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Posted: 8 years ago
PART TEN

Arnav was sweating despite the air conditioning in his office.

Things were not going how he had planned - not that he had planned much.

Lola was into threesomes. And no man with an ego as big as his was could be into that. How would he get into the doctor character if their were others in the room? He might be struck with performance anxiety. And if it was a particularly good... session, then he'd have to share credit with someone else. Little Arnav, however, was extremely proud of his own expertise and completely opposed to that idea. He was sniffing with disdain at Arnav for even considering the blasphemy of 'multiple doctors'.

There was more to his tale than just Lola, though.

Arnav had narrowly avoided going into cardiac arrest that very morning. Because when he'd come downstairs from his bedroom that day he'd run into Khushi. Who was wearing a bun. He'd felt like all the blood had drained from his face. She'd read his chat with Lola. How else would she know? There was no other explanation for it.

But she hadn't said anything about it and he'd been too freaked out to ask her himself.

Swallowing thickly, Arnav picked up his phone again.

You really want multiple doctors? He waited anxiously for the reply.


Khushi smiled at her client as the latter walked out of her office. Not even the excitement over getting the biggest catering order of her life could, however, make her forget Arnav's face that morning.

His pale face, nervous state and hurry to leave for work had alarmed her. And her conscience had popped up conveniently to wonder if he knew about Kinky. Which really be possible. If he found out about her Tinder... affair (though it was barely an affair yet), nervous was the last thing he'd be.

She'd wondered and wondered. But hadn't been able to figure out the riddle. And what was worse was that Kinky seemed to have disappeared right after their 'doctor' conversation. She hoped she hadn't scared him away too...

You really want multiple doctors? the new message buzzed in.

Khushi facepalmed. He couldn't have taken her seriously. Are you the same guy who told me that I couldn't even handle him?

Perhaps you like sensory overload?

I don't want to be sensory overloaded out of my mind. Don't you wanna prove your potential?

If I come down to proving my potential, there would certainly be sensory overload.

Sure. As long as you're not sensory overloaded out of YOUR mind...

What does Lola have planned for me??

Scrumptious doggy treats.

Just one doctor, then?

Yes. I'd like to confirm my order.

Thank you for shopping with Khans and Co.!

Is Co. short for cock?

Now that's like my Lola... xD

Reviews are like yummy doggy treats! Please drop a comment 😆 And Buddy me for PMs!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PhoenixKhushi

Reserved for a silly woman who makes me do dumb shit

And you do it, because you love me. Accept it Dick, you're gone.😉
^^^That kept my streak going, so huge hug!!!
As for the chapters, I LOVED them. Seriously, it's so amazing to watch you grow as a writer. With each chapter, you are proving your mettle at being able to write various genres. And this rom-com-innuendo-filled story suits you. I am glad you decided to write this!
Seriously, this is kink level 100!
I love how the story is progressing, and I end up laughing out after each conversation they have.
It was hilarious to watch the stumped Mr. kinky after our dear Lola tricked him into believing her fetish for threesomes, through her very 'innocent' joke😆
Though I can't wait for the day, when after having their share of kinky-chatty fun, they face each other, as 'man and wife's, as Little Arnav and Khushi's w-hole😈
Though, I like how they are fretting over being discovered, shows that their 'desires' haven't overrun their respective consciences, yet.
This side of Arnav, I get. But Khushi's innuendos are making me go: Hey Devi Maiyaa. Can't wait for him to find out that it's her!😆
Man, though I am hugely disappointed that I didn't read the chapters before everyone else, because the child or even the grown-up in me likes the special treatment *pouts* I can overlook that 'this once' because first, my streak continued, and second, I lurveeeddd the chapters!😃
Edited by 8520NK - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Different concept... Though it's cheating but it's not... Feels really different to read this Khushi... What has she planned... Some flirty anonymous conversation or a meet up... Though latter chances seems scary... You have clearly shown Arnav guilty and nervous for his deed... But you neither showed Khushi in either of the lights... Instead she seems enjoying, unbothered and emotionless... Does she really know what she's doing or is she really not cared of sharing some intimate verbal texts with unknown... It's very unkhushi like... Though it's the concept of the story but still an insight to her views might help to know what she's upto...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: misty_rainbow

Different concept... Though it's cheating but it's not... Feels really different to read this Khushi... What has she planned... Some flirty anonymous conversation or a meet up... Though latter chances seems scary... You have clearly shown Arnav guilty and nervous for his deed... But you neither showed Khushi in either of the lights... Instead she seems enjoying, unbothered and emotionless... Does she really know what she's doing or is she really not cared of sharing some intimate verbal texts with unknown... It's very unkhushi like... Though it's the concept of the story but still an insight to her views might help to know what she's upto...

Thank you for the review!
You're right, Khushi does seem unbothered. But it's because what she's doing hasn't actually hit her yet. She's indulging in fanaticism. Salman Khan is all she seems. She doesn't realise that there's an actual stranger on the other side of the internet. Let's wait for her to come to the realisation herself, shall we? 😊
P.S. You have no idea how much I enjoy constructive criticism. Thanks a lot for the comment!
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Posted: 8 years ago
since i started reading...i cant help myself laughing like a crazy person for each chapter and gets more excited for next chapter...
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Posted: 8 years ago
They will turn on so much that, one day will come they will torn their cloth from each other
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved part 10👏
Freaked out Arnav, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read last 4 chapters
Story progressing very well

Hope to see more interaction between arnav and khushi along with lola and kinky ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Their chats are taking on a new level each day. Threesome eh? Little arnav was so damn pissed! First time, khushi's conscience pricked her abt her little 'affair'. Though it's more due to worry if arnav knew abt it, not due to being guilty. Khushi is taking the chats quite into her stride but arnav on the other hand is left stumped each day reading her propositions😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome
khushi seems unbothered...
she is so much into it

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