Fan Fic-Pyaar Kabhee Marta Nahin

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A GR8 FANFIC BY NAZIA AND ZENIA

Pyaar kabhee marta nahin

If u believe in undying love no matter how far

the soulmates have drifted apart………then just

read on……………………………………….

Preview……

There is a one year leap and Kripa(K) and co(which includes Prithvi(P),Mishti(Mi),Anitah(A),Kartik(K) and Manik(M)) r holidaying in Dubai clubbing it with their show which is to be held there…Angad in the meanwhile was in prison(for Josh's murder) and after a few months was released with the help of Shabbir(S) who has now become his good friend.With his help Angad once more estbd a new identity for himself and started working towards establishing his career as a musician cum singer in Dubai…..But all this while he has been keeping track of Kripa 's life(her marriage to Prithvi esp)….Anitah has gotten engaged to Manik and Mishti to Kartik…….So everyone is in Dubai including Naina (N) at the moment and Angad feels that this is the right time to come infront of Kripa and to make her pay for hurting his feelings and for betraying him……Only he is no longer Angad but Zaib(Z) who has more of vengeance and hatred inside him for the person whom he loves the most---Kripa…he just can't stop thinking about her even if it is with hatred….

Part1..

K- Prithvi jaldi karo haein late ho rahaa hai…..tumhe tayyar hone mein itna waqt kyun lagtaa hai?????Sab log neeche lounge mein hamara intezaar kar rehe hain….Anitah aur Mishti ko shopping ke liye jaana hai…isi rate pe challenge to mall bandh ho jayengee.

P-Oh God Kripa..aa rahaa hoon…Mujhe thoda waqt to do ready hone ke liye.Ek ghante se to tum bathroom mein thee….

K- Achcha theek hai now comeon…

In the Mall….

The entire gang is busy shopping.Kripa not much interested in buying too many things just wandered away to a perfume shop and suddenly felt the presence of someone right behind her.The presence was so familiar…….someone whom she knew for ages……...it just felt like Angad…but when she turned around she found found just a small kid standing behind her…Her eyes kept searching in the crowded mall for Angad but he was nowhere in sight. She kept repeating to herself…why was she even thinking about him when he had ditched her by having a one night stand with Simone….she didn't do anything wrong by testifying against him in court……but how could he be here he should be in prison his sentence was for three years……But still in heart of hearts she knew that it was him that she had felt just now so close to her and wanted to see him just once….

P- Krripaaaa…….

K- Huh???????

P- Since when I am calling out for u…..which world r u lost in?????See what I have bought for u…….Cartier earrings(dangling since our Kripa really loves them)…

K- Prithvi this is so nice but I really don't need them.U need not have spent so much naa on these earrings….

P- I know Kripa u have never asked me for anything but still can't I just give u a gift????

K- Yes you can …….hmmm….it's OK.Thanks anyways…..

P- Kripa can't we try to bury the past and lead normal lives.I mean Angad is no longer there in our lives anymore to cheat us…so why not just try and lead normal lives..

K- Prithvi(a little hesitant since he is coming closer to her than permitted )please…..I need some time…I just can't …I'm sorry and she turns and goes towards the rest of the gang…..

Behind one of the pillars in the mall someone is watching them and was audience to this entire conversation……As the camera zooms in we see a goodlooking guy in a tee with a hairband on his forehead..his look complete with earrings and chains with a locket saying the no5…and golden streaked hair…….He had a smirk on his face…..and he just walks away slowly….

Part2

Back at the hotel everyone is seated at the coffee shop enjoying themselves, seeing all the things that they had just bought basically having a great time before their show preparations started which was set to take place after a week…..But Kripa was lost in her own world………..even otherwise she could hardly see herself getting close to Mishti and Anitah..

K- I am feeling a little claustrophobic in here.Do u guys mind if I went out for some freshair???

P- I'll come out with you Kripa…(as usual Chipkoo)

K- No Prithvi..pls just enjoy yourself and don't worry about me.Main theek hoon..

