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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Nice one! A fresh concept. And the word dedications are perfect, beautiful.

Thank you so much nuts!😛
I'm sure Shravan and Suman here will give us what we didn't get back on the show. If only he checks his mail. 😆
Wishful thinking? Not really😉
Can't wait to read what happens next. Continue soon!
Sure thing!
Cheers!
Nuts

@Bold Thank you so very much hon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Res

Pehle toh sorry
For such a late


Arey Ti! How many times are you going to apologise? Bas kar... It's okay😛

Zoya di kya chapter tha

Haina!
Itne intense ..hii
Shukriya...
Aapko toh book lekni chahiya 😳
Haye sacchi😳
Love in unconditional in shraman case
Never said anything but is clearly shown and vidible
I know right!
Sumo is hurt ...her heart is broken
But this is necessary somewhere to realise shravan imprtance
She try every possible way but she is also nervous at the same time
But finally she wrote the mail
Somewhere this time was necessary for her to see his importance, this mistake will never happen again. Had to make a lesson of it...
Eric is such a true friend
Word!
Shravan is poor soul ...he is lonely
Without family and without his sumo
Eric is such sweetheart
But yeh Amada kaha se aa gayi
Aiii shravan is only for sumo
Hahaha.. Koi shaq nahi tha kabhi 😆
Nanu is understanding person
Ek. Baar mein hi samaj gaye
That shravan is not welll ...awww
Yo!
Bu awww 😡 shravan forget his password
Ab kya hoga di
Mujhe sochna padega ab kya 😉
Update soon
Waiting for next update
Won't keep you waiting long...
Hug and luv



Luv ya
Tii se tinnna

@Bold Ti se Tina, hugs back 🤗
Thank you so very much!!!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res 😎
Pri
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Unres.

Zoyi 🤗
A/N 🤗❤️
Dil le le tu bs
We r by ur side because u r a gem of a person. Aisi bndi ko thori chodhte 😆
Love u yaar 🤗
Now coming to ur update.
Mayassar ❤️
Tere stories se hi Urdu sikh lene wali main 😆
Shravan and Ramu convo is cute.
Sacchi accha hi hua Ramu ne London bhej dia usko warna shravan apni capabilities nhi jaan paata.
Shravan apni importance samajhne lga hai. That's the best part. I always wanted to see this on the show k how an introvert and highly unsure of oneself person became a sassy kickass lawyer. Par tu hai toh kya ghum hai. U fulfill all my wishes woh v mere bina btaye 😆

Nanu is as always a darling but that maami 😡
Zubaan pe lagaam hi nhi 😡

As gye humare DEVta swaroop Eric ji

This Shravan is reminding me of myself. Kaun itni mehnat kre 🤣

Diary note is ❤️ as usual.

Ek baat boloon? Itna kuch hai, sab theek hai, mai khush hoon, par phir kami si kyun hai? Yeh khali khali si feeling jaati kyun nahi? Aj bhi, ab bhi, jab bhi khush hota hoon, Sumo ki yaad aati hai. Udas hota hoon tab bhi uski yaad aati hai.

Par dost thi tum meri, pyaar kia tha tum se kabhi, aj bhi tum ho shayad mere dil ke kisi hisse mai, nikal nahi sakta tumko mujh mai se, na hi mai nikalna chahta hoon, yeh bhi tum samjh lo...

This guy is seriously love ❤️

Finally the mail

But it was heartbreaking 😒

This sumo makes me feel bad for her. Is sumo ko maaf kr skti main. Tu na best hai Zoyi. How wonderfully u have written this yaar. How real, how human it was 👏
Wonderful wonderful 🤗

As if his voice was all she needed to let go, she wept. Her sobs getting stronger and hiccups growing louder. Shravan clutched the phone to his ear and wept with her. They both wept as though in each other's embrace. As though their sobs sufficed. The pain in their hearts lessening each passing moment. The burden lifting. The skies clearing.

