Don't underestimate a girl's power ff (Complete)

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Heyy guys. I am addicted to ishqbaaaz and I m a true Shivika fan. And along with that I personally believe that girls don't need to be dependent on a male figures in the society. Though falling in love is a total different concept because once u fall in love it gives u enough strength to let go all the faults of that person and see beyond his mistakes.
OK this is my personal opinion on love and I felt the need to write it down before starting with my ff.
I would like to make just two changes in my ff 1) Annika is black belt in this ff.
2) Sundri bua never returned
3) It starts after Annika giving statement in Gayatri murder case and then leaves to her home after hearing an earful from Tia
4) Things that happened in OM in the same way as they happened in the show (i.e. Prinku telling Shivaay the truth and Shivaay realizing his mistake and takes car keys to go towards Annika's house.


Starting.
At Annika's place.
She was walking towards her home and the people of the area were giving her looks that she ignored. She could hear them murmuring "I never thought she can stoop so low" and comments like that she choose to ignore them and got inside her house and shut the door behind her. She saw Sahil sitting on the couch she sat beside him hugged him and cried. Sahil consoled her and said that u r the strongest person I have ever known. Sahil hugged her. She said that she doesn't know why she did this for him even though he hurt her a lot but the fact that she knew that Shivaay could never kill a person she just couldn't stop herself from going to rescue him. She tried to reason herself that he helped him because she knew he was right but deep down her heart said that this was not the only reason there was something even more powerful than the fact that he was right and it was a connection deep down she knew she had a connection with him that he felt too but just that she can't figure it out. She was deep into her thoughts when she heard a bang.

At first she was startled and then when she realized who made it she stood up and looked at him. It was Shivaay he never used to knock at her door he always just bang opened it. This time she wanted to yell at him for entering her life again but the look in his face stopped her from speaking something. Shivaay just moved towards her and said in a very calm tone Chalo mere sath mujhe tumse baat karni hai.(Come with me I have to talk to you).
Annika first looked at Sahil who gave her an its fine look and then said Ab aur kya kehna baki hai. Jo kehna hai yahin kahiye mujhe aur bhi kaam hai mujhe dusri job bhi dhundni hai(Now what more have you to say to me. I have much work to do, I have to find another job too).
Shivaay with a guilty look on his face said sorry Annika. Plz wapas aa jao tumhe mujhpe pani fekna hai to fek do but please please come back(Sorry Annika please come back. If you do wanna throw water at me then you may but please come back).
Seeing Shivaay apologize and his guilty face his eyes that reflected guilt cum gratitude towards her. Her heart melted again for this baagad billa and she forgave him. With this he asked her to come back to mansion alongwith him in his car. She agreed.
Both got into the car.

Somewhere near Annika's place.
There was a gathering of few orthodox men who discussed the matter of Annika and Shivaay and then they thought they need to stop this dirt else it will effect their houses. When they saw Annika and Shivaay leaving in same car they decided to teach them a lesson.


Author's note:- To be honest I hate such people who judge others point fingers at other but I put them here to add drama. Because emotion without drama is somewhat incomplete. This is the prologue. Do tell me if u like it and want me to continue. And if u don't like the concept then too make it clear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I like it. N anika is strong n black belt, iam loving it. I hope Anika shows her skills of fighting rather than depending on shivay to get saved, iam board of weak women teased by perverts n hero fighting for her, i think physical strength is about skills n tactics you use in fighting, n if girl knows it she became strong n protected,i love it plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: Ultimatewinnerr

I like it. N anika is strong n black belt, iam loving it. I hope Anika shows her skills of fighting rather than depending on shivay to get saved, iam board of weak women teased by perverts n hero fighting for her, i think physical strength is about skills n tactics you use in fighting, n if girl knows it she became strong n protected,i love it plz continue soon

Sure dear she will fight and I will elaborate her fight moves too. And that will also add to Shivaay's attraction towards Annika. But yeah she is strong but if events happen like how daksh first stalk her in such cases(I mean aankhon ka dhoka) she will be weak bcoz she won't be able to crack the technology thing. But yeah Annika in my ff is strong very very strong.
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Since I have read many ffs in this forum I very well know that most of u love to read the lust. But in my ff I have greater meanings to give to love. I know I all love to read the love making even I do love it. That is why I have chosen a different concept. Yes love making will be their but I will not make my ff base on that I would rather make a perfect story as its base than this. I want to write that girls r stronger they r not just the object of men's stare or their play girls r far more than this.
Males and females are equal in every sense. If women r weak then men r too if men r strong then women r too. Its just one is to one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The concept is nice and it has looks like a great start !!!!
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Very nice..
But plz mention in d title whether it is os, ss, or ff
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Well I m new to this forum can anyone pls tell me how to wrote next part in the same thread. I mean its page 2 and I do wanna update but here I m getting the message option. Any writer here who could suggest me how to write the second part or should I just use the message box for it??????
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Originally posted by: Sanjana2412

Well I m new to this forum can anyone pls tell me how to wrote next part in the same thread. I mean its page 2 and I do wanna update but here I m getting the message option. Any writer here who could suggest me how to write the second part or should I just use the message box for it??????