Kripa goes out of the hotel towards the beach……She is so lost in her own world that she doesn't even realize how far she has wandered…she has almost reached the end of the beach.She suddenly feels the presence of Angad around her and looks behind her…she sees a guy walking away……wearing a denim jacket and a headband with streaked golden hair….his gait was just like Angad's…and his perfume too smelled just like Angad's Mesmorized she keeps walking behind him …….

following him as if he were Pied Piper……This man leads her back into the hotel but suddenly gets lost in the crowd in the lobby……..Kripa's eyes r frantically looking for him…..but she has lost him….Sadly she turns away…..and moves towads the elevators.She suddenly gets the same smell..the same perfume that the guy was wearing when she was following him…she follows the scent and stops infront of room no 13

She hesitates for a second but decides to try opening gthe door.On turning the knob, the door opened and she froze at what she saw inside……..

Keep Guessing........till i post the next part......😳

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wow interesting .plzzzzzzzz continue
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I glad u liked it.....I'll be posting the next part soon..so just hangon for a few mins.....and keep reading....I promise we'll make it really interesting .... 😉
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Part3
Inside the room on the side table next to the bed was a photograph of Angad and Kripa
She was so shocked that it took her some time to find her voice.
K- Who's there???Who's there inside???
She went inside the room but there wasn't anyone inside.She ran out of the room to find Prithvi.
K- Prithvi… pls come fast with me.I have to show you something.I think I saw Angad here in the hotel and u know what he's staying in the same hotel in room no 13.I saw a photograph of ours next to his bed…pls come fast.
P- Whatz wrong with you Kripa…Angad is in jail miles away in Mumbai ,how on earth can he be here…u r hallucinating..
K-Pls believe me.I can show u the photograph also.Come right now.Dragging him with her she brought him to room no 13.
P- Fine for ur satisfaction I'll open the door and check…
Kripa held her breath as he turned the brass knob of the door.But on opening the door there was nothing on the bedside table.The entire room seemed to be empty.
P- See I told you Angad cannot be here…..Kripa when will you stop thinking abt Angad..
It's been a year since we have been married why the h*** can't you forget him.
Saying this Prithvi just fumes out of the room.
K-It can't be true…I'm so sure I saw him…I felt his presence..he has to be here.

A week has passed by and Kripa just can't get Angad's thought out of her mind.She seems to be feeling him everywhere be it in the shopping mall or wherever they go out for sightseeing.But she hasn't seen his face…..but it's just his presence and not being able to see him that is driving her insane….
P- Kripa,I have been noticing that for the past few days you seem to be lost.U hardly speak and incase anyone has to speak to you they have to repeat their question four or five times before you answer them.Tell me what's wrong ,maybe I can help you.
K- It's nothing Prithvi,it's just that I can feel Angad's presence everywhere…Pls try to believe me..he is there wherever I go…
P- Just stop it Kripa…..gor Heaven's sake….HE IS IN PRISON why can't u just get that into ur head….Allright I'll do one thing I'll call up the jail authorities and then you can be at peace that Angad is in jail only….

Talkin to the jail authorities…(jailer-J)
P- Is this the Arthur Road jailer whom I am speaking to?
J-Yes
P- I am Prithvi Bose frm the bose enter comp speaking.I wanted to enquire Angad Khanna who is currently serving a three yr prison sentence..

J- I'm sorry Mr. Bose but we tried contacting Mr Khanna's family several times but there was no response…he expired three days back and we have already preformed the last rites for him.

P- what????????He is dead…
K- Give me the phone……..What happened to Angad????Where is he???
J- Madam he expired three days back in the hospital.
Kripa was speechless and was just staring ahead with tears streaming down….she kept thinking of the times when she first met him and how they used to hate eachother in the beginning…and how they came together and became one……the moments that they had spent together happy and sad kept flashing frame by frame before her eyes.Hers legs had given way and she was sitting on the floor next to the bed hugging her knees and crying.
P- Kripa , I know u r feeling bad but just think it's good that a criminal and a fraud like him doesn't exist anymore to cheat us…..I'll leave u alone for sometime ..
K- Prithvi pls stay on for sometime…pls
P- No Kripa I need to go I have some work…..U need some time alone so just take care.I'll be back soon…
Kripa kept weeping sitting in that position for god knows how long….she slowly got up and started walking towards the beach as she felt this was one place where she felt she could connect with Angad….She kept repeating to herself that she had started to hate him but still never wanted him to die.She felt so alone in this world as if a part of her was no more.She felt an emptiness within her that phaps no time no person could fill in.This would remain with her forever….Why did she still feel so when Angad had done so much to hurt her???He had a one night stand with Simone and he even shamelessly accepted that fact….it was just too much for her..how could he do that to her….After all that she shouldn't be feeling so sorry hearing abt his death.But here she felt totally torn apart.She reasoned with herself that she still loved him and would continue to do so till she existed in this world.

