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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: poojasidd123

Very exciting. sorry wasn't able to comment since the last few updates. NK and anjali's convo was damn hilarious. and then arshi going to meet one another. little arnav got so worried and shocked to see khushi at the restaurant that his desires vanished just in a second! and then the belan scene! shit...!! chapter 22 was a reflection on what they shhuld have done way before. but then how were we to have our kinky and lola misadventures?

Thank you! I'm glad to see you here again but I know life gets busy and commenting on IF is kinda a pain in the neck
Glad you liked the updates! And yes, without the miscommunication we would not have the hotness. And hotness is still to come 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: brishti84

What a change in mood. These two were so mature during their talk. I loved how neither ever said 'you did this and that'. It was all 'I can't believe I did...' Neither blamed the other and instead focused on their own shortcomings and mistakes. That takes maturity and love and to some extend trust.

My favorite was the open ended finish to the chapter. It's realistic. Even if Khushi told Arnav that she went to the cafe to break things off, did she really have to wear a sexy black saree to do that? Let alone go bra less?! Eh earth to Khushi, let's not kid ourselves please. She wanted to look good for Kinky and please him by following through with his request. I don't think that she would have gone through with it all as in physically but I don't necessarily believe that she would have ended things at the cafe either. Not when she did what Kinky asked her to which wasn't a normal thing to ask for at a first date. So Arnav shouldn't feel so bad about not knowing what would've happened if Lola wasn't Khushi because same goes for her. It's best to forget about it and move on because otherwise it's a downward spiral.

Your review makes me cry. You've put the 'trust' thing is better words than I have! Love it ❤️
You're right. Neither of them were ready to end the affair, no matter what they said to themselves. Both of them had enough to be guilty of.. But trusting each other and owning to their mistakes was supposed to be their redemption and the starting of a new phase in their relationship. No couple comes out of something like this unaltered. But that alteration is what is gonna be ahem ahem
Spoiler Alert? 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deewani_29

Awesome as girl , thanks for the pm

Thanks and welcome 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART TWENTY-THREE

It was like their wedding night all over again.

The hesitation, the blushing, the nervousness. The tentatively lowering themselves to their sides of the bed. The sneaking glances at each other.

They'd spent the evening apologising.

Expressing their shame. Drowning in guilt. And comforting each other when it all got too overwhelming.

Laying their heads on their respective pillows, they turned to face each other.

"It's been a weird day, hunh?" Khushi said quietly.

Arnav snorted. "Weird? More like absolutely bat-shit crazy."

Khushi giggled.

"You know what's weirder?" she asked.

"No, what?"

"Your Salman Khan picture."

Arnav rolled his eyes and looked away.

"Really!" she laughed. "What were you even thinking?! I could never have thought that YOU, of all people, would do something like that."

"So you're saying I'm not cool enough to be Salman Khan?" he narrowed his eyes playfully at her.

Khushi pursed her lips, her eyes dancing with mischief.

"Seriously?! You think I'm less cool than Salman?"

She seemed to think hard before resolutely shaking her head.

"Now you've done it," he said in mock anger as he lunged at her.

Khushi's delighted giggles filled the room as Arnav tickled her sides, laughing in her ear. With fluttering fingers, she tried to tickle him back and as soon as her hands found his funny bone, he rolled on top of her, clutching her wrists upon the pillow to pin her down, his uneven breath, erratic with laughter, falling in warm huffs upon her nose.

As the laughter died down and awareness grew, both Arnav and Khushi's heartbeats went haywire. Eyes refused to look away from each other. Arms tightened around each other. And lips inched closer to each other.

This kiss was very different from the last. Where the previous one had been laced with passion, an explosion of longing, this one was slow and soft, a gentle plea for forgiveness and a promise to love.

When they finally broke away from each other, Arnav carefully rolled back from his wife, relinquishing the shackles he's created around her wrists with his hands.

Breathing heavily with her eyes still closed, Khushi's hand smoothed against the mattress, searching. When her fingers found his, she slowly laced them together, a tiny smile pulling the corners of her mouth up.

"Good night, Kinky," she whispered without opening her eyes.

She didn't need to look at him to know he was smiling indulgently at her too. Because she heard it in his whispered, "Good night, Lola."

Reviews to me are like goodnight kisses are to Arnav and Khushi. Drop me a comment!
Edited by PhoenixKhushi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Okay, so this comment was due since yesterday, but I was really busy writing, studying, and doing some shitty stuff. However, now I am here and the first one too!

About the previous chapter:
First, what I liked about the update was that you didn't leave the discussion for the day after. I am glad that it happened, and that they were sensible enough to know when to stop. Sex would definitely not have been the solution.
Second, I really liked that they spoke about it and communicated, not holding back. It was mature way to sort it out. And the fact that you didn't write long explanations shows your maturity as a writer, because the message came across nonetheless.
Third, I loved that you brought out the essence of their relationship in this chapter. The love, care, understanding, it was all do well written. It was a perfect representation of what their relationship is based on. I really liked how they supported each other, and accepted their own mistakes instead of blaming one another.
This chapter is by far my favourite for the reason that I saw a glimpse of their relationship which was beyond sexual attraction.

Now, for chapter 23:
Again, a great chapter. Some would find it boring after all the Lola-Kinky action that you have been giving. But in this chapter, I actually saw and felt their love. It had this warm, fuzzy feeling in my stomach after I read this chapter. It was so nice to read about them enjoying each other's company and rediscovering their relationship at some level, like it should have been. But guess it takes Tinder, roleplay, and drama for Arnav and Khushi to act like adults.

P.S. - I loved the kiss!

P.P.S - Now, what I'd really like to read next would be Lola and Kinky's entry into Arnav and Khushi's bedroom!
Edited by 8520NK - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved part 23👏
Developing relationship, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome yar
their relation is going on right track...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally the love birds are back on track.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww. so sweet of them! the guilt, the confrontation, reflecting their deeds, the repentance and asking for forgiveness. and then the cuteness of the ticking and their kiss. hotness is about to come! they are yet to reflect fully on their kinky chats though. I am so waiting to see them!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good transition chapter. Both are coming to grips with the situation. There is still a lot of realization, coming to terms and most importantly and difficult acceptance needed for both of them, individually first and then together.
Edited by brishti84 - 8 years ago

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