MG FF A Beautiful Lie/Part 15 in the new thread link on Page 1 - Page 20

Created

Last reply

Replies

982

Views

41.2k

Users

99

Likes

1.8k

Frequent Posters

pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neel11

What is going on nice update



You will understand soon


Thank you for continuing with this story
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: uluvmg

wonderful update...with the trick to send adi behind man to find out geet's address maan came to her house where she was mishandled by her so called family but geet was cleverly left from there... maan took geet to mansion where she was shocked to see the big building...he showed his photo with dad & she showed her photo with mom... when he told her to call him bhai but she needed time ...she just laid down on couch & was sleeping woke up with screaming bhai no... when maan asked anything wrong done by him she told to leave her alone...after dinner she went to her room & locked it as she couldn't trust anyone as her bitter experience... maan could not sleep to think about sis happy...sad precap...excited for next... thanks for pm...!!







She wont call him that for now


Thank you for continuing with this story
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago


Thank u fr continuing with this story
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago


Updating😆
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago



Part 3







"My silence is just another word for my pain"








Maan got up early to prepare breakfast for Geet, so she won't be late for school.He knocked on her door to wake her up . "Geet get ready and come down for breakfast. I will drop you to your school", He said . Geet woke up and looked at her surroundings , she dressed up for school and went down to see her brother putting the breakfast for her. "You're up now come here and eat up . Girls of your age should be healthy. I'm coming with you today as I will get your address and guardian's name changed". Geet looked on and then said, "I'm not hungry and its no need as I will be going to live by myself. I have part time jobs and collected enough money for myself", She said . "Geet , why do you want to live alone when you have a family, I'm your guardian, you can ask anything from me ," He said calmly trying to understand the child before him. "Now come on have the breakfast and lets leave . We will talk about it later , your brother will do everything for you", He smiled. Geet just nibbled at her food again, and both of them went to her school . After dropping Geet, Maan went to meet the Principal.









"Your sister is an excellent student Mr. Khurana", She said . "But...". "But what Maam is there a problem", Maan asked. "Mr. Khurana , despite her being the best in her class her social skills are lacking . She does not have any friends. Mostly she's always alone or prefers to do everything by herself , like she has given up on everything . A child at her age should be more lively and think about their future but she is gloomy", She told Maan making him speechless. "As her guardian I hope you will try to encourage her and talk to her about what is troubling her and also her phobia of fire and closed spaces." "Our Parents died in a fire accident Maam , may be that's why", Maan said . "Oh I'm sorry about that and Mr. Khurana what is it that you wanted to tell", Principal asked. Maan talked with her and after coming out sighed, "I don't know anything about her". He went to his office thinking about how to know more about her .








"You look a little less gloomy Geet", the gardener asked. "I'm now living with my brother uncle", She said . "Oh the one you lost , he came back for you"."Yes, but I don't know how to trust him. I shouted on him last night", She said gloomily. "It's okay child . Siblings fighting with each other is normal". Geet nodded and looked ahead. Her fear was not about getting along with her brother but she feared for herself . She finished up the school work and was going out only to see Maan standing there . "Let's go home", he said .







When she settled he asked, "Geet do you want to buy new dresses or shoes or accessories or may be want to do a new hair do", He asked making Geet to look at him incredulously. "Why would you ask me that". "Because kids your age do such stuff , you will get a boyfriend too . Don't you want one". "No , I don't have time for all that". "But I want my little sister not to only be excellent with her studies but makes lots of friends too and then invite them over to our house , I will love to meet them , but when you get a boyfriend you will have to properly take my permission okay". "Are you mad by any chance", She said. "Nope, now let's go". "Where". "Here we are", he said standing in front of a huge saloon . "You are mad. I'm not going in", She said decisively . "Come on . They won't do any harm to you", He said trying to get her out but in the process her hair stuck in his coat button. "Ahh take it out", Geet shouted . "You are an idiot brother", She said . "I'm trying".








"Arghh leave it I will open my braids", saying this she opened her hair. "Wow you got great hair then why you braid them , now I'm more determined to get you a makeover done".



Maan dragged her up to the saloon , Yash was waiting for them , "Is everything ready", Maan asked. "Yup, let's get her makeover done". "Hey wait, no way, I like the way I am", Geet said. "But I can see you want to get your looks changed, if you don't want to pamper yourself, let me do that", He said standing behind her facing the mirror.








"We always should look our best, and do these little experiments with our looks", He smiled. She looked at their reflections in the mirror, "Alright, just stop staring at me , you are creeping me out", She said looking at him staring she felt a little weird. "Okay, then let's get started. I will be waiting there", He said pointing at the couch placed.