In the meanwhile……
P- Kartik I have news for u…Angad expired three days back.I just called up the jailer in Mumbai.
K-What!!!!!What r u saying?????
Prithvi then tells him abt the entire conversation with the jailer…
P- U must inform Naina Aunty…abt this.
K- No pls no not now atleast.The show is scheduled for tom and she is a heart patient.She'll fall ill if she gets this news..I'll break the news to her later.
P- OK as u wish....I have to go now …..have some imp calls to make..
K-OK.
Prithvi talking to someone(U) over the phone.
P- Something has recently come up…
U- what is it???
P- Angad died three days back in the hospital
U- What??So u shld be glad that he ..the thorn in ur life is out of ur life forever.By the way what abt the money????My account still doesn't show the balance and when do I get to see u.It's been over a month that we have even met.When will u be comin over to my place????How's ur wife keeping???I'm sure she isn't too happy after getting this news…(sarcastically)
P- I'll send the money only next week coz I am busy with the shows…and we'll meet up once I come back and regarding my wife u had better keep ur big mouth shut…..and he disconnects the phone.


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yeah guys we will get some pics for you guys as well?
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Part 4
Kripa was still at the waterfront lost in her own world crying softly to herself……when she again felt Angad's presence around her….With just one last hope, as if this was the last string in her life she looked up…….but found no one near her…..Dejected she looked away but as she was lookin away she again saw a familiar figure walk away….he was the same person she had seen the other day…he walked just like Angad….she got up and ran after him.She eventually caught up with him…….and with shaky hands touched his shoulder….but when the stranger turned towards her her face fell..This wasn't her Angad……..She apologized and retreated……As if in a trance she started walking back to the hotel…….She didn't even notice a speeding car coming towards her and hardly noticed a pair of strong powerful arms pull her away by her waist from the path of the car.Suddenly she realized with a jolt what had happened…..and turned around to thank the person who had saved her life but saw no one there in the vicinity….She was too numb to even react……but strangely she felt happy in some corner of her heart.She felt as if the touch was so familiar….the touch that she had been longing for sooo long…her Angad's touch….but he was no where around…but someone did save her whose touch was just like Angad's ,so she couldn't be hallucinating……Confused she found her way back to the hotel….Not finding Prithvi in the room she went off to sleep.

Next day was the day of the show….Everyone was busy with the last minute preparations…….There were a host of stars coming in frm Mumbai to perform in Dubai and they were to arrive in the evening a few hrs before the prog was to start.But they suddenly got the news that there had been a major earthquake in India and Pakistan and many flights were cancelled /delayed…..the bottomline was that the stars were unable to reach Dubai since their flight was cancelled.Kartik,Prithvi and Mishti were in a soup….they didn't know what to do.
P- What do we do now????All the tickets have been sold and the crowd will just tear us apart…I just can't think of anything.
K- Well we will have to do something right???
Organisers(O)- Well,I have a suggestion…what if Ms.Kripa Sharma sings for us …the crowd wld really love her voice and wld be very happy to hear her sing after more than a year….if u cld request her Mr.Bose.
Prithvi looks at Kripa with pleading eyes……
K- No it's not possible for me to sing anymore…I just can't ….it's impossible.
O- Well Sir, then phaps we cld request Mr.Zaib to sing for us.He is a musician cum singer and is a very promising international rock star….He stays in Dubai itself.So if u cld request him to sing then r problem cld be solved.I'll give u his contact number if u agree.
P and K(in unison)- Fine we'll speak to him.
Zaib's Manager(ZM)- Zaib is too busy and doesn't give public performances ever and even if he does agree, in such short notice how can u even expect him to perform….
P- (pleading tone) Pls pls talk to him just once maybe he might just agree.
ZM- (calls after sometime) Mr.Bose I have good news for u.He has agreed to perform.I think we shld meet and sign all the agrerments…now.
P- (Ecstatic) Sure…..

