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naima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

oh poor anamika. 😭 😭
waiting 4 the next part
plz continue soon.

nim.

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Ridhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

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RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

😕😕😕
Blood oozing out and your telling me he is ok????😭😭
Anamika is dead. That is so sad. Please make them happy. I feel so sad for them. Bani found her sister lying there.

Great update and thank you for the dedication😳

bye,
Ranjana

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

😭 ... now bani has to break the news to her family.. i feel soo bad for her.. anywayz this is the only way to get our JB together.. hehhe.. im sooo bad.. great update.. plzz continue soon..

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Chevi

@BeingChevi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Poor Anamika. Just read all of the parts Ive missed. Its gr8! Nw that Anamika is dead what will happen to Jai? Cont soon!!!

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tam2

@tam2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

Hi guys..

Promo: in next chapter Pushkar will be making his entry...

I'll posting the chapters later on am working on it...

so guys what do you think should I include him or not ... do let me know... 😳

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Chevi

@BeingChevi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Awww incl. our dear Pushy as long he doesnt get in the way of JB.

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tam2

@tam2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

here are chapter 5 and 6...and thank you guys for your lovely comments ... love reading them...

Chapter 5:

At the Dixit resident everyone was enjoying and the party was going smoothly…… when suddenly… Kiran felt strange … she couldn't describe her feeling as to what she was feeling … but the feeling was not pleasant … so she tried to call Anamika … to see where all three of them are … she just wanted to make sure that everything was ok … and that they are coming back home soon … as it has been 3 hours now since Jai and Anamika left to get Bani … but Anamika's phone was coming switched off….strange thought Kiran….and then decide to call Bani … when Nishikant called her … so she decided to call Bani after some time…

At the hospital … Bani was crying sitting on one corner of the hospital room…… she didn't know what to do as she was having a hard time to believe that her twin her other half is no more … has left her all alone … Bani was getting angry at Anamika … she went near Anamika's dead body and started to question Anamika …

Bani: Anamika how dare you……how did u dare to leave me alone … why did u go away leaving me … u r not a good sister … not good at all … u don't care about me … or our family … why did u have to go … answer me … I said answer me…(holding Anamika) I hate u … I hate u … did u hear … Bani break down crying even more… I love u Anamika … I love u a lot … plz come back … plz for God sake come back to me….(holding Anamika by her chest and crying) I'm sorry Anamika I was late 4 ur engagement and u can not punish for my lateness like this….plz come back …. I'm sorry …. I'm sorry……….plz come back plz………………we came to this world together and will leave it together as well…that was our promise to each other … why did u break ur promise Anamika …. Why? …why?....plz come back to me …plz come back…..

After a lot of crying Bani stilled like a stone she didn't move a muscle and held Anamika tightly by her chest …

Bani's mobile started to ring … and it was Kiran calling ……Bani break down crying further seeing the caller ID… as she didn't know what to say to her mom……how to break the awful news that her daughter was no-more in this world…and cried even more….the doc came in and saw Bani crying holding her sister… so the doc picked up the phone and informed Kiran to come to the Hospital … doc never said nothing about Anamika's death as he wanted them to reach here as soon as possible and then let them know……

Kiran dropped the phone on the floor … started crying …and everyone came to her asking what happened? … Kiran informed them about the accident and all left for the hospital …

Everyone reached hospital……and found out Anamika was no more … the girl who got engaged couple of hours ago was no more …

Kiran, ND and Rano went inside the room and saw Bani holding Anamika … the whole family was in tears and were really devastated seeing their lovely daughter lying on the bed lifeless………………………………………………………………………………

On the other hand the stranger came out of danger… and his condition was getting stable…thanks to Bani for donating her blood to this stranger called Jai………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Chapter 6:

After 3 days……
Jai was still unconscious and the both families were grateful to God for saving Jai's life………

Dixit resident became very dull……it seems like every other person of the house had forgotten how to smile … there were garlands put around Anamika's pictures……looking at which Bani would cry and miss her twin sweetheart…who went very far away from her……………………way too far………

Bani's mobile started ringing ……… it was Daksh calling Bani from London ……(Daksh and Bani are classmates as they studying at the same university and during their very first lecture they met each other… recently they have been going out and very fond of each other…)

(Okay guys do not hate me for this as Daksh's character is also important so be patience guys…… and wait for the story to unfold…)

Daksh: hello Bani …… how r u … I know what u must be going through … (u can hear Bani crying from the other line) Bani please … please Bani don't cry … I can't tolerate to see tears in ur eyes … u know that ….then why are u crying?.... Bani listen to me plz … if u keep on crying like this it will cause hurt to Anamika's soul … her soul won't be happy seeing u crying like this … if I could then I would have bought Anamika back for u … but there are certain things over which we don't have any control Bani … and that is fate …who knows what's written in who's fate… Bani plz control yourself……

Bani: thanks Daksh … those words means a lot to me … thanks for ur support … I really appreciate it … I won't cry anymore coz I don't want to cause distress to Anamika's soul …

Daksh: that's like my girl … and what's with thank you … u don't have to thank me for those words… u know I'm always with you …

Bani: Sorry Daksh … won't say it again … Daksh …amh..aahm…mmm

Daksh: Bani what happened? Is everything ok? Do u want me to come to India? I will just book the tickets and come to u sweetheart… u don't worry about anything ……

Bani: no no….no Daksh that won't be necessary … I was saying sorry coz I couldn't talk to my parents about us … u know the situation over hear….

