Commitment~~SS{Part 8_Pg.35}05-08-17 NO PM - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow! Superb! Can't wait to see the childhood sweetheart. meet after 8 years!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Awesome it's too cute yar👏
Sorry chotu sa comment bcz I'm busy with my exams😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Sun kissed..! Sunshine! !
Dil hai ke maanta nahi...taadu Shravan! !😛
He was himself afraid of those instruments! Par Darr ke aagey Suman hai! !😉
Hua hai aaj pehli baar...!😳
Liking,jealousy,insecurity n commitment...bingo!

And there it is, the old love.
Not the firework-flash-burn lust of youth,
but the smoldering tender affection of something more.
As fervid, but not quite so reckless,
as treasured, but not so fragile.!!
#NotMyLines!

Amazing one! Eagerly waiting for next!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Wow! Superb! Can't wait to see the childhood sweetheart. meet after 8 years!


Thank you so much dea...!!!
But its a TWO SHOt😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Awesome it's too cute yar👏

Sorry chotu sa comment bcz I'm busy with my exams😕


Thanks Harshita...!!!
All the best for exams...Rock 'em..!!!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Sun kissed..! Sunshine! !

Dil hai ke maanta nahi...taadu Shravan! !😛
He was himself afraid of those instruments! Par Darr ke aagey Suman hai! !😉
Hua hai aaj pehli baar...!😳
Liking,jealousy,insecurity n commitment...bingo!

And there it is, the old love.
Not the firework-flash-burn lust of youth,
but the smoldering tender affection of something more.
As fervid, but not quite so reckless,
as treasured, but not so fragile.!!
#NotMyLines!

Amazing one! Eagerly waiting for next!


Oh my...!!!!Thanks Carp...!!!
Glad you liked it..!!!
Lines are wonderful...!!!👏
M afraid but its a TWO SHOT😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: anukulgr8


Oh my...!!!!Thanks Carp...!!!
Glad you liked it..!!!
Lines are wonderful...!!!👏
M afraid but its a TWO SHOT😊

Oh! I thought Shravan's pov is two shots!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Oh! I thought Shravan's pov is two shots!


No dear...First was Sumo's POV and this was Shravan's...Sorry to disappoint you...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Res ...me first

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Anu 🤗
Dollu🤗
This was sooo cute i could really imagine that happening you know 😳 *suggestive look*
Hehe...Thanks bae...😃
And I must say you're a good observer and predictor😛
Woh toh mai hu...😃😃
Mann k baat padhne ka talent sab me nahi hota
And shravan oh god! Mr. Despo haan? 🤣
Hoga shayad🤣🤣Hai hai🤣🤣
The way his heart fluttered over things and he was scared ki zyada despo na dikhe 😆😆😆lol!!!
And he sung for her song was👍🏼
Thanks bae..!!!😊😊
The bus scene...the way he convinced her...vese the girl is quite convincing nahi?😉😉 badi jaldi samajh gayi😆😆 lol!!!
Woh toh VO hai he☺️☺️
And the last part man❤️ just stole my heart...
8 years ka wait... Is the future this way?😉
Haanji☺️☺️
Too adorable and cute
Beautifully penned👏👏👏
Thanks re...!!!😊🤗
SS 😃


Thank u so so so much for the early UNRESS dollu...!!!Aur ha FB acc check kar..!!!😉
PCMB😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
barabar ki aag lagi hai ether bhi udhar bhi 😉

very cute POV of Shravan as it was for Suman. The guy and his antics of getting punished and actually creating the moments which she thought were created naturally. nice job.

The intro itself got me ROFL.. You know dolly too well 😆😆 I would bet usne pehle chappy padha hoga then upar ja ke intro dekha hoga.

So you adding one mroe chappy? of how they meet after 8 years? 😃

exams khatam lekin 12th shuru. ye irregula rhone ka etc etc.. ab to bol hi mat tu. itni tujhe dara ke rakha still you peeped in almost twice/thrice. I see !! 😆

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