OS:MERI PART 3 pg 3 updated 10/4/17 COMPETED

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Hey guys I knw its been a while bt in my defence I had examzzz plus other commitments...since I hv some tym I am writing this OS... its based on dev's POV in respect to Jatin as I think tht Jatin wala angle is not used much in the serial so jst a figment of my imagination where there would be a flashback of jatin with each bose family members and dev's feeling

PART 1

Dev sitting in his office in the middle of the night thinking about the recent turn of events where he was staying at the bose house- "aamar badi" for 8 days which mostly consisted of saurav's wedding functions to give him a chance of cherish the fatherhood which once he thought he would never experience and was living a proxy one with golu but when he came to know about suhana about his suhana his daughter...sonakshi and his daughter he was angry and then regret and remorse took over him but this opportunity gave him a way to live those moments again though not completely but it was something even not everything as no one could back to time and change their destiny not even him if he could he would change his course of life completely but that is something he would think about some other time today he is thinking about those 8 days which were very challenging for him with baba around...

Dev thinking -

Baba was not happy with me coming to live in their house,he was so upsat with even suhana calling me papa he made a face rolling his eyes whenever suhana used to call me though somewhere it didn't bother me as I didn't care but the fact sonakshi was happy about it made me more contended and the happiest man on earth...I always wanted to respect baba as my own father and enjoy that father and son relation which I could not because the tragedy in my life though for a brief moment I did experience it but it was very short lived..."mussories ki kasam"...played in his mind...but life played its tricks...baba oh I cant even call him that as he doesnot like it and strictly ordered me not to...even it is okay but why the god dammm hell is THE JATIN ROY allowed to call him baba...as in like seriously I was feeling uneasy as it is with jatin in the house and on top of it he calls baba as baba and baba is all so sweet and honey with him he is not even that sweet to saurav not even sonakshi...kabhi kabhi toh baba sonakshi par bhi gussa ho jate hai par JATIN...ufff he is like a guy who doesnot have a flaw according to baba...mere liye toh vegetarian khana bhi nahi though he is doing this to irritate me but jatin ka favourite doi maach zaroor bana doo when he wants as if kahi ka prime minister ho...uppar se hadh hai uss bande ki jo sonakshi nahi karti who baba ko samjhata hai aur unko shant kar deta hai aur uppar se Bengali baba bose mann bhi jata hai(with tht he clenched his hand into a fist)...

FLASHBACK

BABA-mujhe toh samajh mein nahi aata ki hum kyun usko jhel rahe hai...usko kyun iss ghar mein rehne ke liye bulaya hai...main nahi chahti ki who aadmi sona aur soha kea as passs bhi rahe...who aadmi sirf aur sirf hum logo ko tang kar sakta hai main bol raha hoon who aur uske ghar wale sirf chaal chal sakte hai...kahi who log apni apni ghatiya chaal chal kar humari soha ko humse door na karde...ek baar pehle bhi uss aadmi aur uski family ne meri beti ki zindagi tabah kar di thi...ek nahi do-do baar...ab iss baar main bilkul bardasht nahi karonga...

Jatin-baba...aap meri suno...plz...(makin baba sit on the bed of his room)...baba plzzz aapko pta hai na saurab dada ki shaadi ki tyaari chal rahi hai...agar aap aise react karoge toh who log kya sochenge humari family ke bare main

Dev(thinking while listening to their convo as he wanted to come clear with baba)why the hell he calls saurav as dada...humari family its not ur family...yeh meri...

Jatin-hum aisa kuch bhi nahi karenge jo saurab dada ke rishte ko problem mein dal de...aur agar aisa hua toh humara hi bura hoga as dada ko ronita bahut pasand hai aur yeh khushiya usski life mein bahut time baad aayi hai...aur main dev ko toh nahi janta par main sona ko janta hoon aur bahut ache se sgar usne kuch decision liya hai toh kuch soch samajh kar hi liya hai...i trust her...aap usko trust nahi karte

Baba-I trust her but I don't trust dev aur dev ko lekar sona ek baar galat decision le chuki hai...

Jatin-who tab tha...ab sab bahut different hai ab sona ke saare decisions soha ko dyan mein rakh kar hote hai...sona ke liye sirf aur sirf soha hi hai...usne joy eh decision liya hai who bhi sirf soha ke liye kyunki soha apne papa ke saath time spend karna chahti hai...n like always sona ne uske decision ko apnaya hai...

Dev(thinkin)haa who meri beti hai...meri aur sonakshi ki...

Baba-tum jante ho na who sirf dev ke saath kuch time nahi balki sona aur dev dono ke saath rehna chahti hai...

Jatin- main janta hoon ...har bachi apne ma baba dono ke saath rehna chahti hai par humko soha ko thoda time dena hoga so that hum usko samjha sake ki dev aur sona saath nahi reh sakte

Dev(made an angry face even after knowing that what jatin was saying is right but it hurt him that they could live like a family)

Jatin- ab aap aisa kuch mat karna baba jisse soha aapse aur hum sab se door ho jae...

Baba- par maine...

