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orion23 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Resh teri tabiyaat toh theek hai na?
Kahan res kar rahi hai?
Update alfaaz hua hai and tu yahin 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
]Res
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Unres
Zo 🤗
Is baar toh hadd hi ho gyi 😭


Coming to the update

This is what I'm right now.
Like many have said this update shows how mature you are as a person and a writer .
You have made me so so proud 😃

One confession , I never believed in love . From what I've seen it only brings heartbreak and pain . But after reading sentinel I wish to fall in love someday maybe 😳

The kind of love shraman have is beautiful ❤️. You don't need words to tell you love someone, they feel it .
I could quote entire update .Every single line is my favorite .
But these lines are ❤️
Aftaab ki tapish toh dekhi thi bohot,
Sarparast bante pehli baar dekha hai,
Kehte hai jala dena uska mukaddar hai,
Phir kyun woh lakeeron se baghawat kar baitha hai?


Apko mera shat shat pranam Malik _/\_
Mera dil kidney liver lungs sab le liya !

It's getting too difficult for me to decide which one of your works is my favourite .
I love each and every update of this series .
But Postcards , Be love and Sentinel are class apart !!!

I really loved free verse poetry ❤️
Beyond awesome update !!!!
Loads of love ❤️
Ps.- I'm sorry yar 😔 ..Next time se I'll try to unres on time ..pakka .
Sorry haan and I love you ❤️
P.P.S- I hate my imgur isn't working .
How badly I want to make an edit for this update 😔



Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My God
Gosh Zoya !!!... That was so so beautiful❤️ Totally ethereal
Am speechless!!
U've penned their emotions so beautifully that it really felt vivid, as if ShraMan were enacting this scene for real👍🏼
As a writer, its as if you've brought EDKV alive in its real meaning😊
U truly deserve a huge round of applause for this; and all your other works👏

Thanks for pm dear
Hoping for other ShraMan works pretty soonish

Love,
Sidhi
Edited by ---awe10some--- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sentinel !!!
Goodness..!! What a title! !! Read it multiple times doubting my reading capabilities,,.thinking how can it be a title of a ShraMan story! ! but it was !!...and sooo apt..!!
From the first word to the last,,your writing is awe-inspiring!!

Their hearts hummed a synchronized tune, their breaths mingled and their thoughts did the forever practiced and perfected dance...!


His eyes darting forward in fear. His hair messed on his forehead..!
And still his first instinct when disaster struck was to hold on to her, to safeguard her. He always put himself in between danger and her. Always..!🤗




His eyes reflected his relief as her's spoke a mile a minute..!



"Kya hua Sumo?" He asked, covering her petite frame with his cooling shadow.
"Kuch nahi..." She whispered.



Anyone else would have asked her to pay a little more and avoid standing in queues such as these, but not him. He would let her have her way but he would do so while he provided her with the best he could..! ❤️

Somehow, Shravan would always manage to catch her before she would hit the ground..!
His arms, her sanctuary..!


He chastised her for being clumsy. He fed her when she was ill..!



Suman would sit each time without a word. It was as though Shravan had put some sensors in her car..!



Her priced possession was always with him..!❤️
"To celebrate another successful deal." The amount of trust he put into her, the faith he had in her capabilities would never fail to surprise her. His pride in her kept her going..!


As he slept now, peacefully, holding her hand as though he would never let her go...!


It was too often than never that she couldn't find anything to say to him. So overwhelming were her feelings.



I am in love with this idea of love! !
Stunning update! !

P.S. For the such beautiful couplets! !


P.S.S. when you are dumbfounded,,let the GIFs do the talking! !
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
RES
Have lost count then no. of times this Zo-Girl has made a bad day go good
Truly. Call it coincidence!
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Unress
Biwitchingly Beautiful❤️
A masterpiece again
I'll have more to say if u write smthg bad coz each one is better the other
So this successfully worked as an antipyretic for me unlike useless paracetamols😆
Wish to give a more detailed comment which I'll do later (I'll be doing that much later) after exams with your other stories that I haven't been able to read.😊
Love
Swarnima
Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

RES

Have lost count then no. of times this Zo-Girl has made a bad day go good
Truly. Call it coincidence!

Awww dude 🤗
Always happy to help!!!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Orion aka Zoya!!!...I must not say that I am new to this forum...but it is the first time I am commenting on your post...Trust me I have read them all ...and I must say they all are pretty AMAZING...!!!
Coming to this piece of yours...This is again a FABULOUS MASTERPIECE of yours...Really really loved it and always waiting for more to come...
Keep going girl...!!!
Love
Shiny
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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW, its brilliant, I might read it few more times as I loved it too much, you have amazing writing skills


We're same in not understanding the concept of feminism and believing in equality, humanity. Feminism concept is so hyped that I find it scary. I too fight for the rights but as a human and not as a girl. I believe in equal rights for each individual be it man or woman. We share another common thing, I too don't believe in fairy-tales (I haven't actually read/watched any except Snow White, its for the 7 dwarfs), there're no prince charmings in reality, there're only normal men who might be flawed in several ways just as we girls are, real life romances aren't romantic in a lovey-dovey sense, we rather have someone who would be with us till the end of the road.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I m speechless. It's written beautifully each & every word speaks it's own meanings.

Shayri was beautiful & meaningful. I understood most of the Urdu words, some which couldn't understand I understood after reading in English.

Shravan's unsaid words for Sumo, always comes for her as saviour, if she is standing under sun for ration, while climbing down stairs or when her jaan give her problem, when his car met with an accident he made sure she wouldn't get hurt by keeping hand on her torso, so that she won't hurt herself even though she wore seatbelt, he was always there for her. He is such darling husband every girl would ask for.

Beautiful story of Shraman.

Thanks for PM

Vinu
Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago

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