Part 4
The Show
The venue was teeming with crazy fans of Zaib……Kripa was standing near the foot of the stage amongst the crazy fans while the rest of the gang were away from the crowd waiting for the show to start…
The lights are dim on the stage and there is a figure of a person standing with his back to the crowds………"Dil ne dil ko pukara" from K Naa Pyaar Hai is playing and the spotlight falls on the figure on the stage and the person slowly turns towards the crowd…The fans scream and literally r going crazy…..But Kripa's eyes are still, frozen as if all time has stopped around her…..she just couldn't believe her eyes……she was seeing Angad perform before her on stage…..how cld that be since she had heard with her own ears that he was dead….but still in some corner of her heart there was hope still flickering that she wld be able to see her Angad once more, alive and well…..and here he was…but the person on stage although looked a lot like him and sang like him and moved around like him certainly did not dress up like him….Zaib had longer hair,wore a headband.Wore a lot of chains round his neck and earrings too(although Angad too wore earrings)….But Zaib did not have Angad's trademark tattoooo on his arm.Everything abt this man reminded her abt her Angad but there was also something so different abt him….
Lost in her thoughts she didn't even realize that he had got down frm the stage and was standing right in front of her singing…..he suddenly held her by her hand and took her onstage and they twirled together on Zaib's number……..she just kept thinking of the days when she and Angad used to dance together and all the times that they spent together. The way this man looked into her eyes while singing reminded her so much of Angad…his touch……She didn't even realize that she had tears in her eyes…Eventually they song came to an end and they broke off.

P and K- It is so strange that Zaib has so much of similarity with Angad….But Angad's dead how is that possible……
P- No way, I'm gonna check on this guy…….and Prithvi leaves to go to the green room

In Zaib's green room….
Prithvi sneaks in…and rummages thru Zaib's bag…..goes thru all his papers and passport….It's an American passport and suddenly someone comes up frm behind..
Z- What do u think ur doing????Sneaking into my room and rummaging thru my things????
P- Don't try to pretend Angad…..I know it's u…..I can get u arrested for cheating and murder and keeping a false passport.
Z- Listen I think u have gone out of ur mind…..who the hell do u think u are to talk to me like that.Nd since u r talking of me getting arrested then let me remind u that right now I can get u arrested for invading my privacy and for verbal use and insulting me…..So get the hell out of here….right now before I get u kicked out of my room…And by the way I am not Angad or whateva name that u were calling me by.I am Zaib did u get that??
P- I am gonna return Angad….Zaib and this time with the police so be prepared…..u cheat………

At Zaib's home…..(Police-PI)
PI- Mr.Zaib we wanna see ur papers coz Mr.Bose claims that u r an escaped murder convict frm Mumbai…..
Z- Sure why don't u all come in and I'll get all my papers.Just a sec.
PI- After going thru all his papers and his passport,I think this person is not Angad but Zaib Mr.Bose and I don't think it is right to invade his privacy.So we shld leave.
P- But wait a min Inspector…he might have staged all this…
PI- I don't think so…and if u still doubt it I'm sure ur wife Kripa will be able to clear all ur doubts since she must be knowing Angad really well having worked with him…So Mrs.Kripa Bose do u think this man id Angad??
K- (Staring at Zaib all this while thinking abt all the times that she spent with Angad…….) No this cannot be MY Angad……
P- Kripa …whatz wrong with u???what r u saying???
PI- Well this confirms it that this man is Zaib and not Angad and pls Mr.Bose I think we must leave…..
Slowly everyone leaves Zaib's place everyone but Kripa…..
Z- Thnx Kripa for believing in me and negating their weird thought process…I am Angad….that's the funniest and weirdest thing I heard.
K- U don't need to thank me Angad…
Z- What did u call me???
K- Angad…and u don't have to pretend in front of me coz I know who u are and what u are capable of…
Z-But why did u then say that I am not Angad……u cld have said otherwise…
K- Coz I didn't want to commit the same mistake by testifying against u like I did earlier..U deserve a mush harsher punishment for what u have done to me and to Josh…..
Even a prison sentence is not enough..for u….
And Krips storms out of the room…leaving Zaib standing frozen in the centre of his plush living room.A keen observer wld notice the pain in his eyes…….