Its the same way u reply to someone...just post ur ff in that place...and create an index in the first page..it will be easier...anyway sis this was tooo amazing
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Ok with lack of knowledge. I m continuing it here only.

Part 2
Annika and Shivaay are in the car and on their way to oberoi mansion. Both r sitting in the back seat and the driver is driving the car. Shivaay reminisces his harsh words to Annika that day and Annika coming to his rescue just the other day. Shivaay's big ego is shattered before Annika's sacrifice for him.
There was utter silence in the car so breaking the ice, Shivaay said, tumne mujhe maaf to kar dia na(you have forgiven me right). Annika looks at him. Before Annika could say something Shivaay says, c I misunderstood u lekin tumhe bhi to batana chahiye tha na ki tum Dev ko ghar me nahi lai thi(see I misunderstood you but you could have told me that you didn't bring Dev in my house).
On this Annika said, agar maine kaha bhi hota to ap kaun sa manne wale the(even if I would have said it then also you wouldn't have believed me).
Shivaay looked into her eyes and thought she is right I wouldn't have trusted her. But now, now I know that my Annika can never do wrong. I shouldn't have yellled at her I shouldn't have treated her that way. It's all my fault but now I won't repeat my mistakes this is my promise to myself.
Shivaay was about to say something when the car stopped and he saw that they have reached OM.

Annika enters OM followed by Shivaay. Priyanka comes and hugs Annika, then Sumo, Dadi, Jahnvi and Pinky all one by one come & hug her and show their gratitude towards her. Pinky says tune mere bacche ki jaan bacha like lekin ye bata ki tune aisa kia q(you saved my kid's life but why did you do so). At this question Annika was numb bcoz she herself didn't know that why she did so. Dadi says Pinky let it be, Annika wapas aa gai wo hamare liye zada khushi ki baat hai(Pinky let it be, Annika is back and this is a matter to rejoice so let it go).
Annika and Shivaay both had the same question in their mind that why did Annika do so for him and both looked at each other but their trance was broken by OmRu. They both came and hugged Annika together and then apologize to her, Om says, galti isse hui thi (pointing towards Shivaay) lekin maafi hum pure ghar ki taraf se mangte hain(he did the mistake but we apologizehalf of everyone).
Shivaay says mai maafi maang chuka hu(I have already apologized to her) but Rudra cuts him off and says ki hum Annika didi ke lautne par ek chota sa get together rakhenge kal sham ko. usme bas hum youngsters aur aap(Shivaay) rahoge(well keep a small get together to celebrate Annika Di's return, only we youngsters and Bhaiya). Shivaay says hey what do u mean ki mai young nahi hu(hey what do you mean, that I amt young). Rudra was about to say something when Annika interrupted him and said nahi iski koi zarurat nahi(no, that's not all needed) hai. Rudra says are zarurat kaise nahi hai di. get together to banta hai(how come its not needed di, get together isst). OmRuSaumya all convince her and she agrees. Later that day Tia also comes and apologizes to Annika for misunderstanding her. And she is also excited about the get together.
The Obros decide that since elders are at home we cannot keep the party here so Rudra suggests them pub but Shivaay and Om disagree becoz Annika has never been to such places. Tia suggests her farmhouse but Shivaay says that it is too far from her home even if I drop her back after party then it will be v late for her and next day she has to wake up early to send Sahil to school. Saumya suggests a place near the beach side. Shivaay says no that is not of oberoi standard. so Priyanka suggests the same pub again and says this will be a total new thing for her she will enjoy I know her she is my best friend. So this time they all agree for the same. They decide to inform Annika of the venue. Shivaay sees his watch and thinks its late I should drop Annika home. He goes downstairs and sees Annika typing the code and asks her if he can drop her. First she refuses then he says dekho bohot der ho gai hai mujhe us side kuch kaam bhi hai tum behes mat karo bas chalo(listen its already late and I have some work in that area too so don't argue just come along). Annika agrees they go and sit in the car. Shivaay in driver's seat and Annika in passengers seat. And Shivaay drives towards her home.

His car reaches that area and one of those orthodox men see Shivaay and Annika together. The car stops because barriers were put on the ways so Shivika decide to walk till her home. They were walking when Shivaay told her about the venue of get together. At first Annika refused but Shivaay told her not to worry u wont be alone our entire group will be together allow us to do atleast this much. At first she refused and then later she agreed. While walking Shivika didn't know that they were being followed and someone was there to overhear their conversation. Annika goes inside her home, Shivaay back to the car and that man back to his group and narrates them what he overheard.
That group of people decide to do something the next day at that place so that no one from around their are walks on Annika's footsteps.

Done with this part hope u enjoy it.

Edited by Sanjana2412 - 8 years ago

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