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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

aww...lovely so glad yash finally figured out why he was protesting so much...thank god the realization happened ...so remember the karvachauth episode so beautiful ...

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Tess 🤗

I think I was the only one who pitied Yash after Mumbai Track. I was a stalker during that time. I read s many angry and confused posts on Yash's behavior. When everyone were angry and confused and cursing the CV's I was feeling bad for Yash.

I always felt that he was fighting with himself cause he was Afraid to break his promise to Arpita, whom he thought was his whole world.

To give that place to someone else was killing him from the inside. He was not ready to acknowledge that what he was feeling for Aarti was love and nothing but. He kept pushing her cause he was afraid to bring her closer lest she will occupy that place in his world which he thought always belonged to Arpita.

I was so sure that after the boxing match or after she ran away or after he brought her back, he will acknowledge his true feelings but alas CV's never showed that and proved me so wrong 🥺

The morning of the Karva Chauth (oops forgot to tell you the right spelling), when he was so lost in her I was so darn sure that tonight he will acknowledge and confess. Once again I was deceived by CV's 👎🏼

So thanks so much for giving me this OS and giving me the satisfaction that I was not wrong in my assumption and analysis 🤗

This OS needed No Dialogues. As always their eyes, their gestures and their emotions did all the talking. But above all it was your writing that made it all possible for me to feel those emotions and those dialogues that were never uttered between them.

Once again ⭐️. For your writing skills and for this OS 🤗

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sass8

@sass8

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

It's really interesting to guess Aarya inner thoughts during KC. So much happened that nigh😛t. I did actually like how the scenes were done. The think with a story with characters voicing their though is that it leave little room for feedback because all is said and done.

That said I love the silent conversation thru their eyes and touch. Aarti had a dream day for the first time in a long time. From hubby waking up to her charm, to adorable forbidding her to fast due to her condition, to his longing eyes, obvious desire and fully committed to their relation with the KC vows, how could she not have butterflies and the biggest happy smile 😊. The day was full of love, teasing, joy and connecting without words and Yash behavior gave her hope for a closer relationship, full commitment from him and finally belonging.

As for Yash, what to say, the man was finally free of pain, guilt and sorrow. He slowly realizing that he had a treasure to cherish. It took him almost losing her forever to admit what everybody already knew. The festivities gave him an opportunity to properly court her. He was elated by her sight, enthralled by her beauty and inspired by her, simply being her. So he set out to show her how much he likes her, love her without words. His fasting for her, recording memories, constantly seeking her closeness was a joy to watch. Yes he is free to love her as she deserved. And then the big finale, confessing his love 😳 and in turn freeing her of fears and uncertainties. She could finally let go and he would indeed there to caught her if she fall, support her if she hurt and rejoice if she is happy.

They joining was poetic and a long time coming, two souls finally connecting after fighting against huge obstacles. Aarti exhale in relief, Yash found peace.

Beautiful 👏

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sass8

@sass8

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

double posting 😕. IF acting up 😡

Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie
i prefer dialogue😊

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

amazing os

beautifully written

loved it

thanks for the pm

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yes, i prefer dialogue and some stories require them and then some do not.😉 I am just making the quickest comment.

It;s a beautiful story ad Aarti's happiness at the assurance of his love is touching.

But what is more poignant for me is Yash's awakening. His realization that he was fighting himself for and idea. Yet in spite of the internal war that raged within him and the battles that overflowed into his abysmal treatment of her, he was happy to have lost that war.

He realized what he had in her. And absolute gem, one that loves so pure that it could even melt his reluctant heart. His emotions were raw at just the idea that he was on the verge of losing her for good and if he had it would have only been his own fault. Had he lost her he would have lost so much. His sons, his daughters's happiness and his very heart.

With this realization he is sure to always treasure her and their love forever. Keep her close and shower her with his love and protection forever.

What a sweet, sweet story. More than just delightful moments but an intense realization of what love is and who love is and pledging eternal commitment to that love for more than just moments but for eternity

Edited by B-onesie - 8 years ago

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Tess 🤗
I think I was the only one who pitied Yash after Mumbai Track. I was a stalker during that time. I read s many angry and confused posts on Yash's behavior. When everyone were angry and confused and cursing the CV's I was feeling bad for Yash.

I always felt that he was fighting with himself cause he was Afraid to break his promise to Arpita, whom he thought was his whole world.

To give that place to someone else was killing him from the inside. He was not ready to acknowledge that what he was feeling for Aarti was love and nothing but. He kept pushing her cause he was afraid to bring her closer lest she will occupy that place in his world which he thought always belonged to Arpita.

I was so sure that after the boxing match or after she ran away or after he brought her back, he will acknowledge his true feelings but alas CV's never showed that and proved me so wrong 🥺

The morning of the Karva Chauth (oops forgot to tell you the right spelling), when he was so lost in her I was so darn sure that tonight he will acknowledge and confess. Once again I was deceived by CV's 👎🏼

So thanks so much for giving me this OS and giving me the satisfaction that I was not wrong in my assumption and analysis 🤗

This OS needed No Dialogues. As always their eyes, their gestures and their emotions did all the talking. But above all it was your writing that made it all possible for me to feel those emotions and those dialogues that were never uttered between them.

Once again ⭐️. For your writing skills and for this OS 🤗

You felt sorry for him.😡

I would have poisoned his irrational behind if i was Aarti😡

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#10

very beautiful OS
aarya saw lots of ups & downs in their life
yash hurt aarti very badly when they spend a night together 😡
but her leaving him made him realized he need aarti to breath
with passing time yash realized he fall in love with aarti 😃
he took really great care of aarti in her pregnancy that made her really happy ❤️
finally yash confess his love to aarti in beautiful way ❤️
oh aarya passion was on fire 😳 ❤️

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