Part5
Later that evening……
K- I don't think that's Angad.U know Prithvi there r cares where we do find two similar lookin people who aren't even remotely connected with eachother and mistake them for the same person….
P- I think ur right……..it better not be Angad………or………
K- Relax Prithvi and enjoy the party afterall the show has been such a success due to Zaib right????
P- Yeah……I think ur right Kartik….We shld party mannnn…..where r the girls and where is r Manik????He just seems to stick to Anitah like stickfast….they laugh tog…
K- There they all r….welcome guyz…So what do u'll wanna drink???
After dinner….they all decide to go to a nearby disc….But Kripa excuses herself……
K- I am not feeling too well.I think I'd better go and sleep.Pls excuse me..
M- Kripa u neva come out with us.Pls come along u'll feel better.
K- No seriously I'm just not feeling well Mishty I need some rest….u guys carry on and enjoy ur self.
P- Take care Kripa shld I stay on with u???
K- No pls Prithvi u pls carry on.
P- OK as u wish…Ur wish is my command.
Kripa goes back to her room and waits for the rest of the gang to go and then she leaves…………………………………………..


In Zaib's House…..
Everything is dark inside….there is not a soul out side his house…Kripa slowly sneaks in from the hedge and enters the house thru one of the open French windows.She is determined to find some clue that will tell her that this person is Angad and that her Angad did not die after all…..She goes up the stairs and searches in the rooms on the first floor..She doesn't find anything in the two rooms…she finally goes to the third room….
K- This seems to be Zaib's bedroom….There were photographs of Zaib on the wall…..She walked towards the table in the room and started checking all the drawers….. Suddenly she felt someone enter the room….And the lights were switched on……
Z- I was expecting u …….. wondering why u didn't come earlier…….U have a crazy husband.I expected u to be saner but alas u seem to be one step ahead of him…U have entered my bedroom and are going thru all my papers…….Why can't u'll just let me be???
Z- So what do u think I shld be doing with u ….U know it isn't nice to break into my bedroom at midnight since I don't think ur aware of my reputation……..Shld I call the police…..instead????I'm thinking…Do u have any tips and suggestions abt what I shld be doing to u ?????( with a sneer).
K- Angad why u doing this???
Z- Well,I'm not doing anything Mrs.Bose…..tumhee toh kar rahee ho jo kuch bhee karna hai.U know what why don't u come down and have something before I reach u back to where u are staying………
K- I can go back on my own…
Z- What!!! At it's half past midnight….I won't let u go alone…..
K- Why u so concerned abt me??????
Z- Well,I am concerned abt every pretty woman who comes to my bedroom past midnight…but I am seeming to like u a bit more than the others..So I offered to take u back home……
Anyways be my guest and come with me….He takes her down and gives her a glass of coke to drink………and sits across her watching her intently.
K- So r u gonna call up the police or will u just let me go???
Z- Well,I told u I'll drop u back to ur hotel…..ur husband must be waiting impatiently for u (with a sneer)


After finishing her drink….Kripastarted to feel a little uneasy and very sleepy…..
Z- What happened Kripa Bose ????
K- Nothing I'm just not feeling too well.Could I use ur bathroom for a minute.I think I'm gonna throwup…..
Z- Sure….u need to go this way….he takes her to his bathroom,the one attached to his bedroom.He waited for her outside on the bed.
By the time Kripa came out she had started to feel very very drowsy and she just came and sat on the bed…..holding her head which was spinning.
Z- He slowly stood up and went towards Kripa….
K- What r u trying to do????
Zaib without a word just went and sat down next to Kripa on the bed and hugged her.Kripa hardly knew what was happening…..Zaib then laid her down on his bed…….



Part 6
Next Morning
K- Ohh!!! My head hurts like anything….
Z- (Comes into the room).Oh ur up so early.I thought u needed to sleep a little more….
K- (still lying on Zaib's bed) Where the hell am I??? Recalling last night's incident….Oh my God!!!!What happened here last night Zaib???? She saw that the bed next to her had also been slept in……
Z- Nothing much that shouldn't have happened….I think it's quite natural between two people who r attracted to eachother……….really..just forget it…
K- What the hell do you mean forget it?????Pls how cld u let this happen?????What do I do now…..?????
Z- Simple just go back to ur hotel and keep quite abt it…
K- (disgusted) how can u even say such a thing……….
Z- It's past eight in the morning and I'm sure ur husband must be frantically lookin for u…plus I don't have any more time to waste since I have a lot of things lined up for today…So get ready fast and I'll drop u at ur hotel and leave.
K- I can go by myself….
Z- Listen don't argue with me…..
K- Almost in tears,OK I'll get ready fast…