Jatin-baba aapko pta hai na jo dinning table par hua usse soha aur sona ko kitna bua lagga...dev soha ka papa hai jab apko koi kuch kahega toh sona ko bhura lagta hai( bejoy remembering the slap incident n sona's decision to pay off the money back) waise hi jab koi bhi mera matlab hai koi bhi dev ko hurt karega toh soha ko bura lagega aur aap nahi chahte ki humari soha ko dukh ho...

Baba- main toh bas...

Jaatin -main janta hoon aap sirf sona ke bare mein soch rahe ho par jaise aap sona ke bare mein soch rahe ho waise hi sona soha ke bare mein aur dev bhi sirf soha ke bare mein shayd...aap ko sona par thoda aur bharosa rakho sona ne socha hoga who sahi hi hoga n trust me also main sona ko phir se tutne nahi dunga...

Bab-main sona aur tum par pura trust karta hoon...tumko pta hai na kit um par main sourab se zyada trust kata hoon tumko maine hamesha apne bte se badkar mana hai...tum shayd sahi keh rahe ho jab soha dikhegi dev air sona ko toh samajh jaegi ki who dono kabhi bhi saath nahi ho sakte kabhi bhi...

Jatin-haa baba bas aap saurav ki shaadi ki khushiya manao aur tyari karo...

Dev jst hide himself before Jatin n baba could see him while leaving the room...

FLASHBACK ENDS

Dev wanted to be more than a son to bejoy he wanted baba to share his feelings with him...to calm him down...but life took a bitter turn...dev still thinking about how jatin was with baba and then he recalled another incident and just cursed him as in kyun kyun woh meri family ke saath aise hai jaike who unka apna hai aur main paraya...meri...

PS:HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT... I KNOW ALL MAY NOT LIKE IT BUT ITS JST MY IMAGINATION

PPS: WAITING FOR UR VIEWS AND LIKES


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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is very good...
Update soon...
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Beautiful os..
Loved it...
Dev's thoughts r beautifully written..
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It was lovely
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Thnxx
I will continue with flashback of jatin with other family members
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Originally posted by: binuuu

Beautiful os..

Loved it...
Dev's thoughts r beautifully written..



Thnx. Glad u liked it
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Originally posted by: tanya94

Waiting to read more 😊



Yea I will try n update soon
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Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

It was lovely
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OS:MERI PART2

Deep in his thought process dev was thinking about the past incidents which made him cringe at the irony of his own life...he was somewhere similar to his mother when it came to being insecure about the people he loved and cared, though he never would create any devious plans to malice their relationship but still he was possessive of them...one such relation for him was of his mother inlaw...he called her MA...but now he didn't have that right as well...he had lost all his rights on the bose family that dreadful day...with that he remembered asha ma being so understanding towards him and how she used to listen to him and make him explain situations when there would be a tiff between him and sona...she was always neutral and mature ad gave her unbiased opinion...he wondered that sona must have got this understanding and mature nature from her mother which was mostly overshadowed by her anger and ego which she inherited from her father and smirked at his internal jokes...he was angry on that stupid of a person according to him that jatin roy for being such an intruder in his family...meri family...which he knew was not his technically but was his in its twisted manner...

FLASHBACK

Jatin is talking to asha in the drawing room which is witnessed by dev standing at the top of the stairs...

J- kaki ma... Mujhe toh aapka who 4th chapter bahut apt lagga jaise apne usne apni female protagonist ka dard aur emotions bayan kiya hai its so beautiful...apko who wala chapter toh jarur bejna chahiye editor ke pass...

A-i know who bahut hi important sequence hai meri story ka...

J-haan maine kuch editors ko bheja tha who bhi bahut impressed tha...

A-tumne kab bheja...

J-who jab meri aur sona ki baat hui thi tab...they will call in sometime...

A-i am so excited...waise jatin sachme tum iss ghar ke liye ek pillar of support ho...tumhe bina humare bole hi pta chal jata hai ki hum sab ko kaise khush karna hai...

J-toh afterall main bhi to hiss family ka member hoon...aapko bhi toh pta hota hai ki mujhe kya chahiye hota hai tabhi toh aap meri favourite dishe bana dete ho...mera itna khayal rakhte ho... mujhe apni ma toh yaad nahi hai but agar aaj who hoti toh aap jaisi hoti aur kya main apni ma ke liye itna nahi karta...

A-Hmmm... Bejoy bilkul sahi kehta ha ki tum hamare liye humare bte se bhi badkar ho...bejoy toh tumko sourab se bhi zyada manta hai...

j-aap log bhi mere liye meri family hi hai...

DEV WITNESSING ALL THIS MAKING WEIRD faces as he is not liking all this...dev talking to himself "itna importance kyun dete hai isko sab log is beyond me...its all right family friend hai toh rahe na apne ghar...mere ghar mein kyun apni naak ghusa raha hai...koi isko kuch bolta bhi nahi hai...yeh yahan isse rehta hai jaise iska ghar ho...aise behave karta hai jaise iski apni family ho...aur who MR. BEJOY BOSE...waise toh meri beti n self respect n all but ek paraye aadmi ko ghar par rakha hai...then thinking main toh reh sakta hoon afterall...

