Commitment~~SS{Part 8_Pg.35}05-08-17 NO PM - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry being late Latheef. 😉
I got PM yesterday but reading today.
Toh aag dono taraf se lagi huwi thi, 😆
Shravan's POV was more romantic than Sumo's one. 😳 every time he used to make his heart shut up. He was so obvious than Sumo 😉 he heard Sumo & her friends convo so he came to know she had also feelings for him. 😛 it was really funny every time he used to behave normal so he wouldn't looks obvious. so both are committed & kept their word to each other even after 8 yrs. 😳 she didn't forget him when he messaged her on FB. 😛

Teenage love blooming even after 8 years, so sweet. 😳 😳

Thanks for PM
Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww this was adorable beautiful dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Physics is boring 😃 Not really 😉
Poor Shravan sumo ke bajah se daat padgaya bichare ko 😃
Shravan ka bad luck, donno ki agar same batch hota toh kitna maja ata 😃
Seriously there is the tashan between Shravan's Heart and mind about sumo..
Bhagavan jab dete hain chappad phadke dete hain 😃
Shravan's brain and Heart convo is really fun 😃
"yaad toh woh unhe kia jaati hai jo humare saath na ho...tum toh hamesha se ho...Mere saath..."Beautiful line 👏
Yes both are commited..
Thanks for pm

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Smita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#1600 coming up Soon😉...Bas SOON ka time limit defined nahi hai😆😆
Here it is...!!!Wrote in 45 minutes 39 seconds o be precise 😆as this is the only day I am allowed to touch the laptopSorry for all those whom I didn't reply as I get my lappy very rarely and I use forums from an Nokia E71 which is probably the last piece on the earth😆😆I cant quote comments,like comments and cant even insert emotions
I have read all the updates ALL of them but comment nahi kiya coz typing on a Keypad with long nails is difficult😆😆Enough of my bak bak here goes the update...
This is now turned into an SS and I hope god helps me continue this...
This goes to all who requested for the continuation and specially specially To AISHA as she was behind me so so much to continue this...Bae..This one is for you..!!!ENJOY
😳
Plus..I have changed the ending of the last part a little so I get the flow...Dont mind😊


And Now I sit here...after 8 long years since this incident...searching her FB profile...After she moved out for her hotel management course she had changed her number due to which I wasn't able to contact her for 6 years...I found her account and shot her a message...

"Yaad hu na mai??"

She replied..."yaad toh woh unhe kia jaati hai jo humare saath na ho...tum toh hamesha se ho...Mere saath..."

I smiled at her response and the next minute I was shot back to the reality...Pushkar voice made my thoughts retreat back...She had not replied, I had not sent any message though...

"Bhai roz ye account khol ke baith jaate ho...Aap usko message kyu nahi karte??"He asked me for the umpteenth time and my face frowned...

"Chod na Pushkar..."I said shutting the laptop...

"nahi bhaiya..Roz ka hai aapka ye...Stalk karte ho..smile karte ho ..aur mere aate account band kar dete ho...Aakhir ek message karne mey harz he kya hai??"

"Pushkar please...message karne se koi fayda nahi hai because she is not going to reply..."I said sadly..

"How can you say so bhaaiya...Why don't you try..??"

"Nahi Pushkar...She wont reply..Chod na...tu bata yaha kyu aaya tha??"

"Woh Mumbai mey conference karna hai na...Woh ELITE 5 stars ke manager se baat huyi...They can't make the conference room available for us day after tomorrow..."

"Yaar Pushkar ...Tumse ek kaam bhi nahi hota...Ek conference room he toh book karvana hai..Kisi dusre 5 star mey book karva..."

"Bhai ELITE is the best ...Pure Mumbai mey top class..."

"Toh aab??"

"Aagar aap aaj he mere saath Mumbai aaye aur uss manager se baat kare toh ..."

"Toh inn choote choote kaamo ke liye aab mai he vaha aau??"

"Bhai please...Ye bohot important hai..."Pushkar requested him..

"Thik hai...Book the tickets..."Shravan finally gave in...

"BOOKED..!!!Aadhe ghante baad ke flight hai..Maine pehle he book karke rakhe the..."Pushkar bit his tongue..Shravan smiled at this and hit is head playfully...

In the plane

"Bhaiya ek baat puchu??"

"Puch.."

"Woh ladki kaun thi jiska FB account aap pichle dino se stalk kar rahe ho??"

"Dost hai"

"Dost ka account koi stalk thori na karta hai..."Pushkar stated...

"Bolo na...GF??"

"Ha...Nahi..Kinda..."

"Kya keh rahe ho??"

"Commited hu..."

"What???Aap..COMMITED??Is this some kind of joke..?"

"Nahi.."

"Ye sab hua kaise?Aur kab??"