Daksh: Bani…how can u say sorry yaar……do u think I'm that selfish (feeling really bad about what Bani said) that I will only think about myself?

Bani: Daksh please don't misunderstand me … I'm sorry I shouldn't have said that…but u see my head is not functioning properly….

Daksh: I'm sorry too …I guess I said too much … sorry Bani I should have understood your condition…….. sorry baby….

Bani: its ok Daksh you don't have to say sorry…

Daksh: oh haan Bani how's Jai … is he ok?

Bani: what do I tell you about Jai, Daksh … he's not well and I just hope he gets well soon … right now I'll be going to mandir and after coming from mandir I'll go to hospital with mom to see Jai …Daksh I'm going to pray for Anamika's soul to rest in peace and will ask God to save Jai … I hope God will answer my prayer …Daksh I have to go now …I'll speak to u later on…bye

Daksh: take care sweetheart…. If u want anything … just remember me and I'll be there … u don't have to call me … just think of me … and I'll be there ….bye ….. love u…..

Bani: bye Daksh … take care of urself too….

After the line got disconnected…the door bell rang… and it was the police… Bani remembered how the police wanted to talk to her about the accident…but both the Dixit and Walias were too devastated to answer any question of the police…

Bani: please inspector do come in…

Inspector: Hello Miss Dixit I am Inspector Pushkar Shukla… and am in the charge of this case now… I'm sorry for coming to your home like this…I know you are not in the proper state to go through all these questioning… but…I have to fulfill my duty…

Bani: It's ok Mr. Shukla I understand … please have a sit… Rano… Rano… shouted Bani…and Rano came out of the kitchen…

Bani: Rano call papa and tell him that inspector Shukla is here …Rano went in and called ND …

Pushkar: please Miss Dixit call me Pushkar…in response Bani told Pushkar to call her Bani …

Rano came out of the room with ND and KD…Pushkar shake his hand with ND…and all sat down …

Pushkar: I'm sorry Mr. Dixit to disturb you like this at this moment… but you see this is my duty …and…

ND: no its ok inspector…we understand… please tell me what you want to know…we will co-operate with you and will do our best to help you solving this case…and I think it was just an unfortunate accident and nothing else …I don't think we have any extreme enemy of that sort who would to kill my daughter or my to be son-in-law……but I don't know if Jai has any enemy …what can I tell you about Jai…poor fellow is suffering very badly…

Pushkar: I'm sorry Mr. Dixit…but this wasn't just an unfortunate accident…but it was a planned accident which was schemed out very thoughtfully…and this is one piece of important news which I wanted to inform you about…

This information shocked everyone to hell…Rano, Bani, ND & KD were in tears as they thought their the death of their daughter was God's wish but…no it wasn't God's wish…but rather someone has snatched their daughter away from them intentionally….Bani didn't cry or anything she was brave and asked Pushkar…

Bani: Pushkar…who was it…who was it inspector……tell who did this… who is it…please inspector …who hated my sister so much that they just killed her… and she broke down into crying… Pushkar felt bad as he didn't intend to make Bani or any of her family member cry like that… Rano went to Bani… and both the sisters were in tears… so Kiran came along and make them quiet…after some time they calm down and said sorry to Pushkar…

Pushkar: its ok Bani I understand… I'm sorry Bani but we still don't know who that person is…who planned the accident… as it is too early say any such information… we need to find more clues to get bottom of this accident mystery…

Bani: then how can you say that it was a planned incident and not just an unfortunate… how can you say that Pushkar? .....

Pushkar: we have traced the lorry driver who was driving the lorry and was involved with the accident…and we tortured him…threaten him… and out of fear he has confessed that… someone paid him to do this job… but unfortunately… the driver doesn't know who that person was… and by the look of it… it looks that lorry driver was telling the truth and he really doesn't know the real culprit …

Bani: Pushkar…thanks for letting us know about all these information…and we will help you with whatever you need… I just want you to find out the real culprit…please Pushkar find out who killed my sister because of his/her selfish motive…

Pushkar: I assure you all that the police force will do its best to punish the culprit…you please don't worry …oh yes I'll be going to the hospital to check on Mr. Walia…

Bani: sure inspector … right now I'm going to Mandir and afterwards I and my family will be coming to the hospital as well… so we will see you there…

I know some of you will be angry because of Daksh's entry...but I have to have him...but don't worry it will Jai and Bani only all the way...so keep reading how Jai and BAni will get together...

guys please leave plz ur comment both good and bad...

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago

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naima

@teenbeauty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

great parts
hope jai wakes up soon
continue soon

nim.

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#40

Hey its an excellent FF..I just now read all parts n loving it...
So Anamika is dead now n Jai doesnt know it yet...I have a feeling that the doc might tell the family that Jai is not supposed to hear any shocking news n then the family might decide to present Bani as Anamika...

Just a small gues...

Pls continue soon..

Rama

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