This sufficed the title. Mayassar ❤️
Not be available but make oneself available when someone needs u the most. In such a way that ur physical presence doesn't matter. Just the feel that u r listening, both the said and unsaid is more than what the person wants.

U r just an amazingly amazing writer Zoyi. With thoughts that makes the reader think. It's not something u read and forget. It stays with u. Even with a person with a terrible memory like me 😆

Do I need to say I loved it?
Yes, I loved it. But with ur update Kaunsi nayi baat hai 🤗
Love you ❤️ 🤗

P.S.-- Sorry maafi manage k liye muh nhi mil rha.



Edited by Perpetuity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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Unres
A/N ❤️ ❤️



Mayassar Beautiful title ❤️
Ramnath ...I really liked his character in the show until nimmo made her gracious presence
MCP, selfish , manipulative as we call him , his concern and love for Shravan was always genuine .
I'm loving your characters ..Flawed they maybe but there are ❤️

Sometimes a child must learn to run before he can walk.
Word !
Shravan now believes in himself we could give some credit to Ramnath as well.
Sending him away from home wasn't a bad decision afterall.
Kudos to you ...Ramu ke liye bhi pyar Jaga diya 😆

Sumo- Nanu Convo 💔
I can't imagine how hard it must have been for her .
And manju that woman has a loudspeaker fitted in her vocal cords .


Sorry I got distracted 😳😆
Dear diary 💔💔
Zo can i just hug you ?


I have said this earlier mere liye toh tu hi meri Nicholas Sparks hai ❤️
Tujhse better is character ko koi nahi samjhta .

He misses her 😭
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawaon mein bin tere

This song kept playing in my head as i read his diary
Everyday he calls to talk to her ❤️
Finally he recovered his password
When he was going through his email, mujhe kisi ke inbox ki yaad aa rhi thi 😉🤣

He got her email

Beautifully penned !!! So many feels !!!
And then he called

Bina monsoon Gorakhpur me floods ke liye aap responsible ho maalik.

They say at times, just the one step in the right direction can change your fate.
So true !!!
Super se bahot bahot bahot upar wali update !!
Flow of this story is superb and I'm loving it !!!
Love you ❤️ ❤️

P.s- Resh jyada nach mat haan...Next time dekhna 😎


Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thumps Up Zoya!!!
That was perfect👏👏 Just perfect
Just loved it

Thanks for pm dear

Love,
Sidhi
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Res

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Unres

Zoyi 🤗
Resh 🤗
Ab toh shama maangne mein v sharam aa rhi
Aani bhi chahiye 🤔
*hides face*
Muntazir ❤️
Awaiting for forgiveness, hope to rekindle the lost friendship or for just an assurance if a certain someone can still recognise ur voice ❤️
Tu kab likhne wali wapas! Aaisi aaisi line marke jaati hai yahan...
Beautiful it is 🤗
Shukriya!
I really love this sumo🤗
Me too!
Like u promised, I do feel happy, sad and bad for her 😆
Arey aage aage dekho hota hai kya😎
School bunk for shravu 😳

Eric is love ya
Too cute ❤️
Prii ki advance booking hai uski, koi aur dekh le tu 😆
He brought him garr ka gaana
Much like sumo. Difference itna k woh khud banati thi.
I m just loving this guy 😳 aur tu v I knw😆
I've always loved him😉
Finally mail bheja sumo ne
Booker nhi Nobel prize hi de de usey 😆
Veer chakra de doon😆
Amanda want to sing lullaby to shravan 🤣
Prii ki voice mai imagine kar😳
Eric-shravan convo there reminds me so of Harry-Ron
Haye
Shravan talking to himself 💔
And that diary note 💔
His diary is my favourite bit!
Sumo missed the call after waiting for so long 😭
Next update pe baat kra dena re.
Tu itna late unres ki ke next update bhi aa gayi😆
I m just loving the flow Zoyi 🤗
This is Amazing updates.
Thank you so very much hon ❤️
Each of the convos are so wonderfully written 👏
Again an amazing amazing work 👏
Ab tere taarif mein sabd kam parne lge hai 😳
Yaar, ab bas kar haan...
Aur precap mere se inspired hai kya 😆
Password bhul gya 😆
Intelligent ho gayi hai tu!
But finally humare Eric ji DEVta swarup bnkr humare shravan ji se password retrieve krwake mail padhane ka shubh kaam krenge 🤣
LMAO and you know why!😆
Uske liye unka avi se dhanyabaad 🤣
Ji okay...
Can't wait now. Loved it and love u 🤗
I love ya too!
And wait is over!
Go read!


