bhukkad Abdul... 😆 ...kita kuchh manga liya khane mai...or jo uske saath jalal ne kiya woh toh 🤣


mujhe lagta hai ab jalal unhe jo k pass hi le jane wala hai... 😆
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Wow 4 at a time
Awesome chappies
Waiting for jo n jalal face off
Funny too
Update soon
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Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Wow 4 at a time

Awesome chappies
Waiting for jo n jalal face off
Funny too
Update soon


Thanks for pm
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Sorry for the late reply
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kya baat hai aakhir chapter 5 mai jallu jo k karib Malaysia pahinch hi gya...bechare abdul or abrar phir se 100vi baar kho gye... 😆 ...ab toh language bhi samajh ni aani... 😆
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lovely updates dear
thanks for pm
update soon

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