During the car ride there was hardly any conversation bet the two of them…..They reached the hotel within half an hour………..Zaib came up with Kripa right upto her suite and much to her chagrin knocked on the door.Prithvi opened the door and Zaib stood there with a wicked smile on his face…..
Z- I just came to drop Mrs.Bose .Yesterday she came over to my house and then she felt a little unwell.So naturally she slept at my place…I cldn't inform u earlier since I didn't have u r nos…
P- (already red with rage)…Thanks anyways..
Kripa quietly went inside and Zaib left them whistling to himself……
P- So u went to meet Zaib yesterday so late at night…that's why u didn't come with us…U know how worried I was when I didn't see u in bed yesterday night when I came back…So what all did the two of u end up doing???????
K- She just wouldn't look up…
P- Answer me damn it (he banged his fist on the table in rage and broke a vase).
K- Started sobbing and as usual apologizing….I'm sorry I didn't mean too.I hardly knew what was happening…
P- I'll tell u what was happening…My wife after spending the whole night with the look alike of her boyfrnd gets dropped by the same shameless man and my wife sits before me and says that I hardly knew what was happening…..Earlier with Angad u ended up getting pregnant.Now what,whatz gonna happen this time Kripa???U never let me come near u and u end up spending the night with some lookalike of Angad????How low can u get Kripa???
K- Pls Prithvi believe me I didn't mean to…I didn't even realize….
P- That's enough Kripa don't say a word beyond this….I just can't take it anymore…
And he leaves the room in a huff…..
K- Sobbing…..continuously……….suddenly her cell phone rings…Hello…..
Z- Hi this is Zaib…..I just called up to tell u that nothing happened bet us yesterday night.U just fainted and I was waiting for u to wake up…
K- What???? Why didn't u tell me earlier????Why didn't u tell that to Prithvi???Why…..the phone has been disconnected….
K- Prithvi …where r u????She goes to the poolside…….and finds him there alone.Prithvi I need to talk to u alone right now.Its very urgent…..
P- What else is remaining Kripa to talk abt.U have already put the icing on the cake by sleeping with that man…..
K- That's what I wanted to tell u that I did not sleep with him…I just happened to faint and he waited for me till morning to wake up…that's all.
P- And u expect me to believe that crap???U r worse than a s***….Just get the hell out of here.U disgust me and I feel dirty to even come near u…….
K- Prithvi how cld u even talk like that to me or for that matter even think like that.Even Angad has never spoken to me like that.
P- There u still can't stop thinking abt ur ex-boyfrnd whose dead and gone…..
K- She started crying and just walked away to her room…..
Behind the bushes there was someone listening to this entire conversation smiling….He just left the place whistling away the tune of KYPH…..


Part 7
Kripa did not ome out of her room throughout the day….she was just sitting in one corner of the room looking out of her window at the swimming pool.The waters seemed to be so calm just the opposite of her life……She felt that after Angad had cheated on her,Prithvi her true frnd wld atleast support her.Eventhough she did not want to marry him,he kept on explaining to her that he cld not see her lead her life alone wasting it after some cheat who ditched her and had brought her so much of disgrace and misery to her.Even if she did not have relations with him she wld still be married to Prithvi and no one cld point fingers at her any more…..It was then after some persuasion that she decided to marry Prithvi…..She had told him very clearly that he shld never expect her to have any relations with him since she cldnt do that with anyone other than Angad….And today…..she was shocked not just hearing what he had to say but with his expressions.It scared her to think that this same Prithvi who had helped Angad and Kripa to come tog cld hate Angad so much that he cld be happy with his death and not just that she had seen hatred towards her in his eyes too which phaps had lasted for a split second…But she did notice it…She was feeling very tired…and couped up ,so she decided to go out for some fresh air…..
In the lawns of the hotel…….
P- Listen I'm very upset today I'll call u later….What is it now???I told u earlier that I will send ur money next week……..I have another problem that has cropped up here.
(he is talking to someone over the phone)A lookalike of Angad has cropped up frm nowhere here and Kripa is again hankering after him….to the extent that she even spent a night with him…My case is diff…pls don't compare me with Kripa……She can't just go around spending nights with strange people.I just can't tolerate that…I allowed her to stay with Angad and kept watching all the time how they stuck to eachother.My blood used to boil to even see them sit by eachother…..But then my foolproof plan was already working……………But that Josh had to come in between and spoil the show…Thank God I got rid of him…see even while dying he came of use to me….I put the blame of his murder on Angad….and poor Angad was left rotting in prison…..and is now peacefully sitting in heaven having cleared the path for me….And just imagine Kripa believed that Angad slept with u……..when nothing actually happened..Poor Angad kept on screaming his innocence to the prison walls while his ladylove just walked into my arms.Now that is what one calls brains and poor Angad----he must be the most misunderstood character in history.Anyways I'll call u later…no I'll meet u once I reach Mumbai and I promise I'll even stay with u this time…Bye…Take care.