@Bold Resh my love 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---

Thumps Up Zoya!!!

That was perfect👏👏 Just perfect
Just loved it
Thank you so much Sidhi😛
Thanks for pm dear
You're welcome!
Love,
Sidhi

@Bold Thanks hon!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
FantaBulous

Why did I miss this one before? You have touched a chord deep down somewhere.

People must have told you this before but I will say it again. You write beautifully.

Keep it coming

Love
Shveta
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Posted: 8 years ago
Will be back soon,!
I am...
Elijah!! man of words!!😉


Ramu kaka n Shravan's convo !! Feel good!!
(No wonder our Shravan's trusted him like he did)
Mental notes..!! Trying !!
Nerd will be gone for good.!?!

So,,finally he is getting what he deserved !!
As they say, ,nothing comes easy! ! His wasn't easy either! !

Fans! ! Well ! !😳
#FangirlingForever! !

Karo khud par yaqeen... #ShiningShravIsIn !!

Sumo.!! Bojh! Liability !! Poor child! !😕 But Nanu !!🤗

Napasandeeda hai jo har fard ki aankhon mein,, panah mili usey ek buzurg ki baaton mein! !
Kahan guzarti hai zindagi kisi Saraaye mein,,talab ghar ki milti hai har bashindey ki aahon mein! !

Orkut returned...so,,a friend request ! !
#nostalgia

Dear Diary! !
Rising from the Ashes! !
I'm not turning into a narcissistic ass,.. #sigh..!

Khushi ho ya gham mujhey tum yaad aaye! #Anchor..!

nikal nahi sakta tumko mujh mai se, na hi mai nikalna chahta hoon,.. #Heartbeat..!

She was smiling. A smile crept up on his face too, his eyes lit up. She's okay. She's fine. She's happy...! #DefaultSetting..!
and would she feel what he did now? #SaneThought..!

he sat frozen staring at the name, then the subject, "Sorry" it read...!
When It took me a while to absorb it,,Shravan had every right to be frozen !!

Sucking in a deep breath he read it..! MeToo..!

This letter took my heart away..!!

She knew everything he always desired for..!!

Par kya itne badal chuke ho ke meri yaad hi nahi aati? Bhool gaye na tum mujhe? #HeartBreaking..!
I'm proud of you Lamboo, and I'm sure you're going to make us all a lot more proud...! #FriendIndeed..!
Tu mujhse naaraz rehna chahta hai na? Toh reh par mujhse baat karna band mat kar please...! #Desperation..!

Shravan was beyond guilty now..! 🤗

tere bina khane mai maza nahi aya...! #ItsNotTheFood #ItsThePerson..!

And the last part! ! Too over whelming to even reproduce..!

Teri..! #Always..!

The void is filling! !

Stalking part is on point! !


Ranjishein thi...justajoo thi...they muntazir jiske..!!
Mayassar kar gaya khudko...khuli kitaab ke maanid..!!

"Shravan, I need you right now.." ..!😭
The phone call..!🤗
Sumo the questionnaire..! Adorbs!

Cry it out! !

But little did they know...😲

What a fabulous piece! !

Kal pada tha,,took me a day to gather myself..!
Hum to sang dil types hai...Phir bhi..! 😆

Thanks for p.m.😊

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago

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