In no time Geet was surrounded by the various parlor ladies , and they started their work , "Oh you look like a doll , so pretty , what do you say Mr. Khurana", The beautician asked . Maan looked at her , "Yes shes looking good now but something is missing. I know lip gloss, let me see which color will look better . This one , come here Geet", he called her. "Arghh you both are mad. I don't like make up", She said . "Shh, let me put it", He said. He looked at her and she was irritated with his staring, "Could you please stop it now, it's embarrassing", She spoke annoyed. "Mr. Khurana would you like her try out some of the dresses we have". "Yes sure", He said pushing Geet with them . "What is it with this stupidity", She said . "Your brother loves you a lot and wants to give you everything . You know its like he is only living because he wants the best for you . My dad did not agree with his decision to come back and find you and put on a difficult condition but your genius brother overcome that too , so please try to co operate with him", Yash said looking at her . She nodded looking at her brother who was still busy with work . "Can I really trust him ...but what if ...", She was scared .They bought her out after giving the final touches to her , Maan for a moment could not believe it was Geet .








"So what do you think now, Mr Khurana,", the beautician asked . "Great work, now lets go , I will help you with your homework", Maan said escorting her out . "I don't need your help , are all brothers annoying like you". The beautician saw then retreating and said, "They make a good pair don't you think . If you wouldn't have told me their relation , I would have thought they were a couple", She aid turning to Yash who saw his friend's retreating back and smiled. "Who knows", He smiled happy to see his friend smiling after long.



As they entered the elevator , suddenly the lights went off due to a power breakdown , Maan tried the intercom but it was of no use . "Lets wait here , help will be on the way". Geet nodded and sat down still apprehensive of him . Maan looked at her and said, "Don't be so tense Geet . I really do care about you , so don't be scared of me . I will always protect you and be by your side", He looked up to see she was sweating . Maan looked at the material of the shirt she was wearing , "Geet the material of your shirt is thick , take it off." "What are you saying", She said scared. "Geet I m turning away so do as I say , just try to trust me", saying that he turned around . She took out the shirt holding it close to her still apprehensive of him. "I don't know what games you are playing , but I", before she could complete she heard him speak , "I am not playing any games Geet. I'm only here for you to protect you , to make you feel that you are not alone , I know you need time but please trust me". As he said all that Geet had an illusion of fire consuming her and her crying for help , "Help me". She cried , "Help me pl...", before she could complete she fell with a thud on the floor. Maan heard the sound only to turn and see her lying unconscious on the floor , "Geet , hey Geet wake up". He patted her cheeks and then he saw something which shocked him. She was covered in bruises , some looked recent , "How did she get them ", The lift moved , Maan covered her in his jacket and lifted her up preventing anyone to see his sister's miserable state and promising her silently to punish the culprit soon .



So here is the next part, please do give your honest reviews regarding it😃😃




Thank you to all those who stuck on to this story, thank you for all your patience and support😃😃

Hehe one more thing, I haven't given the evil brother any name so I don't know why everyone called him Brij ...there is no Brij in this hehe😆😆😆



Secondly, why she was living with them ...it will be revealed eventually as the story progresses and more things are revealed😆😆







Lol and now I have been promoted to IF Rockerz 😆




Precap - Maan saves Geet again
Edited by pixelflower620 - 8 years ago
sweet scorpio thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome!

this brother thing m not able to digest

poor geet

cont soon
nehaa9 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update
maan wants to pamper geet
they do geet's make over
parlor lady wish they are couple
instead of siblings
yash cook something in his mind may be
oh bruises
thanks for pm
cont soon😊
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome!

this brother thing m not able to digest

poor geet

cont soon





Hehe then don't ..😉😆



Thank you for continuing with this story
Alamelu thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
Everything is great in the update except for the brother thing. That is creepy. Just like the beautician we all feel they make a great pair too. Now that man has found out about her bruises hope he gets to the bottom of it
T.Peru thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Maan is really pampering Geet
But as a brother
Maan did changed Geet
Also Geet is unable to trust him
Yash make her understand
Maan saw saw bruises on her
Which make him shocked
Thanks for PM
Update soon

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

1 years ago

My Beautiful Mistake S#2 - pt17/18/19-pg56/58/59- 30 june

Prologue Hey to all of you, you all want to know about me so much ….so much excited for today …I said yes for this interview So before you all...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 44~01.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-31 july

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF- Silent Whisper- Updated Part 27, Pg 105, July 31

Overview Two people completely poles apart in career, status and style. One is the epitome of elegant, the other epitome of simplistic. One is...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".