"11th mey...Mre Science camp ke waqt..."And Shravan narrated the incident...

"Wow..This is so interesting...!!!Aage batao na...Uss bus trip ke baad??"

"Please Pushkar..mera abhi bilkul mood nahi hai..I am tired..."Shravan cut him off and closed his eyes...This left Pushkar thinking.."Zaroor uske baad kuch hua hai...Hmm...dekhna padega..."His lawyer brain set off to work...

They landed in Mumbai and set off to The Elite..

"Pushkar tell me about that person..Kaisa hai woh aadmi...I mean ziddi hai??"

"Ziddi nahi hai...Confident hai...Aur admi nahi...aurat hai..."

"Toh phir kya problem hai yaar...U can't even make a deal with a girl??"

"Aap chal ke baat karo toh aapko pata chalega..."Pushkar muttered..

They reached the ambience.."Outstanding..!!"Shravan expressed...A big entrance with the big old doors as they are for a fort...Inside a path lined with flower bushes..Big coconut trees..A swimming pool was also seen as blue reflection was observed on the glass walls of the resto..

"Maine kaha tha na high class jagah hai..."

"ha...its wonderful..."Shravan exclaimed as he entered the building...His heart was racing..."Why am I feeling so uncomfortable??"He kept on asking his mind but as he heeded towards the reception that unknown comfortableness increased...

"Hello..I have a meeting with the manager..."Pushkar greeted the receptionist..

"Sure Sir...May I know your name??"

"Pushkar Malhotra"

"Just a minute sir...Yes..She has been expecting you...Floor 2, 3rd cabin"

"Thank you!"Pushkar said and they went up...

They were walking the corridor when Shravan said"Pushkar tu jaa aur uss se mil...I am not coming.."

"What??Bhai aapse he milvane ke liye meeting set ki hai..."

"Par..."

"No buts and Pars...Chaliye.."

Pushkar knocked the door...

"Yes..."A voice came as they were permitted to walk in...

Shravan eyes were fixed on the nameplate as he froze...

"Chalo bhaiya..."Pushkar dragged him in...

"Good afternoon ..."Pushkar greeted the lady who was seated having her back faced to them in the chair with a file on her face...

"Good Afternoon..Please be comfortable..."She said turning...

"Shravan saw her and froze...This was the reason he was uncomfortable...This was the reason he could feel slight butterflies in his stomach...In front of him was seated a lady with black pencil skirt and a well fitted white top with frills with a black modest coat...She looked elegant as her hair fell of her sides and those curls framed her already perfect face making it look more elegant...Seated there was the girl whom he loved..whom he cheated..his love..SUMAN TIWARI

So sorry this is too small but 12th ki vajah se sirf itna time affordable hai likhne ko
Do let me know your thoughts...I will try my best to continue...
Silent members do like{that toh y'all do without fail}😉but comment too..
Jin jin logo ke posts maine RES kiye hai I am sorry par I dont know when I'll will unress it...SORRY...
I'll be reading all comments without fail par reply ke gaurentee nahi de sakti...
Love,
ANU😳
Edited by anukulgr8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Anu , great update as usual.
An muje neend nahi aayega/aayegi ? (Grammar problem!!!!)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Arre. ..what's this new twist now??

Shravan cheated on Sumo??

When? Why? With whom?

Aise hi, khaali dimag mera pak raha hai because the forum is sooo sleepy, ab who shaitaan ka ghar ban gaya hai.

Dolly, tu aur Delta, bas Shravan ki life easy mat rakhna kabhi. .make it as complicated as complicated gets😛

Sumo in pencil skirt..that must have looked good😳

Please update asap Anu, I have to prove Shravan innocent 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi🤗
When pushkar said ki ladki hai, tabhi guess kar Liya tha maine 😉
Pata hai the scene when shravan entered the hotel... Literally Sanam really yaad aa gayi 😳
Shravan cheated on Sumo... Kyu??

Now here comes the twist...
Of course Anna hai... Anu Jo likh rahi hai 😃

Love
Arpita
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Posted: 8 years ago

Anu 12th ke beech mein itna badiya update 😲 wah !

Stalker like us 😆 it all runs in the family #EDKV 😆 the hayee moment when imagines her reply 😳

Sumo works in the hospitality industry 😳 I like this 😳

Butterflies in his stomach ' #Shramanfeels in the air '

Ye kya yaar Shravan cheated nahii !! ( dramatic effect)

Waitingngg fr the next update .. hopefully jaldi milega 😛

Love
Mayuri
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hain!!!! Cheated!!!! Heart attack aa jani Hai mujhe!!! Chalo dekhte Hai, aage Kya hota Hai!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey anu it's awsome update shraman ke beech kya hua cliffhanger pe daal diya.

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