Dadi comes to the hall(living room)...arre kya gossip chal rahi hai mujhe bhi toh batao...

A-arre ma kuch nahi main aur jatin bas isse hi baat kar rahe the...

j-haan did aur waise bhi gossip aur sari latest news n trends toh aapse better kisko pta hoga...u know kaki maa wahan jab hum Europe mein the na wahan toh everyone was gaga about did she is such a rock star...

Dida-arre who toh hona hi tha ab main hoon hi aisi toh...

Dev gritting his teeth kissi ko bhi nahi chodta yeh aadmi sabki tareef karne mein lagga hai sabko maska mar raha hai butter ki factory hai kya iski jab dekhotab shuru ho jata hai...

j-haan u re are so right aap toh sona aur kaki ma ko bhi peeche chod doon...

saurabh comes there and joins the family gupshup...

s-arre aap sab log yahan masti kar rahe ho aur yahan main pareshan ho raha hoon...

all in unison -kyun ab kya ho gaya?????????

s-main who pics dekh raha tha aur mujhe seriously lagta hai ki mujhe thoda reduce karna chahiye shaadi ke liye...

j-idea toh acha hai but if you reduce quickly it wont be healthy and we cant take that risk aur koi bhi exercise start karoge aap dada it would give you some pain as u have never excercised...

A-jatin bilkul thik keh raha hai...

Dev thinking " haha jatin toh hamesha thik hi kehta hai ...ek who feminist sonakshi bose jo kabhi galat nahi hoti aur ek yeh jatin mahashey jo hamesha sahi hote hai...bas dev hi galat hota hai"

A-that's why maine dev ko mana kiya tha that they should not start anything but since thoda time hai toh why not...

j-JI KAKI MA you are right...dada aap thoda exercise start kar do but don't over exert yourself kahin kuch zyada ho gaya toh lene ke dene padh jaenge anur main and sona were discussing about the same thing toh we decided ki aap ke liye ek special diet chart banade so that you follow that and can reduce weight in a healthy manner and sona ne banaya hai toh it has to be the best...

All -haan yeh hi sahi rahega

Dev "yeh bose family bhi na iski haar baat mein haan mein haan milayenge bas...aur har baat ke liye isse discuss karne ki kya zarurat koi lard governor hai kya yeh?" and makes sulking faces...

A-Waise saurab tujhe strictly follow karna hoga plan because meri beti tujhse bahut zyada sunder hai...TOH TUJHE TOH EXTRA EFFORTS DALNE padenge na...

All gave her confused look...

A-Arre aise kya dekh rahe hoon sach hi toh bola maine...meri beti rounita is very beautiful aur kya dance kiya usne...sona ko bolke uske liye bhi ek diet chart banvayege if she wants as mujhe toh waise hi achi lagti hai...

ROUNITA makes her entry through the door...

R- nahi ma...main bhi yehi hi bolna chahti thi as I also want to reduce thoda weight not much bas just a lil...aur sona se better kaun hoga...

A-bilkul beta but don't do it if u don't want to...hum toh saurab ki toh leg pulling karte rehte hai...

r- nahi ma its nothing like that...rather maine hi saurab ko bola tha that unko bhi shaadi ke liye thoda...

a-THIK HAI PHIR AS U WISH AUR WAISE bhi ab jab rounita ne decide kar hi liya hai toh wohi hi hoga...acha hai tumne bola ab tum aa rahi hoo na toh u handle him aur hum sab tumko hamesha support hi karenhe...

S- kya ma aap log toh abhi se iski side mein ho gaye...toh mera kya hoga...

Sona eneters and says -obviously dada because girl power always win aur we bose girlz are always together...

J- aur main toh bose girlz se sapne mein bhi panga nahi longa yaar so main toh always with them...

Dev so wished that he could stand there and say "main toh hamesha mere saale ki side longa and boys are best" but he could not and on top of it jatin was there haiving a gala time with his family...dev murmuring "chamcha kahin ka"

With that asha and dida dispersed to the kitchen and the room respectively with sona busy in checking her mails on the phone and jatin busy with saurab and rounita...

PS:GUYS I AM SUPER ANGRY ON DEV...HE IS SO GOD DAMN DIFFICULT AND DOESNOT REALLY WANNA SEE OTHER SIDE JST WANTS TO BLAME N OBVIO MERI MA AND HIS RONA DHONA...UFF BETTER IS SONA SHLD MARRY JATIN N DEV SHLD SHLD SULK...

PPS:I KNOW ITS NOT THAT GUD SO PLZZZ GIVE UR VIEWS SO THAT I CAN WRITE THE NEXT PART ACCORDINLY OR JST DICONTINUE IT AS SONA AND SOHA ARE ONLY LEFT

Edited by A.K.Aggarwal - 8 years ago
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It is good..Dev getting jealous...loved Jatin's convo with bose family and Dev's special remarks...
Today I am also disappointed from the episode...

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