Kripa who was standing behind some trees was stunned to hear this….just speechless………..So Prithvi was the guy who had cheated her , killed Josh,cheated Angad put her Angad through so much of pain and agony ,so much of grief that he died……..She just turned away frm there and started walking….she realized after a long time that she had reached the waterfront and sat there staring at the calm water before her……then as if a volcano had erupted within her she started sobbing…..wailing ,for not trusting her Angad enough to believe him,not trusting a true frnd like Josh…. And for believing in Prithvi who had pretended to be her frnd for soo long and was all the time planning to kill Angad and snatch her away from him.When she thought of Angad's one night stand with Simone or rather lack of one…she got reminded of her situation today which was not very different frm Angad's…….She cursed herself for having falsely testified against Angad… she felt responsible for his death…………….she just couldn't take it any longer she wanted to die for what she had done to her beloved Angad……..but no….she said to herself…She must wait till she pays back Prithvi his dues for what he had done to Angad and Josh and for cheating the both of them.She just couldn't stay with that man anylonger…She decided to take the next flight back to Mumbai.She had to get up and do a lot of things and there was very little time left for her……All this while she didn't realize someone come and sit next to her as she sat there sobbing…lost in her own world…..
As Kripa turned to get up she saw Zaib sitting right next to her.She first startled on seeing him next to her…..his likeness to Angad kept popping up in her mind..but she was slowly getting used to him being Zaib.
K- What is it???
Z- No I was just walking by and saw u sobbing…..so I just thought that phaps u might wanna tell me incase u were in affix and if I cld help u out or not…..after all u were my guest last night…and I told u I liked u better than the rest…
K- Just stop it!!!!!….Why wld u even wanna help me?????Why r u out to ruin my life haan???What crime did I commit???I just mistook u for my Angad that's all..
Z- What crime u have committed u have no idea…Anyways I'm sure u don't wanna spend the rest of the night here though I must admit that this waterfront is definitely a very romantic place……I've noticed that wheneva u r upset u always end up coming to this place…..
K- Have u been following me???
Z- No why shld I ???I have better things in life to do…I just happened to notice u the other day pulling a long face and sitting here.Anyways I guess we shld get up.I'll drop u at ur hotel..it's on my way and no…….please don't even try arguing with me…
K-Fine drop me to the hotel..
While driving…
Z- R u always so quiet and upset all the time????
K- Lookin at him..I don't discuss personal issues with all nd sundry u know….esp those who lie to me….like u did today in the morning..
Z- I'm sorry abt that..Do u want me to fall on my knees and apologize to u???Shld I speak to ur husband..I can if u permit me to do so….
K- That's not necessary……there the hotel has come thank u very much for the ride and nice having met u…
Z- Surprised….I'm sure we'll be meeting again….
K- No,I don't think so coz I'm leaving…
Z- What??? Why???Anyways bye and have a nice journey and if God wishes then we shall meet again….


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Posted: 19 years ago
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guys i will continue further on?
nazia
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yeah darling i will continue so would antzzz (zenia)
nazia
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
luv ur fan fiction
plz continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10

Heya..

Guyz I loved it, continu soon...

and if you have time read Prem Kahaani, My new romantic fan-fic..

Luv ya..

Ouma

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