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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: poojasidd123

Khushi is on full-on guilt mode. Anjali had seen his name on khushi's tinder and deduced that it's him. Now what? She's gonna play along with their games or make them see the real thing. I guess she is gonna pretend she doesn't know for some time.

Anjali is gonna have fun. You'll see how in a little while 😆
Thank you for reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayabhi

Haha.. Anjali dazed thinking she'd never heard of a couple cheating on each other with each other.. I dont think anyone has.. Haha

And I hope we never do after this. It's a messy business 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: saduf

Lol

That was amazing

Glad you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zeenay

Lol... Yeah weird couple.. Cheating on each other with each other

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Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mu12

Omg

Bank my head somewhere
I am waiting for the revelation of couple themself

Well, keep reading! It's gonna happen soon 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakhi2013

Too much funny .. 🤣

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Posted: 8 years ago
My internet connection sucks. Attempt #3 to post this update urgh
PART SIXTEEN

As the clock struck eleven, Anjali sat in Shantivan's living room, lost in thought as her adept fingers cracked peanut shells. The activity had a strangely aggressive feel to it and was a great stress buster for quiet, gentle Anjali whose violent inclinations could be indulged in no other way without compromising her reputation.

Chote and Khushi-ji had gone crazy. How was she supposed to convince them to have a baby when they were so fixated on ruining their marriage?

Her fingers cracked a shell with sudden vehemence. It was all NK's fault. Why had he told Chote about Tinder in the first place? And it had been NK's endless praise of the stupid app that had influenced Anjali into putting the blasted idea, quite unknowingly, into Khushi-ji's head.

Yes. All NK's fault.

Another peanut shell bit the dust as Anjali gritted her teeth together.

Let him come home. She'd stay up until 3 AM if she had to. But she wouldn't let NK get away with ruining her companion-babies plan.

About one hundred and sixty seven mutilated peanut shells later, the object of Anjali's wrath walked in the doors of Shantivan, a half empty packet of nachos in his hand and completely oblivious to the tornado that awaited inside for him.

NK's mind was happily occupied with memories of that night's date with Lavanya, Anjali knew. Which made him an easy target.

The sharp and sudden pain on his left ear made NK cry in surprise and drop the nachos - which he was greatly regretful about later. As Anjali continued twisting his ear, he begged for mercy.

"Mercy? You deserve no mercy! Why did you do it, NK bhai? Made them cheat on each other? How COULD you?"

"Made WHO cheat on each other?" NK yelped, struggling to free himself.

As Anjali filled him in on the situation', NK's eyes widened. The pain in his still twisted ear suddenly became less apparent as his excitement grew.

The wheels in his brain were turning at an alarming rate. And Anjali could almost hear their metallic clank as she looked at NK's swiftly changing expression. Everyone knew that no good came from NK's wheel-turning. Anjali was suddenly terrified.

"Di! I have the most brilliant plan!"

"Wha-at?" Anjali stammered, dropping her hand from his ear and backing away in fear.

"They've got to meet up! As ASHISH and KIRTI - that's their Tinder names, right? They've got to, Di! Listen!"

As NK told her of his brilliant plan', Anjali grew thoughtful again.

It wasn't a bad idea, really. Perhaps when they got to know the truth about each other, they could talk and resolve their issues like sane, mature adults...

And perhaps THEN they'd decide to have a baby?

Reviews to me are like nachos to NK! Drop me a comment!

Edited by PhoenixKhushi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I thought this was a great chapter!
I had been looking forward to Anjali and NK's interaction, and I think it couldn't have been better, the ear-pulling was probably better than the rolling-pin action that we might have seen. Though, I think I was close with that. NK needed to come out of his foodgasm mode and be taught a lesson.
What I really liked were the vivid descriptions in a few places. They make the simplest, probably the most boring tasks seem interesting to both, read and visualise.
I could clearly imagine Anjali huffing with anger as she sat mutilating the peanuts and her dread when NK tried to use his 'pea-brain.'
Those were my absolute favourite moments. Though I suspect we're gonna have Arnav going on a guilt-trip in the upcoming chapters, or just a Kinky-Lola interaction. Anjali and NK make an efficient team, for Anjali needs satiation. She's so fixed upon ArShi having babies, after all. Though, they might ending up forming a recipe for disaster, which is not improbable too.
Looking forward to the next update!
Edited by 8520NK - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is just so hilarious and exciting at the same time...
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved part 16👏
Plan to make them meet being hatched, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm😃

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